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Post by dominosowner on Aug 10, 2006 13:04:41 GMT -5
Would the woman the 16 year old calls mother happen to be Sun Park? Jake better come back soon. Rose is in a difficult situaltion now. She has to fight, but at the same time, she has to protect her baby when she's fighting too. If an enemy gives her even ONE kick in the stomach during battle, it could seriously injure her child. And heaven forbid she goes into labor during battle.
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Post by dave on Aug 10, 2006 20:24:46 GMT -5
Well, I must appologize to Mormondragon...she helped me greatly in writing this chapter and I didn't even give her credit. I appologize once again.
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Post by crazy17 on Aug 10, 2006 20:34:55 GMT -5
Not bad, partner in crime! And apology accepted.
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Aug 11, 2006 21:46:48 GMT -5
Its great! The Dragon Overlord cannot wait for the next chapter! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by dave on Aug 11, 2006 22:38:40 GMT -5
Thanks for all of the reviews and thanks again to Mormon who helped me write this chapter as well ^_^, you're a big help and I couldn't continue this story without your appreciated help. ******************************************************************
Chapter 78: Terror of Memories
Dave circled the Dark Dragon, keeping his eyes trained on him.
"So, how about we finish this here and now?" Dave asked him.
"Depends on how you wish to end it," the Dark Dragon said.
"How about we end it where you die?" Dave suggested c*ckily.
The dark dragon smirked. "Very well," he said.
Suddenly, Dave found himself pinned to the wall. "But what say we reverse that?" DD asked.
"You wish you could reverse it," Dave said, pushing against him.
The Dark Dragon smiled. "Oh, I can and I will. How about a few past memories?" he asked.
Dave's eyes widened. "You wouldn't dare!" he said angrily.
"Actually, I would," the Dark Dragon said with a slightly amused tone in his voice, moving his right claw to Dave's head.
Dave tried his hardest to resist. 'No! Please, God, no!' He agonized quietly.
Dave couldn't show that he was scared. He didn't want the dark dragon to know.
"How about we take a trip back to your first murder?" the Dark Dragon asked.
"Murder?!" Dave exclaimed.
"You probably forgot about it already," the Dark Dragon said, finally ready to torture Dave.
Chills ran down Dave's back as he remembered...
A six year old Dave smiled and ran around on the playground happily with the other children. He was happy in the park but some of the children avoided him. He didn't know why his dad wanted him to wear all black with only a small amount of purple on the back of his black shirt.
"Hey, wanna play with us?" a boy Dave’s age asked.
Dave gave a smile. Finally, someone he could play with and enjoy who wasn't scared of him.
"Sure, I would love to play!" Dave said excitedly.
"Okay!" said the boy. "I'm Mark. What's your name?"
"My name is Dave," he said happily and then a girl came running up to them.
"This is my sister Lisa," Mark said to Dave.
"Hi!" Lisa greeted. "Are you in first grade, too?"
"I don't go to a school. My daddy keeps me at home and teaches me," Dave said.
"Oh. Cool." Lisa said.
"Wanna play tag?" Mark asked.
"Sure!" Dave replied happily.
"Okay!" Lisa poked Dave and started to run. "Tag! You're it!"
Dave laughed and ran around and tried to chase Mark and Lisa. They tried to avoid the road because it was very close to the open playground and there was nothing between the playground and the road. Lisa decided to use that to her advantage so she ran for the road. Dave ran after her but accidentally tripped and pushed Lisa into the road as he fell.
Lisa screamed in pain.
"Dave!" she whined.
Dave got up, "Sorry," he said.
Lisa stood up too but then a horn blared. Everything was in slow motion...Lisa's scream, Dave's look of terror, the squealing of the tires as the car slammed to a stop after hitting Lisa. Dave's eyes were wide open and he couldn't believe what he was seeing. Mark ran over to the two.
"Lisa!" He screamed.
Dave gasped at the sight. Blood was on the road and on the car. Lisa wasn't moving at all and the woman who hit her yelled out, "SHE'S DEAD!"
Dave was rooted to the spot. He didn't know what to do or say. He just ran.
Dave gasped as the Dark Dragon took his claw away from his forehead.
"Well?" DD smiled evilly. "Shall we continue?"
"Why are you doing this?!" Dave yelled.
"To bring you down," the Dark Dragon said.
"You evil son of a...," Dave started before the Dark Dragon laughed.
"Now do we want to finish that sentence? How about we see what happened to poor Mark after that..." the Dark Dragon placed his claw on Dave's forehead once again.....
A ten year old Mark sat alone in his room, tears running down his face as his bedroom door opened and his parents walked in.
"Mark, Honey, how are you feeling?" Mark's mother asked, concerned.
"I'm still a bit upset," Mark said and then he growled. "And I still hate Dave for killing my only sister!"
Mark's mother sat next to him and put an arm on his shoulder.
"Mark, it was an accident. They were little, there was nothing to prevent it."
