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Post by maromi on Aug 31, 2005 3:12:31 GMT -5
Thanks, he made it for me, by the way yours is rad.
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Post by darkness on Aug 31, 2005 3:15:47 GMT -5
so thats his real name, oh and nice story Hero a.k.a retardedlink
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Post by maromi on Aug 31, 2005 3:23:46 GMT -5
He was building suspense in all those who were waiting to know his name.
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Post by mithos on Sept 3, 2005 11:52:20 GMT -5
Well. Retardedlink is no more. Also, I'm sick and I'll try to add more to my ff. ;D
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 3, 2005 19:57:57 GMT -5
well continue you fet better buddy
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Post by maromi on Sept 3, 2005 20:00:21 GMT -5
He's almost better now. ;D
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Sept 3, 2005 20:04:50 GMT -5
Get well soon
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Post by mithos on Sept 5, 2005 20:10:52 GMT -5
While they were walking, Sarah asked Hero, “So… what was it like in Aeris? I never had a home… so what was it like?”. Hero smiled and then replied, “Those days… when I had my parents… I felt like I had everything. When tragedy struck, I realized that even simple things, like having parents, can destroy you on the inside if you lose them. I was forever scared, and the man who killed them, haunted my dreams. He will never get away with what he’s done! I must kill him!!!”. All three stopped, and Drake and Sarah look in shock at Hero. This was the first time they ever saw Hero angry. His eyes were glazed with hatred and his body was tense. Then, he regained focus and said, “Well anyways, let’s continue. If we head in this direction, we’re bound to find Yui.”. Suddenly, a mysterious figure appeared in the distant fog. Hero, Drake and Sarah transformed into their dragon forms and got into their fighting stances. Then, a voice called out to them, “That won’t be necessary. I only want Hero, so come forth!”. Hero looked at Drake and Sarah and then walked into the fog. He looked around and spotted blood stains everywhere. “It’s been a long time, hasn’t it?”. Hero stared in horror as he noticed Yui standing before him. “I’m not asking for a fight, Yui, I just want to talk.” Hero explained. “I know. I was thinking the same.” Yui replied. Hero looked at him confused and asked, “W-what?”. “Let’s just put it this way… I changed my mind. My father is an evil man. He’s already destroyed countless villages along Draco’s south and north coast. I was dispensable in his scheme. I didn’t realize… that you still wanted to be my friend. After all I’ve done to you… you still liked me. You are truly strong… stronger than me. All I ask for is one thing. Will you be my friend?”. Hero smiled and replied, “You’ve always been my friend, so you will always remain my friend. Welcome to the team, Yui.”. Drake turned and looked at Sarah and said, “I don’t like this. Hero could be in trouble, and we’re just standing here.”. Then, Hero and Yui both walked out of the fog. Drake shouted, “HERO!!!! Watch out!! Yui is…”. “…still my friend. Even though he worked for his father, he still wanted to be with us. His father forced him to kill many people and dragons. He’s now part of the team.”. Sarah and Drake both looked at each other confused, and shrugged. Suddenly, Hero’s com-link rang and he answered it. “Bad news. The man who murdered your parents just destroyed another village of dragons south of the dragon council. If we don’t do something fast, Draco will die.”. “We also have good news. Yui betrayed his father. He’s on our team now!”. “Excellent! Now, head south to reach his father. This is the final battle. Surprise him by using your attack. Also, I interrogated the Dark Dragon. He told me that there is an ambush set up somewhere near the dragon council, so be on your guard.”. “Thanks Yuin, we will.”. Hero, Drake, Sarah, and their new member Yui left that spot and headed towards the dragon council. The fog just cleared, and it revealed a bright sunny day.
