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Post by Chaos on Jun 24, 2006 18:14:58 GMT -5
Finally, I decided to make a new fan-fic. No, this isn't the End of Shade... I just wanted to finally write something.
Preview: While learning more about their love, Jake, Shade, Rose, and Florence are split apart again from herritage, as they try to find a way to shrink off of duties and find each other. While Spud and Trixie try to help these four, they find more interests in each other and start to share more than some secrets...
Prologue: Spreading the Love
"You really hooked me up with a date with Stacy?" Spud asked Jake, shocked. "Yes, yes, just need to look nice, smile, and land one." Jake said, smiling and winking, talking about a kiss. Spud just closed his eyes and smiled. "He is really extra fine with cheese on a... grind?" Trixie asked, trying to think of something hot to say, asking Florence. Trixie was blind-folded too. "Yup, just when we leave, take off your blind fold." Florence explained, speeding off with Jake. Shade, Rose, Jake, and Florence were running from the restaurant, laughing. Spud opened his eyes and Trixie took off her blind fold. "Spud!?" Trixie yelled. "Trix!?" Spud screamed. "You guys!!!" They both yelled, groaning and smacking their faces.
(Start theme song)
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Jun 24, 2006 18:22:55 GMT -5
HE'S COOL! HE'S HOT LIKE THE FROZEN SUN! HE'S YOUNG, AND FAST, HE'S THE CHOSEN ONE... AND PEOPLE WE'RE NOT BRAGGGGGGINNNNN... HE'S THE AMERICANN DRAGONNNNNN!!! *sings the theme song like a freak* I love how the Jonas Brothers sang the ADJL theme song. I heart it now. <3
Anyway, I like that... blindfold Trixie and make Spud close his eyes and they are set up in a date... AWESOME MAN! XD Continue soon... I likie. ^.^
-- ADJLFanatic
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Post by Chaos on Jun 24, 2006 18:48:02 GMT -5
Not doing anything else, so I'll continue on this. I just don't know where to start, I thought up of the plot out of the blue. ^^
Chapter 1: Training in Love
"Let's go!" Jake yelled, turnign dragon. Shade did the same. "But do we really have to train against... You know?" Shade asked. "Yup. Better this than Gramps or Fu..." Jake muttered, smiling. "No more talking, time for action!" Florence said, as she charged at Shade. He dodged the attack and froze Florence's arm, forming water from the air and sending a blast at Florence, sendingher flying into a wall. Her arm unfroze as she hoped up and continued to attack Shade. "Ok, let's go!" Jake yelled, shooting fireballs at Rose. She just jumped from wall-to-wall, avoiding the attacks. She kicked Jake in the stomach as he flew into the air. When in the air, Jake dove down and ran into Rose, hurting them both as Jake turned human. "Looks liek we're done." Shade said, breathing and freezing Florence's legs to the floor. He turned dragon and smiled, triumphant.
"Nice battle, eh?" Florence asked, they all were just in the shop, laying on the couches. "Yeah, but it was hard to freeze ya, you know, it being you and all..." Shade said, blushing a little and scratching the back of hs head. "Well it was hard to charge at you." Florence said. "It was hard for me to kick Jake in the stomach like that." Rose informed, smiling and laughing nervously. "Ok, enough apologies... Even though it was hard to shoot those fire balls and diving at you." Jake inquired to Rose, smiling. They all just laughed as Trixie and Spud entered. "Do you know how embarassing that date was!?" Trixie yelled at them. "Uh-huh, yup, odd dating Trixie like that..." Spud muttered, falling over on the couch. "Plus, she had me pay..." He added. "Oh blah, blah, blah, your needs!..." Trixie groaned, just sitting down next to Jake and Shade.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Jun 24, 2006 19:12:21 GMT -5
AHA! I bet it's love in denial!!!! XDDD Wow, I'm working on a fic too... and you updated faster... nice. XP I hope to see more. MORE!!! *begs* XDD
*still singing the ADJL theme song in a corner* >.>
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Post by Chaos on Jun 24, 2006 19:41:58 GMT -5
Yeah, saw that, it was good. If I had decided to go back on earlier, I could've been in it... Oh well. Gonna work on my crossover fan-fic, I also want to finish that.
