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Post by Chaos on Nov 4, 2005 23:20:54 GMT -5
It's about time I started this, and I hope I will try to be online more often to post on this.
Prelogue: The Sadness In Their Hearts
"Mmmuuummm...." Shade moaned in his dark room, tears quickly rolling down his face. It was a week after the school camping trip and the figuring out of Florence being Huntslass. He hadn't been at school for a while and started to eat less. Jake, Spud, and Trixie would show up on occasion, but would never help. In the city next to Shade's things were no better with Florence. She was supposed to be slaying an elf, but was sitting in her room, weeping all over her bed. "Why!?" She asked, in a whispery and raspy voice. "I can't stand his sadness, it's terrible!" Jake said, whispering to Trixie and Spud in Prof. Rotwood's class. They nodded back sadly and wrote some notes in their notebooks. "It's really tragic, worse than when I found out about Rose, they both found out at the same time..." Jake was thinking. "Excellent, Florence can be mine..." A voice laughed, outside of the school, flying off suddenly.
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Post by yfwe on Nov 5, 2005 10:12:55 GMT -5
Nice!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 8, 2005 22:33:44 GMT -5
Cool! Update soon. ^-^
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Post by Chaos on Nov 10, 2005 9:32:38 GMT -5
Lol, nice avatar. Ok, update.
Chapter 1: The Bad Dream
Shade and Florence were asleep, having what seemed as a good dream. They both were having the same dream. It was a normal day at the park and Shade and Florence were standing in front of each other. They quickly hugged and Shade said, "I don't want anything to tear us apart..." "Me neither..." Florence replied, getting ready to kiss Shade. At the last minute, a Huntslass figure grabbed Florence and a Freezy figure grabbed Shade. "No!!!" They both yelled, crying while being dragged away. Shade and Florence suddenly woke up and sighed. They both pulled their covers over their heads and cried themselves to sleep. "GO TO SCHOOL!!" Shade's mom yelled in Shade's ear. He woke up in a shock and his mom said, "You are going to school today." and grabbed his arm and pulled him out of bed. Once packed for school, Shade walked outside and went into an alley and turned dragon to fly to school. Huntslass was having even worse a day. "Now, today, slay a unicorn, we need much hunting this year!" Huntsdad commanded. Huntslass nodded and three Huntsclan troops followed her into the dark and rainy streets of the city. "Heh heh, time to strike..." A figure standing on a tall building said. Just as the tall building was demolished, he turned dragon and dropped his cloak. He landed on another building and turned human, revealing the boy at the water at the camp. His name was Aqua, the master dragon of controlling water. An elf stared at Aqua angrily and ran off to New York, you know, with the Jake, and the Shade, and everyone. Of course, things will soon go positively wrong...
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Post by chetchaka on Nov 10, 2005 10:03:02 GMT -5
Very good! Continue soon!
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Post by Chaos on Nov 11, 2005 21:10:13 GMT -5
Ok!
