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Post by Chaos on Oct 29, 2006 23:04:18 GMT -5
Ah yes. This is my Shade's Spooks story, whcih must be updated on Halloween, so don't be all crazy tomorrow, because I won't update it then. ^^ This is all I have to say, if you want to post about your hype, go ahead and it'll inspire me to work on it quicker. XP
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Post by Chaos on Oct 31, 2006 0:14:51 GMT -5
Yeah, I couldn't think of anymore stories, so this is basically a two story... /chapter story. XDD Too bad, oh well though, but SHHH those who know the spoilers about it. *looks around* DON'T TELL OTHERS SECRETS BUT SPREAD THE WORD OF MEH FAN-FICS! DX That ish all. ^^
Chapter/Story Final (Not final story ever in life of me): Florence's Sucess at Returning Spirit Shade...?
Florence was walking over to a graveyard. Of course, this could be good for a nice atmospheric idea for a Halloween costume, seeing it was the eve of this holiday. But Florence was not here for ideas on a costume. She was visiting her boyfriend. No, not in a tree or anything... In his grave. Well... more like a place of dirt without a body..... Which vanished when Shade became the spirit of magical creatures, so all that rests is Shade's gravestone and his red bandana, the gravestone seeming to be wearing this like a person. Odd huh? Not really to Shade's friends. Too be honest, if wouldn't be very odd, funny, or freakish if you knew Shade's full story, but you shouldn't, it'd make you cry. Like who truly know about Shade. Of course, he's in a better place, and by better, I mean he's not dead, he's in another dimension, or world on earth, whatever goes on in life. Well, just keep reading this scary and sad tale.
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"Don't worry Florence, I'm sure we'll have him back in no time." Reassured a blonde to a brunette. Of course, it was the two good pals, Rose and Florence. Flor wiped her slight tears and nodded, setting down some white tulips near Shade's bandana, the only thing remaining of him here, or the mortal world, I guess you could say.
"Good-bye Shade. I know you'll be back, Rose even agrees this." Florence said, smiling and kinda of reassuring herself and not just telling it to the fake grave of Shade. Rose put her arm around Florence's neack as they walked out of the evening graveyard.
"So, what are you gonna be for Halloween?" She curiously asked Florence, smiling and trying to change the subject about Shade.
"Shade...." Florence murmured.
"Ok... Who are you going to the Halloween dance with?" Rose asked.
"Shade..."
"Um... what are you going to eat at the party?"
"Shade...." Rose just scoffed as Florence said this and they walked down the path back to Shade's house. Rose suggested that Florence had missed Shade too much that she should have someone stay with her to be a friend. Shade's parents agreed to let Rose stay at the house whenever she wanted.
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That morning, Sunday of Halloween, Florence was up early and searching the city with a half asleep Rose.
"Flo, I honestly don't see why you're after Ash." Rose muttered to Florence, rubbing her free arm that wasn't being dragged by a full awake Florence, who hadn't gotten any sleep.
"I've heard about a person who's used alchemy to make a gate open up. I figure Ash can help me make a transmutation circle to make a portal to the Spirit World." explained Florence, determined and searching.
"That's it, you're dead!" Was yelled from a rooftop as Florence and Rose immediately looked up to where it was. The voice was, thankfully, Ash's, but she was yelling at, who would've guessed? Jake Long.
"All I said was aren't you a bit small to be Al Gore as a costume?" Jake asked, grinning sheepishly and shrugging slightly. Ash grew even more with rage as Florence and Rose had taken the side building stairs to reach the rooftop.
"I never said I was going as all gore, I said I'd be going to the dance with Al and he's being a gore prince!" screeched the angrily enraging Ash, glaring at Jake. They finally realized Florence and Rose had arrived, Spud and Haley were also on the roof.
"Oh, hey you two. You just heard all that yelling, huh?" Haley asked them both, smiling and slightly laughing.
