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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 16, 2005 16:10:09 GMT -5
it's great plz continue
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 18, 2005 1:58:50 GMT -5
thankx! uhh... if anyone is reading this can you say somthing? it feels lonley just me and dragonfan123
Race to the earth god
after escaping the molten lava the guys were at the town where the 4th god was on then somthing came up....
Everyone: (getting there breath) Drake: that was close jake: yeah we just ran to the very town we were heading ryu: well at least you guys have fun Luis: (smiled) (going in then the guard spotted them not in dragon form) Guard: you why have you come here? Luis: uhh... should we tell him? Drake: better not maybe its one of the Dark Wizard guards Jake: ok uhh.. we here to uhh.. stay for uhh.. supplies yeah thats it! Guard: hmm.. enter! Luis: good job! Jake: (smiling) Drake: wonder were the earth god is Guard: (ringing the bell) the knights are here the knights are here!! hero: hey they already know Luis: uhh not exactly (seing everyone running to the entrance) Jake: hey where are they going!? Hero: better check it out (running to the entrance) Drake: (looking at the fake knights, the fake knights are bigger than the real knights witch is Drake, hero, Jake, Ryu, and luis) well this is unexpected Luis: yeah there bunch of foneys! People: *GASP!* Drake: he dnt say anything!! Red: i heard what he say and its not pleasent to hear Luis: uhh.. are you realy the knights? Yed: cant you see the resemblance? Jake: no your fake (calmly) Geb: how dare you call us fakes! dont you know what we are! Drake: yeah fakes! Ted: this kids have no respect on adults Red: well lets just show them our power Tim: come on guys no fighting! Red: but.. Tim: hi im tim and this Red Ted Yeb and Geb were brothers so why you say that were not knights? Jake and the others: (showing there gloves) the princess gave this to us Tim and his team: well us too (showing there gloves) Hero: fakes. Tim: no come on kids you know you cant be the knights Hero: can this prove it? (showing his dragon arm) Tim: *sigh* (showing his hand turn dragon arm) Luis: nice! Jake: luis! Luis: sorry Red: come on lets beat them! Tim: well ok ill just stay here and watch Jake: this is a waste of time! Luis: well if we beat them early then we can find the next god soon! Jake: your right! Drake: well i want to go home early so ok Hero: i do need a exercise Ryu: yeah me too Ted: kids.. when will they learn (jake team DRAGON UP! them too) hehe Jake: SONIC PUNCH! (puched to the ground the waves burst making the fake Knights unbalanced) Fake knights: woah woah! Tim: impresive.. Drake: CALLING THUNDER!! (zapped the Fake Knights) Ted: he (obsorbed the thunder) Drake: what! Ted: (then he push it back to Drake then drake miss it but the thunder hitted walls) hero: Drake are you ok!? Drake: yeah.. Luis and Hero: for drake..... (they jumped doing there skill) TEN DRAGON!! Geb: *yawn* (just put his hand up to his fast then made a big black dragon) Hero and luis: huh!? (all there white dragons disappear then the black dragon went to them! then hero and luis dodged it but the black dragon hitted the wall making it to fall on to the people) Hero and the team: oh no! Kids: aaaaaaahhhhhh!!!! Jake and the team: (running to the falling walls) we got cha! (caught everyone in time) Jake: how can you be knights if you put people in danger!? Red: shut up and fight! Hero: this guys wont quit! Drake: then will let them have it! Drake, jake and Ryu: TSUNAME BLOW!! (doing there technique but it dnt work cuz the ground crack and both teams fell to the ground) Both teams: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!.... Drake: ouch! Tim: you guys ok? everyone: yeah hero: (looking around) this must be the temple of the earth god Tim: the earth god huh? so tell me are you realy the knights? Jake: YEAH! Tim: oh sorry but i think will take over your place now Luis: what did you say!? Red: you heared him we 5 want to be the knights our father want it we promise our father that we will be knights and take over this world Drake: are you crazy! Ted: let me think... uhh.. yeah *BOOM!