Post by stromgradeadjl on Jun 14, 2008 4:51:17 GMT -5
this is the third installment of my story. i would like to ask a favor to anybody who happens to read this and the 2 others, PLEASE COMMENT!!! I AM WAITING FOR ANYBODY!!! PLEASE JUST COMMENT!!! comment on the other grand legacies too.
ADJL the grand legacy ep 3, gigantic tragedy
previously, jake was allowed by his family to go to a newly built ship named the gigantic. so far, his dreams seemed pretty normal, hes still waiting for another dream like his in ep.1 to reappear. meanwhile, the huntsclan just dumped his plan to destroy the magical world and rose is getting to the bottom of it.
continuing the story of jakes new life (literally), he just went to bed after any of his normal evenings. but this evening was different...
Jake: "[groaning while sleeping]"
jake was dreaming about the same man on his dream earlier, but this time he can make a compatible description of the man, he was wearing a short, pointy wizard's hat with a star on its tip. he was also wearing a huge cloak extending to the ground just enough to cover his feet but not long enough to make it an oversized cape. his shirt and pants was preatty uniformed, brown, long sleeved and has golden rings (part of the cloth)
along all the joints. he had brown hair but jake couldn't see his eyes due to the shadow left by his hair and hat. he speaks in the same unrecognizable language he heard him speak before.
Mystery man: "Lesach salamand diakon wael, (emphasizes) LEBRAN!!!"
the man then adds a new sentence to his previous lines.
Mystery man: "by the way, wake up!"
jake does indeed wake up and found himself waking up early in the morning, moments early for his 4:00 mark to depart the house, as if the man did him a favor by waking him up.
later on...
jake arives at the port where several students and passengers are waiting fo boarding. after a short search, he finds his 2 best friends in the world, trixie and spud.
Jake: "hey guys!!! wuz-up!"
Tixie: "hey jakey, nice of you to come!
Spud: "i'm surprized that you even made it!!!"
trixie elbows spud due to his wrong choice of words.
Jake: "it's okay guys, i understand. have any one of you two seen rose?
Spud: "is that her over there?"
jake looks to the direction spud points. he spots rose at the harbor gate wearing a sweater for fending of the early morning cold. when she walks nearer, people start to look at her too, the boys are just awestruck to see her beauty with only jake knowing rose, his girlfriend, is a deadly ninja. rose then approaches jake. the boys then get diapointed that their hopes of asking her out just went to the dogs.
Rose: "hi jake! hi trixie! hi spud!"
Jake: "any info. about the hunstman's new plan."
Rose: "he announced that he has something more powerfull than the skulls, if the skulls were a candlelight, his new plans are an inferno! but he never unveiled it, i tried to see his new plan but he was tottaly guarded."
Trixie: "did you hear that! that means that the huntsmaster has something stronger than an irreversable wish!
Spud: "i bet its my uncles recipe for a stew. man! when my uncle serves that thing up, everybody loses the food they just ate, although it did taste like snails. MMMM!!!"
Trixie: "EW!!! SPUD!!!!! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO SAY SOMETHING I CAN'T UNTHINK!!!!!
Spud: "sorry, but you should really try it, just make sure you haven't eaten anything yet to avoid the whole barfing thing."
Trixie: "IF YOU DON'T STOP TALKING, I'M GONNA BARF!!!!!
having said that, proff. rotwood appears with a mirophone just a second later to announce boarding
Rotwood: "attention hoodlums!!! the captain and crew has authorized boarding! please do not leave anything of your luggage or your super unnecesary rifraf unatended
Jake: (whispers to his friends) "would that uneccesary rifraf include him!?!
the 4 gigles softly and they start to board the ship. later that night at the gigantic's ballroom. everybody was either eating or talking loudly. jake ,who was seated in beside rose, invites her.
Jake: "it's too noisy here. does my lady like a time of privacy with me say... now at the bow?"
Rose: "why yes, our lady would."
as they left, jakes arch enemy at school, brad morton, son of a rich cop, and his gang notice the proposal. brad signals them to follow him. he and his gang then tracks the two undetected untill the two reach the bow.
Rose: "it's so romantic here jake! but, remember about what i said about our relationship to be, well, professional?"
