Post by dragonfire on Aug 13, 2005 19:36:02 GMT -5
thanks guys! umm... can you rate it how good it is or how bad it is?
Kissy or Icky
*Boom!!* (one of the dark voice kids well teens) Geo: Hi pops! dark voice: Not again! Feo: dont be a sorry sport we were just having some fun! dark voice: be quite! i need to think to kill the knights Leo: those 5 they dont looks though teo: ooo! that red head looks cute!! (luis) Ceo: that hunk over there is so handsome! (jake) Leo: hey what about this hunk! (showing a picture of her boyfriend) Teo: you should be called lord of the bungo than lord of the snakes Leo: HEY!! Ceo: ooo like them! can i play with them? DV: no daughter there not an allies Ceo: daddy i meant kill DV: thats my girl of course you can play with them take your brothers and sisters Ceo: yay!! (only saw jake and the others in dragon form not in human) Geo: when will she ever learn...
Luis: even for being the wind knight im still afraid of hights! Jake: dont be a chicken its perfectly safe Hero: i think we need to in human form its much safer cuz of the wieght (everyone in human form) Ryu: how long is this bridge anyway? (only saw a mist in front) Drake: i dont know ill ask thunder god TG: yes master Drake: how long is the wind bridge? TG: about 1,500 miles Drake: WHAT!!!!! TG: im sorry to say but the wind bridge is one of the most longest bridge in the entire ura Drake: oh thankx Ryu: 1,500 miles thats long for this kind of bridge Luis: i wish i have a god now.... Hero: well sitting here wont get us nowhere Jake: right you go 1st! Hero: *sigh* scrardy cats.... (they walk and walk and walk and walk)
6 hour later
Luis: (his stomach grumble) aaaaa! my stomach hurts did anyone bought food? Drake: no Jake: nada Hero: not a thing Ryu: nope! Luis: ah!!! im so hungry!! Hero: hey your not the only hungry (his stomch grr) Ryu: hey who's that over there? Jake: girls! (everyone in the other side is girls) Teo: hey are they the knights? Ceo: no but they look CUTE!! Leo: when will ya girls knoOW!!! (saw ryu) i chnage my mind they are cute and handsome!! Teo: hey red head (girly talk to luis) Luis: *faint* teo: whats up with him? Jake: his shy on girls Teo: thats even CUTER!! Ceo: well hello cuty you seem small for a cute guy Jake: oh uhh.... Feo: hi whats your name? Drake: Drake... Feo: (smiling) Drake: (smiling back) Hero and Geo: *sigh* hmm... heheheh... Teo: hey where you heading? Luis: uhh... uhhh....uhh (teo kissed him) uhh.. not to be rude but i already got a girl friends (i competely forgot that is happends before Luis get married sorry) Teo: oh but can you dump her? Luis: uhh.. Teo: come on sweet chicks come to our place Feo: are you crazy!! we have a job to do Teo: come on daddy can wait were his little devils Ceo: she does got a point there Leo: then what are we waiting for come on follow us jake: should we? Luis: why not maybe they got food! Drake: im in! Hero: me too Ryu: uhh ok...
i gtg again my cuzin is a brat!! always bug me
Last Edit: Aug 24, 2005 8:02:14 GMT -5 by dragonfire
Post by dragonfire on Aug 13, 2005 23:01:11 GMT -5
Luis: hey girls can we go to the Wind Temple? Teo: why you want to go there Luis: uhh.... somthing special Teo: hmm... ok! i like the beeze there and the monsters there Luis: monster!? Teo: yeah lots and lots of monsters Ryu: hey where you were going in the 1st place? Ceo: we were gona pick on someone or somthing Jake: who? Ceo: i dont know we forget things but it start with the letter K or was is it C Luis: Cake? Leo: maybe.. Jake: cake... (dreaming of one) Ceo: (heard the boys stomach grumbling) oh you poor things you must be hungry on that long trip in that bridge here (a piece of pie) Hero: thankx! Luis: yummy! Ryu: (sniffing then took a bit) not bad Drake: yeah! Jake: what flavor it is? Feo: guess! Luis: (tasting) blue berry? Teo: no ryu: apple? Leo: no Drake: green apple? Feo: no Hero: frog legs? teo: (whispering to Geo) his your type Geo: uhh... no Luis: we give up what is it? Teo: Black Berry!! Luis: oh never tried it before (still munching on the pie) Ceo: well you like the pie then you would love this! (bring on the CAKE!) Luis: yay! CAKE!!
