Tryp
Young Warrior Dragon
Jimmy The Exploder
Stop that! It's silly![ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by Tryp on Oct 20, 2006 14:28:30 GMT -5
Great White North
Chapter 1
“Yo G, whattup?” asked Jake as he walked into Canal Street Electronics followed by Spud and Trixie. “Very much is up young one” Lao Shi responded as he finished packing a suitcase, “We must get going immediately.” “Where are we going?” Jake asked, “What’s all this about?” “The dragon council has discovered a new dragon that was not known about before” said Lao Shi, “He could be a powerful ally.” “But the problem is the Huntsclan and the Dark Dragon know about him too and everybody wants him on their side” explained Fu dog, “It’s absolutely important that we get him to Draco Isle as soon as possible.” “Okay, so where does he live and how are we going to find him?” asked Spud. “That’s the problem kid” said Fu, “He lives in Canada way out on the west coast in a place called Victoria, all we know is his name is Anthony Townsend and his address.” “Canada!” exclaimed Jake “Isn’t it really cold up there?” Don’t be silly kid, it’s not always cold” said Fu, “Except in the winter, whew I’ll never forget that time.” (Flashback) Fu is trudging over a snow bank. He stops and looks at a polar bear sitting nearby. “Hey buddy! Do you know how to get to Churchill from here?” asks Fu. The polar bear just looks at Fu and then lies down. “Man I’m never going to get lost in Manitoba again” said Fu. “Anyways, I’ve got a connection in Victoria that’ll get us there in no time” he said. “Come, we are leaving now, your friends can come along if they want, we may need some help” said Lao Shi. “Oh and one more thing kid, can you carry my bags?” said Fu pointing to a large pile of luggage. “Aw man!” Jake said.
An hour later, the group arrives in a small dark room. Lao Shi opens the door and they step out into a small alleyway. “Quickly, we must get a taxi to his house” Lao Shi said. The group walks out of the alleyway and find themselves in the Chinatown section of Victoria. After a short taxi ride they arrive in a suburban area. Fu looks at the address on a sheet of paper. “Alright, here’s the place” Fu said pointing at the house in font of them, “Let’s just hope we got here first”. They walk up to the door and Jake rings the doorbell and they wait…
Just thought I’d leave in a bit of suspense there. Just as a note this fan character is loosely based on me. The only thing that is true is my home city; everything else except musical taste and personality is fiction. Also I do not own ADJL I just write about it.
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Tryp
Young Warrior Dragon
Jimmy The Exploder
Stop that! It's silly![ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by Tryp on Nov 10, 2006 23:16:35 GMT -5
Here's chapter 2, please if anybody would write just one review I would greatly appreaciate it, either that or tell me I'm a terrible writer and it this was a waste of time, whatever the case is. Thank you.
Great White North
Chapter 2
The tall, dark haired teenager sat at his desk, listening to Nine Inch Nails and staring into space. “Man there’s nothing to do” he thought, “Everyone’s away; it’s so boring by myself.” All his friends were off somewhere, his parents were in Vancouver for their anniversary and his brother was at camp. Suddenly, the doorbell rang. “Huh, somebody is around” he thought, walking downstairs. When he opened the door he found three kids, an old man and their dog.
“I hear somebody coming” said Jake. The door opened and the teenager stepped out.
“Umm, can I help you?” he asked. “Yes you can” said Lao Shi, “Are you Anthony King?” “Uh yeah, why?” Anthony asked. “You are in grave danger, we must get you out of here” Said Lao Shi urgently. “Trust me kid, you don’t want to be around when the Huntsclan and the Dark Dragon show up” Fu said. Anthony just stood there, stupefied. “Holy parc your dog can talk” he said, taking a step backward, “And who’s the Dark Dragon, dragons don’t really exist.” “Actually, they do” Jake replied. “Oh yeah, prove it” Anthony retorted. “Dragon Up!” Jake shouted his body was consumed by flames, soon, a large red dragon stood where Jake once was. Anthony took another step back, now terrified. “Oh parc” he yelled, “Oh son of a-.” He stopped there, regaining his composure. “Okay, so dragons do exist, but what does this all have to do with me?” he asked, still nervous. “You are a dragon” Lao Shi replied, “A very powerful one, you are needed to help continue the dragon bloodlines.” “You’re not kidding are you?” Anthony asked, “Oh man, I mean-, But how-, oh my god I’m a dragon.” “Yes you are, now we must get you to safety” said Lao Shi, “Before the Hunts…” he was cut off by Jake. “Uh oh, the Huntsclan is coming, I can hear them” Jake said, “We have to hide somewhere.” “There’s a park not far from hear, there’s a forest we can hide in” Anthony whispered, “Come on.”
