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Post by superspud234 on Mar 8, 2007 15:53:53 GMT -5
Chapter 1: The arrival.
It was Friday afternoon and the seventh graders of Millard Fillmore middle school were all on a bus on a school Trip. There destination Camp Learnalot. Jake Long and his friends were also on the bus. "Man how long does it take for a bus to drive across the state?" asked Jake. He was sitting next to Spud with Trixie behind them. "I dunno but if we don't get there soon i'm gonna flip!" said Trixie. "Well it is Rotwood whos driving. Probably never driven a car in his life!" The bus jolted. For fun Jake and Spud screamed, "Whiplash! AHHHHH!" "Shut up you hoodlums!" replied a pretty ticked off Rotwood. "Hey Spud i got an idea!" "What Jake?" "Lets crawl underneath the seats and scare the crap out of Brad!" "Yeah! Where is Brad sitting?" "The seat infront of Courtney and Rose." "Ok you lead the way." Jake slid under the seat followed by Spud. They crawled on their bellies avoiding the gum and dirt, until they were one seat away from Brad. Rose and Courtney were chatting about the trip. Courtney thought she saw something beneath them. "Hey Rose.." "Yeah?" "Is it me or is Jake and his mate Spud under the seat?" They whispered to the boys. "Hey what you guys doing?" asked Rose. "Shhh! Were sneaking up on Brad." snigerianed Spud. "Errm why?" "To scare the s*** out of him!" replied Jake. The boys contiued until they were right underneath Brad. "Ready Spud?" "Heck Yeah!" "3...2...1..." "RARRRRRRRRWWWWWW!!!!" shouted the boys. Brad squealed like a little girl. Everyone laughed. The bus came to a sudden holt. Rotwood got out of his seat and walked over to were Jake and Spud were. "JAKE LONG! ARTHUR SPUDINSKI! WHAT ZE HELL ARE YOU TWO DOING?" "Ermm hi principal Rotwood. We were just... looking for...rotten...fruit! To collect for the enviroment. yeah!" said Jake. "BOTH OF YOU GET UP!" The boys got up. "SIT DOWN HERE!" they sat down in the seat where Brad had been. "AND BEHAVE! WHEN WE GET OFF THIS BUS, COME TO MY QUARTERS!" "Awww man..." "Silence!" The bus pulled into a grand place with trees and Cabins. They pupils got off the bus and were told to head to the Meeting Post. A man in uniform came out and said, "Let me introduce you kids to your camp leader, Mr.Granger." Out stepped a man about 5ft 10, with blonde short hair and a moustache. "He looks really familar." said Rose to Jake. "Chill Rose its probably a little Deja vu!" he replied. "Welcome pupils to Camp Learnalot. Before we can begin let me tell you the rules. one, no fun what so ever. two, No slang, funky hair or inapropiete clothes. three, No going near the opposite genders. and four, no entering building 5! Anyone who breaks these rules will be punished badly! Now would you all form a line to recive you uniforms!" The kids formed a line. "Man these are some stupid rules!" said Jake. "Yeah i know." replied Spud. "Well i don't care! I'm gonna see my mates if I want to or not!" Jake walked over to were the girls were but was stopped by a big tall well built man wearing a uniform. "Where do you think you're going? Didn't You here Mr.Granger?" "Im sorry." replied Jake who walked away. Meanwhile Trixie and Rose had just witnessed this. "Trixie did you see that? Jake got stopped from seeing us! Somethings wrong. That Mr. Granger guy looks really familar." said Rose. "Well we can't do anything yet, so lets go and unpack." replied Trixie. The girls left for there camps. "Soon the magical creatures among them will be revealed!" said a mysterious voice.
Ooooh!!!! To be contiued...
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Mar 8, 2007 17:53:35 GMT -5
Haaah, Brad DOES scream like a girl. That baby. XD AND OH NOES. The magical creatures of the world! DOOMED TO THE FATE OF... uh.... THAT MYSTERIOUS VOICE THING. Yeah. Spulunky. D:
OMG. This is totally awesome so far. How dare you keep readers in suspense! Update soon!
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Post by redemption on Mar 8, 2007 17:55:31 GMT -5
Ooooooohhhhhh.....
Seems interesting so far. I especially love how Brad screams like a girl. XD
Update soon!
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Post by superspud234 on Mar 9, 2007 17:01:16 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments Redemption and ¢¾ Gaara&Shino ¢¾! Heres next chapter!!
