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Post by charles finley. on Nov 23, 2006 15:29:28 GMT -5
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Post by Chaos on Nov 28, 2006 0:19:50 GMT -5
Yippeeee.... I got many reviews! And yes, Madison, Toph is based off of the Avatar Toph (As said in one of my previous fan-fics 'Time After Time.'), but she's an elf. XD I just really wanted an earth person, and I've been working on this chappy in my mind, it's supposed to be funneh. XP
Chapter 4: Odding Dates and Magical Changes?
Large trainings with a small earth controlling elf in an all earth terrain may make you feel a little tired. Especially if you have to stop an avalanche, stop a breaking tunnel, caught in an earthy hand, or fighting one-on-one with the elf herself. Either way, you'll be tired and take a break, so Jake and the others took this marvelous idea and went to the nearby hills at night.
"Oh, finally, we can relax!" happily sighed Jake with relief. He had his arms wrapped around Rose as they were sitting together at vine-like tables alone.
"Yeah.... I wonder where the other are..." Rose worriedly murmured, looking around and not really paying attention to Jake. Flo, Toph, Spud, and Trixie were on another hill, just watching the two of them in their own table.
"Darn, Rose isn't feeling the looooveee...." muttered Spud tenderly, looking at Trixie curiously. She just slapped him across the face and continued to watch them.
"If it continues to be bad, we'll have to step in and help them!" Florence bravely announced, but then just lowered in her seat and slightly grinned out of slight embarassment. Toph just smacked her face.
"Oh lord, this will be awful..." groaned her angrily as she just rose some earth from the nearby New York roads.
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"So.... What did you order as food?" Jake asked, boredly tapping his fingers on the table in front of them. Rose oddly looked at him then then the table his fingers made the clacking noise on.
"Uh, I think it was just salad or something." she muttered in reply, tapping her fork to the table. Then, the waitor came over, but it was really just Spud with a black mustache and a brown suit.
"Could I get you two some sexy, sparkling cider?" Spud asked, grinning and moving his eyebrows up and down in that weird way with a gesture.
"We want water. TAP water." ordered Jake. Rose stopped looking at her clanking fork and up to the disguised Spud.
"You're Spud, huh?" Rose muttered, grinning and laughing a little. Jake just oddly looked at Spud as his mustache fell. He quickly ran back to the hill the others were on.
"Well that was a bust." groaned Toph once more, falling over on the grass is it made an indent with her earth powers. Spud slightly walked over to where she was and kicked her ribs slightly. Toph angrily glared at Spud who got smacked to the ground with a large rock.
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Florence, Spud, and Trixie were all brainstorming for Rose and Jake to get closer with their date, while Toph was laying on the ground.
"Alright, we only have one more shot at this, and I know the perfect thing to do. The most beautiful song ever written..." Florence muttered sadly, but joyfully, wiping a slight tear on her face. Although as she was the only one who didn't know, he beautiful vouice was masked with being up all night the past week.
"The ticket to get them together is gonna kill their ears, boy." murmured Trixie to Spud, who smacked her face and shook it as she lowered her hand from her face. At Jake and Rose's table, while they were eating, Flo coughed to clear her throat, or so she thought.
"And I....!!!! Will always love yoooouuuUUUUUU!!!!" Flo sang awfuly with screeching and cracking sounds.
"AAHHHH!!!!!" Jake and Rose bounded their hands from their forks to their ears, yelling out in shock and anger with this annoying song that Florence could NOT sing. Toph, Trixie, and Spud walked over slowly with their ears also covered until Flo stopped singing.
"Oh come on, just play song old song for them, like the Breakfast Club soundtrack..." suggested Spud, shrugging and taking off the odd tux that he didn't take off once his identity was blown a while back.
"You mean the Breakfast Club sandwich." Toph inquired, arms crossed and eyes half closed. Jake and Rose looked at each other and laughed, running over and hugging each other.
"Yo, you all are pretty dumb to fall for that." laughed Jake loudly, everyone oddly looking at him.
"We tricked you so you'd all seem like fools, and it worked." Rose explained to them, as all four of them glared at the troublesome duo, tacking them down the hill.
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Finally back at Spud's house, they were all gonna tear down the block fort that they made a while back because it was needed to be cleaned, but once they saw it, it was glowing white even more, like very bright. Like a light in the room. Of course, wthout Team Dragon saying a word, the bright light shined very bright and sucked them all into the portal. And, once again, of course, it will all lead up to something important and werid with going ons, as well as contact with Shade.
