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Post by Chaos on Aug 14, 2006 0:18:21 GMT -5
WHOO! I finally decided to make this. :3 This plan has been in my head, but I'll keep the plot secret and give you the simple facts. Only dragons and a few other magical creatures will appear in this fan-fic, no Huntsclan, and no Jake or originals either. So, I guess it's kinda like Dragon Saga (MADE BY HERO), except kinda a worser version. It's based off of this picture made ENTIRELY by Krypto, it's even on his art thread: img231.imageshack.us/img231/761/dragonmaniakc8.jpgAs you an see... Theer's all dragons, and I'm trying to include all of them in it. I'm just gonna give a general idea. "Ah, magical creatures. They have forever held peace against their world, no wars, no worries, alone on their island floating over Earth and orbiting it, but it is hidden from all humans view. But one day, an evil dragon wizard forced the magical creatures to do his bidding, until someone finally rebeled after 10 years, another dragon. Those two dragons and a lady dragon were the only ones who inhabited the island as dragons. Soon, the dragon wizard was overthrown and sent flying into space, swearing revenge. This victory led to more dragons coming, and making the dragon population shot up, in case of evil returning. 1,000 years have past an a group of dragons has made a small, elite team, each having their own special talent. They feel that they are obviously the best of all dragon groups, and of course, they are! But, they aren't ready for the large pattle and turmoil ahead." And now, I will think of more indepth to the plot, and I'll be PMing everyone in the picture! X3 This'll keep me from boredom. In the meantime, tell me what you think of the whole concept! ^^
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Post by thebluedragon on Aug 14, 2006 1:21:22 GMT -5
I Think its going to be a great ......story....more action plz.... just kidding
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Aug 14, 2006 2:07:53 GMT -5
Oooooh... cool. This oughtta be interesting. XD Sorry, got nothing much to say... ... Update soon!
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 14, 2006 9:35:16 GMT -5
I wish I was in that picture anyway, the story sounds great! update soon
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Post by Chaos on Aug 14, 2006 16:08:21 GMT -5
Yeah, I wish I could just take everyone's dragons and stuff them into the picture, but what can ya do? -_-
Chapter 1: Pure Boredom
Shade yawned, laying down on the beach with a book in his hand. Blue was just staring at him, also bored.
"What is is, Blue!?" Shade yelle,d setting his book down.
"Well, I want to swim in the water, but my mechanical parts would get all messed up. So, mind covering my metal with ice?" Blue asked, smiling. Shade groaned and raised a hand as ice slowly formed over his mechanical part and flew into the water.
Kyosho was flying around the sky, casting a large and long shadow over some tanning elves who yelled at him. Kyosho rolled his eyes slightly and flew over the water, close to where Blue was. Sparkx was on the sand, training with Krypto. Cameron was on a group of rocks, watching everyone.
"Ok, go!" Sparkz yelled, shooting a lightning bolt from his index and middle fingers. Krypto flipped over the blast and charged at Sparkx, sending a punch at him. he flew back into the sand, but immidietly flew up. Sparkx sped his hand in a circular motion to create a lightning wheel and sped it at Krypto, which scrapped him against the arm.
"Ugh..." Krypto muttered, kicking up sand toward Sparkx. He looked around for Krypto, but got hit into the group of rocks that Cameron was on.
"HEY! I'm gonna fall if you keep doing..." Cameron yelled at Sparkx and Krypto, falling over and having some rocks hit him on the head. "...That..." He grumbled, turning dragon and steaming with anger.
"Sheesh, calm down..." Blue muttered as he got out of the water, his metalic parts unfrozen.
"You know what, let's just go back to base." Shade muttered, tossing his book into a bag. They all flew up into the air and sped to the dome-shaped building that they lived in.
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dreamcatcher
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Post by dreamcatcher on Aug 14, 2006 16:50:08 GMT -5
great start!
update soon!!
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Vakama
Young Warrior Dragon
time to rock n roll...DRAGON UP!!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by Vakama on Aug 14, 2006 19:15:52 GMT -5
Good job chaos can't wait to see what happens next.