Jake: "is what i'm about to do professional?"
he then kisses rose, lips to lips, rose gets shocked at contact but she decides to drift with her boyfriends kiss. those moments of romance lasted only seconds though.
Brad: "hey loser, that's my chick!"
Rose: (separates her lips with jake)"huh?"
Jake: "brad! aheheh, i'm not sure if i heard you right, but what did you say, PLAYBOY!!!"
Brad: "i said stay away from her, and this is for calling me playboy!!!"
brad punches jake right in the guts, rose gasps at the sight, brads gang the assists brad at his brawling. jakes kung fu moves allowed him to recieve only brad's punch and block/evade others. the defence of both sides were met with great and fierce resistance from the other. rose stops the fight.
Rose: "brad, stop it!!! why don't you realize that you just wan't me to look at me!!! i'm not an instrument you know!!! and *HERE"S* something for hurting *MY BOYFRIEND*!!!!!
rose slaps brad so hard in a way that she left something serius in brad's face in the process.
Brad: "*YYYYYYOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHH*"
Rose: "like it!?! to prove that we now have an enemy relationship, that slap will last on your vilain in heroes clothing face a mark that'll stay there for two months!!! NOW GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE I CALL THE CRUISE SHIP GUARDS!!!!!
Brad: "this isn't over jake short!"
brad and his gang march back into the path. jake notices rotten fish that "never survuved the trip to the party" hanging from a net just right above brad and his gang's heads. he decides to breath fire in the rope that suspend the fish in the air using his dragon powers. rose grasps jakes hand, an obvious idea came to his head that rose was [reventing them, but she later spoke to aim well for if he missed he won't get another kiss like earlier until after a weak. having said this jake aims and fires at the rope. the fish fall from the ne and brad's crew, including him. they will probably spend three hours in the shower rooms by that occurance.
meanwhile, the gigantics hull, was experiencing smooth sailing. but even with global warming, the atlantic remains a cold ocean, especially after dark. like the classic mivie titanic, an iceburg (in this situation was hidded beneath the waves) cuts through the hull. jake and rose were in a hallway when this happed. it sent shockwaves throughout the ship violently shaking it. the two hear the screams, shouts and cries for help at the ballroom. the walls start to crack and a slab falls from the ceiling heading strate for rose. jake pushes rose asside to save her. but, like any other hero, he is the one to be hit. he emmidiatley goes unconcius and wakes up hours later. he is in an escape boat with dozens of other people. his head was lying on suns lap, sun is his home economics teacher and dragon master for his sister. he jumps back to activity and looks at the gigantic. now has a quarter already engulfed in water.
Jake: "what happened!?! where's rose!?!"
Sun: "relax jake, rose and the others are probably on other escape boats. we just hit an underwater iceburg, that may answer your question."
Jake: "but there are still other people there!!! they won't get on the boats on time."
Sun: "take it easy jake, just hope they will and maybe the heavens will grant them a second chance."
Jake: "but that's a chance i'm not letting those people try to grasp in vain!!! i'm going over there"
Sun: "you may be a protector but it isn't included on your job to-"
Jake: "who said anything about me calling in for a midnight shift!?! those people need a savior and the american dragon is the only hero they have"
Man in the boat: "What on earth are you two on about. those people will swarm us if we go near them, it's best that we just let them die. it is their time, and we don't even have any relations with the majority of them."
Jake: "sun, count how many people are in this and other boats."
Sun: "jake-.......... be- [groan] be carefull."
Jake: "i will sun. DRAGON UP!!!"
jake's muscular wings speed of toward the sinking ship. the ocupants of the boat were wide-eyed.