Chapter 2: the sneakout.
Jake and Spud were sat in Rotwood's cabin at 9.30pm. They were there because they endangered the saftey of others by making Brad scream and leaving there seats. Rotwood took his seat and talked to the boys. "So I hope you two are happy. Because you are reciving a week's detention for this." Let me tell you a tale about two boys who didn't listen to their superiors." Rotwood raved on about his days as a German schoolboy and all that crap for about an hour. Finally his dismissed Spud and Jake. They headed back to the boys camp. "Man Rotwood is seriously messed up!" moaned Jake. "Too true." agreed Spud. "You know, I think its time we have a little fun around here. Don't you Spud?" "What are you suggesting?" "Get your skateboard and we'll have a little fun." snigeriand Jake. "Ok!" The two opened the camp window and climbed out. They skated off into the night.
Meanwhile in the girls camp....
Trixie and Rose were unpacking their stuff. "Girl would you shut up about how you think that Mr.Granger guy is really familar!" Cried Trixie covering her ears. "Sorry. So Trixie hows life going?" asked Rose. "Me? Not bad. Can't say the same about Jake though." "What do you mean?" "Well ever since the love cruise hes just lost it. Just sitting their looking at that picture of you and him." Rose became worried. She hadn't wanted to hurt Jake, but she was a distraction to him. If what Trixie told her was true, then it seemed he was more distracted than ever! Rose sighed. "Well I haven't really felt that good either. I just miss Jake soo much. Its just I can't bare the thought of him getting hurt because of me." "Girl his heads messed up. You know when you ran away, Jake became so depressed. He wrote poems, stayed in his room for days and even became a monk!" This made Rose laugh. She could just see Jake as a monk. "Rose just be grateful he didn't get the haircut." said Trixie. There was a knock at the door. Rose opened it. Courtney was standing there looking like she was gonna burst. "You'll never guess what!" she giggled. "What?" replied Rose and Trixie. "Words came out that two boys are breaking the rules by skateboarding around the camp!!!!" "Ohh nooo!" sighed the girls.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 9, 2007 18:34:18 GMT -5
AWESOME WORK! keep going!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Mar 9, 2007 18:38:44 GMT -5
WOOOOWWW. Jake and Spuddy are rebels. XD Hahaha, Courtney popped in out of nowhere. fup. Rotwood will get them in trouble. Haaaah. Yeah... UPDATE SOON. So interestinggg.
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Post by superspud234 on Mar 11, 2007 14:09:52 GMT -5
Chapter 3: the truth is revealed.
"Woooooo! Move out my way kid!" shouted Jake at the top of his lungs while wizzing past a geeky kid. He and Spud had grabbed their skateboards and started to skate around the whole camp. Word had got out everywhere about this. And this meant it had also reached Mr. Granger. He was in his quaters reading some files. A man came rushing in. "What are you doing in my quarters?" asked Mr. G. "Sir...news has reached us about...about" "About what? Spit it out man!" "About two rebelious boys with skateboards." "What!!!! Bring them to me immdetly! I can't afford to have time wasters in my camp! I need to focus on finding magical creatures undercover in schools. The Huntsman is counting on me!" The camp manager left to get the two boys. Trixie and Rose had ran out of there camp to see if it was Jake and Spud. And yep it was. "What the hell are you doing guys?!?" shouted Rose. "Having fun, whats it look like?" replied Jake. "Listen Jake, I know you wana have fun but there's something wierd about this camp. You gonna get caught and then maybe hurt!" "Rose chill. Im not gonna get hurt. This is a camp full of stiffs!" Jake was cut off by the camp manager rushing over towards them. "Hey you boys! Come here now!!!!!" "Jake, Spud follow me!" said Rose. They ran around the buildings. They thought they were safe until.... "HA! I'VE GOT YOU THREE NOW!" said the man. He grabbed them and led them towards the building were Mr.Granger was.
