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Post by justicez on Jun 16, 2007 7:24:29 GMT -5
can't wait for the next chapter,this is soo good XD
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jun 22, 2007 21:05:35 GMT -5
I know. It's kinda like a drug.. But good for you!
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Post by roselong121 on Jun 26, 2007 21:27:55 GMT -5
Sorry I haven’t wrote anything in quite some time. I’ve been sick. It really sucked. I still have the lingering of a cold, but at least I can breathe now.
“I wonder if that door is the one that will lead to the talisman they need.”
After meeting 21 A.K.A Blake, Jake and his crew had headed over to his house. They were looking at some holograms of the security surrounding one of the items that Blake would need to bring the Huntsman back.
“Well, what about this window? Security seems pretty lax around that area.” Rose suggested pointing at an east facing window on the side.
“What are you all working on? A school project?” Mr. Long asked now seeing the plans for the building. “Or is it Dragon stuff?”
“Well dad, Rose and I need to figure out how to get this ancient necklace before Blake can get his hands on it. We are simply just trying to figure out a way to get past all of the security.”
“Well good luck with that. I guess this whole dragon thing requires spy work. Why are you guys needing to protect it anyway? Some giant ogre want it?” Jonathan was quite still confused on how to understand his son’s “work.” Of course he was still trying to comprehend the fact that with two words; Jake could become a large red dragon.
“Actually Mr. Long, Jake and I are trying to stop the Huntsclan from bringing back the Huntsman.” Rose replied in a matter of fact tone.
“Uh-huh, and those Hunting peoples hate dragons right?” Jake let out a sigh. He had yet to explain everything about the Huntsclan to his father. He knew it would take a couple of hours to explain everything to him and they couldn’t afford to waste any time what so ever.
“Sorry dad, I’ll um explain everything later.” Jake replied pulling out his cell phone. As Jake’s father left the room still confused as ever. Jake dialed up Fu dog. “Yo Fu, I’m gonna need a potion.”
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As they reached the museum it was nearly midnight. Jake grabbed onto Spud, Trixie, and Rose as he dragoned up and flew to the window with them. Spud whipped out his laptop and immediately began to hack into the security system.
“Okay, you can open the window now.” Jake squeezed his claws along the window sill forcing it open. They all climbed into the dark halls. Spud clicked a few more keys and brought up the security cameras. “Doesn’t look like Blake is here yet.” Spud concluded.
“Jake and I will head to the exhibit and grab the necklace. Spud, Trixie you guys can stay here and alert us if anyone is coming.” Rose and Jake walked over to the next room.
“So what is so special about this necklace?” Jake asked as they crossed through a Greek exhibit. All he knew was that it was one of the main ingredients needed to open the portal.
“Well, from legend; it says that it was owned by Merlin. One of the most powerful wizards of all time.” Rose replied as they spotted it shining in the moonlight.
“Yo, Spud we got it. We’re heading back to you. Spud, Spud?!” Jake became rather worried as he heard static coming from Spud’s end. “We gotta hurry, I think Blake is here.”
“Wow, and here I thought you had no brain.” Rose and Jake spun on heel to face Blake. “By the way, thanks ever so much for shutting off the security for us.” Jake stared down Blake.
“Where’s Spud, and Trix?”
“Relax, they’re fine. It’s yourselves that you should be worried about.” Blake snapped his fingers and the other guards enclosed on Rose and him. Jake immediately started fighting off the henchmen. He swung his tail around them; knocking them all to the ground.
“Ha, for being the big bad Huntsclan ya’lls game is weak.” Jake exclaimed shooting a bit of fire at one of them. Rose meanwhile was facing off with Blake. She was ducking and dodging perfectly.
“Well, it seems that you have been training.”
“Yeah, especially since you are losing quite terribly.” Rose replied nearly slicing Blake’s arm.
“Well, you’ll end up giving me that necklace if you care about your precious dragon.”