* (ted puched the rocks then a cave in) Jake and his team: aaaaaaaaaa! (going out from the cave in) Yeb: now (looking at the opening) this way Ryu: *coughing* is everyone ok? Jake: yeah Luis: im ok Hero: were fine Drake: blast it! there crazy! Ryu: they maybe heading for the earth god Luis: we got to get over there! hero: but how the entrance is shut! Jake: then will make another one! (concentraiting then all the rocks stand aside making another entrace) this way! we got to beat them! (the other team was fighting the monsters that was coming jake and the others were having a bad time also) Jake: aw! this is getting gorser and groser! Luis: WIND SLASH! (cut the giant mole) yeah they keep on spitting! Drake: YA! (made an electric rope then made the mole into a digging machine) hope on cowboys! YIHA! Luis: woaH! Jake: YIHAA!! Ryu: YIHAA!! Hero: ride on little cowboy! (they dig and dig then they saw the tim team) Jake: there they are! Ryu: hold right there! (made a fire rope then tide around the luzers! hehe) Jake: this is gota be it (looking at the door) Geb: arrrr!! Tim: (broke out then run to the dorr and then jake and tim went in) real Knights: JAKE! fake knights: TIM! Jake: were are we! Tim: i dont know Earth god: knights thou have come here only one is to wiled me Tim: that me! Jake: naah! Tim: aha! Jake: naah! Tim: aha! EG: enough! only one can be my wilder to prove that he must pass a test Tim: im in! Jake: yeah me too! EG: very well your 1st test is friendship let us see if you are the knight! (disappear then the room change in form) Jake and tim: woah! woah woah! EG: the 1st test is to think of a way to save your friends from this (making an obstacle and then a statue of Ryu was there and red) Jake: ryu! Tim: red! EG: yes now your test is that you have to save them from all kinds of danger BEGIN.... (lots of baulders appear then jake and tim punched everything they got) Jake: you cant keep this up! Tim: oh yeah so do you! Jake: ha im build with strengh Tim: me too! Jake: well lets see! (a big boulder of lava appear then jake made a earth wall the tim punched it to peices but it hitted the statue) Tim: aaaaaaaaaa!! EG: the 1st test have ended jake have won this round now the 2nd test (the room turn to death trap) in this test you must carry your friends on your back without a sratch in the other side of this room but be carfull this is a death trap if you get hit you will die Jake: now his tells us! (carried his statue the nrunning then arrows came out) woah! Tim: (carried his statue then running doging every obstical then won this round) EG: well done know the last and final test (the room chagne into a battle zone then Luis and Ted statues appear) inthis test you must protect them with all your heart if thou heart is low thou have lose.. Jake: what! what those it mean! (looking at the fire balls about to hit his statue then jake made a barrier) Tim: (punching the fireball) this is easy! (looking at jake) hehehe (catching the fireballs then throwing them to jake) hey jake catch! Jake: what! woaH!!! huh!! (trying to save his statue) ah! Tim: not bad! Jake: thankx! ah oh! (a big metiorite was heading both statue) !!!! Tim: this isnt GOOD!! Jake: luis.... (concentraiting with all his heart then made the strongest barrierd he could made Tim only consious of him self Jake: come on! come ON! (the metiorite hit them tim punched and save his statue with no care jake failed but he used it with all his heart) EG: well done Tim: thank you RG: thou have prove to me a knight (going to jake gloves) Tim: what the!? why! Jake: i finaly understand what the rules are protect you friends with all your heart even in death Tim: arrr! *sigh* you win fair and square Jake: thankx hey you not a bad sport after all Tim: well our knighting days are over...... (back to the surface) Red: i cant bielive you lost! Ted: yeah there just kids what happend there!? Tim: guys in there i have learn somthing important and you wont understand at all Luis: wow jake you have a god now! Jake: yeah Ryu: yeah and look! (jake armour evolve) Hero: cool! thought: only one more to go and we can go home! Kids: thank you knights! Jake: hey its our duty! People: we are sorry for our behavior on you we are sorry Hero: oh come on it wasnt big now can we ask somthing? Mayor: yes? hero: can we have some food?
i gtg sleep and can you answer this how to post your story in fan-fic? i already register and put the 1st story i made in it how to post it on the net?
