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Post by Chaos on Jul 19, 2005 21:37:49 GMT -5
This is the fan-fic from an episode idea.
The rain was very dark. The sky was filled of clouds. The rain was very loud and noisy. All this was seen in the eyes of Jake. Filled with saddness, Jake is remembering Shade and why he was frozen, Shin Quaza. Sadly, there was nothing he could do and Shade is gone, but hopefully he'll be back. Haley was watching Jake and she felt bad for Jake, so she called Spud and Trixie. "Spud, Trixie, please come over and see Jake." Haley said on the phone. When Spud and Trixie were there, Spud was wearing a raincoat and Trixie was wearing a heavy jacket. "I'm very concerned about Jake, he's staring out the window and hasn't done anything for four hours..." Haley informed Spud and Trixe. They both nodded as Jake's mom came in with some hot chocolate. Spud took one and Trixie took hers and Jake's. She gave Jake the hot chocolate and said, "Jake, what's wrong? You're acting funky." Jake continued to stare out the window. Spud sighed and sipped his hot chocolate.
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Post by magenta on Jul 19, 2005 21:42:14 GMT -5
Nice way to start ^_^ I'm looking forward to when you update!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 19, 2005 21:45:23 GMT -5
Thanks! I'm probably going to do two a day maybe.
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Post by magenta on Jul 19, 2005 21:50:24 GMT -5
Cool. Sounds good ^^
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Post by yfwe on Jul 20, 2005 7:10:25 GMT -5
Great job so far, Shade! Keep it up!
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Post by Chaos on Jul 20, 2005 16:30:30 GMT -5
Thanks!
"I guess I have to tell you." Jake spoke up. Spud and Trixie quickly looked at Jake. "That's it, tell Mama Trixie all about it." Trixie told Jake. "It's about...Shade, again." Jake said. Spud and Trixie then sighed. "Jake, we'll get him back soon, stop trippin' boy!" Trixie said, trying to cheer up Jake. "Yeah, it's not like Rose saw you at the beach that one-" Spud was cut off when a blast came through the window. Because it was so dark, no one knew who it was, until the smoke cleared, Huntsgirl. "Never mind..." Spud muttered, dropping his mug of hot chocolate. Huntsgirl ignored Spud and continued to look at Jake. "Jake, at the beach that one time, I made it look like I didn't see you, but when you arrived, I completely saw you with that Shade guy." Huntsgirl told Jake, raising an eyebrow. "I also know that he's frozen, and I can get him back." Huntsgirl continued. Jake suddenly looked up at Huntsgirl. "Where, tell me!" Jake yelled, grabbing her. "Follow me..." She said quietly.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 20, 2005 16:32:57 GMT -5
not bad pls continue shade
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Post by stranger on Jul 20, 2005 16:50:06 GMT -5
ya, its very good so far, pls do continue
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Post by Chaos on Jul 20, 2005 16:57:45 GMT -5
Ok, I will.
Spud and Trixie also got up. Huntsgirl noticed this and said, "Hold it! Only Jake can come." Spud and Trixie looked at each other, then Jake, who nodded. They sighed and sat back down. The area that Jake was lead to was a rooftop. "Here's the potion." Huntsgirl said, tossing Jake a potion with blue liquid in it. Jake nodded, catching the potion. he turned dragon and started to leave, but Huntsgirl grabbed his tail. "Wait a minute, what about MY end of the deal?" She asked, casualy. Suddenly, Jake was trapped and the potion fell off the roof. "What're you doing?" Jake asked, yelling. Huntsgirl laughed. "Not letting you save your friend! That was the only thing that could heal Shade, and it's gone." She said. "Time for you to be slain!"
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 20, 2005 17:00:12 GMT -5
not bad pls continue
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Post by Chaos on Jul 20, 2005 17:04:05 GMT -5
One more person who wants a continue, then I'll continue.
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Post by stranger on Jul 20, 2005 17:07:05 GMT -5
sure, keep going pls
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Post by dragonfan123 on Jul 20, 2005 17:10:04 GMT -5
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Post by Chaos on Jul 20, 2005 17:14:55 GMT -5
Alright, you asked for it!
Jake growled. "Why Rose? I thought you liked me..." Jake said, lowering his ears. Huntsgril, ready to attack, suddenly stopped. "I do-but I thought..." She started to say, getting confused. Jake turned human. "But, if you're going to slay me, do it now..." Jake told Huntsgirl, looking away. Rose started crying and pulled off her mask. "Jake, I'm so sorry!! I didn't mean to, I just wanted to please the Huntsclan, and after fighting, I can no longer revive your friend..." Rose said, running up to Jake, hugging him and getting him out the trap. "We'll find a way to save Shade, even if that WAS the last potion for saving Shade. Let's go down and check if the potion is down there." Jake replied. Rose nodded as Jake turned dragon and she climbed on his back. They flew down near the ground and didn't even see a trace of the potion. "What?" Jake thought, very confused. "I thought there's be some trace of it." Rose sighed. "I guess there is no chance." She said, looking down.
This might not be a super long fan-fic.
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Post by stranger on Jul 20, 2005 17:18:01 GMT -5
interesting, continue pls
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