Blake then whistled. Rose looked over to see that all the others were closing in on Jake. Blake had gotten within the circle and was standing near him. Jake looked like he was in pain. Just then she realized what was causing him to act that way.
“Sphinx hair.” She muttered trying to get to him. She knew that Sphinx hair was a dragons greatest weakness. It sucked away their power until they could barely move. She watched terrified as Jake’s Dragon form faded and he fell to the ground. Blake moved quickly and grabbed the item from Rose.
“It would be better if you just gave up before something happens to him.” He whispered into Rose’s ear. Just then the window shattered and they retreated as Spud and Trixie came into the room.
“We’re here!” Spud exclaimed swinging a Huntstaff into the wall. “Whoops.”
Oooo, looks like poor Jake suffered another Sphinx hair attack. And Blake really got inside Rose’s head.
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Post by roselong121 on Jun 29, 2007 1:49:54 GMT -5
I hope this chap was just as good.
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Post by justicez on Jun 29, 2007 4:01:53 GMT -5
Yeah its very good XD
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jun 30, 2007 20:12:34 GMT -5
Aw no! Jakey!
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Post by roselong121 on Jul 5, 2007 23:20:12 GMT -5
Hope you all are doing quite well nowadays. I HAVE cable!!!! Oh, happy days…
Rose sat twisting her mask as Gramps gave Jake some elixir. Rose had never seen Sphinx hair in action before and to her it seemed as if Jake was dieing. The way his face looked as it touched his scales was far too much for Rose to want to see again.
“Rose, what happened?” Rose snapped her attention back to Jake. He was finally awake. He still looked a bit out of it but was sitting up straight. “Did they get away with the talisman?” Jake asked as he looked around to find himself in his grandfather’s shop.
“Yes, they did. I’m just glad you’re okay.” Rose replied as there was a loud crash. They all laughed as they saw what it was.
“Dude, I think that wasn’t the off switch.”
“Spud, Give me that right now! Next thing you know you’ll set off the self destruct on it or something.” Trixie scolded Spud grabbing the Huntstaff they had swiped from Blake’s crew out of his hands. “I swear boy.”
“Well, looks like we’ll need to find out what their going after next and beat them to it.” Jake remembered that last time Blake had not beaten them to the item but still won “ or at least try to.”
“Not right this minute kid. Your powers are kinda still taking a power snooze.” Jake lowered an eyebrow at Fu.
“What he means grandson, is that your powers need time to repair the damage done to you by the Sphinx hair.” Gramps replied taking the elixir and putting it back onto it’s proper shelf.
“I don’t get it. Last time I was exposed to this junk it barely affected me; all of a sudden my powers are like on shut down?” Jake commented loudly as he tried to stand up.
“Listen kid,” Rose helped Jake to his feet as Fu began to explain the horrid effects Sphinx hair had on dragons. “And well, that’s why it made you so much weaker...”
“Wait, so you’re telling me that because it touched my skin it made me way weaker?” Jake crossed his arms harshly, making him nearly fall over. “Aw man..”
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As Jake got to school the next day Rose helped him with his text books. Other kids in the halls chuckled silently at them.
“Well, well look who needs help carrying his books to class. Jake wimpy Long!” Brad teased as Rose glared at him.
“Why don’t you ever leave Jake alone?!” Rose started shouted as she started going off on Brad. “I mean what is wrong with you? Are you just so ashamed of what you are and have to take it out on others who have better lives than you?!” Rose’s shouting echoed in the halls as the students around them scrambled out of site. Brad stood silently as she and Jake walked off.
“Thanks, although you didn’t have to alert the entire world about Brad.” Jake said grasping her hand. He had wanted to scream at Brad like that, well not exactly like that, but something along the lines of that.
“No big, I just have always wanted to do that.” Rose squeezed his hand tightly. “Besides, no one messes with my B.F.”
