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Post by huntsrose on Jun 30, 2007 22:10:37 GMT -5
You probably already know that I'm a sucker for twin stories, but this one is in first person view! It switches between Jake and Jamie. This is just the prologue, so I'll see what people think of it and update if they like it. It takes place after the Love Cruise. Anyway, I hope ya like it! And remember people: reviews are GOOD!
Prologue
I walked into my first class of my new school. The school was called Millard Filmore Middle School. My first class was Home Ec. There were a couple of empty seats left. I sat next to Jake Long. I know this might sound strange, but I knew his name because I can read minds. I also have long, black hair and green bangs. I'm kind of short for my age and am made fun of sometimes for that. One other thing: I'm a dragon. "Hi," I said to Jake. "What's your name?" Of course, I knew his name already, but I don't tell anyone about my powers. My Uncle has known about them for some time now though. I had just gotten them a little over a year ago, on my 13th birthday. "Jake Long," he said. "And you?" "Jamie Dusk," I said. "And your friends?" I looked at Trixie Carter and Arthur Spudinski (who everyone called Spud). "Trixie and Spud," he said. "How do you know they're my friends?" "I saw you talking to them when I came in." First rule of lying: never use the words "uh" or "um" in your sentence and don't think about it. "So where are you from?" Jake asked. "New Jersey. Ooh, we're cooking today? I love cooking." "Yeah." I could tell he didn't want to cook. "What are we making?" I asked. He shrugged. "Hey, you wanna be partners?" I raised an eyebrow. He had that "slack off and let your partner do all the work" look on his face. "Ok, but you better not make me do all the work." Sheesh. It's like she can read my mind! He nodded.
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Post by justicez on Jul 1, 2007 7:17:37 GMT -5
Lolz.This is very intersting.Update soon XD
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jul 5, 2007 9:51:17 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by huntsrose on Jul 21, 2007 0:28:55 GMT -5
The next chapter will be up soon!
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Post by huntsrose on Jul 30, 2007 21:10:25 GMT -5
Don't you love updates? Hope you like it!
Chapter Two Family Matters
"Hi Jake," I said after school. "Can I tell you something?" "Ok," he said. "Well, thing is, I can read minds," I said. "And, I know you're a dragon. I'm one too. In fact, I think I'm your twin sister." I let out a breath. "There. I said it." Jake looked utterly confused. "Um," he said. "I only have one sister." "Then how do you explain how much we look alike, and that our birthdays are both March 8th, 1993, and we're the same height, AND we're both deagons? Your parents probably didn't tell you because we were probably seperated." He still looked dumbfounded. I had answered every question he was thinking. "Ok, maybe we should go to Gramps," Jake said. "Hey Jakie," Trixie said. "Hey Jamie." "That's funny," Spud said. "What is?" I asked. "Jakie, Jamie," he said. "Um, guys, Jamie is," Jake said. I nodded, knowing that he wanted to make sure it was ok to tell them. "Well, she's my twin. Also a dragon, and she can read minds. Well, at least, we think we're twins." "So then why can't you read minds?" Trixie asked. "No idea. We're going to the shop. You coming?" "Sure."
We all arrived at the shop/ "Yo, G," Jake said. "I wanna tell you about... G?" "In the back, Kid." "A talking dog!" I squealed. "Um, woof?" Fu Dog said. "It's ok, Fu," Jake said. "She's cool. Another dragon." "What is all the noise about?" Gramps said. "Oh, hello." He was looking at me as though I were a ghost. "I'm Jamie," I said. "Jamie Dusk. How do?" Jake explained to Gramps what I had said earlier. "Yes," he said. "It is true. Jake, do you know why Haley's middle name is Kay?" "That's my middle name!" I said, shocked. "Exactly." "Oh, I remember Jamie from when she was first born," Fu said. "Cute kid. Then we went to get her and Jake from the nursery. Doctors swore there was only one kid. That was a long time ago." "So, it is true," Jake said. "You're my sister. Where did you go?" "Well, I was adopted, I suppose," I said. "My guardian said he was my uncle." I looked at the clock. "And speaking of which, he'll be expecting me home by now. Sorry guys, I have to go." "See you tomorrow," Jake said. "Sis." I smiled and rushed home.
"Hi Jamie," said Venom, the boy that lived with us. He was tall with dark hair. "Any news?" "What, no 'welcome home'?" I asked with a grin. "Yeah, Venom, I do have news, but if my uncle wants you to know, you can ask. Now I'd better go and tell him where I was and who I met today." I loved keeping him in suspense. "Who? You don't mean-!!" "Yes, I mean."
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 7, 2007 21:41:12 GMT -5
Ugh. No reviews. =((( Anyway, I hope SOMEONE actually reads this chapter. Maybe you're all speechless because of the plot twist?? I hope?? XD If you don't like it, deal with it, but it'll get better later. =D Short chapter alert: This chapter is short.
Chapter 3 DD
"DD!" I shouted. "Hey, Double D! I'm back from school, and I have newsies!" I laughed. "Quit talking like a baby, Jamie," the Dark Dragon said, walking out. "You're nearly 14 now." "Aw, ok," I said with a smirk. He was becoming annoyed, I could tell. "What is your news?" he asked. "As you know, the American dragon goes to my school," I said. "I met him and his grandfather today. You never told me he was my brother." "Must've missed that little detail," he said. "What else did you find out?" "Well, only that he likes this girl named Rose, but good news! I've befriended him and I'm pretty sure he trusts me." "Very good, Jamie, well done," he said. I smiled and skipped back outside where Venom was. "Very good, Jamie," he mimicked in a childish voice. "Well done." "Jealous?" I asked. He shook his head. "Mmhm. Anyway, I'm going to the skatepark to see if Jake's there. Wait until DD gets ahold of him." I laughed. "Ah, I'm mean aren't I? Poor, poor Jake." -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
*Jake's POV*
"How come nobody told me I had a twin sister?" I asked. "We never thought you'd see her again," Gramps said. "So are you going to tell Mom?" I asked. "Not yet," he said. "We should ask Jamie first." I nodded. "But if Mom wants Jamie to stay with us, what about her uncle?" I asked. "Well, that is up to Jamie," Gramps said. "She hardly knows you and she's known her uncle her whole life. You cannot expect her to want to live with you rather then with him." "I guess you're right," I said. "Well, I'm going to the skate park."
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Flame The Fire Dragon
Maturing Dragon
I will kill you.....DIE!!! MWWHAHAHA!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by Flame The Fire Dragon on Oct 7, 2007 22:02:33 GMT -5
OK i'll comment XD anyway its good so far keep it up ( it could be longer... but its still good )
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Post by huntsrose on Oct 8, 2007 1:38:57 GMT -5
Yeah, it needs to be longer. Wait until you see my Avatar one. It's extremely long. But it's not up yet, so you'll have to wait. =P Thanks for commenting!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Oct 14, 2007 18:47:14 GMT -5
AWESOME!
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