Sun: "now listen people! i ask a favor of you to not-"
before she can finish her sentence, all people an the boat fainted. meanwhile, jake juist reached the ship while still airborne. people scream even louder at the sight of a red dragon flying in circles above them. jake dive to the ship and scoops as many people as he can. this proved difficult because some poeple were punching him due to the fact that they don't know the existance of magical creatures and their 3 1 guess that jake is going to eat them but jake just put them on an escape boat nearby which was still being filled with people. guards shot at him as he continues his deed. upon delivering his seven'th batch of people to a boat, a guard is finally able to shot him on the side of his gut even though the dragon was evaiding excellently. jake plunges to the ocean. he gets airborne again after he splahes to the sea. his thick dragon scales prevented the bullet to hit any internal organs for it to reash only the flesh. but his first experience of pain from a bullet made him realize that from now on his capabilities will be lessened due to the piercing pain. now everytime he goes back he shoots fire at any guard's gun shooting him. his sufering though just got started. brad and proff. rotwood (as any adjl fan knows that knows jake's existance as a dragon and knows that magical creatures exist) along with his kit for capturing magical creatures were in the highest floor. rotwood intended to clean his equipment on his ship but since brad doesn't know the dragon is humane, he grabs on of rotwoods guns and shoots jake with an electrified bola. now clear of guns, jake is hovering on one place counting how many people he can still fit in a boat. his eye catches the sight of the bola but it was to late. he was unable to avoid it and gets entangled. he is emmediatley electrecuted ad falls once again to the ocean. he rises from the waves still alive but he now has blood trickling down his mouth and nose. he flies to brad and rotwood and grabs them both jus in time before brads second volley. he drops them on the boat he was counting on. brad targets jake again but rotwood lowers his gun being held by brad to prevent jake from getting harmed. the people start to realize now that the dragon was trying to save them and thus some people even try to aproach him. the pain from his two hits made him land on the deck to recover his breath. people were staring at him still a little scared only to be mitigated by an exchange of words. his friends happen to be nearby.
Trixie: "Jake!!! are you alright"
jake takes to the air but hovers on the place he landed.
Spud: "what are you doing you know that-"
Jake: "know what!?! that i'm supposed to let these people drown because i'm the protector of magical creatures!?!
the crowd gasps but the interaction continues.
Trixie: "we know about that and we're....... supporting you. our point is just be carefull, your already hurt.
Spud: "remember, not only the people need you but the magical world needs you too."
Jake: " thanks guys!!! oh, before i go, have any of you seen rose."
Trixie: "she's over there controling the flow of people."
jake wastes no time and grabs his friends. he hastily delivers them to a boat nearby and goes to rose. the shock waves earlier weakened the gigantic's wall. a wall then starts to fall just above rose's head. luckily, rose has her hunts-staff and shoots a whole throught the wall so the wall just passed by her. jake grabs rose and delivers her to the boat trixie and spud were in. before jake jets toward more people, rose promises to help him whenever she has the chance. she gives jake a curtain she was grasping (probably when the gigantic was tilting antd it was her lifeline). jake ties the curtain to his stomach just above his bullet wound. jake resumes his quest to save people despite his job's parameters. an hour has passed and everybody still onnoard were hoping for the dragon to pick them up next. the boat was half sunk when it's visible side rises out of the water, the gigantic chimneys of the giganttic started to give way. the chimneys were no threat because they fell on piopleless/boatless waters but on was quit peristent to fall on the boat jakes loved ones were in. this is another chapter to increaing jakes pain and suffering. while jake was still flying toward the huge cylinder of metal, rose was sendind wave after wave of green energy from her hunts-staff dealing massive dents to delay the fall. jake reaches the chimney and bloks it. rose understood that he would become too worn out if he were to finish this job. she shoots a beam at the foot of the chimney to separate it from the ship. jake then flings the cylindrical deathtool and it managed to skip the water several times before sinking towards the cold abyss. the boat is nearly sunk and everyone of the 2000+ passengers of the ship was either in an escape boat or on water. jakes suffering goes to the extreme. the ship splits in half and starts it's slow descent to escape boats in the water. jake attempts to lift the half. this action has making his bullet wound to bleed again and jake has already sneazing and coughing out streams of red blood. minuites of a necessary torture paid off. the people were outside the range of the ship. just in time however for jakes magical strenth to fail him. the ship falls violently sandwhiching jake and sinks. since discovery channels mythbusters proved that s ahip sucking people downward after sinking is not true, jake resurfaces uncunciously back from the depths. nigel thrall (every ADJL fan knows him!), a british exchange student who happens to be a scorcere at the same time, was the nearest to the worn out dragon. he utters a spell for jake to get out of uncounciusness. since the school of red magic (normal attacking spells used by the good guys) doesn't promote healing, nigel, for the first time curses his lack of white magic. jake nevertheless flies once again in pain to tell nigel he owes the british magician. his suffering finally comes to an end after he delivered people to boats and large chunks of debis floating by. his energy was faiding again and falls on a floating wooden door. his eyes slowly let his vision fade while jake veiws the stars at the sky.
to be continued...
