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Post by Chaos on Aug 12, 2005 11:53:41 GMT -5
Ok, here is is! It should take a while, so if I think about stopping, remind me that I need to make it LONG. Chapter 1: Just When it Was Peaceful... It was a Friday and there had been no trouble the whole week. Jake was putting some sunscreen on and jumped into the beach water as well as Shade and Spud, Trixie and Fu were working on their tan, and Gramps was just sitting on the docks, looking out to sea. "It has been too quiet..." Gramps thought, raising one of his eyebrows. "Wait a minute, where's Rose?" Jake just realized. Rose ran onto the beach and yelled to Jake, "Jake!! I have horrible news!" Jake, Spud and Shade all swam to the shore and everyone sat in a circle around Rose. "Yay, a bedtime story!" Fu said sarcasticly, laughing. "Fu, stop messing around! This is serious!" Rose told Fu. "The Huntsclan have just got a new member of the Huntsclan, and he is ruthless and pure evil. One time, he caught the Dark Dragon, for fun." Rose explained. "I do not know his real name, but he has been off in South America training and he's back. He calls himself Huntsking, so be very careful. he might strike soon..." Rose sat down next to Jake. "Well, we said we'd have some fun at the beach, so Jake, make a fire and get the marshmellows, so we can bring out the S'mores!" Spud said to Jake. "S'mores what?" Trixie asked Spud. "Don't ask again, woman!" Spud yelled, shaking Trixie's head. Jake got wood and lit a fire and everyone put their marshmellows over the fire and enjoyed the last night of peace...
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Post by yfwe on Aug 12, 2005 12:00:14 GMT -5
Ho boy, this sounds good! Man, Spud doesn't take any of Trixie's crap, does he? Yeah, you tell her, Spud! -_- Well, great job! Lookin' forward to the next one.
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Post by stranger on Aug 12, 2005 12:16:40 GMT -5
ya, pls continue
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Post by Chaos on Aug 12, 2005 12:18:46 GMT -5
Yep! Thanks a lot!
Chapter 2: Preparations & Huntsclan Fight After a night under the stars at the beach, everyone headed to Gramps shop. Rose and Trixie were practicing, Jake and Shade were pacticing, and Gramps was practicing, but he knew that Huntsking would prevail, even if they trained for an eternity. "I have to go back to the Huntsclan now, see you guys later." Rose said, putting her mask on. "You know, every time I hear that, I can never get wierded out." Spud whispered to Trixie, who nodded. "Alright, I think that this Huntsking is going to strike tonight, so we must practice very hard." Jake said. Suddenly there was a rumble, like an earthquake. "What's going on?" Fu asked, looking off the building. he saw all the Huntsclan running away on top of buildings. "What's going on?" Shade asked one of the Huntsclan members, which was Huntslass. She turned and looked at Shade. "Fine, dragons, I'll tell you. His name is Jasli Ebro, aka the King of Hunts." She told them. Everyone widened their eyes and Gramps figured he should tell the everyone about his secret. "You know, we're running away, but we'll always be able to beat you dragons, humans, and dog!" Huntsman said. All the Huntsclan charged at them and everyone was hurt, badly after. They quickly all vanished away.
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Post by yfwe on Aug 12, 2005 12:21:24 GMT -5
Jasli Ebro, eh? Weird name. But anyway... can't wait for the next chapter. Awesome.
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Post by magenta on Aug 13, 2005 1:37:48 GMT -5
Yes! Please update!
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 13, 2005 1:43:29 GMT -5
yeah its good! please continue soon!
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Post by meninwhite on Aug 13, 2005 15:34:49 GMT -5
THis sounds like Reing Storm from Danny Phantom!
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Post by mithos on Aug 13, 2005 16:36:32 GMT -5
It's great Shade! KUTGW!(keep up the good work.) ;D
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Post by Chaos on Aug 14, 2005 17:57:10 GMT -5
I kind of got the Idea from Reign Storm, and thanks a lot!
Chapter 3: Gramps' Comfession Later that day, Gramps asked everyone to meet him at the shop. "This doesn't have to do with my third toe being the longest does it?" Spud asked Gramps. He groaned and replied, "No. I have to tell you, about that Jasli person, I knew him before he was evil. In fact, I WAS the reason he turned evil..." Jake looked confused. "Good one Gramps, what did you really want to tell us?" Jake asked. "It's not a joke, Jake, I'll tell you the story. Back in the swingin' 60's, I was running a company called Peace Industries. Jasli was working for me and he had these awful ideas of testing magical creatures like experiments. I had to let him go and he told me someday he'd rule the master clan to hunt magical creatures, and here we are, 45 years later." Gramps explained, sighing. "So, when did the company ever stop?" Shade asked Gramps. "I can answer that easily." Fu said. "Since Gramps here didn't want people like Jasli to run a company like that, he had other dragons do stuff to protect magical creatures. Peace Industries never ended, just altered." Everyone nodded, understanding. "Like, how I was the British Dragon until I moved here?" Shade asked. "Yep, except once someone moves out of a country, a new dragon fills in for them. A girl person is the British Dragon now." Fu told Shade. "Enough dwelling on the past, we must train harder!" Gramps exclaimed. Everyone nodded and went outside to train more.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 17, 2005 18:03:01 GMT -5
not bad plz continue it's really good
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Post by magenta on Aug 18, 2005 18:20:24 GMT -5
Good so far! Interesting too. Update soon! ^_^
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Post by Chaos on Aug 24, 2005 19:44:07 GMT -5
Sorry I couldn't update, I was on a week vacation. Here we go!
Chapter 4: Huntsking Attacks Armour was suited on to a big, buff guy, in his dark palace by a member of the Huntsclan. "Get ready to strike, New York will be destroyed, along with the American Dragon!" Huntsking yelled. He ran out of his palace and ran on his way to New York from his palace in Vermont. Back at the shop, Gtramps was meditating and he quickly opened his eyes. "He's coming!" He yelled, standing up and turning dragon. Jake woke up from a small sleep and turned dragon and Shade stopped reading his book and turned dragon. "He is very powerful..." Gramps gasped, watching a shadow speed past New York and everything crashing. Everyone in New York watched HUntsking bash and destroy, and they also saw all the magical creatures flee and Gramps, Jake, and Shade flying off. "A dragon!?" Jake's dad yelled, spilling his coffee. Jake's mom gasped and smacked her head and Haley hid in her room, which was half destroyed. "Hey, ugly! Stop wrecking and fight us!" Jake yelled at Huntsking, who turned around. "Very well, I accept your challenge!" He yelled, pulling out a large sword and preparing to attack all three dragons...-
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 24, 2005 19:45:17 GMT -5
not bad plz continue o where did you go for vacation shade
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Post by Chaos on Aug 24, 2005 19:46:29 GMT -5
I went to Mexico, Los Cabos. It was cool! I'll post when I catch up on some other news and fan-fics.
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