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Post by Chaos on Sept 10, 2005 22:58:42 GMT -5
Ok, I'll try to do both chapters next.
Chapter 4: Fight Against Destiny I heard someone ruslte flew the entrace and I jumped from tree to tree in front of him. It was the Ice Dragon, Freezy. "Dragon, let's make this quick, I already caught a pheonix and I want to get out of this forest." I said to Freezy. "Well then lets take this fight to a more suitable area." Freezy told me, flying over to a hill. I ran and followed him. I had the feeling I would surprise Freezy today with a great defeat! I continuously kicked Freezy and punched him, sending him flying higher up a mounain thing. I followed him and he landed on his feet. "Time for the final move, draon!" I yelled, running quickly and punching Freezy really hard in the face. My punch made Freezy slash off my mask with his claws. I opened my eyes and looked at the dragon. He looked dizzy and he suddenly turned human. "Finally, I know who he is!" I thought. I saw this face and I was so shocked I couldn't move. How could he have been Freezy? He was-he was... Shade!
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Post by stranger on Sept 10, 2005 23:03:45 GMT -5
i like it Chaos, pls continue!
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Post by mithos on Sept 10, 2005 23:10:04 GMT -5
Same!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 10, 2005 23:19:37 GMT -5
Alright, this is the last chapter!
Chapter 5: The End? I looked at Shade's face, with much fear. It must've been a mirror reflection, because he looked just as fearful as me. "We can't... How could..." Shade kept trying to say. I was very dazed and Shade kept trying to say what he wanted to say. "Can, we still have this relationship...?" I asked me, both of us still confused. tears rolled down my face and the rain was letting up a little. I didn't know what to do, but suddenly I felt my arm swing and ounch Shade, making his fall down again. I cound't control myself and cried even harder. "I just, can't do this!" I yelled, crying so hard. I ran off as far as I could when I bumped into my stepdad. "Do you have-" he was cut short when I handed him the trapped pheonix. "There, are you happy!?" I yelled at him. I ran off, still feeling awful. I felt a net go down over me, but I didn't notice. Suddenly, everything was black, and I heard a familiar voice, in an evil laugh...
The End...?
I'm doing the continued part in a nother fan-fic. The next fan-fic is Family Reunion, description on Episode Ideas.
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Post by magenta on Sept 11, 2005 10:15:34 GMT -5
This was really great! I can't wait for the continuation story!
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Post by stranger on Sept 11, 2005 16:24:53 GMT -5
I liked it, i hope u start your next ff soon!
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