The three were sat in a dark room with lots of books and other stuff. Infront of them was the camp leader Mr.Granger. "So you three attempted to ruin my camp eh? Well i'll tell you now I cannot put up with this behavoiur!" While Mr.Granger was talking Jake spotted something on Granger's desk. It was a file with...it couldn't be! The Huntsclan logo. Rose was right something was strange about this camp. "Tell me children, what do you know about magical creatures?" "That there fairytales!" replied Spud. "Then i guess you won't mind drinking this harmless can of water." He handed the water to Rose. She took a sip and nothing happened. As did Spud. Same result. Jake got the can and sipped the water. Suddenly his hands began to shake and then they transformed! "Oh crap." said Jake. "Ahhh a dragon! Yes i'm gonna get big promotion from the Huntsman!" said Granger. "Wait you're a member of the Huntsclan?" asked Rose. "Yes, but whats it to you?" "I'm Huntsgirl!" said Rose. "Well i've been waiting to meet you. Let me introduce myself. I am huntswarrior number 3. Now you dragon are gonna be slain tomorrow. For now you will be taken into my prison Camp Huntalot. Guards!" Three Huntsclan guards came and grabbed Jake and put him in a sphinx hair net. "Wait! What are you doing running camp learnalot then?" asked Jake. "Ahhh well I am on a mission from the Huntsman to undercover magical creatures posing as school children. That thing you drank made you revert to your true form." replied Mr.Granger. The guards began to carry Jake out. "No wait!" shouted Rose. "You can't keep him in prison! He's just a boy. Doesn't that bother you?" asked Rose. "Let me think. Nope. Anyway enogth of this nonsense! Take him away." "Wait can't we say goodbye to him?" asked Spud. "Fine two minutes!" Granger signaled to the guards to put Jake down. The guards waited outside whilst Spud and Rose said their goodbyes to Jake. "Man Jake I'm gonna miss you so much bro." cried Spud. "Me too Spud." said Jake in a saddened tone. He signaled to Spud for him to give Rose and him some privacy. "Rose listen, You guys think of a plan to stop Granger." "Jake what about you?" asked Rose. "I'll be fine. I get out some way." "But he said you're gonna get killed tomorrow..." "Shhh he says these things but he won't. I promise you that i'll be fine. Ok?" "Ok." said Rose. The guards re-entered. They grabbed Jake and led him away. "Come on Spud." said Rose. "Jake be careful." she whispered.
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Post by superspud234 on Mar 13, 2007 14:48:53 GMT -5
Thank u 4 all the replys!!!
Chapter 4: Locked behind these iron bars
Jake was taken into another part of the camp. It just so happened to be building 5. "figures." said Jake. The guards lead Jake into a room. They grabbed a uniform took all items off Jake and told him to change. When Jake came out, instantly the guards pinned him down and injected some substance in him. Jake screamed in pain. He had never liked needles. "What was that for?" Jake asked the Huntsclan guard. "Well we can't have you using your dragon powers can we? That had traces of Sphinx hair in." he replied. He pushed Jake into a cell. Inside there was a matress and a bucket. "Another guard will bring you some water and bread later." said the guard who then slammed the cell door shut. Jake sat down on the matress and thought about his escape plan. A couple of minutes later Jake had a plan. But it was risky. 'If this doesn't work i'm a pair of boots.' thought Jake. He laid down and thought of all the good things in his life. His friends and family. Then it dawned on Jake that if his plan didn't work, his friends would be distort. Spud looked upset and he hadn't even been slain! And Rose what would she do? She seemed to be against this plan and the one they had at the acadmey. Jake soon heard the sound of footsteps coming down the hall. 'this is it....'
Meanwhile Rose and Spud had gone back to their dorms. Trixie was wandering around the room wondering where Rose was. Rose came in not saying anything. "Hey where have you been???" asked Trixie. "Oh... nowhere." Rose replied. She held back the tears. "Girl there must be something wrong, You're almost crying." "Its....just that....." she couldn't help it. She began to sob. Trixie even though she didn't trust Rose she still felt some pity for her. "Why don't you tell me all about it?" said Trixie handing Rose a tissue. "Ok. You know the Mr. Granger guy?" Trixie nodded. "Well he's actually a member of the Huntsclan. He captured Jake and he's killing him tomorrow. I can't do anything because he knows I'm huntsgirl." "Oh god, Jakes done it this time. He's gonna get killed." Trixie choked. "Whats gonna happen then?" "Jake said he's going to try and sneak out. But he won't be able to this place is High tech security. So its my fault he's gonna die." "Rose, listen I know Jake. He's gotten himself into some tight spots before and he's always come through. Don't worry, If Jake says he's going to sneak out he will." "Thanks Trixie, you know how to lift a mood. I'm gonna turn in. Night." Rose walked into her room. She laid on her bed and looked at her dream charm and thought....
