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Post by dragonfan123 on Dec 14, 2006 20:56:15 GMT -5
ok this is a fic that happens a bit before Redemptions basically how Ari meet Chris and CHris meets Jake and his friends
Chapter 1 New kid
“Drake.” Jake said nudging his brother and hearing the alarm clock go off “Jake just ten more minutes.” Drake said putting his pillow on side of his face “Bro we got school.” Jake said turning on the light and seeing Drake wake up rubbing his eyes “Dammit Jake what are you trying to do? Blind me?” Drake said getting up stretching as well “No I’m not.” Jake said getting his usual clothes on “Anyway G said that there’s another dragon in town somewhere.” Jake said seeing Drake getting dressed “Yeah but more dragons? Isn’t a couple enough though?” Drake said handing Jake his bookbag and grabbing his own. “True anyway let’s just get down the block and meet Trixie and Spud.” Jake said walking out of his room and with Drake
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“Well this is the start of my new life.” A kid said wearing a flame shirt, dark blue Jeans and Black and white shoes. He looked into the mirror only to see a scarred up kid with torment in his eyes soon to be replaced by anger and clenched his fist then with out warning his fist made contact with the mirror shattering it to bits “Dammit why the hell did they have to die? Why?” the kid said looking at his knuckles to see blood oozing out of the fresh wound sighing the kid grabbed a towel and cleaned his knuckles and grabbed his bag then left his room.
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“Trixie, Spud wait up guys!” Drake said running up to them along with Jake “Yo Jakey Drakey.” Trixie said to the two brothers “Hey did you guys hear what happen in Georgia?” Drake said as they walked along “The Kid losing his family to a psycho path?” Spud said “Yeah that’s the one.” Jake said “Man I feel sorry for him his entire family on the news the message the kid said he even missed his annoying sister.” Trixie said as they saw Rose and Shinsei “Hey Drake!” Shinsei said kissing Drake on the cheek “So what were you guys talking about?” Rose asked hugging Jake as he kissed her “Just that kid that lost his whole family uh Chris I think his name was.” Trixie said as they neared the school and saw a kid with a flame shirt and blue jeans on “Well I guess there’s a new student.” Drake said
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The kid looked at the up and coming group turned and started walking into the building only to run into Brad “Hey watch it!” Brad said then saw who the kid was “HOLY CRAP YOU’RE THE KID FROM THE NEWS!” Brad said and everyone in the school yard looked towards Brad and rushed over “And so if I am now move.” The kid said trying to walk by “O no see you are the only one from your family alive. So I think you’re the one that murdered your own family.” Brad said pushing the kid back only to meet the kid’s fist Right Square in the nose then only saw the kids knee next then the ground. “Look buddy you say I murdered my own family?” The kid said picking Brad back up and throwing him into the wall over the coward of kids “I would never murder my family sure we did argue a lot but it never drove me mad enough to murder them!” the kid said walking past the kids surrounding him and stepped on brad’s stomach “And by the way I do have a name it’s Chris understand?” Chris said stomping onto Brad’s Stomach and walked into the school with Brad in pain on the ground getting up and stumbled into the school.
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Post by redemption on Dec 14, 2006 21:01:34 GMT -5
AHA! Chris punched Brad.... so totally had it coming... XD Awesome so far! Update soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Dec 16, 2006 22:35:37 GMT -5
ok here's the update!
Drake, Shinsei, Rose, Jake, Trixie and Spud stood there in shock to see a kid that looked weaker then Brad just toss Brad around like a rag doll. “Did you just see that?” Spud said “That’s not normal Spud I mean if that’s the kid from Georgia but why is he here?” Shinsei asked Jake “Hell if I know maybe he moved up here to get away from the pain you know the bad memories and all.” Jake said walking into school with his brother and friends and saw the kid up ahead “Hey Wait!” Drake said running up to him.
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Chris turned around to see a Teen with Blonde hair and a red sheen run up to him and another teen with Black hair and a green sheen. ‘If I didn’t know any better those two are twins’ Chris thought as the blonde one came up to him “Hey uh Chris right?” the kid asked “Yeah? And who are you?” Chris said not trusting him “Hey my name’s Drake and this is Jake and before you ask no I’m not his twin I’m his step brother.” Drake said “I’m not here to make friends so stay out of my way.” Chris said and left looking at his schedule.
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“Well that went well.” Jake said as he saw Rose and Shinsei walked over to a girl with blonde hair “Who’s that?” Trixie asked “Uh Trix I think that’s the new girl Ari I’ve been hearing about she mostly keep things to her self but she is friends with Shinsei and Rose.” Spud said with Drake and Jake looking at him “What? Do I have something on my face?” Spud said and had everyone chuckle abit “Spud how did you know this?” Drake asked “Rose told me.” Trixie said “And you told spud?” Drake asked hearing the bell ring and him and Jake left for class “Drake why do you talk to the weirdest people?” Jake asked as he saw Trixie and Spud enter Rotwood’s class “I don’t know I’m friends with you right?” Drake said laughing seeing Jake’s look “Drake we’re Brothers not friends.” Jake said as they enter Rotwood’s class and only to see Chris there and Brad in the back still holding his stomach.