After a few minutes they found themselves in a clearing of a thickly forested area with only one well worn path leading out. “So if I’m a dragon, how do I turn into one?” Anthony asked. “It’s easy, just think about dragons and shout Dragon Up” Jake replied. “Well, okay, I’ll give it a try” Anthony said, “Dragon Up!” Immediately his body burst into flames, the heat was so intense the ground beneath his feet began to sizzle. The flames receded and a large dragon now stood on the charred earth. His skin was red, similar to Jake’s, his underbelly was white, he had dark brown claws and the spikes down his back were black. He was also big, almost a foot taller then Jake and almost twice his size. Anthony looked at this new body of his, interested. He took one look at his wings, jumped into the air, and soared up to the tree tops. He came back down and landed, then, tilted his head up, and blew a large fireball into the sky. “I’m guessing you like it” Jake asked. “Like it! I Love it” Anthony shouted, grinning foolishly.
“Aha, I knew it, dragons do exist” shouted Professor Rotwood, emerging from the bushes, “Now, you are coming with me” he said, pointing t Anthony.
“Not so fast” roared the Huntsman as he walked out of the thick brush, Rose, #88 and 89 following close behind, “He’s mine.”
“I don’t think so hunter” bellowed the Dark Dragon as he landed in the clearing, followed be Councilor Chang, “He is going to become my new apprentice” he grinned.
“Aw man!” Anthony moaned.
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Post by Tryp on Nov 16, 2006 22:34:56 GMT -5
Chapter 3
Great White North
Chapter 3
“Rose, is that you?” Jake asked. Rose didn’t say anything; she simply nodded her head and winked at him. Jake smiled; he had an idea what she was planning. “I don’t have time for this” the Huntsman growled, “It’s time for you to die.” He swung his staff out, pointing it at Anthony; green energy began to build on the tip of the blade. Anthony started to back away but Jake pulled him back. Suddenly, Rotwood grabbed the Huntsman’s staff and tried to pull it away. “What do you think you’re doing” Rotwood cried, “You are not killing my specimen.” “Let go you idiot!” the Huntsman roared. He tried to pull the staff away from Rotwood, to no avail. “Nein!” Rotwood yelled, “He will make me millions, this will be the greatest discovery since the theory of relativity.” “Neither of you will harm him” said the Dark Dragon. “He is to be my new apprentice, he will be like a son to me” he grinned. The Dark Dragon swung his fist at Rotwood and the Huntsman, knocking both of them into the bushes.
Soon an all out brawl had started. Chang and the Dark Dragon attacked the Huntsman and his apprentices while Rotwood continually tried to steal the Huntsman’s staff, meeting little success. Ten more hunters burst out of the brush and joined the battle.
During this confusion Jake and the others stood off to the side, watching. Anthony turned to Jake. “Umm, just who are all these guys?” Anthony asked. “Okay, I’ll give you the rundown” Jake replied. “That’s the Huntsman; he’s the leader of the Huntsclan, an ancient group that hunts magical creatures” he said, pointing at the tall hunter in what looked like ninja gear. “Those are some of his hunters and those are his two apprentices and- hey what happened to Rose?” Jake said. Rose was nowhere to be seen. “Who’s this Rose girl?” Anthony questioned. “Oh she was this girl I really liked, until I found out she was a member of the Huntsclan” Jake sighed, “I’ll tell you more about it another time.” “Okay, so anyway, who are the rest of these… people?” Anthony asked. “Oh…right” Jake said, snapping out of his daze. “That’s the Dark Dragon, he’s one bad dude, I wouldn’t mess with him” Jake said, “And that’s his assistant, Chang, she used to be a member of the dragon council until they found out who she was working for, and finally that’s…” “That’s Professor Rotwood, he’s the mythology teacher at our school” Rose said, popping up behind Jake, “He’s kind of a wacko.” “Rose!” Jake said, startled, he swung around to find her standing there in her normal clothes, in one hand she had her Huntsgirl uniform bunched up. “Jake, I love you” she said, stepping towards him. Jake changed back to his human form and swept her into his arms. “I love you too, Rose” he said as he brought his lips to hers. The kiss was soft and passionate and everything he hoped it would be. She put one hand around his waist and the other around his neck, pulling him closer.
