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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 12, 2005 15:02:40 GMT -5
ok here's the update
yui got back up looking a bit dizzy"so you want your ass kick the same yui?" i said with a chuckle. yui disappeared real quick i looked around trying to find him before i knew it was getting hit by grasshopper kicks. i went down so fast it wasn't funny "i told being all talked will get you beatin alot quicker!" yui said as he landed in front of me i got up and brush off the dust from my back and shoulders yui charged me again and this time he jumped over me and picked me up slamed me in to the ground spun me around well i was spinning he was doing whacky windmill break dancein moves then finally kicked me upward and i landed on his fist."what did i say to you being all talk gets you beatin quicker drake!" yui yelled i got up "all right then you want tough i'll show you tough!" i yelled at him. i grab his head slamed him into my knee picked him back up slamed him with 6 power punches then smashed him into the ground and held him there applying pressure cuzing him to fall asleep " you said you wanted tough i gave you tough!" i said to him as the ref yelled "the winner is drake!"
i know it was supposed to be a long fight but i meant hero Vs drake sorry
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Post by mithos on Sept 12, 2005 15:05:07 GMT -5
Cool! Continue soon! ^v^
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 14, 2005 7:07:11 GMT -5
yes yes!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 19, 2005 15:36:06 GMT -5
well here's a long needed update
i jumped out of the cage with yui slunged over my shoulder. i drop yui off at the med tent and ran into hero "hero what are you doing here? cuz your fight is next." i told him " i know but i came here to see if rei and yuin were up and their gone all i found was this note." hero siad to me as he handed me the letter i put yui down on the bed then read the letter it said 'dear drake and hero
i'm sorry we coudn't watch your fights in the final and semis feo wanted geo to come vist jake and them so i took them i'll come back after the tournys done' your friend yuin i just looked at the letter then looked at hero "well at least we done have to worry about feo and geo fighting in another catfight." i said with a laugh hero laugh too "yeah i guess your right btw do ya know who sketch is cuz he's my next--." hero was cut off by a scream comeing from the tourny arena me and hero ran to see what it was.
there's the update i update it when i can
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 19, 2005 16:48:55 GMT -5
Nice continue when you can
and dragonfan123 i cant update the story Welcome to my World you know school day, so im sorry ok?
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Sept 25, 2005 20:33:29 GMT -5
Love it Love it LOVE IT ;D Continue plz.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 28, 2005 17:49:06 GMT -5
ok here's the update
me and hero got at the arena 5minutes later to see a hellish site someone that was very bloody"drake who would do this? and who is that?" hero asked me as i inched closer i looked at him from what i could tell was that he was a tribal1 tattoo freak "hey hero i found your oppoent. i guess this is sketch." i told him as i checked his pulse "well?" hero asked me i shook my head " he's dead my guess is the aveirated waist." i said pointing to the section where his waist line should be. "i guess the tourny's cancelled?" i asked him as we walked back to the tent "no it's not going to be cancelled besides me and you are in the finals don't go easy on me cause were friends." he told me i smiled "i wouldn't expect anything different from you" i said to him as we got ready for bed for the night.
there's the update expect a huge fight between the best friends who's gonna win
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 11:02:05 GMT -5
Yay Hero! Yay Drake! Please continue soon!
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 5, 2005 5:06:20 GMT -5
Me too! GO HERO I MEAN GO DRAKE i mean Hero uhh Drake AAHHH!!! GO BOTH!!!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 7, 2005 14:35:56 GMT -5
ok here's the update
i wok up around 1 A.M i turned to see hero sprawled over his bed i laugh to myself and went out side "damn i wish it was this peaceful in new york." i said to my self while looking around in the arena "what are you doing up this earlier?" i turned around to see hero " what do you mean? better question what are you doing up hero?" i asked him " icouldn't sleep anymore." he told me "yeah same here well let's get goin cuz i think the ref's up" i told him and sure enough he was "well are you two want to get the fight over with?" me and hero nodded "ok then you two my begi--." he was hit by a green beam i turn to the direction were the shot came from "well drake long time no see." it was huntsmaster and raiju!
there's the update
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 7, 2005 14:38:10 GMT -5
ooooo! the suspense! continue plz
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Post by mithos on Oct 7, 2005 20:30:18 GMT -5
WOW! Good entry for Raiju! ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 12, 2005 17:23:22 GMT -5
i'm sorry i can't update it and plus if i have one c on my report card i'm off the computer and if that happens i'm giving hero lloyd and anyone else that wants to help permission to continue this story
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 12, 2005 17:27:43 GMT -5
awww.. dont go just sneak in like me and Maromi do, we have low grade's but where still here ;D try it its fun and sleepy ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 14, 2005 20:08:48 GMT -5
ok here's the update i just as shock as hero to see raiju and huntsmaster working together " what in the hell is going on here?!" hero yelled "there's no way raiju you can still be alive!" raiju laughed " you sure maybe i came back from the dead and so did huntsmaster or should i say mister hunter?" raiju said as he and hunts jumped down and walked towards us "drake plz tell me raiju's lying about huntsmaster being your foster dad?" he asked me i shook my head "no he's tellin the truth but i'm gonna make sure neither of them live!" i told him "hero let me go against raiju maybe he'll give me a better challenge!" i yelled and charged towards raiju " fine then drake i'll make your death quick!" raiju yelled as he disappeared i stop looking around to find him all of a sudden sword cuts appeared all over my body and my blood in puddles was on the ground and raiju reappear behind me "i told you i make your death quick but i thought dragon-X will be a much better challenge." raiju said as i drop to the ground "heh i guess you were right raiju he can't go dragon in your world." huntsmaster said he came up and kicked me in the side "all tohugh i have to bring him to my world to skin him." he said aimming his staff at me i coughed up blood and got up even though i was in pain enough to kill a man "i aint done with raiju yet!" i said chargeing at him again again he disappear and try that move again i jumped in the air hoping he would miss when i landed he reappeared above me " here's a move you should reconize from hero! final destruction wave!" he yelled he landed 20 feet in front of me time froze around me graivty spikes taller than raiju appear on front of him and moved towards me with great speed and when the spikes hit me i felt light and darkness tear me up from the inside out "ha ha you can't handle it can you drake! no wonder huntsmaster killed your parents!" raiju yelled to me wow a real turn of events drake's birth parents killed by huntsmaster
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