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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 11, 2007 14:15:57 GMT -5
Here's The Darkness Within 2 and i decided to upload 2 chapters [shadow=red,left,300]The Darkness Within 2: Generations[/shadow] ::Chapter 1: The beginning of a legend:: After Jake had returned and Rose was with her family Jake seemed to take his Dragon duties more seriously and he spent all his free time flying around the city. But little did he know that something horrible was going to happen. In the center of the city where the battle royale took place there was no sign that the Dark Dragon was still there or anywhere else in New York. At school... Rotwood: Everyone go to page 476 to the chapter about Dragons being among us. The weird thing was that Jake was actually paying attention. Rotwood: In the medievel times dragons wer'e considered as the biggest threat to a kingdom but never not even in our modern time dragons have been seen my question is to you students why do you think dragons have never been seen before. Rotwood: Jake Long. Jake: Well because if dragons evn existed humans are too dumb to look for them. Rotwood: Well it may be a little weird but in some way that is the right answer. The whole class was quiet everyone looked at Jake that was just staring at something. After class Jake walked to the cafeteria and everywhere he looked he thought of the battle royale. Several hours later... When Jake walked in Lao Shi's shop he walked to the back and nobody saw him for 6 hours. When fu walked in the back he saw Jake practicing his fire power. Fu: Kid take a break you've been training for 6 hours. Jake: Leave me alone. Fu: Chill kid your starting to look like Gramps. Jake: Fu if you say one more word your gonna end up on the barbeque. Fu ran into the other room. Lao Shi: Fu Dog what is going on. Jake: The kid has lost it he has been traning his fire power for 6 hours in a row. Lao Shi: O i get it it's april 1st good one fu-dog. Lao Shi walked into the other room and suddenly he stood freezed and couldn't believe what he saw. One week later... Lao Shi: Today Jake we will train your combat. Jake: Bring it on, Dragon up! Lao Shi: Dragon Up! First we train fire power i fire and you try to dodge the fire ball. Lao Shi fires a fire ball but Jake dodged it easy and he was barely moving. Lao Shi: Ok, now arm and leg combat. Lao Shi attacked but he was no match for Jake it was as if Jake was finally a fully trained dragon. Suddenly a letter flew into the window and lao shi picked it up and read it. To Lao Shi. We have seen you training the American Dragon Jake Long and it seems he is ready to become a fully trained dragon. The ceremony will be held at the Dragon Summit Hall at dragon summit at 4pm on Saturday next week. Lao Shi: I knew this day would come but so soon he doesn't even know all of his powers yet. Jake: Yes i do i learned all dragon powers from your books yesterday.
::Chapter 2: The Grand Ceremony:: At Jake's house. Mom: Jake, Get ready we have to go to Dragon Summit Hall. As Jake walked downstair he got a call on his cellphone. Spud: Yo r u coming to the skatepark or what me and trixie have been waiting for an hour. Jake: Sorry guys i have to go to my Fully Trained dragon ceremony. He hang up. At Dragon Summit Hall. Jake walked in. First Jake had to go in some sort og meeting with the dragon council Dragon council member: Jake Long, today is the day you will become a fully trained dragon do you accept that you will have all the duties of a fully trained dragon and become the protector of New York City and nearby destinations? Jake Long: I will take all the duties of being the american dragon on me. Dragon council member: The ceremony will start at 6pm until then you have time to get ready. When Jake Long walked out of the meeting room he met a girl. Keira: Hi my name is Keira i'm the Mexican dragon. Jake: Hi i'm Jake the american dragon. Keira: O yeah congratulations with becoming a fully trained dragon. Jake: Thanks i guess i will see you around. At 6pm Dragon Council Member: Today we have gathered here for yet another Dragon in training becoming a fully trained dragon his name is Jake Long, Jake Long please step forward. Dragon Council Member: Jake Long do you accept all the duty's of a fully trained drahon. Jake: Yes. Dragon Council Member: And do you swear never to betray the order of the dragon. Jake: Yes. Then i now give you this symbol that symbolises that you are a fully trained dragon congratulations Jake Long. Next Chapter soon
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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 16, 2007 13:38:10 GMT -5
Here's the third and fourth chapter ::Chapter 3: The Survival of the Fittest:: As Jake came back home he noticed something different about the house nothing you could see but he had a feeling as if someone was looking around the corner ready to attack him. Suddenly a shadow filled the room and something captured Jake. Jake: Let me go. Mysterious Creature: We will let you go soon enough America Dragon or should i say Jake Long.