Chapter 2: Sudden Ill Attack & The Kidnapping
"Now class, how long is the regular size of a unicorn's horn?" Rotwood asked, looking around the classroom. He looked over at Shade. "Shade?" He asked. Shade sighed in return and said, "6 inches." Rotwood nodded. "Ok, very good." He said, delighted. Shade just sighed again and asked if he could go to the bathroom. Rotwood nodded and Jake snuck out to follow him. In the bathroom, Jake found Shade sitting in the cornor, eyes closed and tight tucked into a ball. Jake sighed under his breath as well and stared into the bathroom mirror. But, unknown, a large bug swarm was flying in the hallways. They were tiny, looked like scarabs, had a pinkigh purplish glow, and sparkled blue dust. They turned oddly intangible and went into Rotwood's class. The horrible incects went into everyone in the classroom, including Rotwood, Spud, and Trixie, and everyone started sneezing like crazy. "What is going on?" Trixie asked Spud, sneezing and turnig pale. "I don't know, must be magical problem..." Spud replied, his face turning red and he was coughing as well as sweat running down the back of his head.Spud and Trixie fell to the floor and dragged themselves out of the room into the bathroom. Out of weakness, everyone else in the classroom also fell, unconcious. ; "Go out, triangular formation!" Huntslass yelled to her three Huntsclan guards. They saluted to her and went into a triangular formation. Huntslass stopped and looked around. She had heard Aqua and was curious. "Well, it looks like she found me..." Aqua said, laughing a bit. He jumped off the building he was on and landed in front of the Huntsclan in formation. "Who are you?" One of the Huntsclan asked. Aqua laughed and lifted a large puddle of water and completely obliterated the three Huntsclan members. Huntslass gasped and started to run. "Oh no you don't, sweet." Aqua said, turning dragon and flying to Huntslass. She slashed her mask and grabbed Florence. He knocked her out and flew off, laughing evily.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 11, 2005 21:15:36 GMT -5
UDPATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! XD
This is really great so far. Continue please. ^-^
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Post by Chaos on Nov 22, 2005 10:58:45 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Unknown Knowing
Jake helped Trixie up and Shade helped Spud up. "Maybe you guys should go home?" Jake asked. "No," Spud said. "We need to know what attacked us, take us to Gramps." Jake nodded and ran out of the school with Shade. They turned dragon when no one was around and Spud and Trixie jumped on their backs. They flew off, leaving the school, and the sick class, behind. In a large pond, with a cave on the other side, Aqua laid down Florence into the water, who was still unconcious. Aqua took off his cloak and turned human. He did some hand motions and the water slowly rose into a pattern, a straight line. Aqua saw a rat, scurrying around, and shot the water at it, killing the rat. Trixie and Spud limped over into the store and Jake flew off. Shade flew up as high as he could and looked around. He flew in the eastern direction quickly and landed at Magenta's roof. He shot an ice blast near her window and it opened up. She flew out, dragon form and looked at Shade. "What's up?" She asked. Shade sighed. "Do you know where Florence is?" He asked. Magenta stopped smiling and frowned a little. "Oh, no..." Magenta replied. Shade was about to fly off, when Magenta realized, "Wait! I know an elf, who is kind, and really short. Josh, he is, who lives in a wrecked city, by the Huntsclan, who just moved in." Shade also realized and smiled a little. "Thanks so much Magenta!" He said, flying off and waving. Magenta smiled again and waved back and flew back into her room.
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Post by Chaos on Dec 4, 2005 2:07:01 GMT -5
Long needed update, sorry I haven't been on or rating other stories.
Chapter 4: The Ruined City "Let me go!" Florence yelled, finally waking up. "Heh, heh, never, dear Florence." Aqua said, reaveling his face to Florence, grinning. Shae gasped, wide-eyed. "I'm afraid, you must be quiet now, so sorry about this..." He raised a hand and it went dark, Florence knocked out by a blast of water. She let out a last scream before she was unconcious. ///// Shade was flying figure 8 toward the wrecked city. He went to the center and saw three Huntsclan members, lying down with red marks on their backs. In the middle of the fallen pile, a little elf with a green tunic, long ears, purple hair, wearing a white bandana, putting away most of his hair, but some still sticking out, and a green orb in one of his hands. "Are you Shade?" He asked, turning to Shade and looking into his cold eyes. Shade loked back into his windy green eyes. "I am." Shade replied. "Please, help me find someone, another friend, Magenta, told me-" The elf iturrupted. "I know, you want Florence. Someone has taken here, as shown by the fallen guards. There are whip marks on their backs, showing they were whiped by a waterbender." The elf informed. "Waterbending? Who are you?" Shade asked. The elf looked down and then back up. "I am the Wind Master, Josh, of the Eastern Side Elf Clan." Josh explained. Shade's eyes widened a bit. "Josh!? From the UK!?" ///// Trixie was laying on the coffee table with a blanket, asleep, and Spud was on the couch, asleep under a blanket of cusions. "Hm, found anything Fu Dog?" Gramps asked Fu, walking into the other room, stirring some tea. Fu looked over at Gramps sadly and shook his head. Gramps nodded and walked out of the room. "I hope at least Shade will succed and Jake might find something as well..." Gramps thought, staring into the sky out the window, then clsing his eyes and sipping the tea.