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 18, 2005 17:50:47 GMT -5
it's not bad dragonfire plz continue soon and plz some1 reveiw this over then me plz
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 19, 2005 0:53:20 GMT -5
after finishing there meal the boys ask the mayor where they could find the last god
Mayor: hmm.. the last god well its been long someone ask that question Hero: you mean there were others finding the gods!? Mayor: well yes but they never return some say that there is a black guardian guarding the last god but its over 400 years ago Luis: hmm.. tales like that must be true Jake: this is scary ryu: yeah but we cant do anything about it hero: yes when were done claiming all the gods we can go home! Ryu: your right Drake: well let go, where can we find the last god? Mayor: head that was follow the road go left when you find a cross there you will find the black guardian Luis: thank you sir Jake: yeah thankx Mayor: it is our pleasure to serve the knights plz save our princess Luis: we will Drake: can we bring something to eat? Hero: uhh... ok Drake: Great! (Putting food in his gloves) Luis: thought: i wonder if drake god will be ok in there? TG: woah! (falling food) yeah bring some more! (eating a watermellon) Drake: there that should do it Hero: to the last god! (everyone summoned there horses and ride like the wind) Mayor: plz save our princess....
2 hours later 4:27 pm....
Jake: witch way? Drake: the mayor said go left in a cross Luis: but its dark there and creepy than the right path Hero: hmm... he did said that there was aa dark guardian guarding the last god Jake: your right hmmm... we better head left then (everyone head left where the last god lies) Owls: hoot hoot! Ryu: its getting darker and draker Luis: the wind here is so cold Drake: yeah we better camp (everyone made camp and thinking of a way to beat the guardian) Luis: why dont we ask the gods for help Hero: we cant they wont help until we recover all the gods Jake: you heard what they said (immitating the gods voice): we will help you if the 5 gods have been recover.... Hero Drake jake and Ryu: (laughed!) Luis: hmm.. (looking at his gloves) hmm.. hero: hey are you still thinking about the girls? Luis: yeah i wonder how are they going?... Jake: yeah
4 hours later....
Luis: *shivering* i cant sleep in this cold! ryu: here (giving luis a very hot stone) Luis: *PST!* woah! Ryu: now get back to sleep... Luis: thankx (picked up the stone then need to go to the bathroom) ah oh! umm.. (running to the forest then went you know what not the sit thing) ahhh... hmm!? (found a river) a river.... (washing his face and then a skull apear) AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Jake Drake Hero Ryu: (woke up) LUIS!! (running to the place where luis was) Jake: yo luis! whats up! Luis: the water! look! Hero: (saw dead animals and skeletons) this is creepy! Ryu: You said it! Old Man: hello!? you there dont drink the water! Luis: phew luckily i only wash! Old Man: that a good thing too you would die drinking this , why are you hear sunny? Luis: umm.... where looking for the last god old man: the last god! you say well its a bad thing to go the god is already dead! Everyone: WHAT!!!
brb this computer is so slow!
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Post by stranger on Aug 19, 2005 0:59:34 GMT -5
Very interesting!, pls continue soon
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 19, 2005 2:18:20 GMT -5
thankx!
