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Post by mithos on Oct 21, 2005 18:19:22 GMT -5
WOW!!!! WOWWOWOWOWOW!!!! That's AWESOME! Please continue soon!
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 21, 2005 19:05:37 GMT -5
WAAAA!! DONT LET HIM GET YOU DRAKE! *Hiding behind the chair* i think i cant read the next of it! JK keep going!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 22, 2005 14:10:38 GMT -5
ok here's the next part
as that knife drew closer to my thoart 'man i wish hero was here to help' i thought i heard the knife drop to the floor and i saw hero's sword in huntsmaster's arm"no one is gonna kill my friend!" hero yelled and kicked huntsmaster hard in the back huntsmaster flew into book shelfs "yo drake you ok?" hero asked as he helped me up "yes i'm ok," i saw huntsmaster get back up i felt power that was forming "hey hero lets kill huntsmaster together." "all right lets go!" hero yelled and charged him slashed huntsmaster acroosed the chest i charged him and grab hunts threw him up kicked up a baseball bat that was near my foot and swung it at huntsmaster as he came back down in the neck both me and hero heard his neck snap the minute huntsmaster landed i went to see if he was dead or just stunned "is he dead?" hero asked me as i poked huntsmaster with the bat a few times i nodded "yes he's dead for good this time." i told him and walked back to him "bravo bravo drake looks like you kill your old master now lets see if you can defeat me!" a voice yelled out of nowhere both me and hero looked around and saw nothing "raiju come out you corward!" hero yelled and a blinding light came out of nowhere and two figures standed before us.
theres the update go ahead and guess whos the figure next raiju is
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Post by mithos on Oct 22, 2005 15:43:50 GMT -5
Hmmm... I wonder. Please continue!
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 23, 2005 3:14:50 GMT -5
me too who is it? continue plz
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 28, 2005 18:20:43 GMT -5
ok here ya go
when the light went away i heard hero yell "thats impossible drake can't be in two places at once!" he yelled i looked up and saw a excat person lookin like me but the only differences were that he had forearms blades on each forearm shoulder spikes and spike knee caps "how the hell did you do that raiju!" i yelled he just laughed "none of your buisness how and why now," he looked at the clone "kill your worthless brother!" he yelled and it charged me and stab me in the arm but no blood flowed from the wound instead it hurt him. "damn i didn't count on that weakness," it yelled "i won't fight you now but i ill later." my clone said and disappeared both me and hero looked at raiju and charged him
there's the update sorry if it's short
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 28, 2005 22:23:44 GMT -5
well its ok keep going
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Oct 28, 2005 22:25:33 GMT -5
Yes please
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Post by mithos on Oct 29, 2005 19:05:33 GMT -5
GREAT JOB!!!!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 31, 2005 17:01:19 GMT -5
here's the update
i kicked raiju on the side of his head towards hero and he slashed him on his chest " well i underestimated you and hero drake," raiju said while popping his neck" but you won't have that much luck!" he yelled and jumped into the air "FINAL DESTRUCION WAVE!" he yelled alanded 20 ft away from me but instead of gravity spikes there were darkness sword forming from raiju exile and went right through me and rubble came on top of me. "well looks like i did something huntsmaster couldn't do kill the dragon-X!" he yelled "that's were your wrong raiju!" he looked up and saw me just in my shorts and shoes "impossible that should have killed you!" he yelled while he was distracted by me hero came up and slashed riaju in the back 20 times " damn you both to hell!" riaju yelled and got back up to hit us both with FDW again"not this time!" i yelled and kicked raiju sword away i grab him from behind and yelled" hero finish him off!" i told him"but-." hero was about to say "don't worry about me just kill him!" i yelled again and felt my grip slipping"you can't hold me forever drake!" raiju yelled "ultimite destruction wave!" hero yelled but instead of his sword glowing it was his fists and he slammed the ground with all his might causeing graivty spikes 30 times his size move faster towerds me and raiju before they got to us i muttered some words and disappeared and reappear right beside hero and saw raiju get sqweared by the spikes. "drake you idiot." i heared hero say *he still thinks i'm in there* i thought and i saw hero's tears hit the floor "hero i'm right here." i said to him. he looked up and smiled "man don't do that again." he told me "hey don't worry i won't and saw the blinding light again.
there's the update
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Post by dragonfire on Nov 1, 2005 7:16:28 GMT -5
umm.. im a little bit confused on you and hero fighting but the rest that i undertand were great, keep going
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Post by dragonfan123 on Nov 12, 2005 15:15:26 GMT -5
all righ here's the final
hero looked at me and smiled"man don't do that." he told me "hey don't worry i won't." i said to him as everything went bright again and we reappeared in the arena "well that's done with right hero?" i asked him "yeah but it looks like our fight can't go." he told me as medics pick up the ref. we saw yuin and yui running towards us "well who won?" yui asked us "no one raiju and HM ruined the fight." hero told them both "i see anyway come on drake time to go." yuin told me and opened the portal "well hero see ya." i told him and went in with yuin
there's the update
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