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Post by redemption on Aug 30, 2006 21:36:09 GMT -5
OH. Very clever of you, Atecom. *Lowers pitchfork*
But poor Haley, she really thinks Rose is dead, doesn't she? Poor kid....
I'm.... not gonna say it. You always update to fast.... so I'm not going to even bother saying it. XD
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Post by superdoglac on Aug 30, 2006 21:43:31 GMT -5
Poor random man, poor Rose in the "special trash" poor Haley thinking Rose is dead! Poor everyone! Update soon!
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Post by AAcid on Aug 30, 2006 21:43:56 GMT -5
UH-RAH Great chapter. All of them. Keep it comingand update ASAP.
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 30, 2006 22:00:05 GMT -5
Very clever
the pill dosen't really kill you, some random guy is going to blow up.
GREAT CHAPTER
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Post by crazy17 on Aug 30, 2006 23:00:28 GMT -5
Wow. I'm...speechless! Keep it up!
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Post by Atecom on Aug 31, 2006 1:28:11 GMT -5
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“Ok so what’s the deal?” the hunts master asked.
“I figure they shall dispose of the hostages a maximum of 10 minutes after they think that we are dead.” I replied. “Once he gets out of Park Avenue, he will face New York traffic. Too bad it’s not peak hour, but it should slow him down enough. I figure he has 20 mins till he gets there, then another 10 minutes for us to react so we have to get them out of there by 30 minutes time.
“Can we get there in 30 minutes time?” Jake asked.
I put my case on the ground, then entered the combination to open it. I reached in and pulled out the glock. “I feel we shuld carjack someone” I said out loud. “Or in other words, you should jack someone” I said holding the glock out to the huntsmaster.
“Why me?” He yelled.
“Cause I’ve caused enough misery for one day, besides you’re the one who has advanced field training you do it” I replied.
“If you keep barking orders like that, you will see how well I can use my field training” The hunts master shot back.
“Guys, lets not argue” Jake said.
“Who put the serious syndrome in you all of sudden?” the hunts master asked viciously.
Jake looked down at the ground. “Its just with my gramps, unconscious… He always had my back… Now cause of me, he could die… I cannot let that happen. We have to hurry and do this” Jake continued.
“So who’s going to jack the car?” I asked.
“Give me the gun” the hunts master said snatching it from my hand. He walked into the middle of the road. It had seemed at that moment there was a drought of cars.
“Come On” he yelled, no car could be seen.
“Looks like we are walking” he said after a while and the 3 of them headed down Park Avenue back towards the city.
‘Whh What?’ Rose began thinking as she slowly awakened. Her head hurt, and she was a little dizzy, kind of like the time she awoke the first time. She felt out, to find that she was in some kind of plastic bag. She began struggling in the bag, and began to tear the side of it. “Argh” Rose exclaimed as she struggled and tore it all the way till she was out. She was in some kind of Iron room flattened cardboard boxes around her. There was an iron door at one side of the room. There was also a chute which seemed to be dumping garbage in the room. Then the smell hit her and made her gag. She coughed. “This is a garbage disposal unit” She sighed. ‘Why am I even still alive?’ She wondered. She sat down on a pile of garbage. Then suddenly she felt a jolt as the right wall sprung to life and started to compress the garbage.
‘Ah damn’ Rose thought. The garbage compressor has started. To her horror, the roof also started coming down. ‘How should I get out of here?’ She wondered, looking around. She focused her vision on the door. ‘Maybe its not locked so tightly as the other door, after all they are not expecting garbage to be able to escape are they?’
She ran over to the door and attempted to open it. It was locked. She took a few steps back and shoulder barged the door. It remained stiffly shut.
“Darn” Rose said, almost in a panic. The size of the room was now significantly smaller and the piles of boxes were getting in her way. Rose turned around and took quite a few paces back. Then once again she turned around and shoulder barged the door with all her might.
“Argh” she yelled, gripping her shoulder. Through that, the door was still open and the room was getting smaller. She made her way back to the center, by now the force of the wall had pushed the boxes into a large pile and stumbling around was quite difficult. She could do nothing but watch as the wall and roof came ever closer, compacting the cardboard boxes.