Hero: what do you mean the god is dead!? Old Man: can you not see the darkness all around us? Luis: no... Old Man: the god died 5 years ago cuz of the guardian poison the guardian only want to kill the god not protecting it Jake: so your telling us that this world will be filled with darkness? Old Man: sadly yes... (acting not to smile) Ryu: hmmm... Jake: yo! where do you live anyway? Old Man: oh uhh i live in a smalllllll! house plz its filled with rats and other things Jake: *sigh* now what are we gona do!? Ryu: uhh.. will be going now Old Man: ok god bye,(in a deep voice)good bye pitiful knights... (disappear to the darkness) Hero: *sigh* Jake: cheer up Hero well uhh.. we can still beat the face of the wizard even without the help of the 5 gods Luis: i dont think we could beat him Jake: now come on luis why did you think of that? Luis: i dont know but i got a feeling we wont make it.. Hero: *sigh* Jake: hmm.... (feeling bad for hero) hero were.. (there gloves shone) what the!? Ryu: huh!? Luis: our gloves! Drake: (everyone gloves shone except hero gloves) Fire God: knights the light god is still alive Thunder god: yes the light god is still alive Drake: but the old man said it died 5 years ago Wind god: he is wrong the sun god was our brother Luis: your brother? Earth god: yes we 5 are brothers Thunder god: we swere to an oath to protect our princess but we failed Fire god: so we hid ourselves in the temple to never again do guardian ship Earth god: but the princess forgive us and told us that 5 young knights would help us in battle Drake: but how can you tell that your brother isnt dead Wind god: we can feel each other pain, sadness, happiness, hate, and hope Luis: so that means that light god is still alive Earth god: yes but barely somthing is hurting him Thunder god: somthing dark UH! (a vision of the light god in trouble!) Earth god: plz hurry! follow the light! *the gods faint* Hero: you heared them! come on!! Jake: but where!? Hero: there! (saw some fireflies) follow those! Ryu: fireflies? hero wait! (everyone ran after hero and come to the sun temple) hero: the door is shut!! Ryu: FIRE BAZOOKA!!! (the door open then they saw the light god in trouble) Light God: *fainted* (being masacard by the Guardian devil) Hero: hey!!! Devil: ROOOOAAAAARRRR!!!!! (whacked hero on the side) Hero: ah! Devil: hahahhaa (in a dip voice) jake: SONICE PUNCH!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! (it just passed throu the deviL) what in the world!? DeviL ROAAAARR! (whacked jake on the side) Ryu: attacks wont work on him use magic! FIRE BAZOOKA!! (it did an effect but not enough) Drake: THUNDER CREST!! (did alot effect but still wasnt enough) *TST!* its not enough! Luis: WIND BLOW!!! (the Devil disappear) yeah! Devil: hehehe.... *BOOM!* (blast luis on the back) Luis: aaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!!!! hero: *getting his breath* (chanting).....(his sword shine and then light all around filling the place with light) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! (slashed the devil in half) DIE!! (the devil only spilt then getting back together and went to the sun god) oh no you dont!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! (slashing the devil into pieces) Devil: RAOR!!! (in pain) Hero: HA! HA! HA! HAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! (final blow!) *BOOM!!!!!* DeviL: ROOOOAAAARRRRR!!!!!!! (lots of him splatted to the walls then some of it went in) Hero: *getting his breath* is it over.....*exausted* Luis: that was AMAZING!!! Hero: thankx how is the sun god Luis: oh....his not in a good condition my Melody wind cant heal him somthing is blocking our magic from him Hero: its still here Jake: but nothing could stand that attack! hero: no i can feel it his hear.... Fire God: he is right a force field is covering our brother and obsorbing his powers to that devil Ryu: is there somthing we could do? Thunder God: no we need to wait for the devil to come back for now we must try to wake the sun god... (everyone tried to break the barrier but its no use) Luis: no use.. Jake: this force field is too strong! Drake: not even a scratch hero: his getting weak.. (looking at the sun god breathing hard) his back! get ready! (looking at devil getting back its shape Everyone: *in a fright*
i gtg my mom want me to you know what i hate
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 19, 2005 17:29:05 GMT -5
ok plz continue when your mom ggets off
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Post by stranger on Aug 20, 2005 0:13:34 GMT -5
yes pls continue soon!