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Post by Chaos on Jun 25, 2006 14:54:48 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Shade's Teacher
"Oh, so you finally decide to pay a visit to your pupil's friend's master?" Gramps asked a man who had entered the shop. "Could you just describe why I'm here again?" Shade's master, Seep Dive, asked. "The Hunsclan has formed a huge army, larger than we thought. We need to train more, that means me and Jake, you and Shade." Gramps explained to Seep. He just nodded in return, running to the top of the building, where Jake and Shade were training again.
"Hey, did you see Rose or Florence today?" Jake asked Shade, shotting fire at a target. He and Shade were dragons and just in fice/ice practice. "No... Not since the practice yesterday..." Shade replied, controlling a small puddle of water to whip the target and send it flying. Seep finally arrived to the top, Gramsp and Fu behind him. He and Gramps turned dragon, Seep's dragon form consitsting of a very long Chinese Dragon form and he is golden. "Jake, Shade, the Huntsclan have increased their army larger, WAY larger." Seep explained, looking at them both. "Oh, THIS is your teacher, wonder why he only came now..." Jake muttered to Shade. "He is usually just liking to be in secret, so this Huntsclan army must be large and important." Shade explained. Seep just nodded in concentration. "So, do the Huntsclan know anything about Florence and Rose?" Shade asked. Seep, Fu, and Gramps just looked at each other and then back at Jake and Shade. "We do... You just don't want to know." Fu explained. "Wha... What does that mean?" Jake and Shade asked, worried. They all just decided to go back into the shop.
"SPUDINSKI! Why are you stalking me!?" Trixie yelled at Spud, who was walking with her. "I'm still pretty annoyed you had me pay... And I am bored." Spud explained, just looking back at Trixie. She just mumbled a little and continued to walk along the trail.
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Post by charles finley. on Jun 26, 2006 17:26:56 GMT -5
Cha, I like it so far
*Copys Raffi and sings like a mainc on the ADJL Theme* HE'S COOL HE'S HOT LIKE HTE FROZEN SUN! PEOPLE WHERE NOT BRAGGIN! HE'S THE AMERICAN DRAGON!!HE'S GONNA STOP HIS ENEMINES WITH HIS DRAGON POWER! DRAGON TEETH DRAGON TAIL BURIN DRAGON FIRE!!AMERICAN DRAGON!!AMERICAN DRAGON!!!HIS SKILLS ARE GETTIN FASTER WITH GRAMPA MASTER!!HIS DESTINY WILL WALK UP SHEETS SHOW TIME BABY FOR THE LENCY!!! AMERICAN DRAGON!!
Cha, sry I had to do that XD
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Post by Chaos on Jun 26, 2006 18:50:34 GMT -5
Cha cha cha... Yup XD
Chapter 3: Shocked in a Heartbeat?
"Stepdad, I said I was done with this!" Florence yelled, being forced into her Huntslass costume. Rose was next to her, just looking at each other. "Maybe so, but you two will be forced into it. We may have let you go, but only because when you joined back we would have valuable information..." Huntsman explained. Rose and Florence just sighed, starting to spar against each other. "Yes..." Huntsdad muttered, without anyone but he and the Huntsman noticing, he made a teleportation spell to send them to the Huntsclan Academy.
"WHAT!?" Jake and Shade yelled at the same time. "Indeed, it is true... Rose and Florence have been forced back into the Huntsclan!" Gramps said, stroking his white beard in worry. "And, be warned, if you hesitate to attack... The Dragon Council will not hesitate to relieve you two of your dragons powers." Seep muttered, sipping some tea. They just sighed, leaning back into their couches.
"Look, Trix, Gramps told us that Florence and Rose were forced into the Huntsclan... So what are we gonna do?" Spud asked. "Listen, Spudinski! Will you stop with all this we business! It's creeping me out..." Trixie muttered, scratching her arm a bit. "Why, cause I'm starting to be in love with-" Spud started said, suddenly stopping and looking at what was in his hand. "S-Starting to like... Twidling my thumbs!" Spud said, doing so and looking away, embarassed. Trixie just laughed a little and blushed, messing with one of her ponytails.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Jun 27, 2006 4:10:03 GMT -5
Why didn't you tell me that you updated?! I was on myspace all day, dude. XD This is awesome. I wub this story. Update soon. X3
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Post by Chaos on Jun 29, 2006 20:52:37 GMT -5
Finally, a spark came for an idea! I'm also gonna give Shade something new, so now he's gonna have ice powers, water powers, and that special thing. I'll say something about it, it's two words and the begining of both words start with P.