Some time later...
Jake woke up as if something had killed him and he woke up in heaven but the place he was was nothing like heaven. Jake: Where am i? Keira: Your in the Dragon Jungle at least i've heard that's the name of the Jungle Jake: Why are we here? Keira: Well someone has captured us that's al i know. Suddenly 4 more dragons wer'e thrown in to the cage. Jake: Why can't we just destroy the cage with our powers. Keira: This cage seems to have some kind of shield that is blocking our powers. Suddenly a man appeared that seemed like he was half dragoned up. Man: Welcome dragons you have been chosen to participate in the Survival of the Fittest. Keira: What is the Survival of the Fittest? Man: The Survival of the Fittest is a huge event you six will have to survive in the Kardas Jungle. Jake: Man that's easy we just use our dragon powers. Man: O did i say the part that you are not allowed Jake: And who are you to stop us from using our powers. Man: Look at your ankle there is a device on your ankle it is undistructible and can not be deactivated by anyone but me. Jake: Say What. Man: First you will have to go to the main base it's on the top of that hill it's about 6 miles away, you will leave to the base in 3 hours.
3 hours later...
Man: Contestants the time has come you will leave for the base. Man: Unleash them from the cage. All of the dragons including Jake and Keira ran into the jungle because they knew something was waiting to tear them apart. Jake: We have to get to the base as soon as possible. Keira: Why are we running. Jake: Well this is called the survival of the fittest i don't think that means a calm tour through the jungle. As they ran through the jungle suddenly some kind of beast jumped out of the bushes. As it roared Jake and Keira ran further into the jungle and i don't think they wer'e planning to stop running. Keira: We have to shake that thing off. Jake: Wait i have a idea. Suddenly Jake climbed into a tree and the beast didn't notice and suddenly Jake jumped on the back of the beast and slammed his head with his fist. Keira: What do we do now. Jake: Well i suggest we run to the base before this thing wakes up.
3 and a half hours later. Keira: Are we there yet. Jake: Only a few 100 meters to go. Jake and Keira kept walking until they reached the base and in front of the base there was some kind of identifying computer. Computer: Name please Jake: Jake Long. Keira: Keira Jennons. Computer: Jake Long and Keira Jennons identified, welcome. Some minutes later the other dragons came in an the Man entered the room. Man: Congratulations dragons, my name is Symalious Dracus. Symalious: You all have your own base area in the base you will be allowed to transport three people for your crew, Jake Long come with me your first. They entered a room and there was a teleporter. Symalious: Enter the names of your crew members in the computer and they will be teleported to here. Jake entered the names of Spud, Trixie and Fu
Some moments later...
Trixie, Spud and Fu appeared in the teleporter, Spud: Man where are we? Jake: Your in a base in the Kardas Jungle. Trixie: Sorry but what are we doing here. she asked a little mad Jake: Well i have been chosen to participate in some kind of survival test. Fu: Why don't you just use your dragon powers? Jake: They have placed a device on my ankle that has disabled my powers with that thing on i can't dragon up or anything. Fu: Kid, what do you think we can help you with? Jake: You will just have to wait and see
::Chapter 4: The Suit:: As they walked into they're base area they saw how high tech that place was. Spud: Wow. Fu: So kid what did you want to show us? Jake: Well some time ago i made a concept of a battle suit that i could use if something like this would happen seeming we have all the technology to make it here lets get started. Jake, Trixie, Fu and Spud began making the suit it took for hours but at the end Jake's High Tech battle suit concept was become reality. The suit had motion sensitive bomb shooters, Fire gun, A small computer on the wrist and many other things. Computer: Contestants please report to the main floor and crew members report to the transportation floor for transportation to the next base. On the main floor. Symalious: Dragons the next thing you will have to do is get to the next base on Mount Dragwood. Jake: Dang that easy. Symalious: Don't get too confident, confidence is good but can also lead to weakness. Jake: Shut it.
