Post by stromgradeadjl on Jun 11, 2008 4:58:43 GMT -5
I'm waiting for people to post comments on this and the first so please do post comments negative or not.
ADJL, the grand legacy ep. 2, shoplifters
Previously, an evil transaction has been made by the huntsmaster and a demigod who tried to conquer a world thought to be a myth in the magical world, and our protagonists don't realize that time has been reset and they are now reliving their lives just before the tragedy of the 13 skulls.
Trixie: "I don't get it! you two say you *think* you haven't seen each other for months even you have been "dating" on the love cruise"
Spud: "Um..... your point trix.?"
Trixie: "I haven't finished talking yet!!! anyway, i kinda feel it too you know..."
Spud: "(gasp)!!!, we could be living episode #52 on super zone!!!
quick! jake, get the anastasilizer! I'm feeling the same thing too! hurry before our brains turn into beencurd!!!
Trixie: "or maybe it's just spuds new "genius brain" tryin' to mind control us with his mumbo jumbo..."
Jake: "whatever! let's just see whats up on gramps shop."
almost emmediatly they arived at an electronics shop that his gramps owns, jake opens the door and to his and his friends surprise, it was being trashed by a gang of 4 goblins. jake looks to his side to see his animal guardian fu dog hiding in a pile of cardboard boxes. jake pulls him out and the dogs started too explain the situation.
Fu dog: "kid!!! thank goodness you came with your yahoos!!!"
Rose: "yahoos?"
Fu dog: "they came out of nowhere, and clubed the old man on the head before he could even realize it!!! you gotta help us kids!!!"
Jake: "on it!!! DRAGON UP!!!"
jake and rose immediatley lunge toward the goblins. spud moves to a corner near the window and is being targeted by a goblin with a sling. the goblin fires but spud jumps to his left to avoid it. his bag hits a toolbox and both spill their contents, spud sees his sling shot and yoyo at the mouth of his bag. he then ties the yoyo to the rubber laso of the sling and returns fire at the goblin. since his yoyo returns the goblin experiences a rain of spinning plastic and stumbled on his back becoming semi-concius. trixie still near the doorway evades another goblin. she steps upon two screw drivers that the toolbox spud hit contained. she picks them up and engages the creature, she ducks to evade a stab from the humanoid and stabs the goblin while crouching. the tools didn't have enough force to pierce the goblin but delivered severe pain. she kicks the goblin to spuds enemy goblin who was trying to get up the goblin stumbles upon his ally and both were back to the floor. rose meanwhile, standing preatty, stands just above the two goblins. her advisary had a quarterstaff and charges towards her. she sidesteps using her ninja moves and pierces a presure point on the goblin's armpit which was exposed due to his asault. hes is then paralized and rosed uses a 720 degree kick and knocks the goblin to the pile of other fell goblins. jake meanwhile just parried with the last goblin holding a short sword, jake engages him and the classic "fight cloud ball" just like in the sims 2 appears. images of the two returning and recieving punches and slaps appear on the endges of the cloud ball. jake disipates the ball and emerges victorius without any injury, slight or big. th goblin is thrown to the plie which coincidently was right on top of a carpet. rose, trixie and spud form a bag out of the carpet and gives it to jake. the muscular dragon begins spinning the entraped goblins and throws them outside the back door. the goblins hit the trash cans waiting outside and they where filled with all sorts of nasties! rose appears at the mouth of the door.
Rose: "AND STAY OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
she slams the door so hard that everything outside vibrated. she returns to the three just in time jake turns back to his human form and has his grandfather on his arms with trixie, fu dog and spud just behind him. rose joins the group then they all try to wake jakes grandfather, lao shi long, retired chinese dragon.
Jake: "gramps wake up!"
his grandfather slowly opens his eyes, they expected him to stay slow due to his hit in the head. but the old man shows something else!
Grampa: "EI-YAH!!!!!!! (transforms into his dragon form) who-what-where are they thgey are going to hit me with a club on the head (speaks a chain of chinesse words) !!!
Fu dog: "relax G, it already happened, jake and his got here just in time too party with those party animals."
Grampa:(lying) "Oh!!! i uh- know that!"
just when things got better rose's hunts reciever rings. she reads the message.
Jake: "the huntsman!"
Grampa: "this could be our break on finding the remaining aztec skulls!"
Rose: "that's odd..."
Jake: "what?"
Rose: "the huntsmaster said that he dumped the entire plan along with the skulls he has."
Grampa: "that was quite not what i was expecting"
Rose: "he also said for me to come back to the huntslair to tell me what his next plan is, and for me to continue studying the art of huntsclan ninjitsu"
Grampa: "verywell, just make sure you don't get caught talking to us, or else all of us including you would be in terrible danger!"
