Post by zero on Jul 16, 2009 10:05:26 GMT -5
ok guy's I hope you enjoyed other chapters and here's chapter 5
chapter 5 I dont love you...
it was just a normal day for jake long and he was laying on his bed.
15.45 allready! man I'm bored! say'd jake.
at this moment (just remember dragonboy and kevin
are one person) kevin entered to room.
sup jake? bored ? he asked.
ofcourse! or what do I look like , super excited?? jake yelled.
calm down.. want to hang out with me?? kevin asked.
ok , think that won't be a problem... but don't forget I have to get to
dragon training!
calm down! remember I train with your gramps too???
ok, allright let's go. say'd jake as they left the room.
later...
as they walk down the street ´kevin asks: so jake how is it with the rose?
pretty good for the start, but why do you ask? asks jake.
kevin dosen't say anything.
kevin , I see at your face something is wrong and I don't think
that's because of that F today, you never care about crades, what's wrong?
kevin looked like he was going to cry but he still didn't say anything.
C'mon you can trust me , Iam your friend!
do you really want to hear? kevin asked.
yes.
jake, I don't want to be that person who told's you but enjoy rose while
you still can!
what do you mean by that ? asked jake who seemed to be obviously confused
about what kevin say'd.
look, jake you did bring her memories back but you
didn't bring her feelings back. say'd kevin.
you mean...
yes jake, feelings are one thing what dosen't gome back so easily, when
she say'd she loved you or something she lied.
rose would never lie to me and if she did
what should I do? asked jake.
I say you got to start from beginning or go on with the life find new GF.
you don't understand kevin, I could never leave her! say'd jake.
and once again, Im sorry. say'd kevin as he runed away.
kevin come back! yelled jake but it was too late , kevin was gone.
later in gramps shop...
jake's late over 10 minutes, I've got a bad feeling about it, do you
know anything about it kevin? say'd gramps.
I know a little but, I don't know why he's late. say'd kevin.
"d*mn! I shoudn't leave him alone like that!" he tought.
meanwhile in dream world...
hi jake I'm here! say'd rose.
hi!say'd jake.
listen jake, there's something I want to tell you. say'd rose.
and that would be?
jake I am sorry I know all thing's you've done for me, but I don't have
feeling's for you anymore.
say what!
I think we need to go on with the life and find a new BF and GF and I'm
sorry, really but' I feel nothing for you anymore. say'd rose as she runed
away...
so, kevin was right... say'd jake.
end of chapter 5
I've made some chances and I hope you like the chapter, comment!
chapter 5 I dont love you...
it was just a normal day for jake long and he was laying on his bed.
15.45 allready! man I'm bored! say'd jake.
at this moment (just remember dragonboy and kevin
are one person) kevin entered to room.
sup jake? bored ? he asked.
ofcourse! or what do I look like , super excited?? jake yelled.
calm down.. want to hang out with me?? kevin asked.
ok , think that won't be a problem... but don't forget I have to get to
dragon training!
calm down! remember I train with your gramps too???
ok, allright let's go. say'd jake as they left the room.
later...
as they walk down the street ´kevin asks: so jake how is it with the rose?
pretty good for the start, but why do you ask? asks jake.
kevin dosen't say anything.
kevin , I see at your face something is wrong and I don't think
that's because of that F today, you never care about crades, what's wrong?
kevin looked like he was going to cry but he still didn't say anything.
C'mon you can trust me , Iam your friend!
do you really want to hear? kevin asked.
yes.
jake, I don't want to be that person who told's you but enjoy rose while
you still can!
what do you mean by that ? asked jake who seemed to be obviously confused
about what kevin say'd.
look, jake you did bring her memories back but you
didn't bring her feelings back. say'd kevin.
you mean...
yes jake, feelings are one thing what dosen't gome back so easily, when
she say'd she loved you or something she lied.
rose would never lie to me and if she did
what should I do? asked jake.
I say you got to start from beginning or go on with the life find new GF.
you don't understand kevin, I could never leave her! say'd jake.
and once again, Im sorry. say'd kevin as he runed away.
kevin come back! yelled jake but it was too late , kevin was gone.
later in gramps shop...
jake's late over 10 minutes, I've got a bad feeling about it, do you
know anything about it kevin? say'd gramps.
I know a little but, I don't know why he's late. say'd kevin.
"d*mn! I shoudn't leave him alone like that!" he tought.
meanwhile in dream world...
hi jake I'm here! say'd rose.
hi!say'd jake.
listen jake, there's something I want to tell you. say'd rose.
and that would be?
jake I am sorry I know all thing's you've done for me, but I don't have
feeling's for you anymore.
say what!
I think we need to go on with the life and find a new BF and GF and I'm
sorry, really but' I feel nothing for you anymore. say'd rose as she runed
away...
so, kevin was right... say'd jake.
end of chapter 5
I've made some chances and I hope you like the chapter, comment!