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Post by maromi on Sept 5, 2005 21:15:19 GMT -5
LONG!!! But satisfying.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 6, 2005 16:12:08 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good
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Post by mithos on Sept 6, 2005 20:10:49 GMT -5
While they were walking, Sarah asked, “So… Yui, why did you betray Hero?”. Yui looked at her and replied, “I was exiled from Hero’s town, Aegis, and I believed that it was Hero’s fault. He kept my secret… that I was an Iyallanos, one of the banished race. But, it was really my father’s fault. He sent soldiers to take me away and deliver me to him. Then, he gave me the ultimate sword of light, the sword he couldn’t wield. He gave me it, and told me I could destroy Hero, the weakling, with it.”. Then, Hero looked at him with evil eyes. Yui looked at him and laughed and aid, “No offense. That’s what he said. Anyways, I excepted it and then he put me through intense training. You see, my sword, Luciis, is a key to unlock Soul Reaper’s true potential. Exile, is also a key. Soul Reaper has two sides, light and dark, depending on the wielder’s heart, soul, and mind. If the wielder’s heart is pure, it will become a good sword. If the wielder’s heart is impure, the sword will turn evil. The sword is linked directly to Hero’s thought’s, feelings, reactions, and both worlds. If the sword is pure, peace and prosperity will fall upon the lands. If it turns evil, vice versa. Hero carries the fate of everyone on his shoulders.”. Then, they all reached he dragon council, but everywhere was abandoned. Drake peeked inside of the main hall and found all of the dragons and council members, including Chang. He called out, “Hero, Yui, Sarah! I found ‘em!”. When they ran over, one dragon flew over and attacked Drake. He fell to the ground and grabbed his bleeding arm. “DRAKE!!!” Hero shouted. He ran over and tried to help Drake, but some dragons carried him off. Suddenly, a girl wearing a green and blue ninja suit jumped down from the ceiling and landed on a platform above the dragons. Then, all the dragons bowed to her and she said, “Why slay dragons… when you can control them!”. Hero looked at her and shouted, “What have you done with him?!?!”. She laughed and replied, “The Huntsclan has been searching for your friend for a long time. He used to work for us, but in the end, he betrayed his own comrades. It just so happens you have the legendary Dragon-X on your team! By sunset, I will have slain him personally, and his skin will be mounted on a wall in our hideout!”. Sarah looked at her and responded, “How could you do such a thing?! You think that you can justify the fact that your family was always outmatched by dragons?! You’ll never get away with this!”. She looked at her and laughed. Then she replied, “Just try and come after us! We have built an army of dragons, who are loyal to us! The only thing we care about is slaying Dragon-X! Then, we will finally be excepted by the council and I will be the highest member AND permanent member! Finally, I can be made a member of the Huntsclan by slaying my first dragon! Then, we can slay all these dragons here.”. Hero looked at her and said, “How could you?! You’re the one who’s wrong! By slaying dragons… you’re removing the magical protectors of this world! You’re killing innocent lives! You deserve to…”. Just then, a dragon flew down and slashed at Hero. He took the blow as the dragon watched in horror. The dragon, was Rei. Rei looked at Hero and muttered, “H-H-H- Hero?”. “No!!! Grab him before he remembers fully!” the ninja screamed. Then, several dragons grabbed him and took him away. Rei screamed, “HERO!!! DRAKE IS located….”. Then, his voice trailed off and the ninja said to some dragons near her, “Go accompany them. Make sure they escort him to the prison on Lacaio island. Give him another treatment, so his brain can be completely erased.”. She turned and looked at Hero. A dark, ominous purple aura was flowing next to him. His eyes were half glazed over, and his body was tense. He muttered, “…You won’t get away with this!!! I will kill you!!!!”. She laughed and replied, “You’re weak. If we captured Dragon-X this easily, and he’s the legendary dragon, who do you think you are? Dragon-X is the strongest dragon alive…you are NOTHING compared to him! Are you even a dragon?! Transform now!!!”. Hero looked at her, smiled and said, “I don’t care what you think. I’m not really even a dragon… I’m the legendary warrior!”. “Ha! The legendary warrior… how stupid! Drake is the legendary warrior, not you! Since you are a human, I should destroy you now… but, I will give you two offers. Die now, or become my loyal slave. It’s your choice.”. Hero looked up at her and smiled. “Is living a choice, cause that’s what I’m choosing!”. Then, she blasted a hole in the ceiling with her staff and jumped onto the roof. She peered down through the newly opened hole and threw down a smoke grenade. Yellow smoke billowed out of the canister and every person automatically transformed into their dragon forms. Yui questioned, “What?! What is… happening?!”. The ninja laughed and replied, “This smoke grenade is made of a special gas that makes humans faint, and exposes dragons. Dragons are instantly transformed when they inhale it… so that’s why you changed!”. “I don’t think so.” said a mysterious voice. Then, everyone looked at Hero. Hero was still in his human form! The ninja looked down and questioned, “Wh-what?! How could this… WHO ARE YOU?!”. Hero looked at her and smiled in an evil way. He drew his sword and lifted it up high. Suddenly, blades of darkness, similar to wind blades, cut and slashed every one of the ninja’s dragons. She and everyone looked in both shock and horror at Hero. The dragons were badly wounded and most were paralyzed. Then, Hero said, “The legendary warrior.”. She jumped and ran west towards the mountain range. Yui transformed back, because the gas wore off, and grabbed his sword. He ran over and clashed swords with Hero. Hero’s eyes returned to normal, and Hero and his friends huddled together. Then, light beamed from both swords and the group was instantaneously warped out of the dragon council main hall.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 6, 2005 21:32:57 GMT -5
plz continue hero it's really good
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 7, 2005 16:53:00 GMT -5
I love it! i like how you make things move when you picture them realy cool
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Post by Tales_ Fanatic on Sept 7, 2005 17:35:45 GMT -5
cont. plz
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Post by yfwe on Sept 8, 2005 14:42:59 GMT -5
Nice job, Hero, continue soon!
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