ADJL the grand legacy ep 3, gigantic tragedy
previously, jake was allowed by his family to go to a newly built ship named the gigantic. so far, his dreams seemed pretty normal, hes still waiting for another dream like his in ep.1 to reappear. meanwhile, the huntsclan just dumped his plan to destroy the magical world and rose is getting to the bottom of it.
continuing the story of jakes new life (literally), he just went to bed after any of his normal evenings. but this evening was different...
Jake: "[groaning while sleeping]"
jake was dreaming about the same man on his dream earlier, but this time he can make a compatible description of the man, he was wearing a short, pointy wizard's hat with a star on its tip. he was also wearing a huge cloak extending to the ground just enough to cover his feet but not long enough to make it an oversized cape. his shirt and pants was preatty uniformed, brown, long sleeved and has golden rings (part of the cloth)
along all the joints. he had brown hair but jake couldn't see his eyes due to the shadow left by his hair and hat. he speaks in the same unrecognizable language he heard him speak before.
Mystery man: "Lesach salamand diakon wael, (emphasizes) LEBRAN!!!"
the man then adds a new sentence to his previous lines.
Mystery man: "by the way, wake up!"
jake does indeed wake up and found himself waking up early in the morning, moments early for his 4:00 mark to depart the house, as if the man did him a favor by waking him up.
later on...
jake arives at the port where several students and passengers are waiting fo boarding. after a short search, he finds his 2 best friends in the world, trixie and spud.
Jake: "hey guys!!! wuz-up!"
Tixie: "hey jakey, nice of you to come!
Spud: "i'm surprized that you even made it!!!"
trixie elbows spud due to his wrong choice of words.
Jake: "it's okay guys, i understand. have any one of you two seen rose?
Spud: "is that her over there?"
jake looks to the direction spud points. he spots rose at the harbor gate wearing a sweater for fending of the early morning cold. when she walks nearer, people start to look at her too, the boys are just awestruck to see her beauty with only jake knowing rose, his girlfriend, is a deadly ninja. rose then approaches jake. the boys then get diapointed that their hopes of asking her out just went to the dogs.
Rose: "hi jake! hi trixie! hi spud!"
Jake: "any info. about the hunstman's new plan."
Rose: "he announced that he has something more powerfull than the skulls, if the skulls were a candlelight, his new plans are an inferno! but he never unveiled it, i tried to see his new plan but he was tottaly guarded."
Trixie: "did you hear that! that means that the huntsmaster has something stronger than an irreversable wish!
Spud: "i bet its my uncles recipe for a stew. man! when my uncle serves that thing up, everybody loses the food they just ate, although it did taste like snails. MMMM!!!"
Trixie: "EW!!! SPUD!!!!! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO SAY SOMETHING I CAN'T UNTHINK!!!!!
Spud: "sorry, but you should really try it, just make sure you haven't eaten anything yet to avoid the whole barfing thing."
Trixie: "IF YOU DON'T STOP TALKING, I'M GONNA BARF!!!!!
having said that, proff. rotwood appears with a mirophone just a second later to announce boarding
Rotwood: "attention hoodlums!!! the captain and crew has authorized boarding! please do not leave anything of your luggage or your super unnecesary rifraf unatended
Jake: (whispers to his friends) "would that uneccesary rifraf include him!?!
the 4 gigles softly and they start to board the ship. later that night at the gigantic's ballroom. everybody was either eating or talking loudly. jake ,who was seated in beside rose, invites her.
Jake: "it's too noisy here. does my lady like a time of privacy with me say... now at the bow?"
Rose: "why yes, our lady would."
as they left, jakes arch enemy at school, brad morton, son of a rich cop, and his gang notice the proposal. brad signals them to follow him. he and his gang then tracks the two undetected untill the two reach the bow.
Rose: "it's so romantic here jake! but, remember about what i said about our relationship to be, well, professional?"
Jake: "is what i'm about to do professional?"
he then kisses rose, lips to lips, rose gets shocked at contact but she decides to drift with her boyfriends kiss. those moments of romance lasted only seconds though.
Brad: "hey loser, that's my chick!"
