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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 10, 2006 6:07:10 GMT -5
It was saturday morning Jake woke up he had a major pain in his head. Haley rushed into the room. Haley: Mom, dad and grampa are gone Jake: Say what! Jake: Where are they? Haley: I don't know Jake: Whe have to find them, let's go! As Haley and Jake wer'e flying over New York an major explosion took place. Suddenly a girl screamed for help, it was Rose. Jake: Stay here Haley. Haley: Ok. Jake flew into the burning building near the explosion. Rose: Help me Jake. Jake tried to put out the fire but it didn't work. He tried everything but then something mysterious happened, he slamed through the wall and made a way out for Rose. Rose escaped but Jake accidentaly fell on the ground. Jake: Run Rose save yourself. Rose: But Jake? Jake: Save yourself i will be ok, Run! As Rose runned out of the building the fire was getting bigger and bigger. Meanwhile Jake was still on the ground and he started to react weird to the fire his wings looked like they wer'e made of fire. Jake: What's happening to me i feel weird. Meanwhile Haley and Rose runned to gramps his shop where mom, dad, and grandpa are hidding. Grandpa: Where's Jake? Rose: The last time i saw him he was in a building on fire on the ground. Dad: We have to do something. Mom: We know but what? Later in the building on fire a strange green light appeared.
Chapter 2 will come tomorrow sorry if there are spelling mistakes i live in holland but my english is not all good.
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 10, 2006 7:54:44 GMT -5
WHAT IS THAT GREEN LIGHT!!!?!?!?
it's ok I live in America and my English isn't perfect.
UPDATE FAST!!
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Post by gojake on Sept 10, 2006 8:15:01 GMT -5
GREEN LIGHT GREEN LIGHT GREEN LIGHT *SLOBBERS ALL OVER MY COMPUTER DESK*
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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 10, 2006 9:55:49 GMT -5
Chapter 2 Jake looks at the green light and see's himself but fused with the dark dragon suddenly the green light fuses with Jake and he manages to get out of the building but during his flight to grandpa's shop he was getting weaker and crashed in front of grandpa's shop. Haley: Hey that's jake. Grandpa: What they walk out of the store and see Jake but his eyes looked like they wer'e on fire and it seemd he is still in some sort of dragon form. Rose: Are you ok Jake? Jake: I don't know i feel weird. Grandpa: What happened? Jake: After i saved Rose i fel on the ground and i couldn't move and i saw some sort of green light i don't remember more than that. Mom: Go home and go to bed Jake you have to get better. Jake: Ok. The next morning Rose stepped into Jake's room. Rose: Are you better Jake. Jake: I fell better than better than ok i feel great. Rose: But yesterday you looked like you wer'e dying. Jake: Well now i feel much better, Let's go to school ok. Rose: Ok later at school Trixie: Yo Jakie are you ok we heard what hapenned from Fu. Jake: Don't worry i feel ok. Spud: Are you sure dude. Jake: Yes i'm sure so shut up we have to get to class. During class Prof. Rotwood: As you know elves have tails and pointy ears. Jake: Just Shut up Rothood. Prof Rotwood: Beg my pardon. Jake: You know it isn't true and that you are so dumb as the backside of a cow. Prof. Rotwood: 2 weeks detention will do you good. Jake: Why not 5 weeks. Prof. Rotwood: Ok as you wish. Proffesor Rotwood walks through the door and Jake throws a book at him and he falls Rose: What are you doing. Jake: Shut up. Rose: But Jake. Jake: Just shut up i am getting major pain in my head because of your bla bla bla. Rose looks into his eyes and they seem like they are on fire. During Lunch Break Jake walks into the cafeteria and turns dragon without anyone noticing Chapter 3 will come soon
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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 10, 2006 12:23:11 GMT -5
Chapter 3 Jake turns dragon in the cafeteria without anyone noticing Jake: Let's Rock 'n Roll this dump. Rose: No Jake Jake sets the cafeteria on fire Jake: Now that's what i'm talkin' about. Rose: Why are you doing this. Jake: Leave me alone. Jake starts to fight Rose. Rose: Jake don't you remember me it's me Rose, i live you. Suddenly Jake turns human again and falls on the ground. Rose: What's happening to you. Rose walks away. The Next morning. Rose knocks on the door of grandpa's shop. Fu: come in Rose: Is Jake here? Fu: Nope noone knows where he is. Rose: Why don't we try a teleportation spell. Fu: Well i have sime Krylock venom in the back let's go. Rose: Ok. some minutes later. Fu: well throw the stuff and say his name ok. Rose throws the stuff Rose: Jake nothing happens but then a portal opens. Rose: Why is the portal red and glowing. Suddenly a black dragon comes through the portal. Rose: Who are you? Jake: Don't you remember me, Does the American Dragon ring a bell. Fu: What hapenned to you. Jake: I am now stronger than ever and i will take over the world. Rose: What are you talking about Jake? Jake: Silence stupid mortal i will kill the weak and become stronger then the strong and rule the world as their king. He throws Rose and Fu through the window and fly's away. Chapter 4 will come soon
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
._.[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 10, 2006 17:08:15 GMT -5
JAKE IS SO MEAN!!!!!