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Post by Chaos on Dec 19, 2005 15:00:42 GMT -5
Sadly, I can't get a good picture of Josh. Oh well, I don't have any pictures of Florence, either.
Chapter 5: Water Master Jake was in a dark alley, looking around. "Can I find something here?" He yelled. He heard two laughing voices and out came two bats. "We are the Bat Brothers!" They both said. The one with bat wings and legs wlaked out of the shadows. "I'm Bibidi." The other one, with bat legs and head, stood next to his twin. "I'm Babidi." Jake was confused but sat down. "You want help, yes?" Bibidi asked Jake, who nodded quickly. "Then we shall call him." Babidi replied. "Buu!!!" They yelled, a huge figure jumping from the top of the building. //////////////// "Come with me, I know their prints!" Josh said, flying up. Shade nodded and turned dragon, following Josh in the sky. "So, how do you know about Aqua, and where he is?" Shade asked. "It was a long time ago, Aqua had destroyed the whole clan of us elves. Before he could destroy our sacred orb, I stole it, and ran off. The way I know of him, his scent is in the wounds of these Huntsclan members, and I can smell his aroma in the air." Josh explained. Shade nodded, and sped ahead, Josh doing the same. /////////// "Ok, I think I got it!" Fu yelled. He made a potion and drank it, suddenly his head exploding. "Great..." Gramps replied. He started making a head boom removal potion and groaned. "Why am I the only good one here?..." Gramps muttered.
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 23, 2005 12:53:51 GMT -5
lol that last part was funny! ;D This story is getting good!
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Post by coolgirlc on Jan 14, 2006 15:37:54 GMT -5
cool story. update!!
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Post by Chaos on Jan 22, 2006 14:47:35 GMT -5
I will, but my imagination suddenly vanished, let me think then I'll post again...
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Post by Chaos on Feb 9, 2006 22:53:14 GMT -5
Chapter 6: The Aiding Bats & Weirdo
Buu was a fat pink...thing. The was smiling like a scary clown and looked at Jake. "We will help you! ...Buu!!" He screamed, laughing. "We will let you transport a cretain power over to another." Bibidi said. "Yes, but only you can do it and with two people engaged in duel!" Babidi finished. Buu raised his hands, Babidi raised his left, Bibidi raised his right, and a pink beam flew into Jake and his aurora was pink. "So, this'll help. Thank you so much." Jake bowed with honer. "Our pleasure, hee hee!" Buu said. He threw something and pink smoke appeared, Buu vanishing and Bibidi and Babidi flying off. Jake laughed so much he started crying. "Wow, scary freaks..." Jake thought, flying off to the shop. /////////// Shade and Josh reached a strange forest with light water on the floor. "Oy! Forgot me shoes..." Josh mutered. Shade shushed Josh and turned human he ran to a cornor and saw Florence (tied up) in a small dry area over water. She groaned a bit. Shade grabbed his fist and a tear flew down his eye, but he started to tip-toe toward Florence. Once he was a few feet away, suddenly... ////////// Trixie opened her eyes. "W-What happened?" She asked, her skin turning normal as Jake (in human with the aurora) walked over her and Spud. The same happened with Spud as he opened his eyes and yawned. "Yo, we got to follow Shade, c'mon!" Jake yelled, turning dragon and rushing to the roof of the shop.
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Feb 9, 2006 23:49:58 GMT -5
Hmmmm, very interesting...And cool at the same time.
I'll be sure to watch this story closely, thanks for reading mine ;D
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