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 20, 2005 0:56:21 GMT -5
Luis: AH! (whiped on to the wall) Ryu: *BOOM! *BOOM!* (did alot of damage) hero: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! (SLASHED THE DEVIL!!) Devil: WOHOHOHO!!!!!!! (an evil and deep thing to say) Jake: *tst!* no use! till that thing is out from the sun god there is no way we could defeat this creep!! hero: oh yes there is!!! AAAAAAAAA!!!!!! (his sword glow brightl) YAAAAAAAA!!! (jumped then made 30 white dragons) 30 DRAGONS!!! (almost killed the monster but it rejuvinate) *TST!* Luis: AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!! WIND SLASH!!!!!!! (missed) DARN IT!! AH! (whiped again) Devil: HAHAHA! Hero: ARR... (looking at the sun god oh i forgot to tell you the gods looks are knights) hang in there.....(looking at the guys trying there best to kill the devil) will make it... Jake: (flame thrower but no effect) Luis: (flame thorwer still no effect) Ryu: (shooting at the devils head but misses) Drake: CALLING THUNDER!!!! (still no effect) Devil: HAHAhAHA!!! (throwing dark balls) Ryu: AAAAHHH!! Luis: AAAAAA! Drake: AAAAAA!!! jake: AAAAAAA!!! hero: AAAAAA!!!! Devil: (about to stomp them) Sun god: (looking at hero then went to hero gloves then everyone gloves then shined) hero: huh!? Sun God: hero....i thank you for protecting me.....i will use everything i got to protect you and all your friends.... hero: huh!? (his gloves shone as bright as the sun changing everything) Jake: WhAT THE! (his gloves shone then the earth coverd him chagning everything) Ryu: *GASP!* (his gloves shone and then Fire Burst to the ground then change everything) Drake: (a bit fright) (his gloves shone and thunder suround him and change also) Luis: (frightened) (his gloves shone and the wind covered him and change also) Devil: AAAARRRR!!!? (Amazed by the transformaition) RAAAAAAAAOOOORRRRR!!!!!! (transformaition complete sorry i dont have pictures of them im not good at making effects and all) everyone: *GASP!* Gods: knights we have now joined you in your heart we have given you our power.... Hero: RIGHT! LETS GO!!!! (Everyone In the coolest knights armour fought the devil bravely) Devil: RAOOORRR!!!!!!!! (tying to swap the knights) jake: EARTH CAGE!!!!! (lots of crystals surounding the devil) Ryu: FLAME DARTS!!! (lots of darts surounding the beast trapping in pain) Drake: SHOCK.....CANNON!!!! (surounding the devil so it cannot escape) Devil: (touched the cage then got shocked and burn) AAAAAAARRRRR!!!!!! Luis: WIND STORM!!!!! (holding the devil in place for the final attack) Devil: ROAR!!! ROARR!!! (trugelling to break free from the cage) ROOOAAARRR!!!! Hero: (Chanting with his god) genu.....mi...ka...si...kuri...mali... (charging for the ultimate magic) huru mi! KA! LU! KKIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!! (100 of gigantic white dragons appear and killing the devil with the help of the cage made by the guys the cage made the white dragons even stronger!) Devil:RRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(vanished) Everyone: (looking at the gods that appear from there eyes) Gods: thank you for saving our brother we are now together at your hands.... (went to the owner of them) Hero: *smiled* Everyone: *fainted* everyone have gathered all the gods, sleeping for there hardwork....no....this is not the end of the story...no....its just the beggining....the begining...of the battle...the battle of there lives.....between....Good....and....Evil.....
this is the continuation of the last post story sorry its short so what do you think?
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Post by amdragfire on Aug 20, 2005 8:43:31 GMT -5
Mad! Is there more?
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 20, 2005 11:11:41 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good plz continue
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 20, 2005 11:32:44 GMT -5
yeah
The Lone Swords man....
after defeating the Devil the team fainted from there incredible power then 3 hours later a young man came.....
Young man: (looking at the knights) hmm.... (poking jake) ahh hello? (still poking but no respond) hmmm... (feeling sorry for there wounds) i hope mom wont be mad for inviting some guests *whisle* (a big wolf came) hey! can you help me carry this? Wolf: Wooof! Young man: thankx!! (he and his wolf carry jake and the others to there home witch is kinds small)
6:59-7:00 am.....
Hero: oooo.....(rubbing his head) what magic was that!?.... (;ooking everwhere blurry) where are we? Young man: (his head appear in the entrance hole) HI! Hero: WOAH! (terrified) Young man: oh im sorry! Hero: uhh... where are we? and who are you? Young man: oh my name is tuck! and your in my tree house! Hero: oh uhh.. why were here OUCH! Tuck: oh better not move your still wounded what happend there? Hero: uhh... i cant remember Tuck: hmmm... well take some sleep ill meet you with my family! Hero: well ok thankx... (going back to sleep) Tuck: i wish mom wont mind...(going down)
4 hours later.....