After a minute they broke apart, they didn’t want to but they needed to breath. The battle was over now, and all sides showed some scars from the fighting. The Huntsman looked over at his niece, disgusted to see that she was in the arms of that American Dragon. “So… this is how it is?” he asked grimly, “I brought you in, protected you and taught you the ways of the Huntsclan, and this is how you repay me!” he spat, “How dare you.” “I don’t care, I love him” Rose replied, “I quit your pathetic clan!” “Very well then” the Huntsman said calmly, “I have come for him anyways” he pointed at Anthony. Everyone turned towards Anthony who had taken a couple more steps backward. He was very nervous now; sweat was running down his forehead. He began to back away slowly. “GET HIM!” the Huntsman yelled, charging at Anthony. That was all the motivation anyone needed, in an instant they were all running t him, hoping they would get there first. Anthony turned and started to run as fast as he could, he didn’t want to die. As he ran he turned around to see how far ahead he was. As he did this he forgot about an old tree that and fallen onto the path long ago. As he turned he tripped over this, falling head first into the ground. “Oh sh-” was all he was all he got out.
Anthony hit the ground hard. The path was dotted with patches of small, sharp rocks as well as some bigger rocks and roots. His head landed in one of these patches, the rocks slashing into the left side of his face. His chest hit a large root, knocking the wind out of him and breaking two of his ribs. One large rock jutted out of the ground where he fell. This rock cut deeply into his underbelly, leaving a terrible gash behind.
Everyone stopped where they were, starring at Anthony. He lay on the ground, gasping for air in jerky breathes, his chest rising and falling sharply. The white of his underbelly was smeared red with blood and his face was scarred with deep cuts that were bleeding badly. This new development wasn’t good for anyone…except maybe the Huntsclan.
Behold my bad ending! I’ll have updates soon so keep watching for them. Republic of Vancouver Island
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Tryp
Young Warrior Dragon
Jimmy The Exploder
Stop that! It's silly![ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by Tryp on Dec 27, 2006 16:48:31 GMT -5
Great White North
Chapter 4
They all stood there, looking at the wounded dragon. Everyone’s initial shock had worn off, including Anthony’s; he was lying on the ground, howling in pain, both his hands were clutching the gashes on his face. The Huntsman broke the paralysis that gripped everyone by walking over to Anthony, raising his staff, preparing to end the dragon’s life.
“This will shut you up once and for all” the Huntsman growled as he brought the staff down towards Anthony’s chest. Jake finally broke out of his daze and lunged at the Huntsman, placing a kick right onto his stomach. The Huntsman was knocked back onto the ground with the wind, knocked out of him.
“Trixie! Spud! Grab him and get him outta here!” Jake said urgently. Trixie, Spud and Fu took hold of Anthony’s arms and legs and slowly walked him away from the battle. “I’m staying with you Jake” Rose said, walking over to him, “I owe my uncle some payback.” Jake, Rose and Lao Shi stood side by side, ready to keep the others away from Anthony.
“Argh, you aren’t getting away that easy” the Huntsman yelled, diving at Rose, his Huntstaff glowing bright green. “Rose no!” Jake cried as he jumped between Rose and the Huntsman. Jake caught the blade of the Huntstaff mere inches away from his face. The Huntsman threw all his weight into the staff and the blade moved closer until it was only centimetres away from ending Jake’s life. Suddenly, a fireball flew through the air and slammed into the Huntsman’s staff. The staff was knocked out of the Huntsman’s hands and smashed into a tree, its blade embedded in the trunk.
“Next time it will be you I aim for.” Lao Shi said as he reverted back to his human form. The Huntsman ran to retrieve it when the Dark Dragon stepped into his path.
“We have unfinished business.” The Dark Dragon snarled. “Indeed we do.” Replied the Huntsman calmly. In a flash the Huntsman darted around the Dark Dragon and pulled his staff free of the tree. He swiveled around and fired a blast of green energy at the Dark Dragon. The Dark Dragon dodged the blast and blew a fireball at the Huntsman in return. Once again the battle started as Chang and #88 and #89 leapt into action. As the fight raged Jake, Rose and Lao Shi snuck into the thick underbrush and escaped the scene.
They quickly returned to Anthony’s house, where they found Trixie, Spud and Fu kneeling beside Anthony. Fu turned slowly to face Jake, Rose and Lao Shi.
“He’s not doing well.” Fu said gravely.
Sorry to leave you hanging again but I need to start outlining the next couple of chapters and it’s taking a long time. I don’t know when the next chapter will be ready but I don’t have much time to write. Anyways, please R&R. Republic of Vancouver Island
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