Post by zero on Jul 15, 2009 10:49:18 GMT -5
chapter 4 start of love!
in dreams..
jake: ok rose you're back to NY??
rose: yep! i'm coming to school tomorrow.
jake: that's great!
then dream ends...
jake wakes up and walks to downstairs.
jake: good morning mom&dad!
mom&dad: good morning!
haley: jake I want you to take me to school!
jake: but...
dad: no but's!!!
jake: allright...
later...
haley: jake, I need to paint a painting for my homework tomorrow.
care to be model???
jake: no!!!
haley: but...
jake talks like dad: no but's!!!
at school...
dragonboy: so this is school... jake taked dragonboy to school with him
jake: you haven't never been in a school???
dragonboy: no. never.
at same time rose walked around a corner and yelled to jake: hi jake!
jake: hi rose, sup? dragonboy this is rose, rose this is dragonboy.
rose&dragonboy: nice to meet ya.they shake hands.
rose: what a strage name you have, are you a dragon??
dragonboy: I don't want talk about it , and remember in school call me kevin.
jake&rose : got ya!
rose: so kevin, where are you from??
dragonboy said in angry tone: I said I don't want to talk about it!
jake quietly say's to rose: his parents died in a car crash after a
lot of strange things have been happening, his just a kid remember?
he wants a loving family of his own but before i became his friend
he didn't have anybody.
rose: aww.. poor fellow..
dragonboy: I heard that!
rose: does that mean you don't have feelings??
dragonboy: aah.. I'm sorry..
rose: that's better.
jake turns to rose: don't mind kevin he's usually very sensitive.
rose: yeah, tell me about it!
after school..
jake: care to come over ourside? dragonboy could teach you magic?
rose: I loved to but I promissed mom&dad I help them at home.
dragonboy: then you can't come?
rose: no...
jake: allright.. see you at dream tonight!
rose: I'll be there!
dragonboy: me too!
jake: why you little!!
jake started to chase kevin.
dragonboy: DRAGON UP!
jake: DRAGON UP!
and they flyed away.
rose laught a bit and ten steped towards home.
end of the chapter 4
that's my first fanfic so it maybe a little boring but what you think?
in dreams..
jake: ok rose you're back to NY??
rose: yep! i'm coming to school tomorrow.
jake: that's great!
then dream ends...
jake wakes up and walks to downstairs.
jake: good morning mom&dad!
mom&dad: good morning!
haley: jake I want you to take me to school!
jake: but...
dad: no but's!!!
jake: allright...
later...
haley: jake, I need to paint a painting for my homework tomorrow.
care to be model???
jake: no!!!
haley: but...
jake talks like dad: no but's!!!
at school...
dragonboy: so this is school... jake taked dragonboy to school with him
jake: you haven't never been in a school???
dragonboy: no. never.
at same time rose walked around a corner and yelled to jake: hi jake!
jake: hi rose, sup? dragonboy this is rose, rose this is dragonboy.
rose&dragonboy: nice to meet ya.they shake hands.
rose: what a strage name you have, are you a dragon??
dragonboy: I don't want talk about it , and remember in school call me kevin.
jake&rose : got ya!
rose: so kevin, where are you from??
dragonboy said in angry tone: I said I don't want to talk about it!
jake quietly say's to rose: his parents died in a car crash after a
lot of strange things have been happening, his just a kid remember?
he wants a loving family of his own but before i became his friend
he didn't have anybody.
rose: aww.. poor fellow..
dragonboy: I heard that!
rose: does that mean you don't have feelings??
dragonboy: aah.. I'm sorry..
rose: that's better.
jake turns to rose: don't mind kevin he's usually very sensitive.
rose: yeah, tell me about it!
after school..
jake: care to come over ourside? dragonboy could teach you magic?
rose: I loved to but I promissed mom&dad I help them at home.
dragonboy: then you can't come?
rose: no...
jake: allright.. see you at dream tonight!
rose: I'll be there!
dragonboy: me too!
jake: why you little!!
jake started to chase kevin.
dragonboy: DRAGON UP!
jake: DRAGON UP!
and they flyed away.
rose laught a bit and ten steped towards home.
end of the chapter 4
that's my first fanfic so it maybe a little boring but what you think?