"Well yeah.... But I was looking for Ash anyway." Florence said. Ash's anger turned to surrise as she eyed Florence and Jake, Spud, and Haley eyed Ash. Rose just grinned and slightly stepped away from Florence. She just sadly and desperatly looked at Ash, who compassionatly nodded.
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In the Spirit World, spirit Shade was watching the many monsters just glaring at him. Already here for a few weeks and monsters were so amazed that a human was with them. Some actally attacked him, but he easily could get them away with his water powers, seeing that water was all over the floor were they were dwelling. The whole place where they were at was like a swampy place, but all yellowish and white. The people were full of color, except the pure white Shade and some other people. And let's not forget the most troublesome person for Shade so far, Aqua's spirit, a sorcceress who lost all her powers and continued to bug Shade.
"That's it, Aruella, GO AWAY!" Shade yelled furiously to the sorcceress, Aruella. She just grinned and started to float off. He angrily held his head and looked at his flowing robe and then hair, which he brushed back because it was in his face.
"Hey, a human!" Another goblin said, mouth agape and pointing at Shade. He smacked his face lightly with anger as the two goblins passed.
"Did you hear? He's the new spirit of magical creatures!" The second goblin said.
"Oh my, NO WAY!!" The first goblin yelled in shock, as they vanished from Shade's sight. He just shook his head with confusion and wrote in his spirit notebook, which had notes of what he knew about in the Spirit World. Shade also picked up a pen and started to write some more.
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"You want me to WHAT!?" Ash yelled, arms crossed and looking at a Florence with arms on her hips and Rose next to her, her hands together in hope.
"Please! I'm very desperate to see Shade again!" Florence said, her hands off her hips and tears starting to stream from her eyes, but not falling down her face. Ash's slight anger turned to sorrow at sight of Florence while she lowered her hands.
"Alright then. I guess it's not as bad as trying to return him from life itself." She muttered, grinning and looking down. They all smiled in return to Ash's grin and walked down the sidewalk. Florence saw somthing catch her eye and speeding down the street.
"Look, you two go ahead to the graveyard, I'll catch up to you." Florence reassuringly told Rose and Ash. They both nodded and once they were away from Florence's view, she sped to the view of what she saw. She continued to follow it as quickly as she could as she reached Central Park's thick forest.
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Shade yawned, putting his pen and spiit notepad into his robes and got up, floating to an abandoned plains to lay down in the dull colored grass. He sighed, thinking of Florence and slightly smiled. He opened his eyes for a moment and saw a girl figure who looked human and wanted to see her.
"H-Hey, wait!" Shade yelled out to the girl, floating up and speeding after her. Shade's eyes were wide open, searchign and following the girl. he entered a dull and very dark forest.
"Person!" Florence yelled in the mortal world. She found the person and saw Shade's spirit figured back turned to Florence and just floating.
"Florence!?" Shade called out, seeing the girl's figure as Florence. He was running the opposite direction as Florence in the mortal world.
"I can't believe you're here!" They simultaniously said, turning around the figures to see their faces to see that they were both only light shining from out of the forest. They back slowly backed away in the forest from the light shining on a stump. They fall on their knees, crying out hard into their hands.
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Ash had just finished making her transmutation circle around Shade's bandana as Florence grievingly arrived, but with a fake smile on. Rose and Ash smiled in return.
"Now, in order to open the portal, we need Equiviant Exchange for the right amount of things to go into the Spirit World and Shade can enter ours." Ash explaned, looking at a slightly confused Florence. A flock of lightning pheonixs unwillingly flew by near the circle and few into the cirlce as it glowed.
"Look, they're going into the circle!" Florence said, pointing and putting her other hand over her mouth, Rose putting both her hands over. Some pheonixs were still on a tree, watching. Shade's bandana turned white like before and light streamed out of it to appear as a portal.
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After returning from his chase to see Florence, Shade was at where he usually was dwelling. Aruella was spying on him as the portal appeared and they both looked up to it.
