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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 11, 2005 21:08:39 GMT -5
Wow, now that this has been brought up, you're right. You haven't really updated in a while, PD... I wonder why.
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Post by polydactyl on Nov 21, 2005 0:58:49 GMT -5
(Sorry I haven't written in awhile. I have been busy with schoolwork. However, I have a week-long Thanksgiving break. I may be able to wrap this up.)
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 8: Conservatory Catastrophe[/glow]
Alessio led PD into main hall of the house. At this point, PD’s head was quickly filling with many questions. Who is behind this plot? How is Alessio still able to communicate? Where did Suspectum wander off?
This last question was answered soon after entering the conservatory. Upon entering this magnificent room, PD could only gasp in awe. The entire back wall of the room was an ornate heavy-glass window. The conservatory seemed to be the only room not cut off from the real world. Rows of plants, mainly aloe vera, blossomed beautifully under the gentle glow of the moon.
In the center of the room was what had to be the strangest site PD had ever seen. A weird-looking device stood there. Inside of it, a Gila Monster was suspended in a green liquid. Finally, on the floor in front of the device, Suspectum knelt on his pudgy paws in a bowing position.
“Suspectum, what are you doing?”
“Ssssilence,” the Gila Monster replied. “Pay ressspect to my leader.”
“Your leader? You mean we found him?” PD asked excitedly.
Suspectum only nodded. Meanwhile, Alessio had been playing with some buttons on the device’s control panel. He claimed he was spying when they set it up. He managed to drain the fluids and open the contraption. Immediately, the Gila Monster woke up.
“Oh! Thank you very much,” this Gila Monster replied. “ I am very grateful.”
Suspectum still remained in a loyal position. PD was a little confused.
“So,” he asked, “who are you?”
“My name is Cinctum. Unfortunately, we have little time for pleasantries.”
It was clear Cinctum spoke without as much hissing as his fellow Gila Monster.
“What do you mean?” PD asked, a bit puzzled.
“This whole thing was a trap! You were supposed to find me! We must leave!”
PD and Alessio looked at each other, bewildered. Suspectum remained bowing.
“He’s quite right, you know,” came an unfamiliar voice from behind them. “This is a trap. And, it appears to have worked.”
Before they could look to find the speaker, a cage dropped over the two Gila Monsters. Simultaneously, a sphinx-hair net dropped onto PD, instantly transforming him back to human. When they were finally able to look, all four victims were horrified at who they found.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 21, 2005 1:14:12 GMT -5
OH MY GOD! THIS IS LIKE THE UPDATE OF THE CENTURY! PD HAS RETURNED! MUHAHAHA! XD *is hyper again* Wow, I can't believe I actually went out to the kitchen for milk and all of sudden PD calls me cuz I'm missing something big. Wooow, and I sure was missing it. XD And lucky, you get the entire week off, PD. Gorsh, you might have a good week... I only have Thursday and Friday off, nehehehe... Soooo... now that that is done... UPDAAAAATEEEE SOOON! XD
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Post by mithos on Nov 21, 2005 11:25:59 GMT -5
Great job! I love this ff!
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Post by magenta on Nov 21, 2005 11:28:22 GMT -5
This is really good! I love it! ^^
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Post by chetchaka on Nov 21, 2005 16:48:18 GMT -5
Keep going or I'll start singing!!! My ghost: " OH GOD NO!!!
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Post by yfwe on Nov 21, 2005 17:43:23 GMT -5
Please update, for everyone's sake! Oh, and I second what Raffi said, but less hyper. Calm down, Raffi! XD
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 21, 2005 18:02:38 GMT -5
Hyper mood last night, you know how I am. XD
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Post by polydactyl on Dec 24, 2005 18:44:09 GMT -5
(Finally over!)
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 9: A Ghostly Rescue[/glow]
Their captor stood laughing in the doorway. They immediately recognized her as the very much alive Della Tovrea.
“Foolish creatures,” she stated, “did you really think you could stop me?”
Before any of them could answer, she replied.
“It matters not. I have you all captured now.”
“Not quite.” Everyone looked around to see who was talking. The voice eminated from behind Della. There, the transparent form of Alessio stood, now grasping rope.
She squirmed to get out, but to no avail. Alessio had her firmly tied up. He then raised the sphynx hair net from PD and released the Gila Monsters.
PD promptly summoned an armored truck to cart Della away.
“Stupid dragon!” she yelled. “I will have my revenge!”
Suspectum approached PD next.
“My leader wasss anxiousss to return to the community,” he hissed. “He asssked me to sssay thankssss for him. We really appreciate your effortsss.”
A warm smile creeped onto PD’s face. “See you around, Suspectum.” He waved goodbye to the pudgy reptile.
Alessio now stood beside PD. “I want to a-thank you for clearing my house. I shall now be able to rest in peace.
“I need to thank you,” PD said, “for saving my life. I will never forget you.”
With that, they shook hands, before Alessio complete disappeared.
The sunrise was already starting to creep over the mountains. PD agreed that it was well worth it to take the next day off.
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Post by The Pantheon Dragon on Dec 24, 2005 18:49:05 GMT -5
Nice work.It's a good thing I knew what transparent meant,b/c I used the word not long ago!Lol.Anywho,continue on soon and Merry Christmas PD!
LP
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Post by greencomedian on Dec 24, 2005 18:52:48 GMT -5
Excellentness, PD! I'm glad you finally got around to finishing it. It was an awesome story.
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