Chapter 4: The Secret's Anger Released
Once Seep had left and Fu and Gramps had gone to the back, Trixie and Spud on their way to the shop, had Jake and Shade left alone in the small, main room.
"I can't believe it... They're just gone, like that." Shade muttered. Jake was just looking sad and worried, like he was hiding something. "Jake, what are you hiding?" Shade asked, a bit annoyed.
"N-Nothing..." Jake muttered, looking at the floor in sorrow. Shade just glared at Jake, angry and his eyes glistening with ice. "Ok, ok... Two weeks ago, Rose told me and Florence thet she was going back to the Academy, and will have to bring Florence with her. We all thought it would be best if you didn't know, and would think it would be an accident." He explained, sighing.
"So you lied to me? You and Florence? Fine... I'll just go. I don't need her, or anyone here for this matter." Shade said angrily, turning to the door as Spud and Trixie came in.
"Uh, what's wrong?" Trixie asked Shade, him shoving her and Spud out of the way to leave. No one in sight, he flew off, turning dragon.
"I've never seen him so mad, did you tell him?" Spud asked, confused and jumping onto the couch and bouncing up and down still from the shockwave. Trixie walked over next to him, arms in her lap. Jake just nodded sadly. Spud just kinda shrugged as Gramps and Fu re-entered.
"Fine, if my friends are gonna turn on me, I might as well learn a new power to revert back to what I was when I first found out about Jake's power..." Shade muttered in his room, a chart on the wall of what he was now learning. A paper of what he used to do when he brought Jake with him to Scotland and the letters he wrote.
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Post by kashi on Jun 30, 2006 13:43:47 GMT -5
I had read it twice, well three times now, and thought that I had posted here already. Sorry ^_^
I love the story so far, I hope you get some more chapters writen.
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Post by Chaos on Jul 1, 2006 0:02:43 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews! This is revealing Shade's newest and collest talents. ^^ I'm gonna add more drama in either this or the next chapter.
Chapter 5: Finding Enemies and Friends
Shade had finished learning about his newest ability and stored his charts and papers away in his closet. He just looked a little determinded and a little angry, turnign dragon and flying out of the window. It was late at night, the wind rushing by on this somewhat cold day because of the gusts of wind. Shade was just flying around the streets until he reached the shop, one of the only places with the lights still on. He quietly entered, Gramps, Trixie, Spud, and Jake still in there. He turned human.
"Let's find the Huntsclan, they're planning something..." Gramps was explaining, noticing the bell ring near the door. Shade just closed his eyes and nodde,d seeing as it was a surprise to people, thinking he'd be unwanting to.
"The academy... Me and Spud can go undercover this time, Jake and Shade quietly and safley follow." Trixie explained quietly. They all seemed quiet and depressed that day as they all slowly left the shop, Fu arriving form the back. He hoped on Gramps' dragon back, Spud on Shade's, Trixie on Jake's.
"God, I hate this so much!" Florence yelled at Rose and a few other Huntsfriends.
"You really love him a lot now, don't you?" Rose asked, Florence nodding in a very sad way. She and Rose put their Huntsmasks on and hurried down the hall to their next class, jumping from wall to wall with their staffs.
"C'mon, let us through!" Trixie angrily yelled at the guards to the acadamy. They both angrily shook their heads as Jake and Shade looked at each other in worry.
"Don't worry, I've been practicing something new." Shade explained to Jake in a whispered tone. He tip-toed over to the two guards and put his index and middle fingers out and together, jabbing at their pressure points in the arms and legs, relaxing them and making them fall over. Shade just grinned at Spud and Trixie sped into the academy, Shade and Jake following behind slowly.
(I've seen the pressure point things before in shows and looked more into it, I really want to learn it! Theer's relax/contrating points, painful points, and numbing points. It's sorta like actupunture.)
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Post by Chaos on Jul 1, 2006 20:32:06 GMT -5
Sorry for double post, again, but I want to post another chapter before vacation, so that's why I won't be posting in a week from tomorrow. Here we go.