I thought it was funny when he threw the book at rotwood XD
UPDATE SOON!
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Post by gojake on Sept 10, 2006 18:32:12 GMT -5
yay EVIL JAKE 4EVA
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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 11, 2006 9:38:52 GMT -5
Chapter 4 Rose and Fu run to Jake's house where Jake's mom, dad and grandpa are. Rose and Fu: Is Jake here. Grandpa: No Why Rose: Ever since the accident in the burning building he is becoming even more evil and wants to take over the world. Grandpa: Oh no i was affraid this was gonna happen someday. Fu: Huh you knew about this. Grandpa: Yes i fought the ark Dragon just before Jake was born. Flashback of granda appears. Dark Dragon: You will never win Lao Shi. Grandpa: You will lose dark dragon the good ones always win that's the way of life. Dark Dragon: You and your way of life can die. Dark Dragon shoots lava like bullets at Lao Shi. Grandpa: That's all you got i am gonna beat you. Lao Shi tries to slam the dark dragon but suddenly faints. But then The Dark Dragon sees some kind of vision of Jake fighting hime in the future and winning. Dark Dragon: I have to stop the young one when the time is right. Back in the room. Mom: But how could the dark dragon have a vision and how could you know he had one since you fainted. Grandpa: Don't know. Somewhere above Central Park Jake: They think being me is so easy well i will let them try while fighting me. Suddnely Sun Park fly's after Jake. Sun Park: Jake what are you doing? Jake: Leave me alone. Sun Park: What is happening to you? Jake: Leave me alone weak one. Jake blows fire to Sun Park. Sun Park: I have to contact the others. Jake: No ya don't. Jake fights sun park and she falls down. Back at home. Fu: Let's watch the magic channel news. Rose and Grandpa: Why? Fu: Maybe the are people who have seen him and reported it to the news crew. Fu presses the button News Guy: The Korean Dragon Sun Park was seen falling in the Central Park Lake, People that have seen it reported that she was shot out of the sky by the American Dragon: Jake Long, at this moment it is not clear in what condition Sun Park is. Rose: I can't believe Jake did this. Grandpa: For Some reason i don't believe Jake did this. Fu: How come? Grandpa: Well we know it was the body and the spirit that did this but there is something else. Dad: If only we knew what that was. Chapter 5 will be uploaded tonight or tomorrow.
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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 11, 2006 15:54:15 GMT -5
I am working on Chapter 5 but i can give you a few things that are coming. -There will at least be 30 to 40 chapters. -Almost all foe's in the american dragon series will apear. Ok here's a fun question for you as you know Jake has to be taken over by something or someone it will be revealed in Chapter 5 there are 2 thing or foe's what or who are they. until i post Chapter 5 good luck ;D
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 11, 2006 19:44:02 GMT -5
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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 12, 2006 11:26:06 GMT -5
only a few hours til chapter 5 commercial Tonight one the American Dragon Forums, The 5th chapter of the rockout American Dragon Episode: The Darkness Within. And here is some new news about the fanfic. -Time traveling will be involved. -Some chapters will involve crossovers like Kim Possible or Lilo and Stitch or other Disney series. -Someone is gonna die later in the story. -Jake gets another dragon form in the end. -I am thinking of 2 sequels after this one is finished.
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Post by mehdi5 on Sept 12, 2006 14:04:49 GMT -5
Chapter 5 Somewhere in a cavern Jake: What's happening to me? A voice in his head: Don't worry weakling soon you will no longer feel the pain when whe take over. Jake: Who's you two? A voice in his head: Don't you remember us. Jake: Somebody Help me. Jake's eyes turn red and his dragon form is turning more black then red every second. Jake: You can't take me over i will not allow it. But then he saw it was the Dark Dragon and Yang Jake taking over his body and hi got spikes on his arms and legs. The Green in his hair turned flaming hell red and his voice became more like Yang Jake's. Somewhere at the docks in the middle of the night. A weird voice calls Rose. Rose: Who is there. Weird Voice: I know what is happening to your boyfriend. Rose: Please tell me. Weird Voice: On one condition. Rose: What? Weird Voice: One soul and i will help you turn him back. That's chapter 5. Well the question is answered it was Yang Jake and the Dark Dragon. ;D
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 12, 2006 19:27:58 GMT -5
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dreamcatcher
Young Warrior Dragon
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Post by dreamcatcher on Sept 12, 2006 20:12:55 GMT -5
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Post by huntsrose on Sept 12, 2006 20:39:46 GMT -5
She betta not or I'ma put some smackdaddy on someone...Wait, that's Jake, not Rose.
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