Post by ADJLFanatic on Jul 22, 2006 3:49:39 GMT -5
Trust! Hahaha.. that's what you need. TRUST. >_> *sugar high*
Yeah, this is what you get when you come across someone who has had a midnight snack, sugar, and soda at almost two in the morning. I'm just working on fan fic updates then I'll skitter off to bed. Because, whew, I am tiiiiired. Anyway, I loved it. ^^ Update soon!! Oh, and thanks for commenting on SOE. If you're confused with the story a bit, then you can read "Secrets to Hide" (the story before that). Yeeeaah, kinda long and sucky... but.. meh. XD Well... hummm, can't wait for an update.
Yay for replies! .....Ok then, gonna move along to the next chapter, but I'm just gonna... Throw a bit of this... and that into it. Only because I can't think of any ideas and I really need an idea for my next fan-fic...
Chapter 11: The Power of Trust
(Added note, you might want to keep listening to Breaking the Habit... while reading the story. Because it's a good song. Glub glub.)
"We need trust, eh?" Spud muttered, scratching his chin. "Too bad I don't have Fu's potions, we should get a big bag of trust." He explained, sighing. Trixie smacked her head and just floated over to Spud.
"Uh, Spudinski, you know trust comes from INSIDE people?" Trixie asked. "Much like other feelings. Trust is like love." Trixie continued to explained to everyone, but mainly Spud.
"Wow, that's real deep. Where'd you learn that?" Rose asked Trixie.
"Just thought of it. I'm good with that stuff."
"Well, we need to start trusting each other more then... Except me and Shade. We probably have the most trust." Florence muttered as Shade groaned a little behind Florence. Everyone glared at Trixie and Spud.
"What? Oh, I know, never had time to put on make-up, my face is attrotious." Trixie muttered, dragging the skin on her face until it smacked back into place.
Back in Atlantis, that large blast had opened an interdimensional portal, turning Atlantis back to normal and destroying the monsters.
"Whew! We're safe! But... Shade and Florence... And the others." Josh muttered sadly, jumping up and using his air to send him flying at the spot where everyone had been transported.
"This spot, it looks odd..." Gramps muttered, looking at a munch of rocks. The rocks were actually of everyone in the same position as they were when they were sent to the odd place.
"Looks like their spirits were sent off, leaving their bodies in an indestructible rock." Fu Dog explained, punching the stone statue of Jake, holding his paw in slight pain. Gramps just put both of his hands togeteher into their sleeves.
"Then, we wiil just have to wait." Gramps muttered, glaring at the stones.
Florence just then looked at Shade, who was sorta unconcious. She sighed relief that he didn't really get to see her messy hair. her brown hair was all over her face and not straight in the back.
"Man, I really wanted to impress Shade with my outgrown hair..." Florence muttered, sighing in sadness. Trixie and Rose just looked at her oddly.
"Well Florence, you need to trust that he likes your hair that way." Rose said. "Looks aren't everything." She continued.
"Well, for me they are." Trixie murmured. "He'll also be glad you're training more then, too." She finally stated, as Florence nodded.
"So, any bright ideas of getting outta here?" Jake asked anyone.
"Not really. But I do have one." Spud muttered. "What if we all..." Spud muttered, but then gave a look like he didn't remember.
"Well, what if at the same time, we all... kissed?" Jake suggested, remembering what Spud told him as he and everyone else, but unconcious Shade, blushed and Jake scratche dthe back of his head. They all looked at each other oddly.
"So, you're making us kiss?" Trixie asked everyone but Spud, remembering kissing with Spud on her own in the Academy when Florence and Rose went back to the Academy.
Ok, no replies, so I'll just continue on this. Still no ideas have popped into my head, but this is the 2nd last chapter. Please enter 'The Chaotic Tournament', readers!
Chapter 12: Dimension Return
"Well, Trix, you don't have to kiss Spud. If you'd rather kiss Shade or me-" Jake muttered, getting cut off from Trixie.
"Ok, ok! Ugh..." She grouned a little. Shade opened his eyes and started stirring.
"Hey Florence... Nice hair... What are we doing?" Shade aske,d still a bit unaware of what happened after his crazed side had over-taken him. Florence turned to Rose who nodded and then Trixie who lightly nodded, unsure.
"Well, we need to do this." Florence explained, grabbing Shade's cheeks lightly and kissing him as Rose put her hands behind her back, kissing Jake and Trixie looked at Spud in hesitation, but then grabbed his shoulders and kissed him. Another giant flash of light surrounded all of them as they started to move back to their own dimension.
Gramps had looked at that stones of everyone who had vanished as they slowly started to glow with color.
"Hey, look! It's changing!" Josh said, pointing at the stone statues that were starting to go back to normal. Once they finally did they all breathed a sigh of relief.
"Trust! We got our trust back!" Jake yelled, running over to Fu and feling sappy, hugging him. Fu's wrinkles folded up oer his face. Rose smiled and ran over doing thr same. Josh looked at Shade and Florence.
"Josh!" Shade said, running over to him and picking him up, tossing him up and he slowly descent using his wind powers. Florence also held Josh, smiling. Spud and Trixie looked at each other, smiling and laughing. Gramps just smiled.
"Come, let's return to New York. Atlantis is safe, the war is over." Gramps explained as a bubble appeared. They all nodded and walked into it, the bubble going up.
"Good-bye, lovely mermaid palace of being in underwater land..." Spud muttered, waving to Atlantis, a little confused with what he had said, but he didn't care.
Thankies! Welps, gonna finish this ff, continue working on my newest thing.
Chapter 13: Safe At Last...
Once the gang had reached the bay at the docks, the climbed out of the bubble onto the wooden docks. They all smiled at each other and started to walk past the street and toward the shop.
"So, awkward week, huh?" Shade asked, pushing his hands into his pockets.
"Yeah... I can't believe that those two would go to such extreme measures as to do that..." Rose muttered, looking up the the blue sky and nodding. It was slightly past noon when they had gotten back.
"I just wish that stupid dragon lady had to grab my hair, and I had to cut it..." Florence muttered, Trixie behind her. She was cutting Florence's new shorter hair to make it look better. Florence was looking at the scale of Shade she used to cut her hair and put it in her caprees pocket.
"Don't worry, we all think your new hair is great!" Shade said, hugging her after Trixie had finished with her hair. Florence smiled from the embrace.
"We got our trust back too. Turns out it was hidden in another dimension, silly rascal..." Spud muttered, smiling and putting his beanie in place. Trixie laughed and just slightly kissed him on the cheek. Spud laughed slightly.
"Aye, aye... Tis good down there, and they weren't very affected by the war." Josh explained, smiling and jumping on Jake's shoulder. Jake just oddly looked at him, then smiled.
"Curse them!" Aqua yelled to himself, on the surface of water in the middle of the ocean. Saphire was slowly regaining concious and rubbing her head, they were both dragon.
"Ugh... That Florence girl..." Saph muttered, taking her hand off her head and flying up, shaking off the water like a dog. Aqua flew up and just controlled the water to go off him. They started flying back to the city, planning their next strike.
(Sorry about short ending, I gots writer's block.)
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