10 minutes later
Feo: that was fast Luis: *burp* that was good thankx! Teo: anything for a cute boy like you! Ceo: yeah sweety.. (girly touch on jake) Jake: (smiling wierdly) Ryu: its getting late better make camp here Leo: let me help you Ryu: thankx Drake: ill get somthing to cover us in the night Feo: ill help Luis: ill get water Teo: me too! Hero: ill get fire wood Geo: ill come with you Jake: ill make the bed Ceo: ill help! Ryu: well ok then lets start... (everyone going in different direction ryu stay at the camp site preparing the place)
Luis: (heading to the lake) hmmm the moon seems brighter than my place Teo: i never seen the moon Luis: you havnt Teo: no Luis: well its your lucky day its a full moon (teo and Luis Gazing) oh and this dosent mean that were you know girl friend of anything ok i got already Teo: its ok friends will do Luis: (getting water)
Hero: (picking up wood) Geo: (picking up wood then trip then hero caught her) thankx Hero: anytime, hey umm.. could you get that? Geo: oh sure....(picking up the wood then she touch hero) oh um.. Hero: (he hold Geo Hands)
Drake: (getting some big leaves) this should do Feo: (trying to pull the leaf off) *gripping hard but no use* Drake: here let me (pulled the leaf then gave it to Feo) Feo : thank you Drake: (smiling)
jake: (getting some small leaves) Ceo: umm.. jake do you got a girlfriend Jake: uhh.. yes and no Ceo: why what the matter between you two? Jake: well.. its just this she is a friend my best friend and she is evil too and tried to kill me cuz of ....never mind. Ceo: (saw a flower) hey look a moon flower it only blooms every 100 years its our lucky night (pick) here Jake: thankx (holding the hand of Ceo) uhh umm... (then let go) we better get ready for the beds Ceo: oh oh! yeah...(picking leaves then smiled at jake)
Ryu: (cleaning the place) there! Leo: oh your good (her half was a bit dirty) Ryu: (smiled) let me help you (cleaning her place) Leo: thankx! your kind Ryu: well so are you Leo: *giggle* ah! (looking at the moon) the moon is very pretty here than in my place Ryu: yeah but it was blue not red Leo: you live in another world Ryu: yeah all of us are. Leo: oh it must be nice there Ryu: yeah... Leo: i wish us and the girls live in your world (in a low tone)
Dark Voice: what in the world! (looking at the pool) my daughters with the KNIGHTS!!! AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! Go out there!!(his talking to the Dark Knights) bring my daughters here! Dark Knights: yes! Drak Voice: Revenent kill the knights that have touched my daughters hands! (talking to the Dark Wizard) DW: yes my lord and this time i wont fail.... DV: it better be...
(everyone got back to the camp area, cooking mushrooms and telling ghost stories, you know camp stuff, the girls like the boys cuz of you know what im gona say they realy have interest in them so when the moon touch the center of the sky it happends...)
Boys: (heard a sound in the bushes) DK (dark knights): *breathing deeply* Girls: its the knights they come to get us!! daddy must have seen us Ryu: this are from your dad? ceo: yes we just remember we have to kill the knights that was sent here Luis: huh!? Teo: yes and now we are gona be punished by our dad! Luis: what kind of dad is he! Feo: plz becarefull there more stronger than the knights Ryu: oh yeah!? (everyone turn dragon) Girls: (everyone gasp as the boys turn dragon with there gears) Geo: its them! the 5 knights.... (everyone was in shock seing the boys fighting for them even there were enemies) Luis and hero: (jumped to the sky then attack in a circle moition) WIND SLASH!! FORCING LIGHT!! (the element mix turning it to 10 white dragons in a wind moition then pierce the dark knight armour) yeah! Ryu jake and Drake: HELLS FIRE!!! SONIC PUCH!! THUNDER CREST!! (The three puched the ground then 1st the symbol of the Dragon X appear then the Fire element mixes with it and then jake puch wit his sonic puch and made a big flood of lava then killed the other 3 knights) Hero: nice work guys it was a perfect shot for a combine magic! hahahaha! (the boys laugh then the girls was confused) Teo: i thought there were serious Ceo: yeah me too geo: well there pretty confident in there attacks Feo: yeah what team work (looking at the boys laughing) Leo: i wonder how long they can last laughing?
Luis: that was great now let us think about the girls now (the girls scream) Teo! Teo: help us! (caprtured by the dark wizard) DW: it seems the Dark knights fail to capture the princesses well tataa! (Vanished) Girls: HELP!! *there scream fainted* Hero: GIRLS!!!! Jake: were is he taking them!? Luis: there dad....