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Yusheriee bob. Now they're all.... GONE!!! :foxfup: Heh, gewd one. Mkay, done.
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Post by crazy17 on Nov 28, 2006 0:25:59 GMT -5
OMG CLIFFIEEE!!! Haha, nicely done, Ewan! ^_^ Can't wait for the next chappyyyyyy!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 28, 2006 0:47:13 GMT -5
AAAND IIIIII WILLL ALLWAAYSS LOOOVEEE YOOOUUUUUUUUUUUU. XD
I mean... Uhhhh... T___T That was a nice chapter! Hah. That surely tricked THEM. Hahaha. I was about to smack you for making Florence a baddd singer. Nice!! Update soon. ^___^
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 28, 2006 1:52:06 GMT -5
"Could I get you two some sexy, sparkling cider?" Spud asked, grinning and moving his eyebrows up and down in that weird way with a gesture.
^funny as hell. XD
Update soons!
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Post by YFWE on Nov 29, 2006 9:14:32 GMT -5
Pretty niiiiice... update soon!
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Post by Chaos on Dec 4, 2006 1:13:15 GMT -5
Alright, the Earth King declares that this chapter will have a short opening. ~Sealed by the Earthy King; Shade Chaos. XDDD Chapter 5: Dividing to Conquer Now that Team Dragon has somehow wound up in another place through a portal in the block fort they made earlier, they're still confused and unaware of what's going on, and in Spud's version of this, panic. "OH MY GOSH!! WE WENT INTO THE BLOCK FORT AND WE'RE IN A MAGICAL LAAANNNDD!!!" called out Spud crazily as he ran arond everyone. Toph quietly whistled and controlled a rock to trip Spud over and slightly calm him down. "That was very nice, thank you Toph." Trixie explained with a smile and putting a hand on her shoulder. "Ok, now that Spud's half out of his insane mode, we need to figure out a plan. Since we're in some kind of.... white forest, we need to go accross the white plains, over the white water, and to that giant white fortress." Jake explained, pointing as a visual aid. "I think you like white too much." muttered Rose as she gave him an odd look. "Sure, he might have gone insane with Spud, but he's right about going to the fort. And... I think we should split up into two teams." Florence told them her idea. "Works for me." immediately Trixie stated. "Ok, team one is Jake, Toph, and I. We'll go into the fortress head on. Rose, Spud, and Trixie, you'll have to go undercover as warriors and get in through a little longer travelling." explained Flo. "But I wanted to be on teams to not take as long and to be AWAY from stupid over there!" Trixie complained as they all watched Spud poke a tree that fell on him. "I.... Could use some.... Help?" OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO So as told, Spud, Trixie, and Rose got on white outfits that weren't entirely like warriors, but it was the outfit that Miyuki had on. Fans as weapons, maybe a katana or two, and an outfit like a white dress. (A/N: I couldn't resist giving them all outfits similar to Miyuki from GoP, even Spud. XDD)"Why do we all have to wear the same thing Miyuki wore? I hate it, I'm a boy!" Spud whined as he glared at his feet. "Yeah, I actually agree with Spud, this outfit is too.... Girly." added Trixie with annoyance. "Hey, I like it." Rose explained with a smile and a slight laugh. Spud and Trixie just glared at her before they recieved orders. "Alright, make sure any enemies coming to the fortress are beaten with your skill, or the little... fans you have." Florence explained with a smiled. Spud and Trixie looked at each other oddly and nodded, walking off. "This dress is giving me a rash..." muttered Spud to no one, and quietly so no one could hear. The last Jake, Toph, and Florence saw of them for a while was Spud scratching his, 'rashy butt'. OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO So after the separation, the 'warriors' took the roadless way into the forest and longer way to the fortress as Jake, Flo, and Toph just followed the dirt path. "I hope it isn't too far away. I'm bored and want to beat some Huntsclan." Toph told out to Jake and Florence. "You want to be fast?" asked Jake. In responce, the girls just grinned and nodded. "Dragon up!" Jake called out, turning dragon and flying. Toph jumped up and buried a little deep in the ground before risng and riding on a large rock movement. Florence just used her quick movement. "This is getting easy, huh?" Florence wondered as she caught up to the dragon and elf. They all laughed and nodded, now racing each other to the walls of the large fort. OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoO Yeah, pretty short. And it's Sunday. *dies* BOOM!!! Alright, I'm off, wait, I'M NOT LEAVING WITHOUT BOSCO!1!!!1on!!one!1
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Dec 4, 2006 1:26:04 GMT -5
XDD Spud in a dress? Oyyy... my mind is officially blanked. Erm, well I got to go to bed soon... So... I'll make it short and sweet...
