Alright Chapter one is pretty done in my mind so I put it here
Let's go ^^
Chapter One : No Known Hopes''Hey Jake wait'', Rose yelled. Jake turned around to see Rose running after him. He stopped walking towards Spud and Trixie.
''Hi Rose ! What's going on ? '', asked Jake
''Jake I want to tell you something'', said Rose blushing a bit.
'' Hmm, you blush so it's really personal and you don't really know how to tell me this, am I right ?? ''
Rose's face turned red by emotion. She smiled slyly and the whispered suddenly
''Jake, ummm... Do you want to be engaged ? ''
Jake looked at her astonished.
'' If you don't want this I can perfectly unders... ''
She couldn't go ahead: Jake just kissed her. A deep and sincere kiss. The broke apart and Rose picked out from one of her jean's pockets a small silver ring with a black diamond on it. She gently slid it on Jake's left hand medius. She said slyly
''This ring caught my eye and I thought that it will fit you good.''
''I've found this somewhere in my room. Dunno why but I think that you'll like it''
Jake grabbed from one of his pockets a beautiful silver dragon ring, covered by diamonds. Rose gasped :
''Oh my god Jake, it's so beautiful ! You hadn't to spend a billion for this you know ? ''
Jake simply replied '' Nothing will be enough to show you how much I love you''. He gently slid it on Rose's hand and the ring was perfect for her. Suddenly he kissed her again, a deep kiss that Rose wished that it will never had an end. Suddenly Brad ran towards her and stopped suddenly. The two star cross'd lovers broke apart and turned towards Brad. He was breathing deeply. He said
'' Rose... hh.. I ... hhh... want....hhh you to be my ... hhh fiancée... '' Rose simply replied
'' You're late Brad. Jake already asked me for this, and I said yes. So just go away. ''
Brad looked at them completely astonished. For him it wasn't possible, or even imaginable that Rose would be engaged with a boy like this. Not even in a nightmare ! Jake and Rose were calmly walking towards Spud and Trixie when suddenly Brad ran after them and grabbed her shoulder
'' Rose please, listen at me, I love you so much. I may look a lot like a n*rd but I'm not one ! I swear that I'll take care of you, of our kids, of our whole family. I'm begging you to stay !'' Rose answered
'' Let go Brad, I'm no more your girlfriends and I've never been yours''
She tried to pull away Brad's hand but he just wouldn't
'' Rose listen , he doesn't loves you, nobody loves you as much as I do''
He putted his other hand on her other shoulder and continued
''I swear that I'm sincere !''
''Okay Brad, I don't wanna hurt you but let go, I'm not your kind of girl''
She tried to turn around but he strengthened his hands around Rose. It was too much for Rose who yelled
'' I SAID LET GO OF IT BRAD ! '' She grabbed his left hand and pulled it as it was to the left, making it crack loudly. Brad screamed in pain and Rose used the occasion to knee him hardly in the b*lls. Brad's face turned white and he fell on the ground. Rose simply teased
'' Whith you Brad, the only thin I'll learn is how to f*ck my brains out all the time and it's not this kind of life that I want''
She turned around and left him on the ground, like a bleeding to death poor animal.
More than one hour later from this, Brad was sitting in a pub, drinking a beer. It was his almost his sixth of the evening and he'll certainly be completely drunk while going home, but it doesn't mattered. He was near Central Park and it was raining wildly. Suddenly a man came and sat near him. He ordered a whiskey and
suddenly looked at Brad.
'' Don't drink too much or you're going to vomit everywhere'', he said. Brad took another sip of his beer and doesn't even thought about answering him. The waiter gave him his whiskey, and he calmly took a sip of it.
'' It looks like that a big storm is coming isn't it ? I love rain,it can wipe out blood so fast ''
Brad suddenly turned toward the man and said
''What don't you shut the f*ck up ?'' He turned back to his beer but the man calmly said
'' You want a revenge hmmm ? Against these two ? Jake Long ? And his future wife ? Rose Turner ? I may can help you for this and I promise that after this she'll run right in your arms. ''
Brad turned at him and suddenly looked at him, like it it was the first time he was seeing him. He was wearing a long and black trenchcoat and boots as far as he could see from his seat. The also could see his head, completely bald, excepted for something who looked a lot like a big red tattoo. He said surprised
''How do you know them ?''
''I know them much more than you can even imagine... So you want to get your revenge and it will be easily arranged''
''Okay, I'm listening to you, what do you want ? '', said Brad
'' Just some info, some info about these two and all their family. After that I promise that for these two rain will have the color of blood. My... boss is really interested by these two and you're the perfect person to help us.'' He slyly turned toward Brad and he noticed that his skin was really pale. He also noticed that his voice was weird. It looked like that someone stabbed a speaker it the man's throat. He slyly shook his head, it was just an effect of his imagination.
''Alright, what do you want to know ? '', said Brad.
He just didn't heard the hard and frightening laugh of the man. All was going like they planned. '' This idiot just doesn't know that he'll make more than a couple of things in his life change''
So first chapter is over. I'm sure that you understood who is the man talking with Brad, an old friend of Jake ;D
Chapter 2 will come soon.
I deliberately took some inspiration from a horror boock I read a couple of months ago. And also from Naruto. Anyway, just rate n' react !