AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Mar 9, 2007 11:07:43 GMT -5
heres my story aint finished it yet but another part to go its 5 chapters per part and heres chapter 1. the spelling is a bit crap but its cool
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AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Mar 9, 2007 11:08:12 GMT -5
HAWK MARINES mutation unleashed. CHAPTER 1 the approach
it is 0600 hours, my ship the 7th Battalion distroyer Threshold picked up a distress signal from a civilian reserch lab space station. Testing several weapons grade viruses and bio missles. Also proto-type lazer and plasma weapons. The station is orbiting an earth like planet with more civillian labs and one of my bases. My name is General Nathanial Locke and i have been called to cheak it out, radio contact was unsucsessful, and we are not treating this as a bio-hazard situation and i hope it was just a chemical spill and nothing more serious than that. This is general locke signing off.
ship computer "Hyperspace window deactivated, the time is 2300 hours the year is 2243. Current location bravo9er military research lab location 6645L*GFT00@9 in the milkyway galaxy. Have a nice day" "general we are approaching the space station" said sergeant cole "i heard the bloody computer sergeant" i shouted "Pilot maintain current course and settle the ship in low orbit". "yes general" the pilot said the ships engines powered down and we were now in orbit around the planet. "GENERAL! i have the station in sight" the pilot shouted, "ok" i pushed talk on my PDA "communications the is the general relay a message to the station" "yes sir your PDA is connected over". "bravo9er station this is general Locke of the 7th Battalion we have received your distress call do you need assistance over" radio static followed "civilian station do you receive me over" more radio static "engineering scan the station" "yes sir" i waited for the scanner to complete "general the scanner has picked up life-forms aboard the station but the power is offline" "ok" i said "prep a ship and ill take black 7 and we will check it out over".
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AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Mar 12, 2007 12:16:29 GMT -5
is anyone gunna ****ing read it or shall i not bother
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Post by sizler on Mar 26, 2007 17:56:39 GMT -5
its good im reading it.
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AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Mar 27, 2007 19:03:37 GMT -5
HAWK MARINES mutation unleashed chapter 2 atmosphere 0% "ok team listen up our objectives are simple board the ship, reactivate the generator, and search sector 1, the bridge and so on you got that" i stated "SIR YES SIR!!!" "ok im going to prep a tiger the powers off so your going to have to ware envirosuits and im coming with you" "yes sir" "ok lets get geared up" "SIR YES SIR!". We walked to the armory and geared up for mission ahead we only packed light but i with we packed heavy. "Sergeant i want you to pack an SMG, lieutenant i want you and the rest of the team to pack the assault gear GR7 assault rifles with shot guns and frag grenades. Im going to take a GR7 with grenade launcher and frag and smoke grenades and remember lazer sights, scopes and flashlights got it" "yes sir" " OK LETS MOVE!!!". We ran down the corridor in or envirosuites and clutching out assault rifles we reached the hanger and we boarded the tiger (heavy recon/cargo ship), started up the engines and flew out the hanger. From now on we were on our own my ship retreated to a low orbit around the planet. Then we approached the stations hanger we turned the front lights on and seen a couple of ships but we seen no-one "ok team we have to switch on the power". We got into the hanger then landed the place was huge and this was just one hanger of twelve so we depresureized the ship and walked out we floated abound abit the gravity as well as life support was offline and we needed to switch on the power. JAK3ST3R B© 2007 www.freewebs.com/britishdragonsclan
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Post by sizler on Mar 27, 2007 19:24:41 GMT -5
good keep continuing looks like im ur only reader lol
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AGNOSCO
Mythobiologist
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Posts: 216
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Post by AGNOSCO on Mar 27, 2007 19:31:04 GMT -5
lol
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AGNOSCO
Mythobiologist
Original Raving Feline
Posts: 216
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Post by AGNOSCO on Mar 31, 2007 16:31:36 GMT -5
HAWK MARINES mutation unleashed Chapter 3 power contribution we reached power contribution room 5 near the virul weapons research labs, the door was locked tight and with no power, no way to open it."how the **** are we gunna open this door" i shouted "urrm sir" "YES!!" "i have a block of breach thermite" said sergent baker "now were talking" i said "put it on the door lock, it should melt it off" i orderd "yes sir" sergent baker carefully placed the door breach thermite on the lock, then he set the detenator, we took cover. BOOM!, yellow sparks were flying everywhere, along with a bright white light, it stoped, then we herd a clunk on the floor, the lock dropped off, i stood up and i walked over to the door and gave it a good kick the door swung open and smashed against the wall inside. "ok 1st obstickle avoided" i mumbled, i started to walk in to the room with the guns laser sight and torch on, i looked around then i saw blood everywhere. "hey marines take a look at this"i said " its a tech guy with half his chest missing". "aww man i think im gunna hurl!" said lieutenant syler "lieutenant shut up and pull yourself together" i shouted "yeh sir" he replied "ok tag the body and lets get moving" i orderd. "hey man what do you think killed that guy, i dont wanna bloody well know" chatted the marines. we fineily reached the main power reset computer i switch off everything then reset the computer. -main power system reset, life support systems activated, artifisial gravity activated, main power systems restarted- i looked at the diagnostics screen life support was 100% power was 100% all the lights went on everything was going smoothly until the computer alarm went on -WARNING main sercurity systems reset, all main sercurity protocols inactive- "oh parc" i shouted "we need to turn them back on NOW!!" i shouted i removed the envirosuit helmet and chucked it on the floor. "we need to go to the main security control room NOW!! oh parc!! we need to go through the virul weapons labs" i shouted. that is when it started to get ugly.