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As they entered into Gramps shop they found the place a complete mess. It looked as if someone had ransacked through just pulling everything apart.
“Gramps?” Jake called out as he looked around; there was neither a hide nor hair of Gramps or Fu dog. “Gramps, Fu!”
“Don’t bother; you might as well save your strength for fighting me.” Rose and Jake saw a Blake emerge from the shadows. “Well, looks like that little Sphinx hair treatment that I gave you worked out quite well.”
“You leave him alone!” Rose exclaimed stepping in front of him. She knew that he was after Jake.
“Clued into my plan now did you Huntsgirl? Well, looks like I’ll have to just take you both.” Blake grabbed out a small device. Rose’s eyes went wide as she immediately recognized the item. “I see you recognize this. Sweet dreams.” Rose and Jake immediately fainted.
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Post by justicez on Jul 6, 2007 3:33:44 GMT -5
What did Blake do!?I wanna see more,this is soooooo good XD
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jul 6, 2007 12:42:13 GMT -5
Whoa.. what the heck?
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Post by ds69705 on Jul 6, 2007 15:35:08 GMT -5
This is very Dramatic, Well Done.
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Post by roselong121 on Jul 7, 2007 0:15:23 GMT -5
Okay, so as you all know,. Blake’s BAD news… I think I will have to draw a pic of him on of these days… BTW..
“Where, where are we?” Rose muttered as she snapped back to life. She tried to move her arms only to find that they were constricted by chains. “Jake?” she saw him now, he was tied up next to her. They weren’t in just normal chains oh no, Rose had recognized the chain work immediately. They were the unicorn horn binding ones that not just dragon fire could break. It required a key and not just any key but a key shaped like a four leaf clover.
“Rose, I’m so glad to see you awake. I’ve been trying to break the chains it just isn’t working.” Jake tried to muscle his way out again.
“You should save your strength dragon.” Rose glanced over to see him chuckling with his arms crossed. “You’ll be needing it.”
“You horrid monster. Why don’t you just leave Jake and I alone!?” Rose exclaimed.
Blake walked over and stood about one inch away from Rose. “Why do you think you deserve a happy life while my master is trapped inside a portal? You get to be everything you want to be, a cheerleader” he noted noticing she was in her cheer uniform. “ you even get to be with your precious dragon-boy.” Blake walked back over to the fire and glanced up at the moon. “Well, soon our guest will be joining us and he will be very happy to relive you of that privilege.”
Rose began to try and reach for the key with her foot but no luck. She couldn’t even reach the tree stump. Blake and his minions began to gather around the fire. “Now time to begin the summoning!” Rose’s and Jake’s eyes went wide as they watched a portal begin to open before them. Out dropped down a man, as he raised his head to their eye level they both recognized him. “The Huntsman.”
“Ah, finally out of that horrid vortex. I mean seriously that vortex I was in was awful.” Just then he noticed Rose. “Ah Huntsgirl, long time no see. Are you having a fun at my little party?” he chuckled as he watched her being terrified.
“Leave her alone!”
He turned to face Jake. “Ah the American dragon I presume or is it Jake Long?” he walked over to Blake.
“Master, I am not worthy to stand within our presence.” He bowed deeply presenting Huntsmaster with his cape and crest. “Well done number 21. you even gathered my friends Huntsgirl and the dragon.” Huntsman spoke with a very cool and calm tone. “I think it’s about time they have a little reunion with me.” He turned to Blake. “Remove their chains.” He simply did as he was told to do. “So Huntsgirl and dragon, I think we should play a little game. It’s called “Fight to the finish.” There are no rules.”