Meanwhile at Jake's house.
Mom: Dad why aren't we looking for Jake? Lao Shi: Wel because in the magical contract there is a part of Fully Trained Dragons that they have to take care of themselves for a year without help as a dragon and it will have major consequences if i break the rules of the contract, however it is allowed to contact him. Dad: How do we do that? Lao Shi: I will take care of that.
Meanwhile in the jungle. Jake: I have a bad feeling about this. Suddenly the little computer on his wrist was activaded and the text: American Dragon Communication Network Loading please wait... on the screen. Fu's voice suddenly was heard from the computer. Fu: Hey kid. Jake: Yo fu what's going on? Fu: Well kid i had some extra time so i made a communication device on your computer so i can help you and by the way gramps is trying to contact you. A text on the screen appeared Text: Please wait while American Dragon Communication network is loading a conversation with Lao Shi, Loading completed. Lao Shi: Jake are you there? Jake: Hey gramps, everything good there? Lao Shi: That doesn't matter where are you? Jake: Well in a Jungle that's all i know i'm forced to participate in a Survival of the Fittest. Text on computer: Connection broken possible tracing signal in zone. Jake: You Fu what happened? Fu: I think there's some kind of device in this are that is breaking communication with other places, i will make an update for the computer. As Jake walked furhter into the jungle he was thinking about all the things he had done as the american dragon. Next chapter soon.
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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 19, 2007 19:16:59 GMT -5
Here's the 5th chapter o and i want to announce that the dragon.up.recource forums is getting 3 exclusive chapters but also this forum will also get some extra stuff, ::Chapter 5: Jake Long's Fight for Freedom:: As Jake walked further into the jungle he had a feeling like he wasn't sure if he was coming out alive. Computer: American Dragon Communication Network signal detected. Fu: Hey kid everything ok? Jake: So far so good. Fu: I have an update for your handheld computer it should solve most of the communication problems and i added some extra features. Jake: Sure fu but i won't need it the amdrag's got a lot of mack daddy moves. Fu: Just press download kid. Jake: Chill, Fu. Fu: O and kid during the update you will not be able to use the communication network. Computer: American Dragon Communication Network offline wait until update is downloaded. Then suddenly one of the gorgons appeared. Jake: Say what, Fury what are you doing here don't u have some other pieces of stone to chase? Fury: Bring it on dragon. Jake and Fury wer'e fighting but suddenly Fury tried to turn Jake into stone with her powers. Fury: What's the matter dragon can't you survive without ur stupid powers. Jake: You barely have any powers so what u can turn things into stone. Fury: Ok fighting me is one thing but making fun of my powers you are going down. Suddenly Jake looked at the river he saw that you could see your own reflection in it if only he could let Fury look at the water. But then Jake dived into the river. Fury approached the river and she looked at the water trying to find him to destroy him but suddenly she turned into stone because she saw her own reflection. Jake climbed out of the river. I gotta get out of here. Some minutes later... Jake: Let's see what Fu installed on the computer. Jake: Whoa that's a lot of things but what is this metal device on my back. He pushed a button. Computer: Hoverboard sequence initiated. Suddenly the metal device let go of the suit and turned into a hoverboard. Jake: Whoam Let's take this thing for a test spin Jake used the hoverboard to board a few miles further. Computer: Hoverboard fuel low, landing sequence initiated. Jake ran further and he saw the base. Jake entered the base. Spud: Hey Jake, glad your alive. Jake: You thought i was dead or something? Trixie: Well this is a dangerous place. Jake: O yeah Fu we need to fix some problems with the suit. Fu: Sorry kid i just didn't get the chance to make it perfect. Symalious: Welcoma back American Dragon, glad you made it. Symalious yelled to all teams: Your base's are ready breakfast will be tomorrow at 6pm in the main hall. Jake and Fu walked into the base. Fu: So kid what are the biggest problems? Jake: Well of course the communication, the hoverboard fuelling problem and some other things. Fu: Let's get started
Half an hour later...