Girls: aaa! (thrown in the dungeon) DV: im disappointed in you my daughters holding hand with.. WITH THAT!! (pointing at the knights) girls: *crying* DV: dont let them get away they you understand!! (yelled at the guards) Guard: yes.. DV: good... you done well brother.. DW: thank you... DV: the knights have enterd the wind temple, see to it they stay there forever.. DW: yes.. Geo: hero....
hero: geo... will find you when the 5 gods combined will find you no matter what it takes...
so what do you think? rate it 1 to 10 ok? i need to know if you realy like it or not
Last Edit: Aug 14, 2005 2:10:21 GMT -5 by dragonfire
must be my big imaginaition or my world ok continuing the story
Drake: (looking at luis very sad) come on cheer up look were almost there see? (pointing at the door) Luis: *sigh* well its my turn now Jake: go get it! Hero: yeah! Ryu: go! Luis: but what about the monsters Teo told us about? Ryu: dont worry we can handle anything while were together (putting his hand in front) Drake: yeah! (placing his hand to ryu) Hero: all for one (placing his hand too) Jake: and one for all! (placing his hand) Luis: ok! (placing his hand) for the girls and the world! Everyone: BREAK!! Luis: (running in the door then the door shut) Hero: get ready guys! i saw somthing move.... jake hero drake and ryu: (standing there ground waiting for luis) Wind God: Wind Knight though have come here what thy wish you want? Luis: to save this world and head back home to our world WG: thou have said in truth if thou have only one choice what thy it be? Luis: this is hard.... Hero: YA! (slashing the spiders) there coming in multiple waves! Ryu: (shooting the spiders) this things rick! drake: THUNDER CREST!! (killing the spider around him) whats luis doing in there! WG: answer now or be vanquish in this temple Luis: blast it! WG: speak now! Drake: (puching the spiders) yuck!! this things have a loogy in them! Ryu: BLEH! HELLS FIRE!! (burning the spider) Jake: lets do the wave shock again!! Ryu jake and Drake: THUNDER!!!SONIC!!!HELL!!! (puched the floor and again made a tidal wave and killed a strait wave) YEAH!! huh! (spiders are still coming) whats keeping luis so long! WG: time is up what is your answer? Luis: umm..... (silence) WG: is that your answer.....(in a very low tone) Luis: if i answer only one what is the use of being here? WG: thou is wise and not selfish tell me what is your deepest wish in your heart? Luis: i want...(flash back of the promise they made) umm..(flash back of him and the team) ahh... (flash back of the girls) i want... Ryu: aaaaaaaaaaa! FIRE BAZOOKA!!! *BOOM BOOM BOOM!!!* (the spider flew and then the spider spider made sticky wed and then cover Ryu) urmm!!! (trying to breath) Hero: RYU!! AAHH! (being coverd by spider wed) no! (slashing the webs but there was to many) AH! mrrhmm!! (coverd by a wed) Drake: LUIS HURRY UP IN THERE!!!! ARH! (coverd by a wed) Luis: HUH! i wish that i can save my friends!!! WG: is that you deepest wish of all not even saving the girls Luis: how did you!? never mind i want to save my friends WG: good a true knight always care for his friends even its his last chance to have somthing he want the most...(Charging for a blow) ULTIMATE!! WIND!!! *WOOSH!!!!* (the wind blow everything) Luis: guys! (get his sword then opened the cakoon) guys! Ryu: *coughing* yuck! now i know how fly feels jake: thankx hey your armour! (luis armour change) WG: (went in luis gloves) Young Master luis i will join you in battle only when the other 3 gods are open in your next journy is the Fire temple head north you will find it..*faint* Luis: thankx hey! maybe you can be Iri friend! Iri: yaaaaiii!! YAY SOMONE TO PLAY WITH! Luis: be nice you two! Iri: i will hey lets play jacks! WD: Luis: sorry guy for waiting it was hard to answer that question Ryu: no prob at least its my turn to have one of those. Jake: hey! (still in the wed) Luis: OH SORRY JAKE!! (opened the web) Jake: *TAKING HIS BREATH!* what took you! Luis: hehe sorry! Hero: hmm.. looks like it will be a llllllllooooooooonnnnnnngggg walk! (pointing to the volcano) Ryu: EY!! Luis: we could sent out iri... ryu: a little exercise would do! Luis: ;D Jake: luis still up to his old ways.... thought: i hope the girls are alright....
