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Post by spyder on Jul 8, 2006 1:55:10 GMT -5
Hey, look it! I updated! And I must be in a good mood today or something, cause I actually wrote a happy (well, sort of) one. Anyway, make of it what you wish. Here it is.
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I don't have reason to cry... So long as there's an inch of smile left upon your pretty face.. I won't ever have reason to dread... So long as their is life left somewhere inside you... I don't have reason to regret what happened, or try to put this all behind me... So long as we were still there together, in spite of all the misfortunes that occurred between us... And that to this day, I still I feel, the way I do about you... And that you will always remain... In my heart... I will think about you, at only two times... Whenever my eyes are open, and whenever they are closed... You will be on my mind... Day or night, through right or wrong... Through good or bad, I will think about you, I will dream about you... And I will keep you for enternity... In my heart... In my soul... In the flesh... For good... And for real... Even if you're not really here... So long as you're somewhere... I’ll always be there… Too…
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Post by charles finley. on Jul 8, 2006 2:13:34 GMT -5
Nice, I like it!
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Post by kashi on Jul 8, 2006 6:56:57 GMT -5
Very good! Sounded very touching.
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Post by spyder on Jul 9, 2006 22:51:53 GMT -5
Well thanks AHR, Kashi! I'm glad that you both liked it. I might update more in future, depends on what sort of writing mood I'm in..
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Post by superdoglac on Jul 9, 2006 22:57:30 GMT -5
You cant record it? Noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!(good lyrics)
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Post by Chaos on Jul 9, 2006 23:04:59 GMT -5
Nice lyrics... and stuff. I'd probably call it 'In Me' or 'Still Here'... Ya know? ^^
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Post by spyder on Jul 10, 2006 20:06:45 GMT -5
superdoglac: Yeah, it's too bad, I know. But glad you liked it, that much XD Chaos: Thanks, and I was gonna give it a proper name but I didn't have time in the end. But still, glad you like it.
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Jul 11, 2006 7:55:29 GMT -5
You're last song was my favorite by you but this is really nice too! ^_^
LP
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Post by spyder on Jul 14, 2006 8:16:38 GMT -5
Well thanks LP! Glad you like it! And yeah, I think my last song was better too..Oh well..
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Jul 14, 2006 9:47:39 GMT -5
Hope you write more like'em! LP
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Post by spyder on Aug 28, 2006 6:19:12 GMT -5
Well, I've just finished a new one "Disguised". Here it is, I hope you like it. And remember guys, these are actually poems, not songs.
Look away, And don’t forget to never look back. Face to face, So I can see, maybe… Get this life, back on track. Lean in, lean out, Mark your life out just like this. Breath in, breath out, Shine your light upon my dark abyss. Lost forever and can’t be sure, I’m dying slowly, without a cure. Search high, search low, The truth can never be far. Hide away, don’t show, Me, who your really are.
But it won’t matter, How hard I’ve tried. Yeah, my heart will shatter, When I see, beneath your disguise.
I’ve seen it all, I’ve seen your face, I’ve seen you go, without a trace. I’ve felt the pain, of my sick mind, I’ve watched you leave it all lying behind. I’ve spelt it out and made it clear, I’ve called your name, wishing you were here. But it never made sense til I’d realised, I would someday see, beneath your disguise.
And it kills me slow, to see the truth, It kills me slow, to see the proof. And the one thing I’d never realised, Yeah, to finally see, beneath your disguise.
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Post by charles finley. on Aug 28, 2006 23:54:03 GMT -5
O__o
*envies cho for writing kick a** poems* XD
Dude, just wow..They are really nice! Keep it up!
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Post by spyder on Aug 31, 2006 6:29:15 GMT -5
XD Thanks Ash, glad you like em lol
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