Fu and the others had fallen into sleep but Jake was busy repairing the suit. He read the paper Symalious had given to all crews it wer'e the missions for tomorrow it said: You must go through the jungle to the ancient temple of kardas and retrieve the ancient symbol and go to the next base the total trip is 60 miles.
The next morning...
The crew woke up and suddenly a video on thee computer screen appeared. Jake: Yo guys as you see i'm not at the base i have begun the trip to the temple of kardas and the next base, i will see you guys in a day or two. O ad by the way i fixed some problems with the communication network.
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Post by mehdi5 on Feb 24, 2007 20:33:19 GMT -5
::Chapter 6: Jake's Plan for escape:: As Jake neared the temple of Kardas he was not so sure of himself as he always was. The trip to the temple would have been faster if it was through the city or over a road because in the jungle one mile could take ages. But that didn't stop Jake from reaching the temple. When he entered te temple Jake knew something was waiting for him because he didn't think Symalious was letting them retrieve the symbol without a fight and he was worried about Keira. Suddenly a voice emerged from the dead silence. Spirit of Kardas: Who dares to enter the temple of the Kardas Dragon. Jake: Bring it on Kardas. Symalious: Sorry to ruin your party Jake but the Kardas was destroyed 3000 years ago. Jake: Was he evil or something? Symalious: Not at first, first he was a protector like you but then he got driven by the darkness within the legend tells that some day he will rise again and a new Kardas Dragon will rise and defeat him and restore peace to the magical realm and retrieve the sacred Skulls of the world. Jake: What are the sacred skulls? Symalious: Well the aztec crystal skulls wer'e created from they're magic bu the sacred skulls are much more powerfull when combined it turns into a dangerous creature the tracaprotaras he was part of the kardas until he was destroyed by the dark dragon. Jake: Wait a minute if the Kardas was evil why did the dark dragon destroy him? Symalious: Well they wer'e both on the darkside of the world but the Kardas became more powerful but the Dark Dragon couldn't stand not being the most dangerous thing alive so he destroyed him at dragon summit in the vulcano, but now Jake it is time for you to be destroyed. Jake: Say what. Suddenly Symalious turned from half a dragon to full dragon. And he had an advantage because Jake couldn't use his powers Symalious: Don't worry we already caught ur little girlfriend Keira. Jake wasn't mad because of what symalious did well maybe it was part that but his rage turned stronger by the second. Suddenly a bright light appeared the temple threw some kind of magical energy at Jake. Symalious: I can't believe it the energy of Kardas. Jake knew one thing about the kardas power he read about it that the energy can't have effect on the first lifeform it hits but it is stored in his soul and the power was to be passed on to the next generation. Suddenly Symalious stopped he couldn't believe what he saw. Symalious: Jake you have the powers of Kardas. Jake: Well not exactly. Symalious: I know but it means that one of the next generation of your family is the new Kardas Dragon, Jake wer'e letting you and the rest go. Jake: Huh? Symalious: Well the only reason i brought you all was because the power chooses a life form and it chose you, Now i say farewell to you Jake Long o and before i forget i better deactivate that thing around your ankel. Jake brought the others home and after that he flew to Lao Shi's store. Jake: Yo gramps. Lao Shi: Jake you made it i knew you could survive. Jake: Well i have to tell you something. Lao Shi: What? Jake: I have the powers of Kardas and the legend says if the powers of kardas are in me that one of the next generation of my family is the new Kardas. Lao Shi: You must be careful young one u can not use the powers but still you have the power and these are dangerous powers Jake even if u don't use them they can take your soul over you must not let the darkness within win. Nexy Chapter soon.
