Post by Gale on Sept 9, 2006 1:26:13 GMT -5
Hey! If you wish to read the long part of Chapter 1, feel free to read it
Chapter 1-Changes
What I wish was to be like Jake, you know, transforming into a muscular dragon and go on fighting evil villians or whatever that I can take advantage of.
So, one day, I was taking a bus to school. I was daydreaming about the same old fantasy about dragons. Didn't I know, it actually seem to come true at all. I alighted the bus and walked on with my file clipped between my armpit. As I was walking along, a shining red glint caught my eye.
I scanned the whole place and finally located it at the top of the tree. Being so curious about what the glint is, I threw my file as if it was a frisbee and hit straight to the glint. The object fell and it was a red ruby. To avoid people watching me, I grabbed it and ran to school straightaway.
During recess, I analysed the jewel, trying to find an inscription or engravement at any part of the jewel. I found an inscription on the back. It just says "FIRE DRAGON". I thought that it was the name of the jewel. Having my imagination run wild, after school, I went to the Home Economics Room which was a deserted place.
Remember my fantasy? So, I shouted "Dragon Up!".
Nothing happened up but then, it hit me. I shouted once again, "Fire Dragon Up!"
I began to feel the transformation spreading through my body. I began to transform into a Fire Dragon. When I look at the mirror, I look like the American Dragon except that the face is a bit different.
"WOW!" I thought,"I have actually finally reached my dreams. To be like Jake."
So, I practised flying and firebreathing, having to extinguish the fire everytime, I achieved. I retransformed and return home
--End Of Chapter 1--
So, is this much better than the short one? Hmm..?
Chapter 1-Changes
What I wish was to be like Jake, you know, transforming into a muscular dragon and go on fighting evil villians or whatever that I can take advantage of.
So, one day, I was taking a bus to school. I was daydreaming about the same old fantasy about dragons. Didn't I know, it actually seem to come true at all. I alighted the bus and walked on with my file clipped between my armpit. As I was walking along, a shining red glint caught my eye.
I scanned the whole place and finally located it at the top of the tree. Being so curious about what the glint is, I threw my file as if it was a frisbee and hit straight to the glint. The object fell and it was a red ruby. To avoid people watching me, I grabbed it and ran to school straightaway.
During recess, I analysed the jewel, trying to find an inscription or engravement at any part of the jewel. I found an inscription on the back. It just says "FIRE DRAGON". I thought that it was the name of the jewel. Having my imagination run wild, after school, I went to the Home Economics Room which was a deserted place.
Remember my fantasy? So, I shouted "Dragon Up!".
Nothing happened up but then, it hit me. I shouted once again, "Fire Dragon Up!"
I began to feel the transformation spreading through my body. I began to transform into a Fire Dragon. When I look at the mirror, I look like the American Dragon except that the face is a bit different.
"WOW!" I thought,"I have actually finally reached my dreams. To be like Jake."
So, I practised flying and firebreathing, having to extinguish the fire everytime, I achieved. I retransformed and return home
--End Of Chapter 1--
So, is this much better than the short one? Hmm..?