Hope you dont mind guys having some girlfriends in this story
Last Edit: Aug 14, 2005 16:56:20 GMT -5 by dragonfire
Post by dragonfire on Aug 14, 2005 17:07:16 GMT -5
lol ok Never take a bath at a gleysier
Luis: boy its hot in here! Hero: it looks like a hot spring Jake: *sniffing* ew... i need a bath Ryu: *sniffing* yeah me too.... Luis: do we have to go naked? Jake: hmm... well uhh... why dont we take a bath in dragon ok? Luis: yeah Drake: me too Ryu: Fine with me hero: yeah me too! (everyone in dragon and they take off they armour) *SPLASH!* Luis: ahhh.... we havnt taken a bath for a long time... Hero: yeah i havnt wash my clothes in weeks! Jake: (looking at hero clothes) (getting far) hero: just kidding! Ryu: never taken a hot bath before Luis: me too Ryu: maybe ill heat up the place (heating the pool) Luis: ryu stop! OUCH!!! (burned) Jake: YIKES!! Hero: WAOH!! Drake jake hero lus: RYU!! Ryu: heheh! sorry guys! Luis: maybe i can cool it a little (cooling the spring) hey i made boubles! Ryu: thats even better!! Jake: yay a massager! Hero: (shacking) .o.o.o.o.o.o yeah.! Drake: this is the life! Luis: you said it! *boom*
Post by dragonfire on Aug 15, 2005 16:43:34 GMT -5
ok im back and early today
(the gleysiers erupt) Luis: those gleysiers are getting a bit stronger by the time it pops out Drake: your right we better change now *BOOM!!!* Luis: ok that dosent sound good *BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!!* (the gleysiers unleash lavas now) Jake: run for your lives!!! (everyone pick up there gear and run for there lives!!!!) everyone: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!! (running very fast) Jake: what are we doing were fire proof! Luis: yeah but our clothes arent! Jake: oh yeah! (still on the run) ryu: woah!! (on the cliff now) Luis: better fly ryu! IRI COME FORTH!! (iri come out) everyone get on!(everyone get off right in time) Hero: phew! that was close Jake: yeah... i hope i could say the same thing with this one Luis: (sylth tone) thankx Iri Iri: no problem hey that wind god was so good at playing jacks! Luis: you dont say (smiled) ok we need to head that volcano (pointing) Iri: alright (flying slowly) hero: lucky for us that the volcano was near or else Iri would fly fast Iri: you got lucky this time next time it wont! Luis: did you say anything? Iri: no! not at all... Luis:
1 hour later....
hero: (looking at the bottom) there it is Luis: cool! (sylth tone) Iri take us down Iri: you got it! Dive dive dive! (summersault diving) Everyone: wwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! why is this keep on happening to us! Luis: boy i wonder if there are monster living in here? Ryu: what are you talking about? Luis: the heat! its burning our eyes Ryu: i dont feel anything Luis: it must be your armour whats keeping you cool see (ryu armour glow) Ryu: yeah well i think ill go in you guys have to stay here and guard hero: right! (everyone on there ground and ryu got in) Ryu: oh boy....(looking every obstical in his path) well here goes nothing!! (jumping each pillar after pillar)
Post by dragonfire on Aug 16, 2005 16:03:51 GMT -5
hey guys sorry for being late i have to wake up early for this ok continuing the story
Jake: hmm... *yawn!* now what are we gona do? Luis: i wonder if this gloves could carry lots of stuff? Hero: (pocking the gloves) woah!! (his hand come right into it) what the! (looking that his hand was half gone) so now we know we could put more things in it Luis: yeah!! (his stomach grumble) speaking of things my stomach is hungry again hehehehe Jake: but we just ate! Luis: i know but im realy a hungry type of dragon hehehe Jake and hero: oyy.... Luis: well there are berriers on that bush lets pick some for the trip Hero: i woner why those berrier are still alive at this climate Luis: (touch the berries then...) *pook!* (the berries explode adn splater to luis face) yum!! (licking it) hey guys its realy good when they explode! Hero: hey let me try! (touch and *pook!* right to hero mouth) yumm! it is good Jake: (touching and you know what happen) yeah! (licking) Drake: HEY!! im licking it too!! (licking the berries juice) Luis: we could do this all day! (licking) (a monster hide under the other bush and saw the guys) Jake: did you hear that? Luis: hear what? Hero: (trying to listen) yeah over there! Jake: hmmm.... (then the monster jump in then licking jake face) WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAA IT GOT ME ITS LICKING MY BRAIN OUT!!!! licking my brain out? (looking at the cute monster licking jake face) its just a baby monster (looking at the others about to laugh) hey! Drake: (in a laughing talk) LIckIng MY Brain?! (laugh but trying to hold it) Jake: rrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!! (looking at the monster) i