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Post by polydactyl on Sept 17, 2005 22:56:09 GMT -5
OK, here we go! This first chapter is just an introduction, no action yet!
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 1: Different[/glow]
PD had always been different. He kept to his studies and achieved straight a's. He had no interest in athletics or clubs. As a matter of fact, he didnt really have much of a social life. He preferred to eat in classrooms with teachers. Even when people invited him to sit at a table, he would make excuses. Everybody thought PD was a very strange person.
But none of them knew just how different he was. You see, PD had learned on his 13th birthday that he was a dragon. He could transform into one at any time. Even among dragons, he was considered different. He was a polydactyl, meaning that he had seven claws on each paw rather than five. He was doomed to be different forever...
As if this wasn't enough of a shock, he also learned that he was responsible for protecting the magical underworld of Arizona.
For the most part, PD kept his dragon identity a secret. He only thought about it when there was work to be done in the magical community. However, PD was about to be taken on the ride of his life, in both human and dragon form!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 17, 2005 23:01:44 GMT -5
*gasp* Great start! I told you you'd do well! Continue soon please! But, no pressure. ^_^
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Post by yfwe on Sept 17, 2005 23:08:29 GMT -5
Awesome PD! So glad you've finally started. It was very well written; I can't wait for the next one!
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Post by magenta on Sept 17, 2005 23:49:12 GMT -5
This is gonna be good! =D
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 18, 2005 0:04:20 GMT -5
You're telling me. =P
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Post by dragonfire on Sept 18, 2005 1:23:13 GMT -5
yay! im exited to read more! PD! PD! PD! PD!
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Post by polydactyl on Sept 18, 2005 1:34:03 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 2: A Venomous Threat[/glow]
It had been a normal day at school. PD was walking home as usual. Every afternoon, PD was to report to his older brother, who was his dragon master. Although his brother, David, had no magical powers of his own, he knew a great deal about the magical community. He knew so much, in fact, that he was granted an honorary position as PD’s master.
As PD opened the front door, he saw David waiting for him in the hall.
“Hey, Dave. What’s up?”
David responded with a frown. “I’m afraid I have some bad news,” he said.
PD’s eyes widened. Anytime David said these words, it meant a magical disaster was occurring in Arizona. It also meant the full concentration of PD’s efforts. Last time there was bad news, Graverobber was looting the Tombstone Chapter of the Rest of Interskeletal Parts Association (RIP). He was caught in the end, but PD was forced to miss a whole week of school.
“What is it this time?”
“The Gila Monsters of the Salt River are in great peril. They have been receiving anonymous threats. They have requested your protection and help in the matter.”
PD sighed. “What kind of threats?”
“They received a message via RattleGraph (Morse code submitted through the tail of a rattlesnake) a few days ago. The message warned the Gila Monsters to either give up 100 pints of their deadly venom or be mass executed. I take it you can guess who sent the message.”
Indeed he could. This type of threat could only come from one source, the Huntsclan. Dragon guardians around the world had problems with them. The Huntsclan was an international organization, made up of thousands of members. Their main purpose was to slay magical creatures. Though PD himself never had an encounter with them, he heard stories from other dragons of their wicked ways.
PD nodded in acknowledgement. Without further ado, he transformed into a dragon, and flew out the door towards his destination, the dry bed of the Salt River.
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 18, 2005 1:40:02 GMT -5
Yay! The second chapter has been updated... =DDDDDD
That explains the boredom that I was having while wanting to go outside and the not letting me. x.x; But the wait was worth it, though. Great second chapter! Update soon I tell you!
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Post by magenta on Sept 18, 2005 10:24:35 GMT -5
This is great^_^ Update soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 18, 2005 10:29:53 GMT -5
yes plz continue soon Polydactl
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Post by stranger on Sept 18, 2005 11:48:58 GMT -5
Pls continue soon pd!
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Post by polydactyl on Sept 18, 2005 12:23:13 GMT -5
I'm glad everyone likes it. ^_^
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 18, 2005 12:24:01 GMT -5
I knew it! You ARE a good fanfic writer, Polydactyl!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Sept 18, 2005 12:30:13 GMT -5
Of course they like it. I knew that betting for you being a great writer paid off.
Eh, just kidding, great second chapter. Hope that long review for you last night was long enough. =/
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Post by chetchaka on Sept 18, 2005 12:32:24 GMT -5
I now have three idols: Hero, Dragon and PD!
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