Rose: (separates her lips with jake)"huh?"
Jake: "brad! aheheh, i'm not sure if i heard you right, but what did you say, PLAYBOY!!!"
Brad: "i said stay away from her, and this is for calling me playboy!!!"
brad punches jake right in the guts, rose gasps at the sight, brads gang the assists brad at his brawling. jakes kung fu moves allowed him to recieve only brad's punch and block/evade others. the defence of both sides were met with great and fierce resistance from the other. rose stops the fight.
Rose: "brad, stop it!!! why don't you realize that you just wan't me to look at me!!! i'm not an instrument you know!!! and *HERE"S* something for hurting *MY BOYFRIEND*!!!!!
rose slaps brad so hard in a way that she left something serius in brad's face in the process.
Brad: "*YYYYYYOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHH*"
Rose: "like it!?! to prove that we now have an enemy relationship, that slap will last on your vilain in heroes clothing face a mark that'll stay there for two months!!! NOW GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE I CALL THE CRUISE SHIP GUARDS!!!!!
Brad: "this isn't over jake short!"
brad and his gang march back into the path. jake notices rotten fish that "never survuved the trip to the party" hanging from a net just right above brad and his gang's heads. he decides to breath fire in the rope that suspend the fish in the air using his dragon powers. rose grasps jakes hand, an obvious idea came to his head that rose was [reventing them, but she later spoke to aim well for if he missed he won't get another kiss like earlier until after a weak. having said this jake aims and fires at the rope. the fish fall from the ne and brad's crew, including him. they will probably spend three hours in the shower rooms by that occurance.
meanwhile, the gigantics hull, was experiencing smooth sailing. but even with global warming, the atlantic remains a cold ocean, especially after dark. like the classic mivie titanic, an iceburg (in this situation was hidded beneath the waves) cuts through the hull. jake and rose were in a hallway when this happed. it sent shockwaves throughout the ship violently shaking it. the two hear the screams, shouts and cries for help at the ballroom. the walls start to crack and a slab falls from the ceiling heading strate for rose. jake pushes rose asside to save her. but, like any other hero, he is the one to be hit. he emmidiatley goes unconcius and wakes up hours later. he is in an escape boat with dozens of other people. his head was lying on suns lap, sun is his home economics teacher and dragon master for his sister. he jumps back to activity and looks at the gigantic. now has a quarter already engulfed in water.
Jake: "what happened!?! where's rose!?!"
Sun: "relax jake, rose and the others are probably on other escape boats. we just hit an underwater iceburg, that may answer your question."
Jake: "but there are still other people there!!! they won't get on the boats on time."
Sun: "take it easy jake, just hope they will and maybe the heavens will grant them a second chance."
Jake: "but that's a chance i'm not letting those people try to grasp in vain!!! i'm going over there"
Sun: "you may be a protector but it isn't included on your job to-"
Jake: "who said anything about me calling in for a midnight shift!?! those people need a savior and the american dragon is the only hero they have"
Man in the boat: "What on earth are you two on about. those people will swarm us if we go near them, it's best that we just let them die. it is their time, and we don't even have any relations with the majority of them."
Jake: "sun, count how many people are in this and other boats."
Sun: "jake-.......... be- [groan] be carefull."
Jake: "i will sun. DRAGON UP!!!"
jake's muscular wings speed of toward the sinking ship. the ocupants of the boat were wide-eyed.