UPDATE SOON EARTHY KING. :K
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 4, 2006 1:30:13 GMT -5
lol Shade, I think you like the EK a little too much. XP
Anyway, awesome chappy! "I think you like white a little too much.." LOL! Funny Rose...
Continue or face my wrath!
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Post by Chaos on Dec 8, 2006 1:01:05 GMT -5
Alright, now we finally get into the city and see the oddness going on with confusion of magical creatures and Huntsclan members. There may be a bit of action, but just a bit. Most of this is just entry into the city of Fortress Wen Kroy. XD
Chapter 6: Discovery of the Odd City
After Toph smacked Jake in the air by hearing the flapping of his wings and cutting off Florence, Toph touched the white, rocky wall.
"HAH! I win!" Toph taunted out evily. Jake and Flo finally arrived to where Toph was and laughed, both of them scratching the back of their heads in embarassment.
"Hmmm?" muttered Florence very quietly as something caught her pereferal vision. She turned and saw the nearby white forest and a little black boot with red, baggy pants brushing past before it vanished.
"Hey, Florence, do you see something of interest?" Jake asked Flo because she wasn't paying attention. She turned and smiled at them both, shaking her head as a lie.
"Then let us go in this large wall!" announced Toph as she punched her hands together before moving them apart and the wall started to move so that they could get in. Toph closed the wall again once they were in.
"So, are we looking for anything specific?" pondered Jake in the direction of Florence.
"People. Anyone, as long as we know what type of people are here." easily answered Florence. A large vouce could be heard from someone near the middle of where they were.
"EVERYONE, Town Meeting!!" He called out. The three of them walked over and hid to see the people. The announcer was an elf, stacked on many other elves. It was very confusing, many Huntsclan members and magical creatures gathered together in the town.
"Wait, magical creatures and Hunsclan!?" gasped loudly from Jake. Florence's eyes widened and Toph put her hand on her mouth in gasp.
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"If I keep wearing this girly outfit and a FAN weapon, I'm gonna turn into a girl." Spud complained as he looked at his nails and smiled. He stole Trixie's nailfiler and used it on his nails. Trixie rolled her eyes oddly and just looked forward.
"Spud, I don't think I know you anymore. It's better than Trixie and I turning into men while wearing steel armor." explained Rose with a grin. Trixie laughed a little.
"Chhh, yeah. But this outfit is so bright and girly. Ah well, as long as we get to that wall soon enough." Trixie admitted before looking up to the bright side.
"Oh, don't worry, you'll be there soon." A voice answered from a tree as she landed from it on her feet and shot lightning at them three. Aimed generally for Rose, it missed and hit a tree that fell over. From behind her appeared Huntsdeath and a happy Saphire.
"You! Aruella!" cried out Rose in shock and anger. All three of them held out fans or katanas.
"Hee hee, that boy is dressed like a lady!" Saph happily cried out in laughter. She turned dragon and Huntsdeath pulled out a Huntstaff. Aruella started to conjure lightning and aim at her opponents.
"We can take you! Even if we only have fans and weird katanas for weapons!" challenged Spud, pulling out two fans, oddly glaring them down before getting back into a battle stance.
"Hmm. Don't you know that fans just make flames stronger?" Aruella asked with a grin on her face. The three enemies launched their attacks. Lightning, pink fire, and green laser.
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The four greouped men and owmen all stood in a circle as the explaining man from the other city stepped in.
"Council of 4, hello." He said, bowing graciously with his brown ponytail being apparent.
"Long Feng, hello back at you. Where are the Lai Di?" The first man asked as he also bowed his head, the other man and two women following in his footsteps.
"They're off, taking care of the Dragon King. The city will be ours soon enough, seeing that this is only our 2nd day of the whole town. The town before me was evil, and destroyed because good came over. Here we have a utopia, and once the Dragon King has our support, we shall have this city." explained Long Feng as he grinned and looked from all four of the council before turning around and leaving once more.
