I must say, however, it was actually far shorter than I expected it to be. I guess I'm used to these grandiose endings to stories, although, in that respect, you still did quite well in considering how much you wrote.
So the part about Florence's birthmark disappearing was definitely interesting and unexpected. Wonderful job there!
Great action as well. But I'm sure you already knew that, as you're always very good at that.
I look forward to whatever you decide to do in the future fanfic-wise!
QWERTYkid911: It's 2021 and I've been thinking this show premise still has so much potential. It had a good run, but I feel like it never really lived up to how good it could be.
Feb 12, 2021 22:34:55 GMT -5
sweetstylerose: Hey! Any Jake Long Roleplayers out there?! My discord is SweetStyleRose#7738 or send me a message here
Mar 19, 2021 21:27:44 GMT -5