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Chris saw the two brothers again ‘the blonde one knows what you been through.’ The previous generation said in his mind ‘Shut up!’ Chris snapped back hearing Rotwood begin the lesson “Now class we shall begin today’s lesson on the.” Rotwood stopped short to see a girl with Blonde hair and black shirt with a silver dragon on it and black jeans “Miss Ari your late take you seat next to Chris he’s the new kid in the back anyway now can anyone tell me what the Generation Dragon is?” Rotwood said looking around seeing no one raise there hand expect Chris “Yes Mr. Chris? I would call you by your last name but there’s a smug on it and it’s on every roll list for your classes.” Rotwood said as Chris began to speak “The Generation Dragon is also know as the Dragon of past present and future. By that name he’s able to shift his body and soul to the past or the future but can’t contact or interfere with anything unless he needs to. He also has knowledge of the past the knowledge could be anything from martial arts skills weapon handling etc. Also he has scars that go from generation like katana cuts to bullet holes or simple emotional scars like losing one’s family.” Chris said ‘don’t let this teacher think you’re the next generation dragon, he seems like a person high on something and I sense other dragons in this room be careful.’ Chris past generations self said as Rotwood yelled at the top of his lungs “NEIN!!!! The GENERATION DRAGON’S POWERS DON’T INCLUDE THOSE! THAT YOU LISTED.” Rotwood said as he sat down in his chair and seeing Chris get up and walked to the door “Where do you think you’re going Mr. Chris?” Rotwood asked “Anything away from you crackpot.” Chris said sternly as he busted down the door and left. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Post by redemption on Dec 17, 2006 17:05:54 GMT -5
Ahhhh.... Rotwood never fails to amuse me. XD Awesome chapter. Update soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Dec 18, 2006 15:44:39 GMT -5
ok update!
Drake and Jake watched Chris leave “Jake I think we should follow.” Drake whispered as Jake nodded “Yeah but let’s wait class will be over soon remember? We have a half a day of school.” Jake said as Rotwood finished his class and the bell ranged “Man Chris is something having the guts to walk out of class like that.” Drake said as he and Jake left to the lunchroom “Yeah but man I never thought that the Generation Dragon had those powers.” Jake said quietly as they met up with Rose and Shinsei “The Generation dragon?” Rose asked “Yeah Rotwood brought it up I wonder if that’s what G meant by there’s another Dragon in major torment.” Drake said has he kissed Shinsei. “I guess that does explain why Huntsmaster wants everyone out on Patrol every night for that beast.” Rose said as Trixie and Spud caught up with them. “So we need to have a plan ready to stop them right?” Drake asked as they all entered the lunch room. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Chris was just sitting in the hall outside of Rotwood’s class when the bell rang “I don’t care for this I’m heading home.” He said quietly as the blonde hair girl named Ari walked right into him “Sorry.” They both said in unison “No it’s my fault I should of payed attention to were I was.” Ari began to say when Chris put his finger on her lips “It’s alright.” Chris said smiling for the first time in along while “wow I’m talking to a person that’s going through the same pain as I am.” Ari said that caught Chris’s attention “You lost someone too in one day?” Chris said as he helped her pick her stuff up “Well not my entire family but I did lose someone close to me my friend Dallas.” She said trying to hide tears only to feel Chris embrace her into a hug “It’s ok just let it out.” Chris said as Ari cried onto his shoulder as he remember how much pain he went through. “Thanks,” Ari said moving away “I just get so upset on how I could have made a difference.” She said picking up her things and leaving ‘she’s different some how.’ Chris thought ‘how so?’ his generation self asked ‘I don’t know just different from those other two but Drake and Jake are nice but hey wait why am I telling you?!’ Chris snapped as he got up and left the school and he ran around the corner to make sure no one was following and transformed. He was a red just a bit darker then Jake’s dragon form he had scars all over from his neck down to the tail. As for his hair he had black hair and a white sheen Chris could never figure out why he has a white sheen in his hair when he didn’t in human but it didn’t bother him as much. Chris climbed the side of the school building slamming his claws into the brick wall climbing to the top of the building ‘your skills of the martial arts are slipping you need to practice harder start off with ever style your comfortable with.’ Chris’s generation self said as Chris reached the top and started practicing Hung Gar movements ‘I know it’s just that I always have this feeling I’m being hunted by someone other then that murderer dragon.’ Chris said back to the generation self and sure enough he was being watched by Huntsmaster and someone new like he never been known before.