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 16, 2007 9:11:22 GMT -5
Oooo sad......update soon please
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Post by superspud234 on Mar 17, 2007 12:50:44 GMT -5
Thankyou one and all for the reviews I am getting!
Chapter 5: Dreams
Rose found herself in the dream relm. She walked through the dream corridor until she reached the door saying 'Jacob Luke Long'. Anxiously she turned the cold door handle. Rose was standing in a stadium. Crowds were all singing chants. She looked out on to the pitch to see players running about. They were playing soccer. She could make out one player in particular. He had the ball and was sprinting down the pitch. It was Jake. He crossed the ball to another player, sprinted in front recived the ball and shot. The ball whizzed past the goalkeeper and thumped in the net. "GOAL BY JAKE LONG! AMERICA ARE WINNING 1-0 AGAINST BRAZIL." sounded the speaker. "Only Jake would dream something like this." said Rose. Soon the match ended and the players went inside. Rose waited outside the changing rooms. Not long after Jake came out. Rose called for him but instandly Jake was surrounded by news reporters and journalists. "Jake!" shouted Rose. But Jake was gone. He had woken up, and was going to be killed.
Rose woke sweating and in shock. She looked over to the clock. 5.00am. She noticed a note on the floor. She got up and walked over to it. Rose opened the note and read.
Dear Rose/Huntsgirl, As a member of the Huntsclan I am inviting you to use the Huntsclan facilties in Building 5. Also today at 9 am we are slaying the dragon we found in the camp. You are welcome to join us. Mr. Granger or Huntswarrior 12.
"9.am that's when they are gonna kill Jake. I hope he gets himself out alright. I think I'll check out their Huntsclan base later." Rose went back to sleep.
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 20, 2007 18:23:28 GMT -5
awww he HAS to live *crys*
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Post by superspud234 on Mar 21, 2007 15:21:19 GMT -5
Chapter 6: Is he dead?
Trixie woke up to the sound of music. She rubbed her eyes and got up. Trixie walked into the other room. There was Rose, sat listening to the music. Which just so happened to be Nickleback's Savin' me. "Ironic or what?" asked Trixie. "Huh oh yeah. Morning by the way!" said a slightly cheerful Rose. "So any news on Jakeroo?" asked Trixie. "Well now that you metion it. I found a note under my door. look." Rose handed over the note. Trixie began to read. "Dear Huntsgirl.....Slaying at nine....from Mr. Granger. So what are you gonna check it out?" " Yeah i'm going in ten minutes. Maybe i might find Jake." "Good luck Rose. You'll need it." and with that Trixie walked out the room.
Ten minutes later, Rose was walking towards building 5. Luckily the 'learning' camp had been told to relax today since it was Sunday. So there was no one around to give Rose a funny look as she walked in her uniform. "Here it is. Building 5." Rose knocked on the door. The same man who had taken her, Spud and Jake to Granger's office opened the door. "Pass please." he said. "Err i don't have a pass but I do have a letter from Number 12." replied Rose handing him the letter. "Ok, You can go through Huntsgirl." He opened the door and led her through to one of the chill out rooms. "Feel free to use the facilities. Oh and we are slaying a dragon at 9!" he left. "I know unfortunatley." mumbled Rose. She sat down on one of the benches. There was no one in the room. "Must have all gone to watch Jake get killed." she began to cry. "I wish I could of told him how I felt." thought Rose. She got up to the vending machine and bought some water. She switched on the T.V and began to watch. Later Rose saw someone come in. It was a boy. He had a mask covering his whole face. He sat down next to Rose. "Hey." he said. "Hey yourself." said a upset Rose. "I thought you would be at the slaying like everyone else." he said. " Since you are Huntsgirl." "Well I don't really want to go." "Why?" "Because the dragon that's getting killed is my friend and I don't know why I'm telling you this cuz you don't even know me." "You do." "You do what?" "You do know me." "Who are you?" asked Rose. The boy got up. He pulled off his mask to reveal himself. He had dark brown eyes and Black spikey hair with a green tint. "I'm Jake."
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Post by huntsgirls1fan on Mar 21, 2007 17:41:12 GMT -5
ahHHH! i flipped! its jake! XD
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Post by roselovesjake on Mar 21, 2007 20:06:08 GMT -5
GREAT STORy SO HOW YIU GOING TO GET JAKE OUt>
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Post by superspud234 on Mar 22, 2007 14:28:38 GMT -5
All in gud time......*EVIL LAUGH*
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