Luis: *yawn!* (sniffing) hey somthing smells good! huh? where are we? and whats that yummy smell! (going down and then saw some wolves) yinkes!.... (going back up) hey guys! hey guys! everyone: what? Luis: look! were we are! wait where's hero? Hero: woah! (outside playing with the wolves) Everyone: HERO!!! (going down and tried to save hero) Drake: hey get away from him! Luis: ya! ya! out! Hero: (giggling) hahaahahah!! Jakle: is hero laughing or dying? Hero: hahahaaha! Luis: i think his dying from laughing Tuck: hey! what are you doing with my family! Ryu: your family? Tuck: those wolves are my family! Jake: uhhhh...(letting go the wolf) were sorry we thought hero was been eaten Hero: no i wasnt Luis: uhh... well umm.. were realy sorry for hurting your umm family Tuck: that ok some people dont realy care about wolves Drake: uhh question you said that this wolves are your family right? Tuck: yeah Drake: then are you a wolf too? Tuck: yeah (showing his bushy tail) see (wagging) Ryu: i see Tuck: hye what were you doing in the sun temple? Hero: oh umm.. we were saving the god from the devil Tuck: oh! Luis: wait! where's our gloves? Tuck: oh! mr got get it! (getting the gloves) here! i wash them! Drake: uhh... thankx (the gloves was still wet) Ryu: so can you tell me about your self?
i gtg sleep sorry but tommorow im totaly free!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 20, 2005 11:43:47 GMT -5
ok it's really good so far
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 20, 2005 19:15:05 GMT -5
white wolf: rof! rof! rrrr woof! (in english) tuck! what are you doing with those humans!!? Tuck: woof woof raaf (in english) but mom they need help White Wolf: NO! Tuck: but why!? White wolf: humans kill and they dont care about us Tuck: yes they do! white wolf: ENOUGH! i forbid you going to the human world! Hero: tuck... whats the matter (he touch tuck then tuck mother biten hero hands then a flash of light then struck tuck mother) Tuck: MOM! White wolf: thought: are they the one? Tuck: mom are you alright!? White wolf: tuck where did you find them? Tuck: in the sun temple where i always go White wolf: i see Jake: umm.. tuck can you tell us what you were talking about Tuck: uhh... can you tell me are you the knights? Everyone: (looking at each other) yes Tuck: you are!? Luis: uhh why whats the matter? White wolf: (whispering to tuck ears) Tuck: my mom said that there was a evil and terable ghost filled with darkness he then put everything his cruelty to creatures to us we where the greatest swords man in this world but now where just wolves Gods: could it be our brother is still alive? Jake: what! you mean we have to go another temple killing monsters again!!? (everyone looked at him) what? Earth god: yes but this time its the god will kill Luis: i dont understand why what happend? Sun god: the dark god was our older brother he was to lazy to coward too anoying he keep on using dirty tricks on us then when the princess told us she want us to the her guardian our older brother wasnt in then he turn nasty he killed everything he even tried killing the princess but fail now i fear that he have suceeded in capturing our princes no the dark wizard but our brother.... Hero: the Dark God....huh? (every wolf suround them) what is this!?(then they kneel) Tuck: (kneeling) plz help us break my family curse plz i beg you!? Drake: what do you say hero? Hero: lets! but im just wondering what happend to the other people we help (flash back of the people they help) hmm... Luis: so where can we start? Tuck: there is a source of our curse we spotted it in the center of the willow forest many monster live there i think i should escort you there you might get lost jake: ok Wolves: *HOWLING!*
2 hours later