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Post by redemption on Dec 18, 2006 19:26:30 GMT -5
Awww.... the Ari/Chris fluff made me smile. Ah.... looks like Chris and his generation self disagree... Update soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Dec 19, 2006 5:13:17 GMT -5
ok another update
“Can we take him now Huntsmaster?” the new hunter asked “He’ll be easy as that girl’s dragon master Dallas.” He said only to be answered by Huntsmaster shaking his head “This one is not as easy Taro,” Huntsmaster said taking in a deep breath seeing the Dragon now practicing Jeet kune do “This one is much more powerful then any other Dragon we can use this to our advantage to drag out the other 2 we know Dragon-X and the American Dragon.” Huntsmaster said see Taro take aim “Then why don’t we just attack him to draw them out.” Taro said with a smirk and fired making a direct hit on the Dragon who fell off the roof
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Drake looked towards the window to see a quick green flash “Jake.” Drake said to Jake with stern voice to his brother Shinsei looked as well “Why now?” Shinsei said quietly “I don’t know but I’m not sitting around to find out.” Jake said quietly and got up with Drake “Shinsei stay here.” Drake said kissing her before he left “Shinsei stay here.” She mocked “What does he think I am a dog?” she said getting up and following them secretly.
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‘GET UP!’ Chris Generation self snapped as Chris struggled to get up what ever that energy was it hit him directly in his back unable to move til the pain subsided ‘I’m timing dammit!’ Chris snapped back seeing two men near him ‘Hunts clan get up now!’ the generation self order. As on command Chris shot up and kneed the smaller one in the face and slammed him into a dumpster “What the hell is that thing!?” huntsclan member yelled getting up only to meet another set of claws “I Warned you Taro he’s no ordinary dragon!” Huntsmaster said raising his staff only to meet another Dragon’s claws but Chris’s “So hunts freak what the hell are you doing near our school?” the one with black hair said ‘Chris take this chance to finish Huntsmaster off while he’s distracted,’ the generation self said with Chris noticing that Taro get back up rushing towards Chris only to met Chris’s fist to his face ‘forget Huntsmaster for now break Taro’s Root!’ Chris’s generation self said as Chris grabbed taro and claw him across the face deep enough to leave a scar “Damn you! You son of a b*tch of a dragon!” Taro said holding his face as blood seeped from his fingers and only to feel Chris break his leg. “Huntsmaster we need to.” Taro was cut off by another red dragon but his hair was blonde “Shut up!” the dragon said and kicked him to Huntsmaster “You’ll pay for this!” Huntsmaster said and teleported away right as Chris dove for them “Well bro I guess G was right the generation Dragon is here in the NYC.” The black haired one said to the blonde one “Yeah but I don’t know if we can trust him.” The blonde one said “Trust what you like and thanks for your help but I had the situation under control.” Chris said and doing a bow then leapt up into the air and flew off.
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Post by redemption on Dec 19, 2006 16:59:48 GMT -5
O___________O THAT WAS AWESOME!!! ;D Update soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Dec 19, 2006 18:24:19 GMT -5
ok final update
Drake stood there watching the dragon fly off and seeing another Dragon covered in fur run up to them “Shinsei!” Drake said laughing and hugging her “What? You think I’m gonna stay behind even if you tell me too?” Shinsei said kissing him “O boy great Drake’s attitude rubbed off on Shinsei.” Jake said laughing reverting back to his human form along with Drake and Shinsei “Who do you think that dragon is?” Shinsei asked “I don’t know but he’s pretty good I mean he had scars all over him he must been in a bunch of battles.” Jake said seeing Drake leaving the school “Bro were ya going?” Jake asked “Going to G knowing him he wants home now.” Drake said leaving “He’s right go on I’ll cover for you two.” Shinsei said smiling as Jake nodded and left.
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Chris looked on his back using what was left of his mirror ‘You need to be more alert you never would have been hit if you have been more alert.’ Chris generation self said ‘Well maybe I’m not as good as you yet!” Chris snapped “another thing never tell me how to fight I can take care of my self!’ Chris added hitting the wall with his fist. ‘Well if you so good why did you let your parents die?’ his generation self said ‘Shut up.’ Chris said quietly ‘You were so weak and helpless you couldn’t even defend them form the dark dragon.’ “Shut up.” Chris said loudly with more anger in his voice ‘you are helpless you can’t keep from feeling the regret you have “SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!” Chris screamed and the whole house around him blew away like it was nothing but dust “JUST SHUT UP YOU KNOW NOTHING OF ME!” Chris kept saying only to feel his body instantly went to Dragon form but it was more powerful like everything he knew formed as one “YOU’RE THE REASON THEY ARE DEAD!” Chris kept saying only to feel his body morph even more.