Rose: "I'll do that, bye!"
rose aproaches the door, wearing her everyday clothes. when she crossed the door pane which was a few centimeters long she was already wearing her huntsgirl suit. spud can be seen become befudled on what he saw only to realize later on due to his late reactions that she is a ninja. rose jumps out of site to be seen later on in jakes life.
Trixie: "meanwhile, i'm just gonna hang with you guys talking about our new gigantic trip!"
Spud: "you said it girlfriend!!! i can't wait to puton my mermaid costume so i can lure the mermaids in the oceans to me to take me to there home"
Jake: "what are you talking about?!"
Spud: "mermaids only recognize their kin through their speed so a speeding cruise liner should-"
Jake: "i'm not talking about that! I was talking about that cruise trixie just mentioned"
Trixie: "it would help if you *WOUDN'T BE LATE EVERY SINGLE TIME FOR CLASS FOR THE LAST WEEK*"
Jake: "it coudn't be helped!"
Spud: "anyway, rotwood signed our class up to be the first passengers on the new super cruiser the gigantic! we hooked you up with a ticket when you still weren't there."
Jake: "cool! thanks guys!
later on in jakes house.....
Johnathan long, jake's dad which doesn't know the existance of magicall creatures (well, yet) greets him on the doorway. his mother susan long and his little sister haley long were sitting on the couch."
Jake's dad: "Oh hi jake-aroonee!!!"
Jake:(annoyed) "hey dad!"
Jake: "can i talk to you for a sec."
Jakes' dad: "sure son!!! what is it?"
Jake: "rotwood just signed up the entire seventh grade to go on a new cruise ship named the gigantic, can i go"
Jake's dad: "um....."
Jake's mom: "honey, woudn't it be great for jake to relax once in a while?"
Haley: "yeah dad, he's already fed up with being the american- um i mean uhhh... being- the temporary replacement for the american uhhh... enemy number 70!"
someone just appeared in the window just outside jake's dad's sight. it was the korean dragon sun, haley's dragon master.
Sun: "haley dragon training"
Haley: "oh, okay"
Haley:(secretley) "DRAGON UP!!!"
Susan:(secreltey) "be carefull haley!"
Haley: "i will mom, i'm not like jake always gets into trouble"
jake snarls at his little sister.
Jake: "so, can i go"
Jake's dad: "oh okay sun just remember to bring the old couger scout traing enciclopedias!!!"
Jakw: "aw-maaaan!!!!!"
to be continued.....
ADJL, the grand legacy ep. 2, shoplifters
Previously, an evil transaction has been made by the huntsmaster and a demigod who tried to conquer a world thought to be a myth in the magical world, and our protagonists don't realize that time has been reset and they are now reliving their lives just before the tragedy of the 13 skulls.
Trixie: "I don't get it! you two say you *think* you haven't seen each other for months even you have been "dating" on the love cruise"
Spud: "Um..... your point trix.?"
Trixie: "I haven't finished talking yet!!! anyway, i kinda feel it too you know..."
Spud: "(gasp)!!!, we could be living episode #52 on super zone!!!
quick! jake, get the anastasilizer! I'm feeling the same thing too! hurry before our brains turn into beencurd!!!
Trixie: "or maybe it's just spuds new "genius brain" tryin' to mind control us with his mumbo jumbo..."
Jake: "whatever! let's just see whats up on gramps shop."
almost emmediatly they arived at an electronics shop that his gramps owns, jake opens the door and to his and his friends surprise, it was being trashed by a gang of 4 goblins. jake looks to his side to see his animal guardian fu dog hiding in a pile of cardboard boxes. jake pulls him out and the dogs started too explain the situation.
Fu dog: "kid!!! thank goodness you came with your yahoos!!!"
Rose: "yahoos?"
Fu dog: "they came out of nowhere, and clubed the old man on the head before he could even realize it!!! you gotta help us kids!!!"
Jake: "on it!!! DRAGON UP!!!"
