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Post by huntsrose on Sept 13, 2006 17:16:17 GMT -5
*Gasp!* Cliffhanger! Update soon. Kayz?
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Post by Chaos on Sept 13, 2006 23:21:06 GMT -5
Yush, here'z ya goes! I hope more people actually read it... =/
Chapter 5: Enter Player 4, Jasmine the Nix
Florence yawned as they reched the part when eternal night had fallen.
"Odd music, and did you really need the chipmonk talking?" Florence asked, giggling when her person talked.
"Yeah, most games have them talking weird, so yeah..." Spud explained, smiling. Rose laughed a little, then heard the door.
"I'll get it." She said as Spud paused the game and did a roundoff from the couch and ran to the door. Jasmine was there, smiling.
"Hi there, I just came by to visit." Jasmine said, smiling ands slightly bowing.
"Jas, hi there! Come in, you should play this game." Rose suggested as they sped back upstairs.
"Hey, it's you again, hi! Join us." Spud said, handing Jasmine a controlled. A thank you was said by her when she sat down and Spud unpaused the game. Luckaly, since Jasmine wasn't in the game, she didn't turn into her Nix form.
"They sound so cute." Jasmine calmy said, chuckling a little. Panderas had been looking through the window and pulled out another device, pressing buttons so it and aiming it at their controllers.
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"Sheesh, this is so annoying." Jake muttered as they were looking around.
"RAAAAFIII!!!" Shade screamed as they passed her window, not noticing. Raffi uncovered her ears before popping her head out of her window.
'I'm right here." She angrily muttered, glaring at Shade, who nervously laughed.
'Yo, Raf, home girl, you see and orb nearby here?" Trixie asked.
"Oh yeah, I saw some... purple, glowly thing flying across the sky. It was weird, and knocked out some man. He's right there." Raffi muttered, sighing boredly, pointing to the ground.
"Yeah, that's for that.... We should get going. Tell Kel that we dropped a hi on him." Jake said, waving and flying off with Shade. Raffi smiled and waved back. She slammed her window shut and hoped on her bed.
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"Hey, what's up with our controllers? They stopped flashing?" Florence asked, oddly looking at her controller.
"Yeah, and our people vanished..." Jasmine muttered as their controllers opened up small portals.
'Wooaaahhhh!!!!" They suddenly yelled, being sucked into the controllers and being turned into their people.
"Oh no, the night..." Jasmine muttered, closing her eyes as her body started to change into her real, Nix form.
"She's a Nix!?" Florence and Rose yelled out, running. Spud curiously looked at the Nix, then decided to run. Once the Nix oepned her eyes, she was grinning and sped after the others, absorbing the people's souls whom she past, increasing her power and size. Outside the game, Panderas grabbed the game system and the controllers, running off.
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 14, 2006 21:09:49 GMT -5
How will they get out?
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Post by Chaos on Sept 15, 2006 20:47:22 GMT -5
You'll see, you'll see. ^^
Chapter 6: The Orb Battle
Panderas had just ran out of Spud's house, and started heading to South Eastern NYC, looking around. A few goblins were laughing and greedily holding the Orb of Malophis that had just been flying around.
"Give me that!" Panderas yelled, storing away the game. He snatched the orb while the goblins started angrily grumbling.
"Hand the orb back over to Ralf!" Ralf the golbin yelled out from the small goblin group. He evily grabbed the orb back and rounded a cornor, his golbin lackys following. Panderas also ran to chase him.
"Hey, there's the orb!" Trixie yelled, pointing at Ralf, the orb glowing as he ran into an ally.
"Fire/Ice Attack!" Jake and Shade yelled at the same time, hurling numerous fire and ice balls at Ralf as the attacks cirlced each other, freezing and burning Ralf.
"AH! That hurt Ralf!" Ralf yelled, falling over and the orb landing in one of his lackeys hands.
"Yo, Shade! Take care of the goblins and get the orb to Panderas, where he will me up with Trix and I!" Jake explained. Shade nodded and landed, but when he landed, he got smacked to the ground. Before turning human, Shade quickly used his tail to send the orb to Panderas, who ran off.
"You're gonna pay for that, kid! Not drgaon form now, now win!" A goblin yelled, punching his fists. The other goblins also charged at Shade, who started to grin.
"Time to see if my water training has paid off!" Shade yelled, getting into a stance and seeing the front goblin open his mouth for a yell. Shade ontrolled the wattery sliva in his mouth to fly out and smack him in the face, covering his eyes. Shade then found a wet trough near a house and controlled the clear water there to surround a golbin, constrict to water, freeze, then he unfroze it as the goblin fell over. He kept doing that until there was one more golbin left.
"Alrigh punk, time for some serious but whoop!" The golbin yelled, picking up a metal bar. Shade smiled.
"Ok, I'll fight you without using my powers OR dragon form!" Shade explained as the goblin ran to him. Shade used his small size to limbo under the goblin's legs and grabbing one of his arms. Shade pulled his behind his back and used his pressure points on both arms, then flipping over him to send him smacking on the ground on his back. Finally, he jabbed his fingers at the goblins belly button area, then ran off, turnining dragon to follow Jake and Trixie.
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Jake and Trixie had just intercepted Panderas, cornoring him.