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Huntsmaster started off by swinging his Huntstaff at them firing green blasts of energy at them. Rose started doing flips to avoid the blasts as Jake dragoned up and began to fire back his own blasts of fire. The Huntsman simply twirled his staff and deflected all of the fire balls. “Aw man.” Jake exclaimed as he and Rose dodged more of the attacks he dished out. “It’s over American Dragon, Jake Long. Prepare to be slain!” The Huntsmaster was about to deliver the final strike just as a small silver ball rolled in between the both of them. Jake recognized it and rolled out of the way while the Huntsmaster was blown backwards. Rose looked over to see Gramps, Fu, Haley, and Sun ready to fight. As the other huntsguards began to attack Gramps and the others Rose got a hold of a Huntstaff and took out two guards with it.
“We will meet some other day American Dragon. And by then I will slay you.” With a zap and a green flash of light the Huntsmaster, Blake, and all other Huntsguards disappeared before their eyes. Jake and Rose celebrated their victory but still remembered that he would return.
You may think it’s the end but, it’s not.. More adventures await our young heros.. R and R.
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Post by ` SAY WHA ?! on Jul 7, 2007 2:37:25 GMT -5
nice! I LOVE IT!
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Post by justicez on Jul 7, 2007 2:46:46 GMT -5
Wow,that was fast.Nice chapter,write more! XD
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Jul 9, 2007 17:57:46 GMT -5
Awesome! Great work sis! I LOVE it!
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Post by roselong121 on Jul 15, 2007 15:26:18 GMT -5
I’m taking a bit of a break from my other story ( Dragon and Slayer) since it isn’t as good as I thought it would be, either that or reviews are just kinda slow… Anyways.. Here’s the next chap of dun dun dun DUN!!! American Freshman: Jake Long…
As Rose and Jake made their way down the hall to homeroom, Rose let out a sigh. Jake was a little worried about her; Rose had never acted like this.
“What’s up?” Jake asked trying to get an answer as to find the reason of her sighing.
“Well, its just homecoming is this week and well, there are no posters or anything up for it.”
“Oh yeah,” Jake began to remember the fact that he and Rose had never gotten to got with each other to a dance, much less homecoming. “We actually get to go together this year. No you showing up with the Huntsclan and battling.”
“Like, attention all you students! Okay I, your activities supervisor have some news on our upcoming homecoming dance.” Stacey was standing near a table surrounded by her other cheerleading cronies holding a stack of paper. “This year for homecoming its all about perfect matches.” Everyone around began to chatter about who was going to be their date. “Um, like I wasn’t done talking! This test will determine who you are destined to be with for the dance. It will tell you who your perfect match is.”
Jake looked at the test with disgust; he didn’t need any test to tell him who he was destined to be with. He knew who he truly loved. “Why do we have to do this anyways?” Jake whined.
“Because like, you have to. All the others are going to have to do it so either do it or don’t come to the dance.” Stacey said very matter of fact like. “I already know who I am going to get to go with...” Spud said glancing in Stacey’s direction.
“Can you believe this? Ridiculous huh?” Rose asked as she was filling out her sheet.
“Yeah, totally. Just about as ridiculous as that Animology fad that was going around a few months ago.”
“Yeah, how can an A, B, C, D test decide if you are with the right person.” Rose commented as she finished. “Okay, it’s time to turn it in. I already know my answer though.” She winked at Jake as she submitted it into the machine. Jake did the same, but he was a little nervous. “What if she isn’t my “perfect match?”
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Well, have they posted the results yet from the test?” Jake asked as they got into their last hour.
“Yep, their right up there.” Spud replied acting depressed. “Aw come on Spud, just because you didn’t get Stacey doesn’t mean you can’t have a good time with what ever other girl you got. Who knows she might be the one you’ve been looking for.” Spud raised an eyebrow at Jake.
“You think I wanted to get roasted like a marshmallow?”
“What are you talking about Spud?” Jake asked not yet to look at the list.
“I got your GF as my perfect match.” Jake’s eyes widened in fear. “and well you got..”
“Stacey?!”
ooo, more evilness. I’m telling ya Jake and Rose are so kept apart it’s not even funny. R and R. Oh, and please check out my other story that I put out.
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