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Zen
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Post by Zen on Mar 31, 2007 16:55:17 GMT -5
good so far
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AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Apr 1, 2007 12:26:58 GMT -5
HAWK MARINES mutation unleashed part 1: chapter 4 .. the lone survivor?
We loaded our weapons then set off the the virul weapons labs. something about that body in the power contribution room did not seem right. Anyway we had a job to do, our objectives were simple, secure the station, find out what the hell was going on, sort out the problem by any means nessesary. we didnt get far down the corridor that we hit closed emergancy doors, the hull must have been damaged the atmosphere was seeping out. We had to find another way around. "sergent!" "yes sir" "get the station scematics uploaded to my pda asap" i ordered "yes sir". When the scematics were uploaded i tryed to find the quickest way to the labs. there was a service access tunnel between the floors. If we got into it we could pop out in the middle of the labs."how the **** are we gunna get up there" said sergent baker "maybee theres an access ladder somewhere' said lieutenant syler "urrm general, theres a vent shaft in the ceiling that is connected to the service tunnel. if we got into it we could just kick out another vent grill inside the tunnel"said conal mitchell "good thinking mitchell" i said "ok lets bust that grill off and get into the vent, ill get in first and take the other grill off then ill raideo you". "yes sir". I climbed into the vent, switched on my torch and crawled to the vent grill i grabbed hold of it and smashed it off, then climbed up i looked around, and seen nothing."im in the service tunnel its clear, make your way here now ill cover the position, OVER"i raidoed "copy that". the rest of my team started to climb up into the vent shaft, i was looking around then i seen a pool of blood on the floor "what the ****" i whispered to my self, i looked up there was the floor vent leading to the vurul weaponry labs, i tried to open it, it was locked tight, it was surcurly bolted shut we had to blow it open. The team finally made it the the service tunnel me met up 50 meters down "we need to blow this open, its the only way to get in. steve have you got any beach charges?"i said to lieutenant syler "no sir im all out" "parc!! i have an idea, my gun it has a grenade launcher all frag the thing open!". i loaded a frag grenade into the launcher "take cover!" i fired the grenade, it made a very loud explotion the place filled with smoke. "cough,cough, parc that seemed to do it" i said. as i walked upto the hole in the ceiling an arm dropped down in-front of me. "oh god damn it!, thats ****in messed up" i shouted "ok team avoid the limb on the floor and get up there" i said. we all climbed up into the labs, "holy parc" i shouted. There was writing on the wall in blood it said, leave now!. "what the hell thats dermented" i said. we heard a smash and looked around, i saw a person, a scientist just standing there, "hey you, were from the hawk marines. i intercepted your destress call im here to help" i said he did'nt reply "lieutenant go wake him up, give him a shove" yes sir, "yo fool can you hear me? im asking you a question fool!" shouted LT mitchell thats when it started to get ugly, mitchell pushed him he turned around. he started growning" what the ****" mitchell , the scientist's face was half gone, he had blood all over him, then suddenly he grabbed mitchell "ahhhhhhh!" the scientist shouted and ripped a chunk out of this neck and started eating him "oh parc" i shouted i run up to him and punched the scientist in the face i floored him, " ahh parc ahh **** mitchell was shouting "help him now!' i shouted as i was turned around the scientist got back up and grabbed me and scrached my arm making it bleed "ahhhhhharg! you sick mutha ****er" i shouted and shot it's knee caps off hoping it would stop him, but it just kelp coming, "what the hell" i shot him 3 times in the chest still he kept comming, then he swung for me, i dodged it and smacked him with the end of my gun, breaking his kneck, still he kelp comming "jesus christ he's invincible!" then i turned on my laser sight and put a round in his head, he growned then dropped to the floor, "take his' bang,bang i put 2 more rounds in his chest to make sure he is dead. "What the **** is going on here this looks like something out of resedent evil" i shouted. then it started to get worse. beleve me you would'nt want to be there.