Chapter 6: Shocking Twist in the Academy
"Ok, so we're in..." Trixie said in the microphone to Jake, Shade, and Gramps. They all just nodded and as Spud and Trixie passed rooms, looking around for any hints, Shade and Jake looked for Florence and Rose in secret from Gramps.
"No sign yet, keep looking." Jake said, leaving an empty room and quietly closing the door. Gramps just looked at Fu, who looked pretty nervous.
"FU!!" Gramps yelled at Fu. He just turned around and scratched the back of his head, smiling nervously again. Fu sped out of sitting down and started to walk off. Gramps just looked back at the gates of the academy, the two large guards getting up and running into the large building.
"Phew, that was a hard test..." Rose muttered, pulling off her mask. Florence smiled and nodded, also taking off her mask and letting out her hair to flow out. It was after the class had ended, leaving the hall they two were in. Spud and Trixie were running down the hall, not noticing Florence and Rose were sitting on the bench there.
"That was pretty weird." Florence said, confused. Shade and Jake had also flowln by the hall and stopped when they say Rose and Florence.
"Rose, Florence!" They both yelled. Jake quickly grabbed Rose's wrist and flew off into another room. Rose was as confused as Florence was, seeing as two peopole had sped by making them confused. Shade turned human and ran over to Florence, hugging her quietly. A tear went into his eye as he shot the pressure points in her arms to relax them and not make them move.
"Sh-Shade! What are you doing!?" Florence yelled, uncontrollably falling back onto the bench. Shade continued to cry as he evily looked at Florence.
"I trusted you, but you didn't trust I could take it well to be there with you when you went to the academy..." Shade muttered, making an iceball in his hand, preparing to launch it. He just closed his eyes and Florence feared the worst and squinted her eyes.
"Spud, wait!" Trixie yelled, grabbing his shoulder. Spud stopped, wonder what Trixie wanted. "I wanted to tell you something..." Trixie muttered, looking down. Spud just put a finger on Trixie's mouth, makign her stop about to what she said.
"Before that..." Spud muttered, raising Trixie's chin and looking at her eyes, pulling off her mask. Trixie did the same thing to Spud's mask, and they passionatly kissed, right there in the three-way of a deserted hallway.
(Wow, very romantic. And yes, I saw the end of academy... So don't tell me anything!)
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Post by kashi on Jul 1, 2006 21:13:26 GMT -5
The newest part was great! I hope you can update the comic as soon as you get back.
You just reminded me... I didn't get to see the first showing of the Academy!!! Just two more hours...
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Post by Chaos on Jul 2, 2006 0:25:37 GMT -5
Comic? Well, after seeing ALL the Academy, I want rto do another chapter, so chap. 6 is not my last chapter for a while! Here we go....
Chapter 7: Love Returned?
As the giant guards form the front gate appreared and started to run down the hall, Shade turned dragon and grabbed Florence, putting her on his back and flying into the empty closet where Rose and Jake were.
"Florence, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to really harm you... I just couldn't contain myself..." Shade muttered to Florence, still crying and turning human. Rose just covered his mouth, as the large Huntsmen guards walked past the door. Trixie and Spud stopped kissing as they heard the footsteps, quickly putting their masks on and saluting as they ran past. They sighed and ran to the closet they all were, leaving and starting to fly away.
"Jake, Shade, stop your flapping for a moment! We need to stay... They will find us." Rose explained. Shade and Jake landed as Florence and Rose got off, Florence regaining her arm control. Shade and Jake just sighed.
"We know, we just... don't want you gone." Shade explained, looking down and swinging his arms to his front. Florence just shoved her mask off, throwing it into the dust. Woth both of her hands, she grabbed Shade's face to lift it up and kissed him for a little, then after she just explained,
"I will go with you, and Rose... we will come back for you. And Shade, I am so sorry, I will trust you all the time now." Shade just half closed his eyes, nodding and blushing, his feeling for Florence when he didnt know about her identity returning. Rose just nodded and hugged Jake tight, running off into the academy. Jake just frowned as Spud and Trixie just hoped back onto his back. They also just looked at each other romantically.
"So, what happened with YOU two?" Fu asked, appearing out of no where, riding on Gramps. Trixie and Spud quickly turned to Fu and opened their mouth, but out of no where, a large, green force field appeared around them.
"You are not going anywhere..." A familiar voice, especially to Shade and Florence, had said, showing who he was with a large group of Huntsclan members behind him.
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