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Post by adjlfan4life on Feb 4, 2006 16:15:26 GMT -5
This is cool.
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Post by coolgirlc on Feb 5, 2006 17:29:22 GMT -5
cool story!
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Post by coolgirlc on Feb 5, 2006 17:29:51 GMT -5
update
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Post by dave on Feb 6, 2006 7:45:19 GMT -5
Coolgirlc, I update one chapter every weekday except on Holidays.
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February 6, 2006 Episode
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*Jake helps the girl off the ground.*
Jake: I can’t believe this.
Girl: Believe it.
Jake: Rose...
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Trixie: What is going on up in here?
*Mya turns to Trixie.*
Mya: I think your father and I are going to get a divorce.
*Jamal gives Mya a shocked look.*
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*David walks to the bathroom and thinks to himself.*
David (thinking): I know she clearly said dragon powers and then she lied. What is she covering up?
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Rose: I missed you Jake.
Jake: Why did you come back?
Rose: I came back for you.
*She gets up and hugs him.*
Jake (thinking): Why do I still love her?
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Jamal: Honey, aren’t you going a little overboard with this?
Mya: You cheated on me, I don’t think I am going overboard at all.
Jamal: Mya, I didn’t think I was coming home at all!
Mya: I was worried you wouldn’t either but I still held out for you!
Jamal: You should of tried to move on!
================================================================== *David comes out of the bathroom and walks downstairs.*
David: Honey?
Faye: Yes?
*She comes out of the kitchen.*
David: I want to talk to you now.
Faye: What is wrong:?
David: I want you to stop lying and tell me the truth!
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Jake: Rose...
*Rose pulls away.*
Rose: Yes Jake?
Jake: I still love you!
*He quickly pulls her in and they kiss passionately.*
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Mya: I wouldn’t have done that! That is wrong to do to someone you love!
Jamal: What are you talking about?
Mya: Evidently cheating to you is ok!
Trixie: Will you two stop arguing?!
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*Faye has a look of fear in her eyes but she tries to hid it from being seen in her face.*
Faye: What are you talking about?
David: What were you talking to Haley about? Something about dragon powers?
Faye: It was just a story, nothing else.
David: I want you to tell me the truth and tell me now!
*Faye looks with worry at Dave.*
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*Rose and Jake pulls away and stares into each other’s eyes.*
Jake: I love you so much Rose. I want to stay with you.
Rose: I want to stay with you too.
*They pull in for another kiss.*
Jake (thinking): I love her so much. I would be nothing without her.
Rose (thinking): I love him so much. I don’t know what I would do if I didn’t have him.
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Mya: Trixie, please go to your room.
Trixie: But mom...
Mya: Now!
*Trixie walks to her room and closes the door. She listens in.*
Jamal: You didn’t have to yell at her.
Mya: Well, I didn’t mean to, but I am so mad at you I did.
*Trixie falls asleep while listening.*
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Faye: Honey, listen, I was just telling her a story. It was nothing more.
David: Just a story? Then why do you act like it was something more than that? Why do you?
Faye: I am not acting like it was something more. I am just giving you the answer you asked me for.
David: I still think there is something bigger than that going on and I am going to figure it out.
Faye: Honey, don’t do this.
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*Jake and Rose pull away again and before they know what is happening, Jake transforms into his dragon form and Rose gets on his back. They take off into the air.*
Rose: It is such a pretty view up here.
Jake: I love it. But not as much as I love you.
Rose: I love you so much Jake. I want to be with you forever.
*Rose hugs Jake as far as her arms would allow to go around Jake.*
Jake: I love feeling you holding me like that.
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Faye: Drop this Dave, you are investigating into a worthless subject.
David: I love you Faye, but something is going on.
*David leaves the house.*
Faye: That was too close.
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*Trixie wakes up to the sound of more arguing.*
Jamal: Mya, I can’t stand this!
*Trixie opens her door and goes into the living room.*
Mya: You can just sleep outside!
Trixie: What is going on?!
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*Jake and Rose arrive at Jake’s house. They go in.*
Jake: I love you Rose!
Rose: I love you Jake!
*They go into his room and clothing is shed.*
Faye: What is going on?
*She walks up the stairs.*
Rose: Take me Jake! Let me be yours!
Faye (thinking): Are they doing what I think they are doing?!
Jake: We will be each other’s!
*They kiss passionately and fall back onto the bed clothes less.*
Faye (thinking): What is going on?!
*Jake and Rose start to make love as they kiss.*
Faye (thinking): Please don’t let it be...
*Faye opens the door quietly and without being noticed. She sees the sight of the room.*
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Preview for 2/7/06
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Faye: What the hell do you think you were doing?!
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David: I know that something is up with my family.
Laoshi: We are dragons.
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Rose (thinking): Why do I feel sick?
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Post by crazy17 on Feb 6, 2006 11:12:53 GMT -5
Wow. That was pretty good!
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Post by erty3556 on Feb 7, 2006 0:08:50 GMT -5
yay my first post! yay my first post! ;D that last one was good but their leik13!!!!!! i think the s*x was a little to much.... o well
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Post by garththewerewolf on Feb 7, 2006 2:22:23 GMT -5
Ewww that last chapter was creepy.... They waay to young to be havin sex. Seriously Jake hasn't even hit puberty yet >.<
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Post by dave on Feb 7, 2006 7:48:38 GMT -5
I don't have today's chapter done yet. It will be done later. But in regard to the Rose/Jake thing. I don't do things like that without a reason .
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Post by saphiredragon89 on Feb 7, 2006 16:04:49 GMT -5
Such drama......I love it! Keep on going! ;D
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Post by erty3556 on Feb 16, 2006 14:27:42 GMT -5
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by americanhuntsgirl on Feb 22, 2006 19:46:20 GMT -5
Go on. BUt the hole Jake/Rose thing was just so werid.......WERID!!!HAHA i stared to read this and just knew that the girl was rose!HAHA!!Go on
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