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Post by mehdi5 on Mar 30, 2007 14:46:43 GMT -5
::Chapter 7: Legends Never End::
4 Years Later...
At Jake's House As Jake walked into the living room that night everyone was gone they wer'e gone to a family reunion and Jake was too busy with his dragon duty's. Suddenly he heard screams from outisde. Jake went outside and saw that there was a dark creature terrorizing a magical street that was located behind the buildings. Jake: Dragon Up. The dark creature looked a bit like a dragon body, light green eyes, razorsharp teeth and claws that could slice a wall in half. Jake: Bring it on. The creature couldn't fly but it climbed and jumped from building to building to escape. Jake flew after him for 10 minutes but then the beast striked and hit him with the force of 100 dragons. Jake fell down and landed on the ground.
Some hours later...
Jake was still on the ground. Suddenly his friend from the survival of the fittest, Keira the Mexican Dragon entered the city. As she walked through the city she passed the street he was lying on the ground. Keira: O my god. She walked towards him and checked if he was alive. Keira: For some reason he looks familiar. Flashback.. In the dragon jungle at a waterfall. Jake: Hang on Keira. Keira: Help me. Flashback End.. Keira: O no, it's Jake. She brought him to Lao Shi's store. Keira: Help, is somebody there. Lao Shi ran into the store. Lao Shi: What's wrong and who are you? Keira: I'm Keira, but i need help i found my friend in a street on the ground i don't think he's breathing. Lao Shi: O no, grandson. Keira: Wait you know him. Lao Shi: Yes i was his dragon trainer and his grandfather. As Lao Shi brought Jake to the hospital he had been thinking a lot. He had a magical object in his pocked with an ancient legend on it and he read it.
When the gate is opened darkness will hit the face of the earth. Dark creatures will rise and all hope will be lost. Beware of what lies within the world behind the gate. Your soul will be filled with darkness and your hopes and dreams will dissapear. All hero's must form an alliance to try to stop it. But beware of the dragon of evil because his destiny is filled with darkness. And when is plan is done there is no chance to destroy him.
As he left the building he was worried that something he had feared all his life would come. Lao Shi knew tha if this happened the world would end and no hero can save it. Lao Shi knew more about the legend because he knew why the gate was closed never to be opened again. The story goes a dragon made a deal with evil to make him unstoppable but he hade to pay the highest price that noone would be willing to pay, He had to give his soul to evil and become evil. As he walked into the shop a red light appeared. Next chapter in the next few days. I also wanna announce i will be starting a new fanfic project soon.
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Post by mehdi5 on Apr 6, 2007 15:28:13 GMT -5
The 8th chapter has been delayed it will be released on april 14th.
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Post by mehdi5 on Apr 21, 2007 14:42:27 GMT -5
Here's the 8th chapter ::Chapter 8: Becoming Evil:: Suddenly Jake wakes up(The last chapter was a dream) 2 Years after Hong Kong Longs... Jake: Man that was a weird dream. Jake looked at the clock and sawit was 7:30. Jake: I better get to school, o yeah right it's Saturday. Jake picked up his phone and called Rose. Rose: Hello Jake: Hi Rose. Rose: O hi Jake hows it going? Jake: Good, hey wanna go to the movies tonight? Rose: Sure Jake. Jake: Cool i will pick u up at 7pm. Rose: Ok see ya later. Jake hang up.
In the center of New York. Somewhere in the center of new york in the sewers a dark creature emerged. Creature: Soon Jake Long, Soon we will become one and i will destroy all magical creatures. Another creature appeared. Other creature: Master we have recieved information about the Symbiote. Creature: Good, although i tihnk we should change the name it sounds like a Spider-Man rip-off. Other Creature: But master what are you planning to do with the symbiote? Creature: I will let it become one with the American Dragon once again and then i will become one with him as i take over the Symbiote and then i will have the ultimate power and use it to destroy all magical creatures.