hero: YA! (slashed an ogre) are you sure you know the way? Tuck: RAAA! (slahed a devil bird) yeah were almost there Ryu: are you sure we can trust him? Hero: we got no choice and we gota help Luis: i wonder if they know where we can find the dark wizard Jake: yeah Drake: (zapping the birds) hey guys wait up! Tuck: ah! the opening! drake: hey guys i found some (carrieing fried chicken) WOAH! (drop it) Tuck: yup just as we suspect it (every monster was at the center where the stone lies) Jake: so are we gona come in? ryu: at that rate no way! Drake: maybe our gods can help us again Luis: i think they cant there power might be weak Ryu: now what are we gona do!? Tuck: *whisle loudly* (many mythical creatures arive) will this do? jake: WOAH! how did you do that!? Tuck: wolf call! Luis: wolf call? Tuck: yes i can summon monster here just while hero: we just forgot about the summoning spell Luis: yeah now lets do it! (everyone summoned there spirits) Tuck: aaaaaa (amazed) Everyone: SPIRITS! I SUMMON THI!! hero: lets go!! (everyone battled to the stone the spirits was attacking at high ground thorwing fire balls ice balls thunder balls and flash bomb) hero: yah! Luis: ha! jake: *pow* Drake: *kick!* ryu: (shooting) killing spri! Hero: were almost there! (running like a ninja) Luis: (running to hero) Luis and hero: (looking at each other) ready? yes! (jumped and combining there magic into the improve combine magic) 50 DRAGONS!!!! (many white dragons hitted the stone but only a crack) what!? (the stone then moved and then sucking the monsters in it) what is it doing! Stone: (sucked the monster and then the monsters come out more stronger than ever) Ryu: woah! (dodging) Drake: YIKES! (dodging) Jake: WOAH! (dodging) Luis: i think its alive! Hero: yeah we better kill it in meelee (running towards the stone) AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! (slahed but only went in) Luis: HERO!!!!!!! (a hand went out) hero? (but it turned black and then hero turned to a dark swords men) *GASP!* Drake: is that HERO!? Jake: by the looks of that sword yeah! Hero: (smiling at luis) Luis: ! hero are you o.. AAAAAHHHHH!!! (punched by hero) Hero: hehehe Jake: hero what are you doing!? Hero: (looking at jake very evilily no offence then smiled) Jake: hero? AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! (kicked) Drake: what the heck are you doing hero!!? Hero: (only smiled then vanished and went to drake back and pierced Drake back) Drake: AH! (shocked then fell) Ryu: DRAKE!!!!! (looking at hero then hero looked back) hero come on snap out of it! drake is dying cuz of you plz snap out of it!! hero: (just smiled) (shocked) Luis: (pierced hero to a stun) Ryu: what are you doing is everyone gone mad!? Luis: shoot the stone!! ill heal them both! Ryu: right.... Luis: come on! come on! Wind melody......(drake wounds recover) Drake: (waking up) luis behind you! Luis: what!? (his eyes wide open seing hero still standing) hero! (dodging) *ching ching* (defeding) come on hero! your bleeding to death plz let me heal you!! Hero: (trying to kill luis) Luis: thought: if this keep up hero would die! i gota try! yaaaaaaaaa!!!! (knocking down hero) come on! WIND MELODY!! (recovering but hero stoped him) do you want to die!? Ryu: (looking for the perfect spot) Luis: (doding) *ching ching ching* hey i need help here! tuck: im busy haaa! yaa! (killing monsters) Drake: gotcha! (holding hero) jake: got his feet! Luis: WIND MELODY!!!! (healing hero's wounds) done! lets go! Drake: right! (letting go and then ran) jake: (running) hero: (following them then turn to ryu) Ryu: FIRE BAZOOKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *BOOOOOOMMM!!!!* (the stone burst and then all of its evil went away) Hero: aaaaaaaaa!! (about to slashed Ryu) huh!? Ryu: uhhh... did i forget about your brithday? Hero: *faint* Ryu: hero!! Luis: lots of blood come out i dont think he can survive... Hero: *breathing deeply* Tuck: quick! head back to the village on the double! Luis: thought: hang in there hero....
15 minutes later
Luis: is he gona be ok? Doctor: he got enogh blood too live no worries Luis: i shouldnt attack him Jake: now come on he attack you too Ryu: it was only self defence luis you did what you have to do Drake: now i think you better sleep will watch hero Luis: *sigh*....(going to his room looking at the window where the wolf kids playing) this team is a family too me and hero....
Hope you dont mind about the killing part hero so what do you think guys?
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 20, 2005 19:52:14 GMT -5
i don't but i don't know about hero tho but anyway plz continue when you can
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