"Do you think the city will be much different after we have the city?" The long haired girl asked.
"I doubt it. Most likely every thought of anything bad will just be killed off, sent to battle with the other Huntsclan, or just brainwahsed... Depending on their class. Too bad we can't just brainwash the king." The second man muttered with annoyance.
"We've already got the city in control with the Lai Di, Long Feng controlling them, and us planning out eveything bad." told the last girl in pigtails with her explaination. They all slowly nodded and sat down in their white chairs once more, continuing their work.
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The lightning headed at Rose was deflected from a katana's blade and snapped into a tree that fell in front of Trixie and the tree caught on fire instead of her. The laser headed for Spud was flown into another tree when he swped his fan and it flew over.
"I think you will be easily beaten!" Rose called out as she grinned and charged at Aruella. Huntsdeath sent a lightning bolt of green to Spud and he ducked, punching Huntsdeath in the gut and quickly tying him with his rope.
"Hah, one down! How you doing Trix!?" asked Spud as he called out to Trixie.
"Working on it." Trixie replied as she ducked a pink fireball from the closeby Saphire.
"No one has beaten me, I intend to keep it that way!" she yelled out, breathing widely pink fire to Trixie. It caught one of his pigtails on fire and once she put it out, she sped down to crouch and kick Saph's legs to she tripped over. Trixie quickly tied her dragon-head mouth before smacking her head to knock her out. She pushed Saph next to the tied up Huntsdeath.
"Alright, you two. You did good, I'll take care of Zappy here." muttered Rose as she pulled out a white shield that deflected a lightning ball and went through some of Aruella's two hair strands, the hair falling.
"You may have taken out those two, but I am better than that." Aruella told them as she prepared for a large attack. Trixie and Spud ran in front of Rose and Aruella just looked at tham both oddly as Rose was cutting through a tree behind her with her katana. Once cut clean through, Aruella finally noticed and atacked the tree. Left weak and defenceless, Spud, Trixie, and Rose all circled her. All three of them had grins on their face and Aruella looked extremely weak, as if she would collapse at any minute.
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Speeding around the halls and seeing it everywhere, Huntsclan and magical creatures associating, not fighting, being friends. It was insane.
"This can't be true... I mean, they were all brainwashed, the Huntsclan, maybe the brainwashing went wrong?" Florence suggested in denial.
"Honestly, I think they all are just like blind or something." gave in Toph's answer as she evily grinned, then stopped when Jake and Flo didn't laugh at all. SHe coughed a little before the next statement.
"Whatever is going on, we must get to the center of the city before any guards see anything suspisious about us, so now dragon powers, no weapons, no earth powers, and cover those ears Toph!" Jake demanded from the two of them. But it was too late, 6 guards that wore Huntsclan outfits, but green and wearing those odd hats with the little pointy top.
"What do we do? We can't attract attention." Toph asked the two others in question. Suddenly, the guards all fell down one by one. It was very odd, but while no one was near, Toph moved the guards under the ground with her earth powers. She pulled on earmuffs and ran with Jake and Florence as they all ran to the center of the city.
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Alright, yeah, pretty good huh? Action, confusion, ebilness in the city, oddness, and CONFUFION. XDD That is all, R&R, not rest and relaxation, read and review. ^^
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Post by charles finley. on Dec 8, 2006 1:19:00 GMT -5
Sorry about not reviewing to the last chapter Ewan.
Anyhoddles, i lurve it! Update soons!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Dec 8, 2006 15:10:11 GMT -5
Erh, sorry bouts not reviewing last night. XDD I kept forgetting even if I slept at 2 in the morning and I didn't go to school. yfiuyughyuf. o.o
And yush... such confuzzion. Oooohhh... and I can still picture Spud in a dress. *shudder* XD Update soon.
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Post by crazy17 on Dec 8, 2006 21:32:46 GMT -5
HAHAHAHA! OMG...I found like 8 Avatar references! ^___^ GASP! What'll happen?
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Post by redemption on Dec 8, 2006 21:35:26 GMT -5
HAHAHAHA!! I'm with MD here.... so many Avatar references.... Update soon!