At the shop. Lao Shi: Jake do you mind can u pick something up for me? Jake: Sure gramps what? Lao Shi: I just got information about a rare magical object in the sewers. Jake: Ok i will get it but what part of the sewers? Lao Shi: In the center of New York. Jake flew through the sewers. Jake: It should be some right about here. Suddenly the creature he saw in his dream appeared. Jake: Hey wait haven't i seen you before? The creature roared as it was ready to attack Jake. It attacked and Jake attacked back but the creature was too strong but then Jake fired a huge firebolt at him and created major damage. Jake: Bring it on. The beast dissapeared and Jake went back home. Later that day at 7pm He walked up to Rose's House. He knocked on the door. Rose's Twin sister Lindsey opened the door. Lindsey: Hi Jake Rose will be here in a few minutes. Jake walked in and sat on the couch. Rose walked down the stairs. Rose: Hi Jake. Jake: Hello Rose ready to go? Rose: Yeah let's go. Jake got his driver's liscense a few weeks ago so he could drive. They got into the car. As Jake drove to the Cinema he got a call. He set his phone on handsfree mode and picked up. Jake: Hello your speaking with Jake Long. Lao Shi: Hello Jake did you manage to get that magical object from the sewers. Jake: No sorry gramps there was a problem on the way somekind of weird creature attacked me and i was forced to leave the sewers i will try again later. Lao Shi: Ok as long as you get it it is a very rare magical object. He hung up. Rose: What was that about? Jake: Nothing i had to pick up something but there was a problem. Jake parked the car and Jake and Rose went inside the building.
3 hours later...
Jake dropped off Rose after the movie and he drove to the center of New York and parked the car and then he went into the sewers. As Jake walked through the sewers he heard a noice. Jake: Who's There? The noise became louder and a black tentacle grabbed his leg. Symbiote: Bring it on weakling. Jake: Huh! The Symbiote had recreated himself into Jake's Dragon form. Symbiote: We will become one once again. Jake: Forget it. The Symbiote attacked Jake. But then it fused with Jake. Jake(thinking): I have to get the symbiote off of me before it takes over. Jake dragoned up and went flying around in the sky trying to get the symbiote off. Then Jake got an idea. Jake was flyin through the sky when he suddenly crashed onto a building. The symbiote was off of him but formed another creature. As Jake reached the ground the Symbiote chased him. The Symbiote roared of anger and it grabbed a car and threw it at Jake. Jake got away in time. Jake: Huh where is he? The Symbiote had dissapeared and Jake want home. But before Jake got the chance to walk one step the Symbiote grabbed him. Jake: I am going to warn you one time. Jake dragoned up and hit the Symbiote against the wall and then threw it in the air and shot a fireball at it. Then Jake heard someone walk through the sewers. Jake got away from there before the Symbiote got a chance to catch him.
At Lao Shi's Shop
Jake walked in. Jake: Yo Gramps. Gramps: Hello Jake. Jake grabbed a book from the shelves called Evil Magical Creatures. He searched for something about the Symbiote and this is what he found. In the year 1356 the Dragon Council made a creature that had the ability to duplicate powers but instead it was called the symbiote. But instead of duplicating it turned into pure evil. It got the power to take over a lifeform and turn it pure evil. But not just evil it turns you into a beast that could turn unstoppable. Noone could stop the Symbiote. But the process can be reversed in the first few days until it's permanent. Unless the Symbiote is fused with the Ancient Dragon Skull, then it will be unstoppable. Jake: I have to find that skull before it's too late. Jake: Gramps. where it the Ancient Dragon Skull? Lao Shi: Why do you want to know that? Jake: The Symbiote is back. Fu And Lao Shi: What! Lao Shi: Fu-Dog find the location and Jake also go search for it it should be here in New York. Jake flew through the city searching and Fu-Dog was trying to find it with the computer. End of Chapter Next time in the Darkness Within Vengeance: American Dragon you will not beat me. Jake: Bring it on. A huge battle between them two starts. Text: And not only can you read the 9th Chapter on april 28th. On april 27th the Project will start.
