fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Apr 12, 2007 13:43:18 GMT -5
Okay, I FINALLY have this up. I hope you enjoy...
Chapter One
"Wave your chains in the air! Wave 'em like you just don't care! Yeah!" Jake yelled gleefully as the arrows sliced through the chains and shackles around Jake's, Silver, Clooney, Reggie and Bertha's ankles. Rose took out her glowing arrow and prepared to shoot the American Dragon down.
"One dragon shish-ka-bob coming right up." She said as she shot the arrow. The arrow soared through the air and planted itself in Jake's spine. Jake's eyes widened in shock and he let out a yell of pain as he fell 30 somewhat feet to the ground below barely conscious as the Huntsclan approached him.
"Is he dead?" A Huntsclan member asked.
"There's only one way to find out." The Huntsman said evilly as he yanked the arrow out of Jake's back, making Jake yell out in pain.
"Bind and gag him." The Huntsman ordered and Rose wrapped chains around Jake's wrists and snout tightly. "And carry him back to camp."
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dragon.up.resource
Dragon-in-training
ISH BAYLEEF
Poor Pikachu. >.<[ss:American Dragon | Season 1]
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Post by dragon.up.resource on Apr 12, 2007 13:45:13 GMT -5
Short for an intro, but what an intro. OMG mood to write more Bayleef killed even further. MORE. MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. XDD keep it going!
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Post by twg519 on Apr 12, 2007 15:24:24 GMT -5
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! write mroe!
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Post by roselovesjake on Apr 12, 2007 16:28:06 GMT -5
Great Begining~
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Apr 14, 2007 11:47:49 GMT -5
Chapter Two
THe Huntsclan half dragged, half carried Jake back to the campsite where Rose took more chains and chained Jake tightly to a stake.
"Can I slay him now, master?"
"No Huntsgirl. The American Dragon has been a thorn in my side for too long. I want him to suffer. Let him bleed to death."
"But, then how can I become a member of the Huntsclan? I have to slay him!" Rose protested.
"You shot the arrow, didn't you?" The Huntsman said. "Now watch over him and come get me when he's dead." THe Huntsman then walked away leaving Jake and Rose alone.
Jake was getting weaker by the second. He could fell the blood flow out all over his chained hands. He was so tired, and so weak. He couldn't keep his form much longer.
"I can't wait to see the light die from your eyes!" Rose said. "I just wish I knew who you were."
That was it. Jake had lost too much blood. He lost control of his form and returned to his human self. THe chains that were around his snout fell into his lap. Rose gasped.
"Jake! Oh my god!" Rose rushed over to Jake. "Jesus, your really hurt. I have to get you out of here. I'm going to get you to a doctor. I promise."
"Rose, it's too late for me." Jake choked out.
"Don't say that!" Rose said asn she took out a key and unlocked Jake and then unchained his wrists. "I won't let you die."
Please read and review. I think that it might take me a while to update. I still plan to take this some other places, but in the third chapter, I kind of got myself a little trapped, so it might not be so soon.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Apr 14, 2007 15:08:45 GMT -5
SO AWESOME!!
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on Apr 14, 2007 15:11:04 GMT -5
Thanks. You can also review my other one.
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on May 19, 2007 20:54:51 GMT -5
Chapter Three
Jake lied there with Rose standing over him.
"Get up." Rose begged.
"I can't... I can't stand on my feet. I'm too weak."
"I'll carry you." Rose said as she picked Jake up. "Lean on me." Rose slowly made her way to the nearest cave and gently set Jake down.
"I'm so tired." Jake whispered.
"Jake, if you fall asleep, you'll die."
"It's probably for the best." Jake couldn't keep his eyes open much longer.
"Wait a minute. Jake, do you have your cell-phone?"
"Yeah." Rose went over to Jake's side, reached into his pocket and pulled out his red cell phone.
"What's your number? I'll call your parents."
"No." Jake begged. "My dad doesn't know about the whole magical world. Call Gramps."
"What's the number?"
"Give me the phone." Rose handed Jake the phone, who slowly dialed the number. Soon, he got an answer.
"Hello?"
"Jake, where have you been? Your parents are worried sick!"
"Gramps, I fell into one of the Huntsclan's traps. I--" Jake stopped. He was too tired. Too weak. He set his head down with a big thud.
Rose snatched the phone out of Jake's hands.
"Listen, Jake's hurt badly. He needs help. You need to get here before he bleeds to death."
"Huntsgirl." Gramps growled. "What have you done to my grandson and how do you know his name?"
"I go to school with Jake. We were sort of dating. I shot him. I didn't know it was him. I'm sorry!"
"Where are you?'
"Somewhere in a forest. We're in a cave. We're just outside Central Park."
"Hold on. I'll come get you." and with that, he hang up. Rose set down the phone and tried to relax, but she saw the Huntsman and the rest of the Huntsclan standing outside the cave.
"Tsk tsk tsk." The Huntsman sighed. "I can't believe you've betrayed us. I can't believe it's come to this." as he said this, he raised up his staff, right at Rose's heart.
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Post by rosealicous on May 19, 2007 21:09:03 GMT -5
Cool. a varation of the hunted awesome!
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on May 19, 2007 21:09:52 GMT -5
AH! NOOOOO rose has to live! *faints*
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fudogg
Young Warrior Dragon
I've seen Dead Man's Chest enough times to know that this is not a good thing...[ss:Lao Shi]
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Post by fudogg on May 20, 2007 22:39:57 GMT -5
Chapter Five
"Huntsgirl, how could you betray me for a dragon?"
"He goes to my school. He cares about me. He is the only boy who is kind, pure, generous and he sees me for what I truly am."
"And what's that? A stupid, backstabbing Prostitute?!"
"Master, what the Huntsclan does is wrong. They're living creatures just like you and I."
"They are sick, disgusting, evil and inferior monsters and right now you are just as bad as them." The Huntsman's staff then started glowing. "You're precious American Dragon can't protect you now, and once I'm finished with you, I'll turn him into a pair of boots."
"Jake, please wake up." Rose begged.
"Look at him." The Huntsman laughed. "He's probably already dead. Don't worry, Huntsgirl. You'll be joining him soon."
Suddenly, before the Huntsman could do anymore, a huntstaff burst out of his chest, the blood splattering in Rose's face. Gasping, the Huntsman fell to his knees and Silver was standing behind him clutching the staff.
"Hunts-b*stard." Silver said. Clooney then came with a chain and wrapped it around the Huntsman's throat, strangling him. After about a minute and a lot of gasps and gags, the Huntsman fell over stone dead. Bertha then picked him up and crushed him with her bare hands, what was left of his mangled corpse fell to the ground and was kicked aside. Terrified, the rest of the Huntsclan fled.
"Thanks." Rose said.
"Why are you thanking us? You're next!" Reggie yelled.
Oh my, the Huntsman deserved that for calling Rose that really bad name. Anyway, please read and review, and while you're at it, you can also read my other one called "These Tears We Cry", it's pretty interesting and very emotional.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on May 22, 2007 12:47:54 GMT -5
Ok...graphic. *hurls* LOL
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Post by twg519 on Jul 10, 2007 15:13:26 GMT -5
update pwetty pwease.
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amdrag1
Student
check it out yo, the amdrag is in da hizhouse[ss:American Dragon | Season 2]
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Post by amdrag1 on Sept 18, 2007 11:58:43 GMT -5
very good update please
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