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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 13:44:11 GMT -5
???: NO!!! I LOST THE LETTER!
Jake rushed to see his mom who yelled this.
Jake: WHAT HAPPENED?!
Mom: Oh, sorry to startle you... I lost the love letter I first gave to your father when we were dating.
Jake: I CAN FIND IT!!! (dressed in super hero outfit)
Mom: *whispers*: Honey, get off the table. People are looking...
Jake: Oh, right. SINGING IN THE RAIN!
Then, he searched throughout the closet in his mother's room.
Jake: YES!!! I FOUND IT! Now to get it to...
???: NOT SO FAST!!!
Jake: WHO ARE YOU?!
???: I am the conscience of evil, YOU MUST READ THE LETTER!
Jake: No! It's my mom's! I can't...
Evil: ...resist! Do it! Use the spatula to open it! It's in the closet...
???: STOP!!!
Jake: Another conscience?!
???: I am the conscience of good! Don't do it!
Jake: That's it! This letter is going to be destroyed!!!
Good: NO!!!!
Jake: Fine, it's going to my mom.
Evil: NO!!!!
Jake: THAT'S IT!!!! MOM, I FOUND IT!!!
Mom: Good job, honey.
Jake: Thanks!
Good: Yes, good job Jake.
Evil: *growls* I'll get him!
This is for Crazy17.
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Post by magenta on Oct 2, 2005 15:39:47 GMT -5
ROFL!!
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 15:49:53 GMT -5
What does ROFL mean?
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Oct 2, 2005 16:57:20 GMT -5
ROFL means Roll Over For Laughter. LOL, she has a point, I did too. XD
I loved it. Sometimes my conscience does that to me... It would be funny if the evil overshadowed Jake. Just an idea, so no need to pay attention. Great story! =D
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 20:42:22 GMT -5
Cool! Thanks! ;D
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Post by crazy17 on Oct 3, 2005 12:43:29 GMT -5
Uh, guys, you were supposed to post your fanfictionchallenge respose on my ADJL FFC thread. Good story though!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jun 1, 2007 20:46:09 GMT -5
LOL ROFL good job!
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