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Post by stranger on Jul 25, 2005 18:26:16 GMT -5
i like it! continue soon!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 26, 2005 22:20:29 GMT -5
Alright, here we go.
"Panderas? How did you get here?" Jake asked Panderas, a bit shocked. "That's not important, but what IS important is that you have been captured and you can only be set free if you defeat my Snogras!" Panderas said, laughing as lots of snowmen surrounded Jake. Jake cut through the net and shot fire at the Snogras. When the fire blasted into the snowmen, they grew even bigger. "Aw man! They grow bigger when they absorb fire?" Jake thought. "I guess I'll have to do this old school." He then muttered, attacking the Snogas as some of them fell. After lots of fighting, all of the Snogras melted away. Panderas had gotten away, but Jake had a feeling something worse would happen. "It didn't work sir." Panderas said into his phone thing. "Don't worry, more will come to test him..." Shade said back, walking back to Jake.
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Post by Chaos on Jul 27, 2005 11:12:00 GMT -5
Jake saw Shade walking back and quickly turned human. "Ok, the work is done, lets go to the candy shop." Shade said, walking down the street. Jake shrugged and walked with Shade. When at the store, Shade ordered some candy. "Here, try some." The clerk said to Jake, handing him a piece of chocolate. Jake took the chocolate and poped it in his mouth. "Mmmmm...I'm in heaven...." Jake said. "I LOVE this candy! More!" He said as the clerk handed him a lot of chocolate. Jake handed the clerk the money and started to eat the candy while Shade also ordered some candy. "Ok, let's go to the castle." Shade said to Jake. Jake shrugged again and followed Shade to a tall castle not too far off. When They walked in, it was huge! It had also gotten very, very late and it was dark. "Careful not to get lost..." Shade said, turning dragon and flying to the tallest tower. "Alright, Huntsclan, go!" Shade said into his phone thing. "Ok..." Replied the commander of this Huntsclan.
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Post by stranger on Jul 27, 2005 11:52:12 GMT -5
lol, poor oblivious jake, pls continue soon!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 27, 2005 12:16:11 GMT -5
Yep! Ok.
Jake thought he heard Shade near somewhere. "Shade? Where are you? I'm lost and I lost you!" He called out. Then he felt a Huntsclan person hurt him. Shade flew inside the castle and turned human as torches suddenly lightened up with flames and the commanding Huntsmaster walked next to Jake. "Fight me!" He said, punching Jake. Jake flew into a building, but quickly, Jake turned dragon and did a counter attack, knocking losts of Huntsminions off the castle. Then there's a fight fight scene, yeah, and Huntsmaster runs off with his cloths ripped a bit. After the fight, Jake turns normal and Shade walks down. "Ok, let's go to the hotel for some sleep." Shade told Jake as they both walked back to the hotel. When they got there, Shade's dad and sister were already asleep so Jake and Shade quietly went into their beds. "The American Dragon is strong...I underestimated him, Good thing I don't have another enemy here..." Shade thought, falling asleep. But, in the Dark Dragon's hide out, he read a the letter that was sent to Panderas and he thought it was for him! The Dark Dragon laughed and flew on his way to Scotland...
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Post by stranger on Jul 27, 2005 12:40:44 GMT -5
not bad!, pls continue soon
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Post by Chaos on Jul 27, 2005 13:15:25 GMT -5
In the morning, Jake was up an hour late and he got out of his bed. He got dressed and looked outside. He saw Shade's dad and sister shooting fire balls in the air! Jake rubbed his eyes and suddenly they stopped, so Jake knew he was halucinating...or was he? When the left the hotel and went outside, he saw Shade run into a warehouse. Jake quickly chased after him and opened the door, that's when things were crazy...Jake watched Shade turning into a dragon! After Shade transformed, he turned around and looked at Jake. "So, you know I'm a dragon now." He confesed, frowning. "Yes, all along, I have been Freezy, helping you on your quests. I wanted to keep my identity a secret though, but now you know." Shade continued. "You knew I was the American Dragon?" Jake asked Shade, who nodded. "But Shade, this is good! We can work together to fight forces!" Jake said. Shade then looked up and smiled. "Yeah! Ok, thanks Jake. This is great for-" Shade was cut off when a dark hand grabbed him and pulled himunder the Earth. "Shade!" Jake yelled as Shade dropped down into the core of the Earth...
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Post by stranger on Jul 27, 2005 13:18:57 GMT -5
interesting, continue soon!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 29, 2005 11:56:29 GMT -5
Ok, more action is coming up.