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Drake and Jake got to their grandfather’s shop not to long ago “Jake Drake I was just about to send for you.” Their Grandfather said “Yeah it looks like another magical Crisis see the.” Fu was about to say getting cut of by a car exploding outside “What was that?” Drake said as Jake looked outside “It’s that Dragon Drake the one with the scars!” Jake said dodging the window shards as the window imploded “That’s the generation dragon Jake see he’s one not to mess with. If he has anything going on like emotional trauma he’ll go straight to an avatar state that’s powerful then the Dark dragon him self.” Fu said “Jake Drake you must talk some sense in him before he destroys the city!” There Grandfather said as the door exploded from another car exploding near it “Yeah ok tell us how we suppose to do that!” Drake said going to his Dragon form along with Jake and they flew outside.
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Chris looked at everyone running away from the debris that was caused by him “Go ahead and run NO ONE WILL ESCAPE MY WRAITH!” Chris said at the top of his lungs and firing a fireball at a building top and the chunks of brick hit the car below it. Chris looked around and saw the same two Dragons that helped him earlier “So you two come to anything in danger? No matter I’ll kill you both!” Chris said flying forward and closelining both dragons and he watched them hit the ground “You’ll never beat me!” Chris said blinded by his anger.
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“Drake we have to lead him away that dragon is probably that same one who lost his parents do you think they were buried in the graveyard around here?” Jake said getting up and helping his brother up “Yeah I think so Trixie said it should since they were on vacation here.” Drake said flying to the Grave site with Jake
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“You think you can run?” Chris said flying after them just fast enough to keep up with them he didn’t want to chase to end just yet. Seeing them land at a grave site Chris never seen in a while he landed. “Why you two landing here? Want to be closer to your new home?” Chris said laughing only to see both of the Dragons punch him in the face and got dragged to the grave stone which said “HERE LIES CANDICE MARK AND KATIE MAY GOD HAVE MERCY ON THEIR MURDERER” Chris snapped back to reality reading it and slowly morphing back to human form “No no.” Chris said as he went back fully crying hitting the tombstones “Jake it’s the new kid that’s the Generation dragon.’ The blonde dragon said morphing back to human who Chris recognized and the other dragon shifted back to his human form too ‘There the kids who you said you hated but they helped you.’ A newer generation voice said “Chris its ok to hate your parents at times it’s ok.” Drake said trying to comfort him “No it’s not.” Chris said between sobs “It’s my fault it’s all my fault!” Chris said again this time grabbing Drake and crying onto him he didn’t care who saw “I could of stopped it all I could of stopped that basterd of a dragon!” Chris said “Who? Chris? Who?” Jake said walking to his brother and their new ally and hugged him “The Dark dragon.” Chris said as both Drake and Jake froze “Hey Chris go to this address.” Drake said pulling out a pen and wrote down the address on Chris’s arm “The guy’s name is Sparkx he’ll help you with your training he’s a training Dragon as well and he’s friends with Ari those two I know you can trust cause if Shinsei trusts Ari I can.” Drake said as he and Jake left to their Grandfather’s shop. ‘You can trust them.’ The voice said it sound so much like someone Chris knew so well ‘Just who are you?’ Chris asked ‘I’ll tell you in time’ the voice said as Chris got up and left to the address.
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Post by redemption on Dec 19, 2006 21:28:59 GMT -5
O___O
So much going on, dang....
Awesome! Update soon! ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Dec 20, 2006 5:07:40 GMT -5
ok epilouge
Epilogue
Chris was flying around the city with Sparkx “So you think we’ll find her?” Sparkx yelled to Chris “I don’t know I hope we do soon!” Chris said thinking about Ari. ‘Why would she disappear like that? She’s not the one to do that.’ Chris thought thinking back Ari and Chris had really gotten close as in Sparkx’s own words “His Ari” Sparkx would always say with a teasing sense of humor but Chris ignored it til now. ‘She maybe after the ones who killed her Dragon master.’ The voice said in Chris’s head. The voice was the previous Generation dragon that knew Tai chi. she reminded Chris of Katara from Avatar so he gave her that name since she couldn’t remember hers ‘I don’t know it’s just that Drake and Jake told me about a huntsclan able to take down the best of the best but it’s just a rumor and the council isn’t worried about.’ Chris thought ‘everything will be ok she’s a strong girl who cares about you very much.’ Katara said “Chris! Yo get out of dream land and get back to reality land!” Sparkx said “Yeah yeah.” Chris said sighing hearing shots and a dragon roar in pain “Chris.” Sparkx said only to see Chris fly ahead of him.
now read Out of the darkness by Redemption to find out what happen
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Post by redemption on Dec 20, 2006 19:31:11 GMT -5
Ahh.... so by this point Ari's vanished.... interesting. It was an awesome story, Chris.
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