Here i have some specs of the project -When the project starts exclusive deleted scenes, bloopers and spoilers will be shown of the Darkness Within 1&2 -A whole new series of Fanfics will start. -Exclusive wallpapers of Fanfics. The Project: Starts April 27th Next Darkness Within 2 Chapter: April 28th Darkness Within 2 Chapter 10: May 2nd
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Post by mehdi5 on Apr 25, 2007 15:36:17 GMT -5
I decided to upload the next chapter early so here it is. ::Chapter 9: A new enemy:: In cave near New York. Symbiote: Finally after all these years i have found the Ancient Dragon Skull. The Symbiote grabbed the skull and spoke the magical words. Symbiote: Symbotios Draconus. The Symbiote absorbed the skulland it melted into one with the symbiote. A bank in Central New York. The people walked around like always when sudden the doors slammed open. But noone saw anything and the robber walked to the safe in the hidden part of the building. Robber to computer on wrist: Invisibility off. The robber became visible again and took his mask off. But wait it was Brad Morton Jake's biggest enemy from high school. Brad: The substance should be right about here. Brad opened a safe on the side of the room. Brad: What, where is it. Brad took an old newspaper page out of his pocket. Ancient substance found in an Aztec Temple. Yesterday november 11th Mr.Symalious and his crew found an ancient substance in an Aztec Temple in South-America. The substance believed was made many thounsands of years ago. It is now stored in the Central New York Bank because the museum seemed not like a safe place to hide it. But since Symalious and his Crew delivered it to the bank they have not been seen and have possibly returned to South-America Written: November 12th 2006.
Brad: It seems someone stole it before i did. Suddenly the alarm went off. Speaker: Alarm intruder in sector 7 code 11b. Brad tried on but the device malfunctioned. Brad ran outside the building while being chased by the guards. He stole a car and drove away while being chased by the cops. It was raining and the symbiote was jumping off the rooftop trying to escape from Jake. Symbiote: Can't ya keep up American Chicken? Jake: Shut up. Brad slammed the car into a wall and walked into a building and ran up the stairs. The cops chased him and Brad was nearly hit by 24 bullets. When he walked to the 4th floor he saw the 5th was still under construction and he had to clim a ladder to get there. He grabbed the ladder away when he was upstairs and the upper half of the stairs collapsed. Cop: Run. Suddenly he saw the Symbiote and Jake fighting and he slammed Jake onto a wall and he dragoned down. Brad: Jake Long, i knew you wer'e a freak but this breaks the limits. Without Brad knowing the Symbiote grabbed him and they started fusing. Jake: Aww man, but wait for some reason i knew this was coming. When they fused it looked like a beast it had a body like a dragon but also had the looks of the Symbiote and it calls itself Vengeance. Vengeance: Finally i will rule the world. Jake: Yo Brad due i know wer'e enemy's but isn't this a bit over the top. he said nervously. Vengeance: Jake Long, for years you have made my life into a nightmare and now i will repay you. Jake: Well i remember it you made my life into a nightmare. Jake dragoned up. Vengeance: American Dragon you will not beat me. Jake: Bring it on. A huge battle started. Jake used full power but it wasn't enough to beat Vengeance. Once again he was slammed to a wall again and he dragoned down again. He lost a lot of blood and he could barily moved. Jake looked but Vengeance was gone. With his last power he called rose. Rose: Hello who's there? Jake: Help. Rose: Oh my god Jake. Jake: I'm on the top of a building somewhere near the center of the city please help me. Rose: Jake are you there. Noone answered as Jake was out.
One Hour Later...