"What is that?" Shade thought aloud, floating slowly toward it. Aruella was on the opposite side of Shade at the portal, seeing the humans. She grinned widely and immediately jumped through the portal, but at the same time a lightning pheonix entered the portal to the Spirit World...
"Ahahaha!!" Aruella screeched in her evil cackle. Shade gasped, seeing the portal slowly vanishing.
"That was to.... Florence and the others!" He said in a sudden thought, speeding to the now vanished portal. He worriedly looked around, frowning and closing his eyes, looking down.
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Aruella's true, nasty body in the Spirit World completely changed once she morphed with the lightning pheonix, which also vanished from existance. As the portal faded and the transmutation slowly went away, Aruella, looked back from Ash, to Florence, then Rose, and back in that fashion.
"Why are you all staring at me like that?" She asked, hands on her hips. She wore a nice red suit of armor, but not too thick, and her hair was pure black with two strands down her cheek. Florence just looked up at Aruella curiously.
"Um... Are you here too bring back Shade to us somehow?" Florewnce asked her, hopefully. She slightly smiled as it turned into an odd frown that went down low. Aruella gave Florence an odd look, then grinned to form a lie.
"Sure I am! In fact, I can bring him back if you are able to help me after." Aruella stated, crossing her arms. Florence hopefully looked up again, not smiling, but feeling hopeful. "Didn't you hear me? I'm bringing your friend back, you should be happy, thankful." She angrily said, glaring at Florence. Once Rose began to speak, Aruella's attention went to her.
"I'm sure Florence is just thinking it over. I'm Rose, that's Ashleigh. She's probably just really hap-" Rose begane to say with a calming tone as Aruella blurted in,
"DON'T INTERRUPT ROSE!!" Which caused Rose to go to a shocked facial expression before her anger rose. Ash just glared at Aruella. She immediately clapped her hands and shot an alchemic blaze at Aruella, who ducked to dodge it and grinned.
"So you found out then?" She asked, figruing they all now knew about how she had actually lied. Florence glared at Aruella and sped a roundhouse kick so Aruella fell to the ground, but she immediately got up. Aruelly just curiously looked at them all, seeing their battle stances. She noticed Ash was the most powerful, especially at this moment, so she slwoly made lightning from her hand and shot it at Ash.
"Heya!!" Yelled the confused Ash, speeding out of the way. The lightning hit the tree as it fell on Ash and she was stuck on the ground, trying to get the tree off her. Ash contineud to try and get the tree off, even in her dragon form right now.
"Fell my wrath!" Aruella announced, shooting blue fire at Florence and Rose. They both jumped to dodge it and took each others arm, running to knock Aruella to her side. Ash, still under the knocked over tree noticed the almost gone transmutation circle near her and Florence and Rose not standing on it.
"Why don't you just leave us now!?" Ash yelled out in anger, clapping her hands quickly and touching the almost gone transmutation circle with one hand, which sant it glowing and Aruella flew far into the air, screeching loudly in what seemed like fright more than pain. Once the circle stopped glowing, it was now gone and Shade's bandana was it's normal hue of red. Florence and Rose helped Ash out from under the tree as the cresent moon had risen.
"Phew... What a night, huh?" Florence asked, smiling and laughing. It was a long time since Florence had smiled like that and laughed by herself. Rose and Ash just very happily smiled. Florence just continued to smile and look down at Shade's bandana, picking it up and tightly clentching it, but not crying, just happy. They all walked out of the graveyard.
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Shade was randomly acting all happy and stuffers, but then he realized that Aruella's opposite had to be here sometime, and he or she was bound to be trouble.
"This is the SPIRIT WORLD!?" A familiar voice yelled out, startled to a goblin. He just shrugged and walked off. The familiar man growled and turned around to reveal himself as Aqua, in his dragon form.
"Aqua's Aruella's mortal opposite!?" Shade thought loudly. Aqua glared at Shade angrily before calmly grinning.
