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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 24, 2005 19:47:50 GMT -5
read mine shade i got reviews from some of mine friends hero DragonFire Stranger
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Post by Chaos on Aug 24, 2005 19:56:35 GMT -5
Alright, I will.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 24, 2005 19:57:21 GMT -5
thnx shade
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Post by Chaos on Aug 27, 2005 22:55:00 GMT -5
Long time needed update...
Chapter 5: Ultimate Battle Hoax? Jake dodged the blow of the sword but got a small cut on his tail which bled and dripped slowly down onto the streets. "Hey! That hurt!" Jake yelled. "This will hurt more..." Huntsking said, raising an eyebrow and grinning. He charged at Shade and punched him into Jake and them flew into Rotwood, who before got hit said, "Dragons! Huntsers! They're all real-OOOAF!" Jake and Shade flew back up and Rotwood stood up. "Who am I?" He asked himself, walking in the opposite direction of Huntsking. Steam flew out of Gramps ears when Gramps went in front of Jake who whas in front of Shade. Shade charged at Jake, making Jake charge at Gramps, powering up Gramps charge at Huntsking, which punched him and flew him into a building, when Huntsking's mask flew off. Gramps, Jake, and Shade all crowded around the face, which was a blown up, computer system! Jake and Shade growled and Gramps was worried. "We should make it back to the shop, I am very confused about this, but I am very annoyed that magical creatures are known..." Gramps said. Jake and Shade nodded in agreement and all three of them flew to the shop.
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 28, 2005 21:32:32 GMT -5
continue it its getting real really good!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 28, 2005 21:38:24 GMT -5
Chapter 6: The Next Day At School... At school, the following day of the fake Huntsking attack, everyone was talking to each other about the pixies, dragons, other magical creatures. All the classes were also adding magical studies to their agenda and everything was going mad. "We should get out of here, people are too scared to know e'll be gone." Trixie whispered to Spud, Jake, and Shade. "I agree, this is crazy, how could this happen to us!?" Shade yelled. Suudenly, Counciler Klude and Andam, in dragon form, grabbed the four kids and flew them to the Dragon Summit. "I have a very bad feeling about this, Jakey..." Trixie told Jake as they were flying on their way to the summit...
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Post by dragonfire on Aug 28, 2005 23:15:55 GMT -5
more plz!
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Post by Chaos on Aug 29, 2005 9:20:52 GMT -5
Ok, but after this chapter, I have to get ready for school.
Chapter 7: Isle of Draco; Council Meeting Inside the meeting room, where Jake was told he had to pass some tests, the four councilers stood in front of Gramps, Jake, Spud, Trixie, and Shade. "Lao Shi, Jake Long, Shade Chaos, as the only dragons in New York, you have a great responsibility, to protect the world from evil and keep the bond of magical and mortal secret, but now, Hunsking has turned New York into oblivion and everyone knows about magical creatures!" Counciler Klude explained. "The only mortals who know about creatures are these two, and even though they ARE humans, they ar the only ones destoned to know about magical creatures!" Counciler Andam said. After more explaination, everyone left the council room and looked around. "Oh man, this is chaos, even here at the Isle of Draco..." Shade told everyone, watching everyone panic. "Calm down everyone!" yelled a mysterious voice, who revealed himself through some bushes. "We can still stop this." He continued. After everyone still panicing, he sighed and turned to look at Jake, Shade, and Gramps. It was Fred Nerk! "Hey, Fred, things are really chaotic, right?" Jake asked him, shaking his hand. "Yeah, but I don't want to stay here...how about I go with you to destroy Huntsking?" Jake looked confused, then turned to Gramps who nodded. "Alright, join the party!" Jake said. The four of them turned dragon and flew off. "Hey, wait for uss!" Trixie yelled at Jake and the rest. "Next time, we're getting the bus..." Spud muttered as they walked off.
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Post by Chaos on Aug 29, 2005 20:20:01 GMT -5
Chapter 8: Extreme Madness Back at New York, out of no where, the whole city was destroyed and Huntsking stood right in front of the four dragons. "You don't scare us!" Fred yelled at Huntsking, shooting a blaze muliple of blasts at Huntsking's face. "AHH!!!!" He yelled, holding his face and tripping over a destroyed building onto the ground. "Heh, got him!" Fred announced. "Get the dragon!" A human yelled, pointing at Fred. A bunch of humans threw a net over Fred and he fell down to the ground. "Where did you get this net!?" Fred yelled at the lead human. "From the big guy's belt." He replied. "Time for tests!" He continued, everyone pulling Fred away. "Tests!? NOOOO!!!" He yelled, vanishing from site. Shade growled and said. "That's it! We have to finish this guy!" He yelled. He put one hand in front of the other, having both swirls face each other. "No Shade!" Jake yelled. "Jake, I have to do this..." Shade told Jake, frowning and his ears dropping down. He regained an angry face and yelled. "Crazed Transformation!" Shotting ice into the red swirl and fire into the blue swirl. Shade moved his hands back in place and his eyes turned red, the scales on his back turned into flames, his tail turned into a long flame, and his claws turned into flames. Everything else sort of froze when Shade charged through Huntsking's stomach when he got up. "Great job Shade!" Jake yelled to Shade, who turned around and quickly froze Jake. He slowly fell to the ground until he crashed into ice dust. "Jake!!!!" Gramps yelled at Jake, watching him fall.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 30, 2005 19:26:32 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good
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Post by Chaos on Aug 30, 2005 19:41:37 GMT -5
OK, thanks, brb.
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Post by Chaos on Aug 30, 2005 20:12:43 GMT -5
Final chapter of the madness, then I'll get started on my next fan-fic! Chapter 9: Bye Bye, Kingy! Gramps clentched his fists, growled, and steam flew out of his ears. "This madness is going to stop!" Gramps yelled, flying over to Huntsking, lying on the ground. "There has to be SOMETHING in here that can...Here we are!" Gramps said, pulling a brick with a button out of Huntsking's belt. He then looked over at the hole in Huntsking's stomach, which suddenly started to heal. Gramos gasped and said, "You aren't even human anymore..." Looking at Huntsking's face. "That's right! Now, you will perish!" Huntsking yelled, getting ready to punch Gramps. he quickly pressed the button and pointed it at Huntsking, freezing everything. Then Gramps broke the brick and a pink barrier covered the whole world. When it covered Shade, he turned back to normal in human form, Jake was turned back to normal and in human, when it went over the caged Fred Nerk, he was transported back to Australia, all the people forgot that magical creatures existed, Team Dragon were all back at Gramps' Shop, New York was fixed, and Huntsking vanished into the center of the Earth. He was hanging on a large branch, which melted and Huntsking fell into the core, yelling, "NOOOO!!!!!" Melting into nothingness. "It's finally over..." Gramps said, holding his head and collapsing to sleep. Finally, the world was back to normal... The End!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Aug 30, 2005 20:29:03 GMT -5
not bad shade so are you gonna make another ff?
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Post by Chaos on Aug 30, 2005 20:38:26 GMT -5
Yeah, first the Magenta meets Shade, then Magical Betrrayal, then, I don't know what...
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Post by magenta on Aug 31, 2005 21:45:22 GMT -5
Yay, I can't wait for it!
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