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Post by dragonfire on Oct 10, 2005 5:43:02 GMT -5
yeah! never knew you were a love writer! your GREAT! KEEP GOING LOVE IT!
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 10, 2005 9:41:48 GMT -5
Thanx you guys! Here's scene 2 for all of you!
Scene 2-Location-One week after last scene, Lao's Shop, morning on friday
Fu still was confused. Who was the person on the other line? And what would Magenta tell that person to make him say "It's okay. I'm one too"?
He then footsteps coming from upstairs. Magenta emerged and quickly scrambled out the front door. Fu decided to follow her for lack of a better way to know what she was up to. She turned the corner and Fu followed. Lucky for Fu there was not many people out this morning. This made it much easier to keep track of Magenta. After a few turns, Magenta finally stopped next to Timberwolf!
Fu: *thinking*: What!? What is she doing with him instead of me!?
Fu started to bark at Timberwolf, knowing that he could do no more in front of him.
Magenta: He already knows, Fu.
Fu: Knows what? I mean, uh...woof!
Magenta: That.
Fu: Oh. Okay then. Well, still, what are you doing with my Girlfriend!?
Magenta: You mean your ex-girlfriend.
Fu: Wha-
Fu felt like he was shattered.
Fu *thinking*: She can't have really said that, can she? This has to be a nightmare!
Fu pretended to go away, and then did some eavesdropping on the two.
Magenta: When I told you I was really a dog that could shapeshift into anything, I didn't expect you to act so calm when you told me-
Fu: WHAT!?!
Magenta had actually told Timberwolf that she was really a dog? To Fu this was unbaleivable and unnacceptable!
Magenta: WHO'S SPYING ON US!?!
Magenta recieved no reply. She then sat back down and began talking to Timberwolf again.
Magenta: Anyway, I didn't think you'd be a shapeshifter like me, but it turns out you're really a wolf with shapeshifting abilities!
TB: So, do you want to go on a date some time?
Magenta: That would be wonderful!
Fu, hearing this, was broken hearted. He slowly walked back to Lao's shop, depressed.
End scene 2
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Post by magenta on Oct 10, 2005 9:44:47 GMT -5
GREAT!!! Awesome! I love this! Please update again real soon! ^^
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Post by greencomedian on Oct 10, 2005 10:16:07 GMT -5
coolness! the story's getting good. can't wait for the next chappie!
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 14, 2005 16:38:58 GMT -5
I'm SO sorry it took so long for me to get this scene up, I couldn't think of anything! Here it is though!
Scene 3-Location-Lao's Shop
Fu had just gotten back to Lao's shop and he sat down at the table. Then, he began to cry.
Fu *thinking to himself*: Fu, you idiot! You should've apologized to her earlier, and now look what you've done!
Lao heard the crying and went over to Fu.
Lao: Fu dog? What is the matter?
Fu stopped crying long enough to answer Lao.
Fu: It's Magenta! We got in a fight and now she's out with another boy who's also a shapeshifter!
Then, Fu's face brightened.
Fu: Wait a sec...if he's a wolf, and she's a dog, they can't date! I still have a chance!
Lao: Not really.
Fu: What do you mean not really?
Lao: Dogs are related to wolves. They can still date.
Fu started to cry again. Lao knew nothing of what he could do to make it up to him, so he went back to his room. ____________________________________________________________________________ Three minutes later... ____________________________________________________________________________
Magenta walked into the shop and saw Fu crying.
Magenta: Fu? What's the matter?
Fu didn't reply. He just kept on weeping. Magenta simply went upstairs. Then, in Fu's brain formed and idea to get Magenta back; to remove Timberwolf from the picture--for good!
End scene 3
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Post by maromi on Oct 14, 2005 19:35:42 GMT -5
Great job! C'mon don't stop! I want to know what happens!
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Post by magenta on Oct 14, 2005 19:41:48 GMT -5
Yeah! Don't stop yet! It's getting really good! ^___^
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 14, 2005 19:42:49 GMT -5
yes plz continue plz
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 19, 2005 19:52:37 GMT -5
I'm afraid I've reached a halt in developemont of this story. I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING! I'll have to continue this later.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Oct 19, 2005 21:40:29 GMT -5
Awww, sorry. The story was just getting good...
But take your time... I abandoned FFnet for a month since I have a BIG case of writer's block and I'm deciding on deleting a few stories. x.x
Anyways, I'll be waiting to see what happens. XP
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Post by dragonfire on Oct 21, 2005 7:24:31 GMT -5
awww... Meditate with me ummmmmm......... anything yet? ;D
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 22, 2005 9:58:40 GMT -5
I'm afraid I've met a major case of writer's block. I don't think I can continue this. Sorry!
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Post by mithos on Oct 22, 2005 10:00:30 GMT -5
Woah.... that's wierd.
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Post by chetchaka on Oct 22, 2005 10:01:15 GMT -5
What's weird?
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Post by mithos on Oct 22, 2005 10:03:28 GMT -5
I've never gotten that before. Dude, that's sad. I hope you can continue.
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