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Post by Chaos on Aug 7, 2005 17:28:57 GMT -5
Ok, this is shown in the episode ideas fourm. it's about another one of my people, Florence, and how she and her stepdad have a secret. WARNING: People who hate gooey gooey lovey goo junk, don't read this! ;D Shade and Florence will start dating in this. I also have a question before I start, should I have chapters, like, (Chapter 1: Blah Blah Blah)?
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Post by Chaos on Aug 8, 2005 11:12:36 GMT -5
Whatever, I'll get an answer later, I'll start it now.
Chapter 1: Flashbacks RIIIINNNGGGG!!!! The bell rang and the weekend was here. Jake yawmed widely. "I need some coffee..." Jake murmured. "Let me guess, you were up all night working on that report Rotwood gave you?" Shade asked Jake, who nodded. "Hm, we should go to the park!" Spud said from out of the blue. "Uh, sure." Shade and Jake replied to Spud. "Wait, where's Trixie?" Spud asked Jake and Shade. "She has a cold and had to stay home." Jake turned around and told Spud. "Um...You guys go to the park, I have to go, fabricate my room!" Spud lied. He ran off. "Wow, he really cares about her..." Jake said, sighing and remembering Rose. "Yeah..." Shade replied, sighing and thinking about Florence. At the park, since no one was there, Jake and Shade started to practice their dragon powers. A girl walked past the park after Jake and Shade have been training for a while. "Quick, change back." Jake whispered to Shade. They both turned into human as the girl came over. "She looks familiar..." Jake said, squinting his eyes to try and see the girl better. When in a good view, Jake and Shade noticed it was Florence, wearing a green T-shirt instaid of her usual gray sweater!
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Post by stranger on Aug 8, 2005 11:15:52 GMT -5
not bad!, pls continue
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Post by Chaos on Aug 8, 2005 11:23:21 GMT -5
Alright!
Chapter 2: Suspisious Reunioun "Florence? What're you doing here?" Shade asked Florence. "You'll never believe it, my family moved here for my stepdad's business!" Florence told Shade, smiling. "Well, what's his business? I might know it. Also, you know, you can take off those gloves..." Shade said, reaching for Florence's pink gloves. "No! Um, I hurt my hand and it has to stay away from sunlight. And my dad's job...I don't even know!" Florence said, laughing a little. "Well, I have to go unpack, later guys!" Florence left the park waving. "Wasn't that a bit suspisious?" Jake asked Shade. "No, not really..." Shade muttered, watching Florence leave. Jake groaned. "Let's go to my shop, we can pactice some more." Jake told Shade, walking off to his Gramps' shop. Shade nodded and followed Jake.
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Post by magenta on Aug 8, 2005 11:29:24 GMT -5
Hey! I like this! I hope you can continue soon!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 8, 2005 11:37:16 GMT -5
Thanks! Also, should I have chapters?
Chapter 3: Human Style Practice; Fire vs. Ice When arriving at Gramps' shop, Jake and Shade went to the roof of the building. "Alright, no dragon, just try our moves in human form." Jake told Shade. Shade nodded and created an ice ball in his hands and threw it at Jake, freezing his leg. Jake breathed fire on the ice and unfroze his leg. Shade smiled. "Good one, but can you stop this?" Shade asked, freezing the air around him and throwing the ice at Jake. He jumped away as the ice shattered on the ground. When Jake was about to shoot a fire ball at Shade, Rose ran to the roof. "Guys, there are two new members of the Huntsclan!" She said.
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Post by magenta on Aug 8, 2005 11:40:39 GMT -5
Ooo! This is getting good! Well, if you can come up with enough chapter titles, then I say go for it! You don't have to have them, though. Just do what you think is right for your writing style ^_^
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Post by Chaos on Aug 8, 2005 15:09:44 GMT -5
Alright, when I'm done with the fan-fic, I'll add chapters to each place, I'll also start now.
Chapter 4: The New Members In the shop, Rose was telling Team Dragon about the two newest members of the Huntsclan. "Their names at Huntslass and Huntsdad, and I've heard they're pretty strong. I don't recommend that Jake fight the Huntsman, Huntslass and Huntsdad all at once, so I suggest that Shade fights Huntslass." Rose said, sipping some tea. "It is a good idea, then we can test Shade on his skills." Gramps said. Shade nodded. "Yeah, it only seems fair that I get my share as the assistant of the magical realm defender." Shade informed. "Do we know their first attack area?" Shade asked Rose. Rose nodded and said, "They want to lure Jake into a trap on the Empire State building by trapping the griffin." They all nodded and Rose left. Shade also left the shop to go train back at his house. Later at night, Jake and Shade met at the park and flew to the Empire State building in dragon form.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 8, 2005 15:13:15 GMT -5
not bad pls continue
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Post by magenta on Aug 8, 2005 18:21:59 GMT -5
This is great! I love it ^_^
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Post by Chaos on Aug 9, 2005 11:38:35 GMT -5
Thanks a lot everyone!
Chapter 5: The Fight When Jake and Shade reached the roof of the Empire State building, Huntslass noticed them at the cornor of her eye and said, "You were right Huntsmaster, they did show up." Huntsdad turned around and charged at Jake, who both went to a different building. Shade attacked Huntslass and shot ice in her face so she couldn't see. Then, Shade freed the griffin and punched Huntslass, who flew off to another building. "I'll gte you later, dragon!" Huntslass yelled at Shade, using smoke to cover her leaving. Huntsdad saw Huntslass leaving and he jumped away from Jake and did the same thing. Jake flew up onto the Empire State building to where Jake was. "Great job, Shade! She can definitely be your enemy." Jake complimented Shade, smiling. Shade nodded and smiled back. "I have to go now, practice in the park at noon?" Shade asked, flying off. "You know it!" Jake replied, also flying off.
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Post by magenta on Aug 9, 2005 13:03:08 GMT -5
This is getting really good! =D Please continue!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 10, 2005 13:16:38 GMT -5
Thanks a lot! Here it is, then.
Chapter 6: Getting a Date The next day, at noon, Shade was on his way to the park, while Jake was already at the park, waiting. On his way there, Shade met up with Florence. "Hey, Shade, can I ask you something?" She asked Shade. "Sure, ask away!" Shade replied, smiling. "Well, do you want to go to the park like later tonight, you know, like a date?" She asked. Shade thought a little, then said, "Yeah, I'd love to!" Flornce smiled. "Alright, see you at the park at 8!" She said, leaving and waving good-bye to Shade, who also waved good-bye to her as he still was on his way to the park. "Alright, let's train!" Shade said to Jake, turning dragon when he reached the park. Jake nodded and turned dragon as well. While they were training, Shade told Jake about his date later with Florence. "Wow, that sounds good." Jake said after they were done training. After they were training, it was about 4ish and Shade had to head home. Four more hours later and Shade was leaving his house again and was on his way to the park, with flowers in his hand.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 10, 2005 13:50:29 GMT -5
not bad plz continue
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Post by yfwe on Aug 10, 2005 15:33:15 GMT -5
Great job so far, Shade!
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