Post by babyrican692005 on Sept 21, 2007 7:02:01 GMT -5
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One day I came home from school late because I was working on a project with my best friends Katie and Troy. It was dark and I heft a cold shriller down the back of my neck while a was running home. I saw my house light was off and it seem like no one was home. I grab my key out of my pocket and before I try to open the door it open slowly. My heart was beating like a drum. I went inside my house and shouted, “Is anybody home!” I went upstairs to my parent’s room. I saw my parent room door crack open. I saw my mom on the floor. I push the door open and I saw my mom and dad slices up.
I try to scream but I froze still in fear. I heard someone coming up the stairs. I try to me but my legs won’t let me move. ”Hello little brother,” said Jake in a deep tone of voice. I turn around and try to hug my big brother Jake but he kick me in the stomach. I fall on my knee. “Why”, I said to my big brother chuffing in pain.”Rico we have a technique that many people do what ever it take to posses”, said Jake with a nasty smirk on his face. I start to throw up on the floor.
I got up from the floor and look at my brother with angry in my eyes. “That don’t give the right to kill our parents,” I yell at my brother. “There are not my parents they adapted me because your father need to past down technique to me and your mother though she can’t have kids”, Jake yelled at me with rage. “What…, that wrong. They love you,” I cry. “When you were born your father stop teaching me and your mother stop caring. So they send me to grandpa and since then he teach me all of what he know about your little family technique. For me to master it I have to kill the person I love”, Jake said to me.
“I am going to kill you Jake”, I scream at Jake with my tear of angry and sorrow. My fist start to glow light blue, electrics start to wrong down my vein into my fist. I open both my fist and a light blue electrics swirling ball appear. ”Thunder Bird Strike”, I scream to Jake. “That is a powerful technique”, Jake said to me. I run tours Jake with no regret that he was my step brother.” “Now you will die”, I scream. Jake grabs both of my wrists and broken them like it was nothing and my “Thunder Bird Strike” disappear into my hands. I scream in pain. “Little brother if you hate so much let grandpa train you and if I feel if you are strong enough I will be around to kill you and your loves one. So you could die misery”, Jake told me while he was twist my wrist around.” The cops are coming shortly”, Jake told me. He let go of my wrist and disappear into thin air. “I will kill you… I promise “, I scream.
“That is why I need to train with you. So I could have revenge for what my step brother Jake did to my family”, I told Teacher Ling. “Revenge is like a venom it will consume you until you turn to the person you want to revenge on”, Teacher Ling response to me. “It been almost 4 years and know can stop my brother rage for power. You know that know one can stop him”, I yelled at Teacher Ling. “I won’t train you but I know who will… He is your cousin Kane. He was banned from the clan because he was a half breed”, Teacher Ling told me. “I have a cousin but when I train with my grandpa for 4 years he did not say I have a cousin”, I said to myself so confuse.
“Kane will tell you everything about you family’s secret and he will train you because he hate Jake for what he did to Kane.” Teacher Ling told me while he was smoking out of his long pipe. “Where can I find Kane”, I ask Teacher Ling. “He is here”’ Teacher Ling smile as he puffs his pipe. “What on earth is he talking about it just me and him?” I mumble to myself. I turn around and there was a person right behind me playing a D.S. I jumped back quickly and he disappears into thin air. I pull out my butterfly knife but it was gone. “Hello”, I look right behind me and that dude was still behind me again.
I face him and I can’t see his eyes because he was wearing thick black sunglasses, his hair is dye 7 different colors like the rainbow, he have pink D.S in his left hand and my butterfly knife in his right hand. “Can I get my knife back?” I asked the dude. He turns his back and walk tours Teacher Ling. I got pissed at him. “Give me my ****a knife back”, I yelled at him with a nasty altitude. He thrown my knife at me and I caught it. “Who are you”, I ask the dude. “I am Kane your cousin”, he replied to me. My jaw drop to the ground. “Your Kane… I thought”, I yelled in confuses. “Yes I am Kane and I will be training you”, Kane told me as he playing on his Pink D.S.
“Teacher Ling…is that truth”, I ask him. “Yes it is true”, Teacher Ling replied. “Come on we are going to grandpa”, Kane told me. “Why we need to go back. I just finish training there”, I told Kane. “Because grandpa is going to die by your brother”, Kane told me. Kane grab a flute out of start to play it slowly. I heard a loud roar coming this way. My heartbeat faster is it beat to the flute music. I look up and I saw I huge bird with scale skin.” That is a dragon”, I told myself. “Come on we have to get there quickly”, Kane told as I get on the dragon. “Where to”, said the dragon in deep scary tone of voice? “
To be contiune
One day I came home from school late because I was working on a project with my best friends Katie and Troy. It was dark and I heft a cold shriller down the back of my neck while a was running home. I saw my house light was off and it seem like no one was home. I grab my key out of my pocket and before I try to open the door it open slowly. My heart was beating like a drum. I went inside my house and shouted, “Is anybody home!” I went upstairs to my parent’s room. I saw my parent room door crack open. I saw my mom on the floor. I push the door open and I saw my mom and dad slices up.