"Don't call me Mark anymore," he growled to his mother, pulling away from his mother's arm.
"Then what would you like me to call you?" Mark's mother asked, raising an eyebrow.
"I want to be called Brian from now on....."
The Dark Dragon pulled his claw away and Dave fell to the ground.
"Too much for you, Dave?" The Dark Dragon taunted.
"You mean...Brian was really Mark?!" Dave asked in surprise.
The Dark Dragon nodded. "You remember, don't you?"
"So Mark became Brian and joined the Huntsclan just because I killed his sister?!" Dave yelled.
"Yes."
Dave growled and got up.
"It's time for you to die!" he yelled.
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Post by crazy17 on Aug 12, 2006 10:08:39 GMT -5
Aw, thanks, Travis! ^_^ We did pretty good.
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Post by dominosowner on Aug 12, 2006 12:47:22 GMT -5
Yeah Travis you knock em' dead! Update soon. ;D
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Post by meganjakelong on Aug 12, 2006 13:13:41 GMT -5
WOW! Intence! *claps* Encore! Write more soon!
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Aug 12, 2006 20:22:42 GMT -5
Another great chpater, The Dragon Overlord can't wait for the next one!
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Post by dave on Aug 12, 2006 22:09:34 GMT -5
Chapter 79: Reuniting
Jake flew back towards the council building.
'I hope Rose is okay.' He thought.
He landed on the steps and transformed back to his human form. He looked around to find it empty.
"Strange, what is happening? I thought that Rose would surely appear here," he said.
Rose was walking slowly towards the door so as not to harm her unborn child. She heard Jake's voice.
"Jake?" She called out uncertainly.
Jake heard the voice and he turned to see Rose standing in the door way.
"Rose!" he said happily and ran to her.
He was about to give her a big hug but then he thought of the child.
"I'm glad to see that you are okay," he said.
"Same to you," Rose replied, relieved. "What happened out there?"
"I have no idea, but Dave made me come out to you," he said.
Rose gave a small smile. "He's very noble."
"Yeah he is," Jake said and then sighed. "I hope he'll be okay..."
Rose patted her lover on the shoulder. "I'm sure he will. He's very strong."
"But he is facing the Dark Dragon alone," he whispered. "I should be there helping him."
Rose knew Dave was too stubborn to want backup. But was he striong enough to fight alone?
"Jake, if you think helping Dave is the right thing to do, I say go for it." She smiled. "I know it's impossible to take on the dark dragon alone. He willl need help."
"But I also have to keep an eye on you and our child," Jake said to her, running his hand over Rose's bulging belly.
Rose ran a hand over her stomach.
"I can manage on my own, Jake." She said gently. She paused. "I was attacked by a few shades earlier."
Jake's eyes opened in surprise. "Say wha?!" he exclaimed.
"Yeah." Rose replied. "I managed to knock a few out, but I flew back here for backup."
"Oh," Jake said. "So that is where every one went to," he said to her.
"The shades, or your family?"
"The council, and whoever else you got for backup."
"The building was empty by the time I got here." Rose explained. "I saw Chang and your grandfather, though."
"What was going on with them?" Jake asked, not worried about the dragon council at the moment.
"Chang was telling your grandfather that they can still be together." Rose answered. "She also said that evil will triumph."
"That can't be good, we have to find out what they are up to!" Jake exclaimed.
"Chang did say they were gonna destroy all dragons who won't join." Rose put in.
"Oh man...do you know where they are heading next?!" Jake asked in a hurry.
Rose shook her head. "I was too exhausted from fighting to notice."
"We better go find Dave," Jake suggested.
"Right," Rose said and then transformed.
Jake transformed and took off into the air, heading for the Dark Dragon's lair. Rose followed. Jake saw the lair in the distance....but then something shot at him from below.
"What was that?!" Rose exclaimed, horrified.
"I don't..." then he froze and saw the source of the fireball. "Gramps..."
Rose looked back and forth between the two.
"Go." She said to Jake. "I'll deal with your grandpa."
"Be careful," Jake said and then flew away from Rose.
"I will."
She flew down to Lao Shi. He was starting to fly towards Jake. Rose grabbed his tail and dragged him down.
"What are you doing?!" Laoshi yelled at Rose.
"Look," Rose began. "I know for a fact and from experience making a choice isn't always easy. But, please...renounce the dark dragon, and help us out!"
"I must do what I can for the love of my life," Laoshi said.
"Honestly, what do you see in Chang?" Rose demanded.
"She is not the kind of woman you'd want to be with!" “I'm sorry, but I made up my mind," Laoshi said and then pulled out a syringe.
Rose's eyes widened in fear. "No...Lao Shi, please! You wouldn't harm my baby!"
"I have to do this..." Laoshi then flew at Rose and swung the syringe at her.
Rose quickly swatted Lao's hand away and flew off. Then, Laoshi moved quickly and plunged the syringe deep into Rose's back, quickly injecting the liquid into her. "Oof!" Rose fell to the ground and passed out. She then detransformed.