‘I guess you can’t cheat death that easily’ Rose thought to herself, thought she had been really excited that she had a second chance at life, now it was about to be ended by something that was going to crush her. The wall and Roof came ever closer, she was forced to lay down. She pushed on the sides as hard as she could, but they would not stop their relentless advance towards making the Contents into a small cube.
Haley decided to make a break for it at that moment from the room she was trapped in. She let out a small scream and then waited just beside the door as Lavenderpaw and 2 other guards frantically opened the door and burst in. As they did Haley stepped out, quickly shutting the heavy door behind her. It was a bit of a task to get it moving but they didn’t notice and once she got the momentum up, she closed it easily and locked it.
Haley transformed into a dragon and flew down the hallway. There were 3 guards down the other end of the hallway. Haley did not want them seeing her so she turned back around, then noticed a panel on the side of the wall. She opened it, it was the fuse box. She breathed fire onto the box to weaken it, then she started to claw at all the switches and wires, which cut electricity to the complex and left them in pure darkness.
Rose had just given up all hope, when suddenly the wall and roof of the garbage compacter stopped as a small light inside the room also died out.
“I cant believe it, saved by some sort of luck, again!!” Rose said to herself, though she was kind of cramped and the size that the room had compacted to did not give her much room to move.
Haley used eye of the dragon and watched as several men came running into the room. It was very dark and they couldn’t see their way around, but they heard the banging coming from the prison Cell. 2 Of them carefully made their way over to the cell, when they recognised Lavenderpaw’s voice behind the door and the other ones felt their way across to the fuse box just a little bit further away. Lavenderpaw came out of the cell with a torch and immediately turned it on and flashed it at the fuse box.
“Damn, clawed” One of them said. “She can’t have gotten far, go out and find her” Lavenderpaw ordered.
Haley slowly made her way out of the room being careful not to make much sound on the way out. She quickly but quietly flew down the dark hallway using her dragon vision to guide her. The place was in total darkness, so she couldn’t see much, or that’s what she thought.
“Backup Systems Activated” Said a voice over the PA. With that, the lights suddenly flickered on. Haley was now in full view of her captors. She made a break for it.
Rose froze for a second when the power came back on, but to her surprise, the place seemed to have some sort of reset mode, if it gains power, so it slowly began to decompress, the walls pulling out.
10:25AM------------------------------------
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 31, 2006 8:15:46 GMT -5
THAT WAS TOO CLOSE!!!!
GO HALEY!!!YOU SAVED ROSE!!!
GREAT JOB!!
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Post by nyc2dragon on Aug 31, 2006 9:30:00 GMT -5
Great episode. I love the concept.
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Post by redemption on Aug 31, 2006 9:31:59 GMT -5
WAY TO GO HALEY!!!!! I agree with Dreamcatcher, that was too close. I'm not.... saying it.... I have no reason.... to say it.... XD
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Post by crazy17 on Aug 31, 2006 10:31:46 GMT -5
Whoa! Haley saved Rose without even realizing it! Holy crap!! XD Nice chap!
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Post by AAcid on Aug 31, 2006 19:36:21 GMT -5
Great Chapter. The trash compactor scene reminded me of one of the levels in Half Life One. Keep it up and update ASAP.
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Post by superdoglac on Aug 31, 2006 21:35:33 GMT -5
Aw come on who wouldn't want to be a cardboard cube? XD Nice chapter.
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Post by gojake on Sept 1, 2006 18:39:19 GMT -5
When the trash compactor scene came, I was suddenly reminded of A New Hope
Han: Never take advice from a woman
Me: Shut the f*ck up, you b*tch
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Post by Atecom on Sept 3, 2006 23:31:04 GMT -5
---------------------------------10:25AM Haley sped towards the nearest door, but one of the men caught on and ran, slamming the door shut. Haley stopped just short of the door.
“There is no escape for you” One of the guys said, reaching into his pocket and pulling out a stun tazer. “Make it easy on yourself and we won’t have to hurt you” he instructed. Haley remained still for a moment, waiting as the guy approached closer, Then in a sudden movement, she gathered quite a bit of speed and charged him straight into the chest, making him topple over. Another guard managed to pull out a tranquiliser dart gun.