jake and rose immediatley lunge toward the goblins. spud moves to a corner near the window and is being targeted by a goblin with a sling. the goblin fires but spud jumps to his left to avoid it. his bag hits a toolbox and both spill their contents, spud sees his sling shot and yoyo at the mouth of his bag. he then ties the yoyo to the rubber laso of the sling and returns fire at the goblin. since his yoyo returns the goblin experiences a rain of spinning plastic and stumbled on his back becoming semi-concius. trixie still near the doorway evades another goblin. she steps upon two screw drivers that the toolbox spud hit contained. she picks them up and engages the creature, she ducks to evade a stab from the humanoid and stabs the goblin while crouching. the tools didn't have enough force to pierce the goblin but delivered severe pain. she kicks the goblin to spuds enemy goblin who was trying to get up the goblin stumbles upon his ally and both were back to the floor. rose meanwhile, standing preatty, stands just above the two goblins. her advisary had a quarterstaff and charges towards her. she sidesteps using her ninja moves and pierces a presure point on the goblin's armpit which was exposed due to his asault. hes is then paralized and rosed uses a 720 degree kick and knocks the goblin to the pile of other fell goblins. jake meanwhile just parried with the last goblin holding a short sword, jake engages him and the classic "fight cloud ball" just like in the sims 2 appears. images of the two returning and recieving punches and slaps appear on the endges of the cloud ball. jake disipates the ball and emerges victorius without any injury, slight or big. th goblin is thrown to the plie which coincidently was right on top of a carpet. rose, trixie and spud form a bag out of the carpet and gives it to jake. the muscular dragon begins spinning the entraped goblins and throws them outside the back door. the goblins hit the trash cans waiting outside and they where filled with all sorts of nasties! rose appears at the mouth of the door.
Rose: "AND STAY OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
she slams the door so hard that everything outside vibrated. she returns to the three just in time jake turns back to his human form and has his grandfather on his arms with trixie, fu dog and spud just behind him. rose joins the group then they all try to wake jakes grandfather, lao shi long, retired chinese dragon.
Jake: "gramps wake up!"
his grandfather slowly opens his eyes, they expected him to stay slow due to his hit in the head. but the old man shows something else!
Grampa: "EI-YAH!!!!!!! (transforms into his dragon form) who-what-where are they thgey are going to hit me with a club on the head (speaks a chain of chinesse words) !!!
Fu dog: "relax G, it already happened, jake and his got here just in time too party with those party animals."
Grampa:(lying) "Oh!!! i uh- know that!"
just when things got better rose's hunts reciever rings. she reads the message.
Jake: "the huntsman!"
Grampa: "this could be our break on finding the remaining aztec skulls!"
Rose: "that's odd..."
Jake: "what?"
Rose: "the huntsmaster said that he dumped the entire plan along with the skulls he has."
Grampa: "that was quite not what i was expecting"
Rose: "he also said for me to come back to the huntslair to tell me what his next plan is, and for me to continue studying the art of huntsclan ninjitsu"
Grampa: "verywell, just make sure you don't get caught talking to us, or else all of us including you would be in terrible danger!"
Rose: "I'll do that, bye!"
rose aproaches the door, wearing her everyday clothes. when she crossed the door pane which was a few centimeters long she was already wearing her huntsgirl suit. spud can be seen become befudled on what he saw only to realize later on due to his late reactions that she is a ninja. rose jumps out of site to be seen later on in jakes life.
Trixie: "meanwhile, i'm just gonna hang with you guys talking about our new gigantic trip!"
Spud: "you said it girlfriend!!! i can't wait to puton my mermaid costume so i can lure the mermaids in the oceans to me to take me to there home"
Jake: "what are you talking about?!"
Spud: "mermaids only recognize their kin through their speed so a speeding cruise liner should-"
Jake: "i'm not talking about that! I was talking about that cruise trixie just mentioned"
Trixie: "it would help if you *WOUDN'T BE LATE EVERY SINGLE TIME FOR CLASS FOR THE LAST WEEK*"
Jake: "it coudn't be helped!"
Spud: "anyway, rotwood signed our class up to be the first passengers on the new super cruiser the gigantic! we hooked you up with a ticket when you still weren't there."
Jake: "cool! thanks guys!
later on in jakes house.....
Johnathan long, jake's dad which doesn't know the existance of magicall creatures (well, yet) greets him on the doorway. his mother susan long and his little sister haley long were sitting on the couch."
Jake's dad: "Oh hi jake-aroonee!!!"
Jake:(annoyed) "hey dad!"
Jake: "can i talk to you for a sec."
Jakes' dad: "sure son!!! what is it?"
Jake: "rotwood just signed up the entire seventh grade to go on a new cruise ship named the gigantic, can i go"
Jake's dad: "um....."
Jake's mom: "honey, woudn't it be great for jake to relax once in a while?"
Haley: "yeah dad, he's already fed up with being the american- um i mean uhhh... being- the temporary replacement for the american uhhh... enemy number 70!"
someone just appeared in the window just outside jake's dad's sight. it was the korean dragon sun, haley's dragon master.
Sun: "haley dragon training"
Haley: "oh, okay"
Haley:(secretley) "DRAGON UP!!!"
Susan:(secreltey) "be carefull haley!"
Haley: "i will mom, i'm not like jake always gets into trouble"
jake snarls at his little sister.
Jake: "so, can i go"
Jake's dad: "oh okay sun just remember to bring the old couger scout traing enciclopedias!!!"
Jakw: "aw-maaaan!!!!!"
to be continued.....