Sun: "now listen people! i ask a favor of you to not-"
before she can finish her sentence, all people an the boat fainted. meanwhile, jake juist reached the ship while still airborne. people scream even louder at the sight of a red dragon flying in circles above them. jake dive to the ship and scoops as many people as he can. this proved difficult because some poeple were punching him due to the fact that they don't know the existance of magical creatures and their 3 1 guess that jake is going to eat them but jake just put them on an escape boat nearby which was still being filled with people. guards shot at him as he continues his deed. upon delivering his seven'th batch of people to a boat, a guard is finally able to shot him on the side of his gut even though the dragon was evaiding excellently. jake plunges to the ocean. he gets airborne again after he splahes to the sea. his thick dragon scales prevented the bullet to hit any internal organs for it to reash only the flesh. but his first experience of pain from a bullet made him realize that from now on his capabilities will be lessened due to the piercing pain. now everytime he goes back he shoots fire at any guard's gun shooting him. his sufering though just got started. brad and proff. rotwood (as any adjl fan knows that knows jake's existance as a dragon and knows that magical creatures exist) along with his kit for capturing magical creatures were in the highest floor. rotwood intended to clean his equipment on his ship but since brad doesn't know the dragon is humane, he grabs on of rotwoods guns and shoots jake with an electrified bola. now clear of guns, jake is hovering on one place counting how many people he can still fit in a boat. his eye catches the sight of the bola but it was to late. he was unable to avoid it and gets entangled. he is emmediatley electrecuted ad falls once again to the ocean. he rises from the waves still alive but he now has blood trickling down his mouth and nose. he flies to brad and rotwood and grabs them both jus in time before brads second volley. he drops them on the boat he was counting on. brad targets jake again but rotwood lowers his gun being held by brad to prevent jake from getting harmed. the people start to realize now that the dragon was trying to save them and thus some people even try to aproach him. the pain from his two hits made him land on the deck to recover his breath. people were staring at him still a little scared only to be mitigated by an exchange of words. his friends happen to be nearby.
Trixie: "Jake!!! are you alright"
jake takes to the air but hovers on the place he landed.
Spud: "what are you doing you know that-"
Jake: "know what!?! that i'm supposed to let these people drown because i'm the protector of magical creatures!?!
the crowd gasps but the interaction continues.
Trixie: "we know about that and we're....... supporting you. our point is just be carefull, your already hurt.
Spud: "remember, not only the people need you but the magical world needs you too."
Jake: " thanks guys!!! oh, before i go, have any of you seen rose."
Trixie: "she's over there controling the flow of people."
jake wastes no time and grabs his friends. he hastily delivers them to a boat nearby and goes to rose. the shock waves earlier weakened the gigantic's wall. a wall then starts to fall just above rose's head. luckily, rose has her hunts-staff and shoots a whole throught the wall so the wall just passed by her. jake grabs rose and delivers her to the boat trixie and spud were in. before jake jets toward more people, rose promises to help him whenever she has the chance. she gives jake a curtain she was grasping (probably when the gigantic was tilting antd it was her lifeline). jake ties the curtain to his stomach just above his bullet wound. jake resumes his quest to save people despite his job's parameters. an hour has passed and everybody still onnoard were hoping for the dragon to pick them up next. the boat was half sunk when it's visible side rises out of the water, the gigantic chimneys of the giganttic started to give way. the chimneys were no threat because they fell on piopleless/boatless waters but on was quit peristent to fall on the boat jakes loved ones were in. this is another chapter to increaing jakes pain and suffering. while jake was still flying toward the huge cylinder of metal, rose was sendind wave after wave of green energy from her hunts-staff dealing massive dents to delay the fall. jake reaches the chimney and bloks it. rose understood that he would become too worn out if he were to finish this job. she shoots a beam at the foot of the chimney to separate it from the ship. jake then flings the cylindrical deathtool and it managed to skip the water several times before sinking towards the cold abyss. the boat is nearly sunk and everyone of the 2000+ passengers of the ship was either in an escape boat or on water. jakes suffering goes to the extreme. the ship splits in half and starts it's slow descent to escape boats in the water. jake attempts to lift the half. this action has making his bullet wound to bleed again and jake has already sneazing and coughing out streams of red blood. minuites of a necessary torture paid off. the people were outside the range of the ship. just in time however for jakes magical strenth to fail him. the ship falls violently sandwhiching jake and sinks. since discovery channels mythbusters proved that s ahip sucking people downward after sinking is not true, jake resurfaces uncunciously back from the depths. nigel thrall (every ADJL fan knows him!), a british exchange student who happens to be a scorcere at the same time, was the nearest to the worn out dragon. he utters a spell for jake to get out of uncounciusness. since the school of red magic (normal attacking spells used by the good guys) doesn't promote healing, nigel, for the first time curses his lack of white magic. jake nevertheless flies once again in pain to tell nigel he owes the british magician. his suffering finally comes to an end after he delivered people to boats and large chunks of debis floating by. his energy was faiding again and falls on a floating wooden door. his eyes slowly let his vision fade while jake veiws the stars at the sky.
to be continued...