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Post by thebluedragon on Aug 14, 2006 21:16:15 GMT -5
That is Really Cool!!!!!
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Post by Kokusho the Evening Star on Aug 15, 2006 8:46:52 GMT -5
Nice chapter so far. As for me, remember, I am like Sauron. Kokusho the Evening Star is made for draining adversaries' health. For example, if Kokusho is finally killed by the Huntsclan, masters like the Huntsman will have his health drain down and all allied dragon masters will gain health from the Huntsman, but servants like 88, 89, Thorn and the henchmen are unaffected by Kokusho's health draining ability. Unless if I'm Ryusei the Falling Star, which reverses the damages and also unaffect the Huntsman, and also includes flying creatures. I hope you know my profile so far. Here's the card : If you also want Kokusho's brothers, do tell me and I'll give you the other 4 Kamigawa dragons.
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Post by thebluedragon on Aug 16, 2006 15:29:49 GMT -5
ui wonder when chapter 2 is coming? ??....><
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Post by Chaos on Aug 17, 2006 20:32:13 GMT -5
I'll work on it now. First two chapters are boring, but action will come. today's a lazy, slightly, day for me...
Chapter 2: The HQ in the Sky
"So, where's our newest base?" Blue asked everyone who was flying around.
"Well... Something about a new location rings a bell... But I don't remember..." Krypto explained, grinning and shrugging. Blue oddly looked at him as the stopped at a cloud that had a large tower on it.
"This is our new location, Shade?" Cameron asked them as they all landed on the clouds. Shade smiled and nodded.
"Trust me, it's really nice inside." Shade explained, walking into the door and leaving it open for everyone else. The inside looked like a hotel lobby, nice, neat, perfect for visiters, they even had their own attendant dragons!
"This... This is amazing! I can't believe how neat and big this is!" Sparkx astonishly said, flying up into his room through the dragon slide where dragosn could fly through.
"Hm... Will I fit?" Kokusho muttered, flying into the dragon slide-way and flew up to his room, perfect size. "Great!" He said happily, smiling and curling around to go have a nap.
"Hey guys, how was it?" Drake asked, speeding down the arn thing of the staircase, his arms crossed. Aqua and Mark were racing down the stairs by flying, behind him.
"MOVE IT!" Aqua yelled, shoving Drake off the staircase arm thing and head-first into a plant. Once he got out of it, there was dift all over his face, in his hair, and in his mouth.
"Oh THAT was very nice..." Drake muttered, rubbing the dirt back into the plant. Aqua groaned, Mark had won the race and Aqua evily looked at Drake.
"YOU MADE ME LOSE!" Aqua yelled at Drake, her booming voice sent him flying into the elevator and back up to his room. Everyone looked at her oddly as she smiled politely, handing Mark $10. He just laughed, walking up a stair into the kitchen.
"So... Where's Wales at?" Krypto asked Mark, sitting down on a red cushion chair.
"He's on the roof, training. Also thinking about stuffs." Mark explained, jumping up next to Krypto. They all nodded, bored still. But, their boredom will soon end with the new strange attacks.
(Yeah, I know, It's kinda short. =/)
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Vakama
Young Warrior Dragon
time to rock n roll...DRAGON UP!!!![ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by Vakama on Aug 17, 2006 22:14:04 GMT -5
Can't wait for the next chapter shame I got one part oh well.
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Post by Erinul, Mass Ressurected on Aug 17, 2006 22:40:20 GMT -5
Yay! I won the race against Aqua! XD
I already spent those $10 on Dr. Pepper and instant ramen. XD
Update soon Chaos!
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Post by Kokusho the Evening Star on Aug 18, 2006 0:56:54 GMT -5
Nice, can I fit? Well, see for myself. As for the actions, I know I have to wait, and I hope you do know how to use my abilities and I wonder if you're going to summon my other 4 Kamigawa dragon brothers.
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Post by Chaos on Aug 18, 2006 1:02:09 GMT -5
Calm yourself, Kokusho, from when I saw Kokusho's effect on his card when I searched it on Google, I knew his moves. And no, he's just gonna be solo with everyone else.
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