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Post by dragonfire on Aug 10, 2005 17:08:17 GMT -5
yeah! its realy good
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 10, 2005 17:08:56 GMT -5
yeah shade plz continue it getting really good
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Post by magenta on Aug 10, 2005 19:48:29 GMT -5
Yes, please do! =D
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Post by Chaos on Aug 11, 2005 11:09:44 GMT -5
Thanks a lot!
Chapter 7: The Date of a Lifetime Florence was sitting in a tree when Shade arrived. "Are we going to go on that date, or are you going to stay up there all night?" Shade asked, smiling. Florence laughed. "I'm coming down!" She said, doing a flip off the tree. "Where do you want to go?" Shade asked Florence. "Hm, how about the theme park?" She asked. Shade nodded and they walked to the theme park. No one was there and they went on some rides. They were on the roller coaster and that big spinny thing. Shade got sick from that... Then, Shade wanted to win Florence something, so when Florence wasn't looking, he threw an iceball at the cans and they all fell down. Shade won Florence a big teddy bear and she hugged him hard. They also went on one of those scary rides. Shade got scared on most of it and kind of fell on Florence, who blushed a little. Off the ride, they were on their way to the ferris wheel and on the way the held hands together and both watched the stars as fireworks shot into the sky. "Wow, this is amazingly awsome!" Shade said when they were on the ferris wheel. "I think I should tell her I'm a dragon, because Jake and his friends know I'm a dragon, as well as Jake being a dragon." Shade thought. "This has been the best night ever..." Florence told Shade. "Same with me..." Shade replied as they almost kissed, but before they did, Shade saw Jake in dragon mode behind Florence and Florence saw the Huntsclan behind Shade. When the ride stopped, Shade and Florence ran out of the ferris wheel and they both said to each other, "I'll be right back, I promise!" Running opposite ways. Shade turned dragon and followed Jake and Gramps and Florence put on her Huntslass gear and followed Huntsdad and the rest of the Huntsclan.
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Post by magenta on Aug 11, 2005 11:24:25 GMT -5
Ooo! This is getting REALLY good! Poor Shade doesn't even know he's dating his enemy...=(
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Post by Chaos on Aug 11, 2005 11:38:49 GMT -5
Yeah, and he's having the time of his life! This'll get good when they both know each others identities, but they don't find out in this. Also, do you like my new avatar, line under it, and added picture to signature?
Chapter 8: Captured "Dragons, what're you doing here?" Huntsdad asked Jake, Gramps, and Shade. "Isn's it obvious? To beat you!" Jake said, charging at Huntsdad. Gramps attacked Huntsman and Huntslass and Shade were on the ferris wheel. Huntslass threw a net over Shade, but She froze the net and broke out of it. He shot a blast of ice that would freeze Huntslass, but she used his Huntsstickthngamabooby to deflect it and hit Shade, knocking him out. Huntslass threw a net over Shade, again, and closed it. She ran off and signaled to Huntsdad and Huntsman. They stopped fighting and ran off. "Phew! Got rid of them!" Jake gloated. "Yes, but where's Shade?" Gramps asked Jake, looking around. Jake also looked around. "He must've gotten captured! We have to save him!" Jake explained and flew into the direction of where the Huntsclan were running. Gramps flew with Jake and saw up ahead a tall, rundown tower. "Obviously a sign that that's the Huntsclan's new base. Could the BE anymore obvious?" Jake asked sarcasticly. "Come on, we can surprise them by going in through the roof." Gramps told Jake, flying skyky inside one of the windows on the high ground. When Jake went through a window too, the tower shook. "This place isn't sturdy enough to hold even two people at the top. Do the Huntsclan know that?" Jake asked Gramps, tunring to him. "Hm, they might not. We should wait outside the tower and see." Gramps told Jake, flying out of the same window he used to come in. Jake followed Gramps and watched the tower slowly shake.
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Post by magenta on Aug 11, 2005 11:43:13 GMT -5
Yeah, they all look great!
Good chapter! =D Poor Shade! 0_0
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Post by Chaos on Aug 11, 2005 11:56:34 GMT -5
Thanks, thanks, and don't worry, he'll be ok, I think...
Chapter 9: Collapse After Jake and Gramps left the tower, the Huntsclan all went inside the tower. "Well, I guess they don't know." Jake said, smiling. They both watched as the Huntsclan went higher, and higher, and higher, and higher! "So, dragon, how are you going to feel when I know your identity and slay you?" Huntslass asked Shade. "Well, that's really going to be a downside, why?" Shade asked. "I wanted to make you feel bad." Huntslass replied. "Well, it worked..." Shade muttered. Once they reached the top of the tower, it started to wobble. Shade noticed this and had a plan. He jumped while he was in the net, causing the bottom of the tower to crumble, causing the tower to fall and collapse. Jake and Gramps grabbed Shade and released him from the net. The Huntsclan used their parachutes (which they carry around for no reason)so they didn't fall. "This isn't the end, dragon!" Huntslass said, falling into a tree. Shade started to laugh when Huntslass fell in the tree. "Alright, let's go home." Shade said. Jake and Gramps nodded and flew off. Shade also flew over back home and went to sleep.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 11, 2005 14:36:06 GMT -5
not bad pls contiune
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Post by magenta on Aug 11, 2005 16:39:24 GMT -5
Ooo! Great chapter! Hurry and continue before I die of suspense! XD
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Post by smartpot04 on Aug 11, 2005 18:25:41 GMT -5
great!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 11, 2005 18:58:23 GMT -5
Thanks a lot everyone, again! Chapter 10: Weekend Over The next day was Monday, so the weekend was over. Everyone was sad and full of grief, but Shade was worried he woudn't be able to explain things to Florence. While at his locker, waiting for the bell to ring, Florence walked by and they both said, "Sorry I couldn't make it back, it was a family thing." They both looked at each other oddly. "Well, than I guess it's like, apology accepted?" Shade asked Florence. She nodded. "I apologize as well, but next time we have a date, something like that won't happen, no matter what!" Florence continued, happily. "Same with me." Shade replied, smiling. "See you later then." Florence said, walking off, but before she did, she kissed Shade, who blushed. Trixie was also not sick anymore. "Wow, Shade and Florence have taken this really far." Trixie said, sneezing. "Yeah, but it's suspisious..." Jake replied. "Yeah, suspisous that I am hiding that I like...cookies!" Spud said. Jake rolled his eyes as the bell rang. Everyone went to class because life was good, you know, except for the fact that Shade's arch enemy is his girlfriend and visa virsa, but we'll het to that later. The End. That whole end part would be done by some other person, like a narrirator.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 11, 2005 19:00:27 GMT -5
not bad i can't wait to read another ff you make shade
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Post by Chaos on Aug 11, 2005 19:22:51 GMT -5
Thanks! I'm thinking about writing the King of Hunts (A LOOOOOONG fan-fic), and episode dealing with Jake and Trixie, or and episode dealing with Florence and Shade.
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Post by yfwe on Aug 11, 2005 19:30:08 GMT -5
Great fic, Shade!
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