"Gimme the orb!" Jake yelled, swinging his tail at Pandera. He ducked to dodge it, then sent a spell at Trixie, who rounded off backwards to dodge it, then sent a flying kick at Panderas's head, sending him flying into a building.
"Lucky shot." Panderas muttered as the orb flew up into the air. He pulled out his wand and used his hand spell to grab the orb. Jake breathed fire over the hand as they faded so the orb fell for Jake to grab with his tail before the hands appeared again. Jake flew over as Shade came by also.
"Hey, you forgot me!!!" Trixie yelled, chasing after them on the ground. Panderas groaned a little, but was still happy about having the game system that was trapping Spud, Rose, Florence, and the Nix....
(Ending Note: I liked that chapter. ^^ Anything where I get Shade to use water/ice control AND pressure points in the same battle makes me happy. As well as a cliffhanger. Hang in there audience, even though it's small...)
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Post by irishdragon on Sept 17, 2006 0:32:45 GMT -5
Talk to me Shade. ;D
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Post by Chaos on Sept 17, 2006 0:33:57 GMT -5
Um... This is kinda the wrong forum for that. These, you're usually supposed to post short 'reviews' about what story so far... You should PM people.
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Post by irishdragon on Sept 17, 2006 0:36:14 GMT -5
I know but I get lonely.
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Post by irishdragon on Sept 17, 2006 0:37:49 GMT -5
By the way, great story. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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DarkDragontc
Young Warrior Dragon
Coming back Shortly, Life has been changing a lot for me.
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Post by DarkDragontc on Sept 17, 2006 0:39:36 GMT -5
watch with the Double post. you better delted one of them. Anyway nice stories, if you can the chance you should read my story.
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Post by Chaos on Sept 17, 2006 0:43:24 GMT -5
Thanks you two. I really needed more readers. And yes, I do read minds. I'll try to read yours now. ^^
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Post by kentuckydragon on Sept 17, 2006 14:39:19 GMT -5
Cool story so far
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 17, 2006 20:19:08 GMT -5
Hey, that was cool. Update soon!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 18, 2006 23:58:24 GMT -5
Finally, time to update this! ^^
Chapter 7: Day One in the Game
"Have we lost her yet?" Spud asked, turning around to see.
"Doesn't matter, shut up and run!" Florence yelled as they continued to run until they reched a farm, stopping and panting.
"Quick, she's coming! Hide in this haystack!" Rose ordered as they sped into it, watching the Nix look around before she ran off.
"Phew..." Spud muttered as they left the haystack.
"Hey, what are you doing on our farmland?' A confused girl asked, about the same age as them, a little older. She was wearing a green dress and make-up.
"Um... Running. From a monster." Spud muttered, smiling and laughing a little. The girl gasped, then smiled.
"Oh, that monster, eh? Must be refugees from the town next by to us." The girl said. "You can stay with me and my younger brother." She offered.
"Hm, we could use a break. Thanks. I'm Rose, this is Florence, and he's Spud." Rose explained in her usual calm, nice voice.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Miyuki." Miyuki explained, putting her hands together and in front of her. "Please, come in and met my brother, Ling." She said, opening the door for them. They slowly walked in, seing a young child eating something like porridge.
"Hi sis. Who are these people?" The boy asked.
"These are refugees from the town next over, like we were. Spud, Rose and Florence." Miyuki explained. Ling nodded and finished eating her porridge. Florence's attention was caught from two fans, hanging from the ceiling.
"Hey, what are those?" Flo asked, pointing up to the green fans.
"Oh, they were my mother's, before she and my father died, fighting the nation. Theer were these beautiful group of warriors in the town over, who fought with fans." Miyuki told them, frowning and lookin to the side a little.
"She sounds like a wonderful person." Rose said.
"She was." Miyuki added, smiling. "I have been training with them as well." She said.
"Hey, could you check out my collection of thread?" The young boy asked Spud, who smiled and nodded, walking over.
"Thanks for all this, but a few supplies and some food, then we should be on our way." Rose explained. Miyuki nodded, preparing some things for them.
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"Where did that Panderas go?" Trixie asked, from high in the sky. "He was hiding something." She muttered, looking around curiously.
"I don't know, but we can't spend all this time looking for him, we promised Spud to see his game." Jake explained, Shade and Trixie nodded.
"Shall we make it on our way back?" Shade asked, smiling. They set their course for Spud's house, unaware of the danger that Spud, Rose, and Florence were in.
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"Good-bye! Thanks for your help!" Florence said, waving to the villiage who had helped them out.
"I'm coming too!" Miyuki said, running over with her fans stored away.
"Are you sure? What about Ling?" Spud asked, looking around for him oddly.
"He'll be staying with one of the other villiages..." Miyuki explained smiling. They all nodded.
"So, our plan is to capture the monster, the Nix, and find away back to... Our hometown." Florence muttered, pulling out a map, talking about New York also. Miyuki nodded.
"How can we intercept the Nix?" Miyuki asked.
"I... don't know now. Let's travel out a little more and plan out later, after we set up camp." Spud explained. They all nodded. "Um, are we in a nodding mood today?" Spud asked, confused. They all nodded.
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 19, 2006 8:38:44 GMT -5
Good chapter! Update soon!
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