*************** I am writing the next chapter right this minute and I am timing it to the awesome song, "Duel of the Fates" so you can expect and action filled chapter ^_^
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Post by dominosowner on Aug 13, 2006 9:40:06 GMT -5
Uh-oh, what will this liquid do to Rose? And more importantly, what will it do to her baby? I REALLY REALLY want some Jake/Rose love in the next chapter, PLEASE?? UPDATE SOON. You rock, Travis.
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Aug 13, 2006 10:11:59 GMT -5
Great chapter Travis! The Dragon Overlord cannot wait for the next one!! ;D
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Post by dave on Aug 13, 2006 15:33:26 GMT -5
Chapter 80: Duel of the Siblings
Dave and the Dark Dragon circled each other, glaring at each other with hate. The fire of their hatred burned in their eyes. Dave grabbed his sword which was left discarded on the ground. The Dark Dragon made two blades out of pure darkness appear in his hands. They both took defensive stances, ready to fight.
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Jake flew closer to the lair, keeping his eyes on the lookout for any Shades. He didn’t want to be ambushed on the way there. The only thing he saw was the trees and the ground below, neither of which proved dangerous. No dragons were in sight and this worried him slightly. He didn’t know what was going on and he didn’t want others to be in danger because of his brother.
“Ha,” Jake laughed. “Like I can even call him a brother,” he said.
But he had a worried look on his face for his twin. His thoughts were on Dave and the danger he was in.
“I hope I get there in time,” he said to himself, maneuvering around trees and other obstacles.
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Dave and the Dark Dragon clashed blade against blade. Dave ducked as the Dark Dragon swung a blade over his head. Dave then replied with a swipe of his own sword, aimed at the Dark Dragon’s chest. The Dark Dragon blocked it and swung down at Dave but it missed because of Dave stepping back. Dave swung again, hitting the Dark Dragon’s blades. The Dark Dragon growled and swung at Dave’s legs but Dave jumped over the blades and cut the Dark Dragon across his right arm.
The Dark Dragon retaliated by swinging at Dave’s left arm, making a cut. Blood spilled onto the floor unnoticed as Dave swung multiple times with his sword, each hit getting bounced off by the Dark Dragon’s blades. Dave ducked as the Dark Dragon tried to decapitate him. Dave swung his sword in an uppercut but only sliced through the air. The Dark Dragon kicked Dave back towards the lava. Dave slid to the edge but didn’t fall in. He immediately got back up and charged at the Dark Dragon. The pair’s blades made loud clashing sounds as they hit each other, neither willing to give up in the struggle of power. Dave punched the Dark Dragon but it only made him take a small step back. The Dark Dragon gave a small laugh and punched Dave back, sending him flying back into a wall.
Dave slowly got up but then rolled as the Dark Dragon tried to cut him. Dave quickly grabbed his sword which he dropped after the Dark Dragon tried to cut him and then tried to do a back attack but the Dark Dragon quickly swung around and blocked it. They clashed blades once more, neither having a clear advantage until the Dark Dragon cut Dave across his chest. When Dave’s blood from his wound hit the floor, the Dark Dragon gave a sadistic grin. Dave made a few quick slashed but they were easily parried. The Dark Dragon hit Dave in the face with his sword handles and then he kicked Dave in the stomach, causing him to fall down.
“Is that all you got?” the Dark Dragon asked.
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Jake was only a few seconds away from the lair and he heard no struggles yet but he knew they still had to be fighting. He knew Dave wouldn’t give up or die so quickly. He flew into the mouth of the cave and saw the pair below him, Dave still on the ground. Jake growled and flew down…
Dave jumped up and slashed at the Dark Dragon only to have his arm grabbed and then thrown back to the ground. He got up and hit the Dark Dragon in the stomach with his blade but then the Dark Dragon tripped him and gave an evil laugh. He brought his two swords up and then swung them downwards. Dave rolled to avoid the dual swords and got up but then…
“UGH!” he exclaimed.
“NOOOOOOO!!!!!” Jake yelled.
Dave fell to the ground as soon as the Dark Dragon pulled both of his swords out of Dave’s stomach. Jake flew down next to Dave and checked him. He didn’t know whether if his twin was alive or dead. He gave an evil glare at his brother and picked up Dave’s sword, ready to avenge him. He stood up and circled the Dark Dragon, keeping his eyes trained on him.
“You’ll regret ever hurting him!” he yelled and jumped at him.
They clashed blades for a seconds before the Dark Dragon ducked one of Jake's attacks and then knocked Jake unconscious with a blow to the head.
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Aug 13, 2006 16:31:37 GMT -5
Suspense! I love it! Update soon Travis! The Dragon Overlord is waiting!!!
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Post by crazy17 on Aug 14, 2006 23:21:49 GMT -5
SO AM I! ZOMG!! The DD...WON???!!! *faints* Continue soon!
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