"Well well, looks like Shade has also gotten a new look again and in the Spirit World." Aqua said, squinting his eyes and speeding at Shade, trying to punch him put missing and hitting a tree. Shade's cheeks slightly turned an anger red as he controlled a large sum of water to rise from the river near them and attack Aqua heavily as he pulled his hand out from the tree. They took their battle even more into that forest.
"I don't think your time here will be very pleasant." Shade angrily growled to Aqua, raising water into a ball in his hands, and then freezing into many icicles, hitting Aqua's arms to two trees that were close to each other. Aqua now was angrily and seriously looking at Shade, him having the triumphant face.
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Back in the mortal world's graveyard, a figure in a brown coat and blonde hair and beard was watching behind a tree. He was deep in the graveyard and walked over to the gravestone next to Shade's...
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Yush, there you go. Actually took me longer than one day, and was VERY long, and I still have another chapter with a little secret.... Which could be the jump start to my next fan-fic. *wink* You'll have to see though, you'll have to see. Just review please, took a long time to make. ^^
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Oct 31, 2006 0:27:08 GMT -5
GAH! Why do cliffhangers have to suck when I read fan fics... but when I write it seems so cool?! XD Halloweenieeeee... Heh. Speaking of that, I gotta get AUA done. NICE CHAPTER! You're my hero!!! And uh.. GO SHADE. :fup:
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 1, 2006 23:15:32 GMT -5
Ash fo sho pwns you all. XD
Tis very nice Shade. You like, write awsomers. *envy* XD
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Post by Chaos on Nov 3, 2006 1:25:41 GMT -5
Sho yeahhhhhhh..... SECRET CHAPPY TIME! :fup: That is all. No rambles here. *points to Raffster's ramble in chappy 11 for AUA* ^^
Chapter/Story Final: Secret
The brown cloaked man just looked down at the grave and set down some grey flowers.
"I wonder when I will actually get your body back and ready." The man pondered to the grave. The name on the grave was covered in moss that had been there for a while and no one bothered to brush it off to see the name. The man clapped his hands and a spirit floated up.
"What are you doing here?' A girl elf asked, walking over. It was Toph, and feeling with her feet, she couldn't see the spirit there.
"My neice, I am here simply to grieve at my wife." The cloaked man explained with a kinda smile. He clapped his hand again as the spirit floated into the ground. Toph just glared at him.
"Satchel, you'd better go home sometime. Just because you're human now, doesn't mean that you can go around in places, wandering off without telling anyone." She warned Satchel, turning around to make her leave and vanish from sight. He just chuckled a little.
"Don't worry, neice, I'll be home... and with her." Satchel murmured, looking down at the graveled dirt and clapping his hands once more.
"AAAHHHH!!!" Screeched a woman who appeared on the dirt, eyes shut. The woman was wearign a blue uniform like a militia outfit, but just with a calm look and her hands together, close to her legs.
"So, shall we go out, Mal?" Satchel asked Malary, smiling calmly. Mal just nodded and they walked off to prepare to what they were having planned.
END OF STORY
What could be planned now...?
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Post by charles finley. on Nov 4, 2006 13:30:44 GMT -5
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*totally envies you*XD
Tis nice, Ewan!
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Post by ADJLFanatic on Nov 4, 2006 14:35:09 GMT -5
Yeah, I totally envy you too, weirdo. Oh yeah, sorry if I didn't read/review right away... I fell asleep when I lied down in bed the same time you did. >> Anyhoodles! I likieee. What a short story tis was. XDD I LIKE. There better be some sequel thingerrrr.
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Post by dreamcatcher on Nov 4, 2006 22:15:28 GMT -5
WOW AWESOME STORY!!!!
HWHY HAVEN'T I READ YOUR STORIES SOONER?!?!
YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER!!!! I SHALL GIVE YOU A PIECE OF PIE!!!
KEEP IT UP!
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