At the hospital. Doctor: We have to hurry he has lost a lot of blood. After the operation they brought Jake to a room and left him alone. 15 minutes later Rose walked in the room. Rose: Jake please wake up. Rose started crying. Rose: Please Jake don't die i love you. Rose sat next to Jake for half an hour. Rose still hadn't stopped crying when she suddenly got an idea. Rose: I'm going to his dreams to find out what happened. She used the dreamcharmto get into his dreams. She also knew that every dream realm of a person is connected to each other through on location in Jake's case it was New York. In the dream realm it was storming. Then she went to Jake's memory trying to find out what happened. She found the door but it wouldn't open she tried everything but then she left the dream realm. When she was awake she saw Jake was awake. Rose: Jake, are you alright. Jake: Look out for Vengeance. he said multiple times Rose: Who is Vengeance? Jake passed out again. End of Chapter The Next time in The Darkness Within 2 Rose: Jake you can't fight him. Jake: I have no choice it is either beat him or see the world end. He dragoned up. Rose: Jake don't. Jake: Rose, you don't understand that creature is the same thing that made me evil and attack all those people i will not let that happen again.
And don't forget the Project starts April 27th.
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Post by mehdi5 on May 22, 2007 14:22:59 GMT -5
Here is a new chapter ::Chapter 10: The Battle begins:: Jake was fighting Huntsclan in his dreams. Huntsman: You will never win dragon. Jake: Bring it on. Jake was winning and defeated then and then there came a flashback of Homecoming. After Jake destroyed the skulls. He was attacked by Vengeance. Vengeance: Stupid dragon can't you see this symbiote took you over and now it is back with all the powers you have, Join my army and rule the world. Jake: I will never work together with you. Vengeance: As you wish. They fought and this time it wasn't Jake that was winning. Meanwhile in the real world. Vengeance: Was standing on top of the hospital. Vengeance: Finally i can destroy the American Dragon. Vengeance: Wait i have a better idea. Suddenly Vengeance made a symbiote appear. Vengeance: Here's the original symbiote let's turn that dragon evil again. Vengeance left while the Symbiote entered the room of Jake. Meanwhile in Jake's nightmare. Jake: I have to beat him some way or i will be destroyed. But suddenly in the real world the Symbiote fused with Jake. In his dream. Jake: I feel good. He attacked Vengeance. Vengeance: This can't be happening. Jake attacked him again but then it was if he was turning into the evil dragon he once was but he didn't know that that wasactually happening. He woke up. Jake: That was a very weird dream. The next day. Mom: Hi Jake, welcome home. Rose: And Jake are you feeling any better? Jake: Actually i feel better than ever. At night. Jake: I think i'm gonna do some flying through the city tonight. Jake: Dragon up! Before he left the room he looked in the mirror he saw his dragon form had changed. It looked like the dark dragon. Jake: Weird, never mind. Jake was flying through the city when he saw somebody rob a bank. Before the robber entered the bank Jake attacked him. robber: What are you? he asked scared. Jake: I am your worst nightmare. The robber ran but Jake was following him. Jake: You can't escape, i am fear. Jake caught the robber and let him fall at the prison. At the Dragon Summit Maximum Security Prison. Jake: Time to free some old friends. Jake entered a room. Computer: Identification please. Because Jake was a dragon that was defending the magical world he got acces to the prison. Computer: Identification confirmed, American Dragon Jake Long. Jake entered the hallway, although he wasn't at the prison yet first he had to go through a security hallway. He saw a computer with employee information. Computer: Password please. Jake: Kardas. Computer: Acces granted. To be continued...
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Post by randomname123 on Dec 2, 2009 16:44:14 GMT -5
soo whens the next chapter coming out?
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Post by The Italian Dragon on Dec 3, 2009 6:21:05 GMT -5
I guess it will never come out, because Mehdi left the forum.
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Post by randomname123 on Dec 7, 2009 2:32:16 GMT -5
yeah i just looked at the story u were talking about i understand now
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