I try to scream but I froze still in fear. I heard someone coming up the stairs. I try to me but my legs won’t let me move. ”Hello little brother,” said Jake in a deep tone of voice. I turn around and try to hug my big brother Jake but he kick me in the stomach. I fall on my knee. “Why”, I said to my big brother chuffing in pain.”Rico we have a technique that many people do what ever it take to posses”, said Jake with a nasty smirk on his face. I start to throw up on the floor.
I got up from the floor and look at my brother with angry in my eyes. “That don’t give the right to kill our parents,” I yell at my brother. “There are not my parents they adapted me because your father need to past down technique to me and your mother though she can’t have kids”, Jake yelled at me with rage. “What…, that wrong. They love you,” I cry. “When you were born your father stop teaching me and your mother stop caring. So they send me to grandpa and since then he teach me all of what he know about your little family technique. For me to master it I have to kill the person I love”, Jake said to me.
“I am going to kill you Jake”, I scream at Jake with my tear of angry and sorrow. My fist start to glow light blue, electrics start to wrong down my vein into my fist. I open both my fist and a light blue electrics swirling ball appear. ”Thunder Bird Strike”, I scream to Jake. “That is a powerful technique”, Jake said to me. I run tours Jake with no regret that he was my step brother.” “Now you will die”, I scream. Jake grabs both of my wrists and broken them like it was nothing and my “Thunder Bird Strike” disappear into my hands. I scream in pain. “Little brother if you hate so much let grandpa train you and if I feel if you are strong enough I will be around to kill you and your loves one. So you could die misery”, Jake told me while he was twist my wrist around.” The cops are coming shortly”, Jake told me. He let go of my wrist and disappear into thin air. “I will kill you… I promise “, I scream.
“That is why I need to train with you. So I could have revenge for what my step brother Jake did to my family”, I told Teacher Ling. “Revenge is like a venom it will consume you until you turn to the person you want to revenge on”, Teacher Ling response to me. “It been almost 4 years and know can stop my brother rage for power. You know that know one can stop him”, I yelled at Teacher Ling. “I won’t train you but I know who will… He is your cousin Kane. He was banned from the clan because he was a half breed”, Teacher Ling told me. “I have a cousin but when I train with my grandpa for 4 years he did not say I have a cousin”, I said to myself so confuse.
“Kane will tell you everything about you family’s secret and he will train you because he hate Jake for what he did to Kane.” Teacher Ling told me while he was smoking out of his long pipe. “Where can I find Kane”, I ask Teacher Ling. “He is here”’ Teacher Ling smile as he puffs his pipe. “What on earth is he talking about it just me and him?” I mumble to myself. I turn around and there was a person right behind me playing a D.S. I jumped back quickly and he disappears into thin air. I pull out my butterfly knife but it was gone. “Hello”, I look right behind me and that dude was still behind me again.
I face him and I can’t see his eyes because he was wearing thick black sunglasses, his hair is dye 7 different colors like the rainbow, he have pink D.S in his left hand and my butterfly knife in his right hand. “Can I get my knife back?” I asked the dude. He turns his back and walk tours Teacher Ling. I got pissed at him. “Give me my ****a knife back”, I yelled at him with a nasty altitude. He thrown my knife at me and I caught it. “Who are you”, I ask the dude. “I am Kane your cousin”, he replied to me. My jaw drop to the ground. “Your Kane… I thought”, I yelled in confuses. “Yes I am Kane and I will be training you”, Kane told me as he playing on his Pink D.S.
“Teacher Ling…is that truth”, I ask him. “Yes it is true”, Teacher Ling replied. “Come on we are going to grandpa”, Kane told me. “Why we need to go back. I just finish training there”, I told Kane. “Because grandpa is going to die by your brother”, Kane told me. Kane grab a flute out of start to play it slowly. I heard a loud roar coming this way. My heartbeat faster is it beat to the flute music. I look up and I saw I huge bird with scale skin.” That is a dragon”, I told myself. “Come on we have to get there quickly”, Kane told as I get on the dragon. “Where to”, said the dragon in deep scary tone of voice? “
To be contiune