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Post by Chaos on Dec 10, 2006 1:59:04 GMT -5
Well, as I old some others on my spoilers, this fan-fic kinda... bases of Ba Sing Se, kinda. XD Alright, since a few people know about this chappy, and 8 & 9, here it is. XD
Chapter 7: Closer Inward
Continuing to run away from the soldiers that send rocky hands and feet at Jake, Flo, and Toph, all three of them moved inward into the city.
"Freaks, go away!" winned Toph. She continued to run on her feet.
"Toph, you're a little elf, jump on my shoulders!" Florence told Toph. After an angry glare, Toph controlled the earth to push her to where Florence wanted her to go.
"Alright, I just looked up. Including the outer-most wall, there are four walls that we need to get through until we're ate the center." explained Jake, flying down and turning human.
"Here's the second wall." Toph muttered. She climbed on the crown of Florence's head and used her earth powers to move the wall open and quickly closed it while all three of them were in the wall and running past.
"Past the third wall, we should be fine to go to a dark ally and lose these guards! Then we can rest in a residential abode." explained Florence. The two others nodded as they continued runnning. Everyone noticed no one from the past wall was following, but they continued to follow and met up with an even larger group of them.
"This happens all the time, why?" Toph asked them both with anger.
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"You've got to stop getting so mad!" Florence yelled at Toph, holidng her tight to calm her down as she wriggled and went insane in Flo's arms.
"I tell's ya, if I can't kill them, I will diiee!!!" loudly threatened Toph as she continued to squirm.
"We're not past the third wall yet, people will get suspisious about anything unless we're there!" Jake ordered to Toph. She grumbled a little before calming down and climbing back on Flo's shoulder.
"Come on, just calm down and wat for the third wall...." Toph tried telling herself, trying to contain her fighting spirit. The sodiers shot finger blasts of rock at them that Toph just reduced to rubble.
"Alright Toph, we're at the wall, go ahead and-" began Florence before she was cut off by Toph's loud, booming voice and her next move.
"YEEAAHHHH!!!!" She called out very loud so everyone could hear and completely smashed the wall they came up to and absolutely buried all the soldiers in what was of the ruins from the third wall. Jake and Flo looked at each other in pure confusion before just running through.
"You could'nt have waited before we got past that wall?" asked Jake in annoyance, yelling at Toph. She smiled and shrugged, still on Flo's left shoulder. They both shook their heads in their thought of Toph.
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In his quarters past the chamber where the Dragon King had retired, Long Feng was looking at a map of Fort Wen Kroy.
"The Lai Di at the very first wall have vanished, and bystanders said seeing them collapse suddenly, and some being buried underground..." He muttered in thought, pointing his finger on the map where this occured.
"Sir, we have a problem. It's major." A Lai Di soldier told Long Feng as he angrily looked up.
"What is it, I'm busy!" imediately ordered Long Feng impatientally as another Lai Di man entered and pointed at the third wall.
"While chasing the sudden invaders, They seem to have destroyed all of this part of the wall, while burying all of the men chasing them down..." The second man explained at Long Feng's expression went into pure shock.
"Then these invaders need to be taken out from the inside. They've caused enough damage to the city, I don't wnat the Dragon King to know of their presence." Long Feng added and sat back down, showing the two men could leave and they did properly.
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Morning, white sun rose ad the clear sky shone throughout the large city. Jake and the others were just waking and already dressed. Toph's ears pircked up and she ran to the door.
"Guys, someone's here, and I don't think you'll want to see her..." muttered Toph. Until she finally realized there were two others. "Hey, one of these people, I taught them some earth!" she realized. Jake and Flo ran to the door as Toph opened it. They were greeted by a giant grinning trio of Song-Lee, Leah, and Ben.
"Hello Jacob Long, and Toph Bei Fong, and Florence Lindsay." greeted Song-Lee as she bowed. "I have some friends for you, good day." she said, bowing once more and closing the door.
"Leah, good to see you, is this the Ben you've been talking about?" Toph asked, hugging her. Ben nodded.
"We are the Dragon King's humble servants, it is ok." Leah and Ben simultaniously said, smiles on their faces. Florence horrendously glared at them.
"I... I remember! This is the first stage of brainwashing!" Flo realized, her hand on her mouth and her pupils shruk.
"Don't woory, you too can be loyal." Again, Ben and Leah said together. They grinned widely as Toph smacked her forehead with her right palm.
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Yeah, I know, pretty creepy, eh? XD I liked it. Leah and Ben do not belong to me, they are MormonDragon's characters and I got permission from her to use them.
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