wonder why its licking me? Luis: must be the berries Jake: (trying to take it off him) arrrrrrrr!!! this monster wont let go aaaaarrrr!!! Luis: let me try (getting a bowl leaf shape then putting the berry juice in it) here you go! Monster: rrrriiiii!! (going out jake face then drinking the juice) RIRI! Luis: your welcome! Drake: how did you know? Luis: i forgot to tell you my lands have this kind of creatures were still troubling naming them they keep on running everytime we name them very confusing Hero: well at least you got a nice place Luis: not exactly there are monster that are furios and terrible to look at destroying our crops like the valley we just saved and houses Hero: oh! wonder hows ryu doing Ryu: this isnt good (looking at the swinging scyths) hmm... (making a little fire ball then throw it but it just bounce back) i hate this kind of things! (jumping scyth after scyth) Hero: hmm... *YAWN!* there is nothing to do! Luis: yeah Drake: *yawn* Jake: we could skate Luis: problem jake we dont have a skate board Jake: not to worry! (going to the forest then tore the skin of the tree then made like those in ski trip) here! Luis: what about land? Jake: not a problem! (making a ramp with very smooth surface) yeah!! (skate boarding with no wheels) woohooo!! the american dragon is back!! yaaa!! yaaa!! (then the little monster jump to jake face) WOAHHH!!!! grrr!!! (pulled it out then throw it) i begining to hate those things! Hero: umm.. luis are you sure this is safe? Luis: sure! (puched hero to the ramps) Hero: (skate boarding like a pro) woohhoooo!! Luis: your turn! (puched drake) Drake: wooooohhhhooooooooo!!! (everyone skate boarding with out wheels that is) Jake: follow the leader!! (doing a spin trick then everyone did) not bad how about this! (high in the air then spin upside down like the game in disneychannel then everyone did) not bad at all but can you do this! (very high in the air then spin couterclockwise) Luis: jake! i think thats to...*boom!*high.... Jake: ohhh....*faint in the knock down* (back to ryu) Ryu: WAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! (running for his life!! a boulder was at his back) HHHEEEELLLPPPP!!!!! Luis: so now what? Hero: we could play swords only wooden once Luis: ok! (getting tree trunks) on the count of 3 1...2....3! (a buzzing sound on making a wooden sword) Hero: DONE! Luis: shoot! just one slice ahead Hero: ok let see what you got! hhhiiiiyyyyaaa!! (luis defend) Jake: wana play tick tac toe? Drake: ok.. (jake and drake playing tick tack toe) Luis: woah! (almost get hitted by hero) Hero: now come on luis put your back to it! Luis: ok then..... (chanting) ARUGI SLASH!!! (a rapid technique) Hero: woah! (defeding all the attacks) nice technique my turn! GRAVITY PULSE!!! (he jumped and hit luis tto the ground) Luis: woah! never know that coming Hero: hehe Luis: GEO SLASH!!! (a wave attack) *WOOSH!* Hero: ah oh.... woah! (flying to the ground) arrr!! aaaaaaaaa!! Luis: woah! (defending) easy hero! Hero: oh sorry! got caried away.. now *poke!* (hitted luis head) i win! Luis: darn! REMATCH! Hero: find with me! ayyaaaaaaaaaaa!! Ryu: this gota be it! (opening the door then went in) woah!! (looking all around with statues) nice place you got here Fire God: though have past every obstical is a true warrior now i give one more test too see if you could wiled me Ryu: Bring it on! FG: (chanting then a tsunami of lava came) control the fire if you are the knight of fire! Ryu: darn it...(concentrating then trying to move the lava sidways) FG: very good....(got in ryu gloves) Ryu: right! FG: knight of fire i have come in to your gloves cuz the last test is coming Ryu: what that wasnt the test!! FG: no that is Ryu: (saw a big wave of lava coming) aaaaaaaaaaa!!! (running again! then saw a board) this will do! (surfing) yeah!!! yeahh!!! yeahh!! yeah!! Jake: hmm... is it just me of its getting hotter in there everyone: (looking inside) waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Ryu: KALABUNGKA!! Drake: its ryu! Ryu: hey guys miss me? Jake: for a while there no Luis: so did you get your god? Ryu: yup! FG: Fire knight thou have proven to me the strenght of courage i will youn you when all the five gods are together head north east here you will find a town where the earth god awaited to be wiled...*faint* Jake: my turn now hey ryu LOOK! (ryu armour upgraded) cool! Ryu: yeah! Luis: you look good in that Ryu: thankx! Hero: lets not waste time its realy getting hot here *BOOM* (the volcano erupted) catch ya later! (heading north east) Everyone: HEY!!!! (running away) Ryu: you guys! Jake: thought: earth god your mine!
ill take a bath tell me what do you think of the story?
Last Edit: Aug 16, 2005 16:34:29 GMT -5 by dragonfire
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