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Zen
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Post by Zen on Apr 1, 2007 12:41:29 GMT -5
Nice
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AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Apr 2, 2007 7:10:12 GMT -5
chapter 5 and chapter 6 are still being written
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AGNOSCO
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Post by AGNOSCO on Apr 6, 2007 9:12:50 GMT -5
HAWK MARINES mutation unleashed part 1 chapter 5: mutation unleashed
"mitchell hang in there ok thats an order!, get him up, there is an infirmary down the hall" i shouted. me and sergeant baker and the rest of the marines ran down the corridor with me holding mitchell on my back. "open that ****in door now!" i said, i put mitchell down on the table "medic get here now! i shouted "sir can you hear me" said carter "ahh parc his pupils are dilated, marine put pressure on that wound" i shouted "parc is pulse is weak GET SOME ADRENALIN READY NOW!" carter shouted, beep beep beeeeeeeeep, "his heart has stopped, GET ME THE PADDLES NOW!' carter shouted "charging 50%, CLEAR!" beep beeeeeeeeeep, "ahh parc give me the adrenalin NOW! charging 100% CLEAR" beep beeeeeeeep, "c'mon Mitchell don't ****in die on me now" i said "sir he's dead" carter said "parc, parc ****IN parc!" i shouted 'AHHHHRRGGG" i picked up a table and smashed it on the floor. "bag him and tag him" i said "yes sir". " we will stay here for a bit then we will continue to the main control room im tired, its been a long day" i said.
"i want to know what they were doing here to cause this parc" i said lights cigarette "ive got a big ****in cut on my arm from that thing and it hurts" i said "let me take a look" carter said "jesus christ its gone green" carter said "WTF!" i shouted "just patch it up" i said "yes sir". little did i know that this cut on my arm would cause big problems later, very big problems.
It has been 6 hours after we boarded the station. I was starting to get very pissed off at the fact that my best sniper was now dead in a body bag. "we have to continue moving to the control room" i ordered whist putting out my cigarette. "lets get moving, hey wait! where is mitchell, his body has gone!" i questioned "i dunno sir, he was there 30 minits ago?" sergeant baker said. we all heard some groaning coming fro a dark corner. "what the, ahhhhhhh parc!" syler shouted it was mitchell ripping a chunk out of sylers neck. "oh my god syler!" baker shouted "he's ****in mutated ahhhh parc shoot him ****ing shoot him" syler shouted. the mutant dropped syler its eyes were bright red and blood was dripping from his mouth it let out a high pitched skreel. "ahh parc" i shouted, it smashed over a table and looked at me growling "carter point your smg at it" yes sir" carter said mitchell started to run at me, me and baker looked at each other " let kill that basterd!" "oh yeh" we both said. We let out a hail of bullets hitting the mutant and smashing up the wall behind it. mitchell droped to the floor, we stopped shooting "this is a virus, now ive got an idea on what was so top secret here" i said "yes sir baker said "carter are you alrite?" yes sir" carter replied "ok lets go" we ran out the door and headed to the main station complex. now it starts, mutation unleashed!
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AGNOSCO
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Posts: 216
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Post by AGNOSCO on Apr 6, 2007 9:21:37 GMT -5
up comming chapters
chapter 6 : assault on the control room
chapter 7 : reactor overload
chapter 8 : tango neutralized
then hawk marines part 2 : mutation evolved
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Zen
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Post by Zen on Apr 6, 2007 15:24:36 GMT -5
Nice very nice very nice
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