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Post by mithos on Sept 23, 2005 22:02:48 GMT -5
Pretty soon, I'll put in music. I'm writing music for this ff. Btw, what would you rate this ff?
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 23, 2005 22:08:39 GMT -5
hmm.. rating it no hard feeling ok? i say..... 98.6! exellente!!
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Post by mithos on Sept 23, 2005 22:11:05 GMT -5
REALLY?! THAT'S ALL?! (JK) AWESOME!!!!! ;D
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Post by mithos on Sept 23, 2005 22:11:38 GMT -5
As of this point onward, Hero is obsessed with making new teammates.
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 23, 2005 22:37:17 GMT -5
lol thats new in the cartoon world ;D
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Post by mithos on Sept 23, 2005 22:39:39 GMT -5
Yeah, he also has a tendancy to fly backward into walls. If you read the part where Drake first meets Hero, Hero shouts, "Why does this always happen to me?!" -He is refering to the wall thing, not Yui kicking him.
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Post by maromi on Sept 24, 2005 15:59:11 GMT -5
I like walls.
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Post by maromi on Sept 24, 2005 23:15:35 GMT -5
Since Hero's user file is acting strange, I, Hero(not Maromi) will post more to this ff:
Hero met up with the others after helping the residents of Malinoro evacuate. When they left the town, there was a dark crimson sunset. Drake looked back at the village and spotted an enormous black cloud above it. He turned around quickly and told everyone not to look. Suddenly, a black and brown dragon landed in front of the group and everyone halted immediately. “I, Zenos, come before you in the name of Thorn and the rogue dragons. Surrender now or die.” Drake looked at him and shouted, “Do you think we’re stupid?! You are clearly outmatched and outnumbered! Do you know who we are?! We…” Zenos rose his hand and everyone instantly fell to the floor. “Wrong move, you are facing the strongest dragon alive.” he said. Hero noticed a strange red and black dragon ring around Zenos’s finger. Hero asked, “What is that ring? What are the Uenonai?! Answer me!” Zenos looked at him and replied, “Hmmm? Oh, you are truly clueless… This ring is the Uenonai! It gives me supreme control over dragons! This ring contains powerful dark energy… it gave the Dark Dragon his powers. Chang was forced to turn to him… but now, it is in my possession once again! You see, I am the true owner of it. Once again, I will be the ruler of all the dragons!” “Are you a rogue dragon?” Hero asked. “I am the ruler and indeed one of them. You dragons will be slain for your disobedience towards Thorn!” Zenos shouted. Then, he snapped his fingers and Hero’s group fell unconscious.
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 25, 2005 1:19:32 GMT -5
your account is acting wierd hmm... 1st sign of hacks
continue your story hero me want more!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 25, 2005 11:07:27 GMT -5
yes plz continue when you can
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Post by mithos on Sept 25, 2005 15:23:44 GMT -5
I will, I got it back, hopefully for good.
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Post by blinx on Sept 27, 2005 12:20:42 GMT -5
Please continue its awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by mithos on Oct 1, 2005 9:43:32 GMT -5
Thanks! Glad to see that you like it! ;D
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Post by mithos on Oct 1, 2005 22:50:03 GMT -5
When Hero woke up, he found himself inside a cell inside of a massive, high-tech base. “You’re new, eh? Your style’s a little rough around the edges, but we can fix that.” Hero turned around and saw a green and orange dragon standing next to him. “The name’s Fred Nerk. What’s yours?” Hero stood up and calmly said, “Hero.” Fred laughed as he said this and replied, “There is no way you could be the famed legendary warrior! A puny boy like you? Ha!” “Really? You don’t say. It’s a funny thought that I’m actually taller and older than you. Don’t you say? What do you want me to do to prove to you I am who I am?” “Well… free us if you’re that confident!” Fred said. Hero walked up to the cell’s door and touched it. It was crushed because he used an incredible amount of gravity on it. Fred backed up and asked, “What’s this then?! What kind of power is that?! Who or what are you?!” Hero smiled and replied, “I’m Hero and I’m the Aerian Dragon. Nice to meat you.” Hero ran out and knocked out the guard dragons. He looked at Fred and said, “Get outta here! I’m going to recover my sword and…” “I’m coming with you!” “What?! No you’re not! It’s too dangerous! You can’t…” “Well… not only can I help you free the captive dragons, but I can tell you Zenos’s weakness. It is his ring.” “…Ok, you can come.” Hero replied. Then, they released the captive dragons in area Z/5 and ran down the stairs.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 2, 2005 9:14:59 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good
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