Running as fast as he could, Jake was trying to get help from Shade's dad and sister to save Shade. Once he reached them, he said, "Shade's in trouble, the Dark Dragon..." Shade's dad and sister looked like they didn't know what he was talking about. "Look, I know Shade's a dragon, so you two are dragons two! I'm also a dragon, but I'll explain later, we have to find Shade!" Jake said. They nodded. "Ok, there should be a big pile of rocks nearby. Some believed that it went to the center of the Earth, but only magical creatures could get through it." Shade sister said, turning dragon and flying to the pile of rocks. Jake and Shade's dad also turned dragon and followed Jake's sister. She looked like Gramp's dragon form, only no mustache, long, black hair, and the blue is pink. Shade's dad looked like Counciler Andam, four wings on the back, only he had a small mustache and was dark blue. They all used their strenght to lift most of the rocks, revealing a hole. They all flew in and reached the hot, molten core of the Earth. "Hm...You're not the American Dragon, are you? Oh well, since you're a dragon, you must be friends with the boy." Dark Dargon thought, strapping Shade up in chains. Then he noticed three dragons enter. "It seems the American Dragon has come at last, with two new friends." He thought, smiling. The Dark Dragon picked up some ash and threw it on the ground. Ash opposites of dragon Jake, dragon Shade's sister, and dragon Shade's dad. "Attack!" He yelled as the ash dragons flew toward the three dragons.
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Post by stranger on Jul 29, 2005 15:12:03 GMT -5
add more soon!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 1, 2005 11:44:20 GMT -5
OK, near the end.
Shade's sister's ash dragon was the weakest but fastest. She shot pink fire balls at the ash dragon, but it was too quick. Then she had an idea to trick the ash dragon. Shade's sister flew in front of Shade. "Can't get me!" She bragged. The ash dragon sped into her direction, but she flew up and the ash dragon crashed into Shade's chains so he broke free. Also, the ash dragon dissolved. Shade's dad's ash dragon was the second hardest and/or easiest, but had lots of defense. Shade's dad's attacks didn't affect his ash dragon and he was just his back with it's tail. The ash dragon landed on some hardened lava. Then, Shade's dad had an idea. He flew to the highest point, then crashed down on the hardened lava, then he quickly flew up. The landing caused a shockwave so the lava around the ash dragon would dissolve it. Jake's ash dragon was the most powerful but was slow. Jake was really angry, he just blew a giant breath of fire over the ash dragon dissolving it. "I got the Dark Dragon!" Jake said, flying over. "No, I have him." Siad a voice behind Jake, which yurned out to be Shade. He flew next to the Dark Dragon and basicly yelled ay him, shooting a huge breath of ice ofver the Dark Dragon, and since he was covered in ice and he went into the lava, he melted away. "I guess, he's gone forever." Shade's sister said as everyone flew back to the UK, but a hand busted out of the lava and the Dark Dragon lived on...
One more chapter.
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Post by Chaos on Aug 3, 2005 13:14:41 GMT -5
They flew out of the hole and covered it with rocks. "Hey, we're all safe." Shade's sister said, turning human. Everyone else also turned human. "Well, get packed guys, we have to go home." Shade's dad said. jake and Shade sighed. "Alright, dad." Shade said. Florence ran over to Shade. "You're leaving already?" She asked, frowning. Shade nodded, sadly. Florence smiled again. "Well, I'm pretty sure we'll meet again someday." She replied, kissing Shade. "Good-bye." She said, walking off and waving. Shade waved back. While Shade was saying good-bye to Florence, Jake was getting lots of candy. In the hotel, he packed it all in his case of stuff. Shade also brought some candy with him. After the plane ride, Spud, Trixie, and Jake's family welcomed Jake home. "Look at this candy I got!" Jake showed his family and Shade. "Oh, thanks Jakey!" Trixie said, taking some candy. "Wait, I didn't-" Jake started. "Yeah, thanks." Spud said, taking candy as well. "Guys..." Jake groaned. "Candy!" Haley yelped, taking lots. "Oh thanks for the candy Jake." Jake's parent said. There was only a piece of chocolate left. Shade and the rest of his family laughed quietly. "Aw man!" Jake groaned.
The End!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 3, 2005 13:17:51 GMT -5
not a bad ending shade
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Post by Chaos on Aug 3, 2005 13:20:33 GMT -5
Thanks, I had to do something with Jake saying, "Aw man!" and I figured, since he liked that candy, perfect!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 3, 2005 16:26:07 GMT -5
so r u gonna make any more ff
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