“Hold still he said” pointing the gun towards Haley but Haley had other things in mind then to be a still target. When Haley wouldn’t co operate, he fired the gun and Haley ducked just in time to see the dart hit the wall just above her head. Haley moved in a semi circle almost 180 degrees around the guy with the gun, avoiding dart bullets as she went. She then suddenly cut inwards towards the guy with the dart gun, managing to grab the gun, and after a short struggle, which ended when Haley breathed some fire on the guys hand, he let go of the gun.
“This ends now!!” Lavenderpaw said stepping towards the dragon.
Haley turned and let out a small roar. Lavenderpaw was not intimidated by it. Haley moved quickly towards Lavenderpaw, when suddenly one of the others grabbed her by the tail and quickly threw her against the wall quite hard.
“Down Dragon” He laughed as if he were talking to a dog. Haley’s head hurt. She struggled to get up, and just managed it. But the group of guards now surrounded her. She rubbed her sore head once again, then slumped back against the wall. Lavenderpaw stepped forward and bent over to pick her up, but suddenly the small dragon, took off, straight into Lavenderpaws face, knocking her over backwards, but causing Haley to crash. It seemed she just wasn’t ready for the challenges just yet. With no fight left in her, one of the guards were easily able to pick her up and put her in a brown Hessian bag. He then walked over to the prison door and opened it carelessly throwing the bag into the cell.
Lavenderpaw slowly stood up. A little bit of blood running from her nose. “Ensure, that escapes do not happen again” she ordered.
By now the walls had retracted back to their original state, but the door still wasn’t open. Rose climbed up on to the top of the pile of garbage as far as she could go without it toppling over. She didn’t want to die buried under a pile of garbage. Rose looked up at the garbage chute. It was just large enough for a person of her slim stature to slip through. The only problem is that she would have to jump, from the unstable pile of garbage a fair distance across to the left wall to get there. She prepared herself for the jump. She knew she couldn’t launch herself too strongly, or else the pile of garbage would collapse and she wouldn’t go to far but she also knew that she had to jump fairly strongly cause the chute was about 4 meters away. She looked at it, getting its distance in mind, yet also feeling the garbage, feeling how stable it seemed. ‘This isn’t going to work’ She thought to herself. She feared that this may have been her only way out and that if she jumped, and made the garbage collapse, although it would have collapsed away from her, the pile would no longer be there and the chute would be unreachable. She pushed those thoughts out of the back of the mind. If she wanted to get out, she had to get out now. With that, she braced herself then jumped.
She felt the garbage buckle a little under the force of her jump, but it remained in tact. She felt the air against her face as she was airborne and watched the chute get closer. It seemed she was going to make it. Then she started to go down, quicker then she had calculated. It seemed a draught down the chute was pushing her back stronger then she had hoped. She began going down and approached the wall really fast. She held up her hands and hit the wall, just as she managed to catch the bottom of the chute. Thee was very little friction between the walls of the chute and her fingers, so she began slipping. Luckily she was very good at carrying her weight around and managed to pull herself up into the chute before she slipped. She had to press her hands and feet hard against the walls of the chute to stop herself from slipping. ‘I hope nobody puts any garbage down here’ she thought.
We reached the main road outside the park. There were plenty of cars here.
“Come on, we have to hurry” the hunts master said. He suddenly ran into the middle of the road, forcing the next car to screech to a halt.
“What are you, stupid?” The driver of the car shouted, but stopped when the hunts master produced the gun.
“Get out of the car” The hunts master ordered.
“Calm down you freak” the driver said.
“I won’t ask you again, get out of the car” The hunts master replied. When he got no response, he smashed through the window with his gloved fist and grabbed him by the collar.
“I said out!!!” He shouted, louder.
The guy then nervously began fiddling at the door, finding where to unlock and open the door. He did so then jumped out.
“Ok I got us a car” The hunts master told us, and we immediately ran out to get into the car. I opened the right door and jumped in, Jake got in the front, and the huntsmaster took the drivers seat.
“Lets go and rescue some hostages” The hunts master shouted, but was suddenly drowned out by a siren. I looked, 2 cars behind us was a police car, and the officer didn’t seem to like what we were doing.
“Go for it” I shouted as the huntsman put his foot on the pedal.
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 4, 2006 9:36:18 GMT -5
POLICE CHASE!!!!!!
great chapter
continue please!
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