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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 10:50:40 GMT -5
After reaching area M/3, they had collected over one hundred dragons. After reaching the last cell on that floor, he peeked into it. Jake was sitting in there alone and bored, unaware of the situation. “Want to be free, Jake? It’s all up to you.” Hero asked. Jake turned quickly after hearing this and his jaw dropped. “Y-Yeah!” he replied. When they got to area L/2, they found Drake, Yui, and Sarah in scattered cells on that floor. They were soon released and they followed Hero down yet another flight of stairs. When they reached area G/5, they encountered a special, guard, security camera. It was equipped with an automatic, rapid-fire, machinegun and heat seeking, motion-sensing trackers. Hero dashed forward and shot a fireball at it, but it tracked Hero’s movements. It fired two rounds; one missed and the other pierced the lower part of Hero’s stomach. Blood splattered everywhere. He fell to the floor, paralyzed and grabbed his stomach. The camera saw this and tried to shoot Hero more. Drake and Yui both leaped in front of him and took the blows instead of Hero! Drake was wounded in the shoulder and Yui in the leg. Sarah bravely flew towards the camera and destroyed it with her sharp, dragon claws. “Ugh…. heh… let’s… ugh… continue… shall we?” Hero muttered. Then, everyone nodded and Drake carried Hero on his shoulders. Hero thought, “Just like good old times.” Everyone proceeded slowly down the flights of stairs from G/5 to A/2. When they entered the door leading to A/2, Yui cracked it slightly and peeked through. “Ok… it’s safe.” he whispered to all of his companions. All one thousand of them entered the huge, arena-like room and gazed up above them. There were many upper platforms just like the bell tower where Hero fought Yui. Suddenly, Zenos flew down from one of them, wielding Hero’s sword. Then, Thorn entered the same room through the opposite door with one thousand rogue dragons! Zenos looked around the room and exclaimed, “How sad! You will die in this arena trying to free yourselves! One thousand against one thousand… this should be quite interesting! Prepare yourselves for the consequential death of your soul and flesh!” Then, Hero ran forward and attacked Zenos. As they were dueling, around them were their friends and allies fighting the opposing forces. Drake and Yui tag teamed and destroyed almost half of the rogues, while Sarah did not even manage to slay one. Instead, she knocked him out. Fred was fighting Zenos’s high assistant. He was very difficult to defeat, but the two clashed claws and Fred killed him with one fell swoop. Jake fought Thorn. While fighting, Jake accidentally lost control of his dragon form. Thorn stared at Jake in his human form and shouted, “NO!!! It can’t be like this!!!! I won’t believe this!!!” Jake looked at her and responded, “I’m sorry, Rose. I didn’t want it to be this way either. Let’s just forget of our duties and remain together instead of constantly fighting. I don‘t want to fight anymore.” Confused and shocked, Rose ran out of the base and headed towards the Huntsclan’s cave. Meanwhile, Hero and Zenos were dueling. Hero transformed both of his arms and clashed his dragon claws with Zenos’s new sword. As they held their positions, Zenos asked Hero, “What do you fight for?” Hero replied, “I fight for my past, my future and everything in between. To avenge my parents, to destroy evil, to vanquish my foes., to justify light, to end everyone’s sorrows, and to wield this sword… these are bits of my destiny. You won’t stop me from living out my future and you never will!!!” Hero amazingly gained an incredible amount of energy by saying this. He slashed Soul Reaper out of Zenos’s hands and it skidded across the floor far away from where they were standing. Hero dashed over, picked it up, and shouted, “It’s over, Zenos! Surrender or die!!!” “I choose neither!” Zenos returned. He raised his hand and every one of Hero’s companions fell to the floor, paralyzed. He raised his other hand and the remaining rogue dragons attacked and slaughtered twenty of the paralyzed dragons. “GOTCHA!!!” Hero yelled. Zenos looked at him and in less than a blink of an eye, he disappeared. Zenos quickly looked above him and Hero jumped down from one of the upper platforms and called out, “Cross Sky Slash!” Soul Reaper then split into two swords; both of them were the same size as it, but one was made of light and the other, darkness. They were both as clear as glass, except one was yellow and the other, purple. He dove down and slashed Zenos’s chest with both swords. He fell to the ground, because of the gravity’s intense force. Everyone gazed in shock; the rogue dragons were also staring in horror. Then, Hero combined the two swords and slashed around his body. Waves of light were expelled from the sword and all of the rogue dragons were slain, because they were the only ones standing up! Hero walked up to Zenos and crushed his ring. He picked up and carried Zenos on his shoulders. All the other dragons got up and followed him.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 2, 2005 11:18:41 GMT -5
plz continue it's really good
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 11:20:15 GMT -5
Ok, I will. Btw, in three or four paragraphs, this ff will end. Here : While walking, Drake asked Yui and Sarah, “So… how many “rogueians” did you kill? For me, three hundred and fifty.” “Me? I killed one hundred and fifty, how about you Sarah” Yui asked. “…” “Well? Sarah, how many?” “… Not even one. I knocked one out though, so does that count?” Drake and Yui both looked at her and laughed uncontrollably. Jake and Fred were walking next to Hero and they both asked him, “Why are we keeping him? He’s not even worth the energy to carry him!” “That’s the fool who jumped us!” Jake said. “He tried to slay us!” Fred said. Hero just ignored them and walked into area A/1. They opened the last cell and released Rei. He walked out and said, “It’s a good thing you guys showed up to save me! Thorn was just about to ship me to Lacaio Island so they could erase my memory! Did you defeat Zen… IS THAT ZENOS?!?! I hope he’s dead!” “No, he’s barely alive. We should treat his wounds as quick as possible.” Everyone gasped in horror when Hero said this. “He tried to kill us!” Drake said. “He’s evil!” Sarah said. “He’s also the leader of the rogue dragons!” added Yui. “We should kill him now, or torture him!” Rei said. “SHUT UP!!!!!!” Hero screamed. Everyone immediately stopped talking and looked fearfully at Hero. “Are you trying to become just like him?! This is how his ideals were created! If you kill him, you are just the murderer he is!” He shouted. “Yes… but all criminals must be punished!” Jake shouted. Then, Rei ran over and took out a hidden dagger and attempted to slay Zenos. Hero predicted Rei’s movements before he even thought of them. He ran slightly forward and punched him hard in the face. Everyone froze when they saw this. Rei flew backwards and landed in the cell where he was being held. Hero walked over to the entrance and shouted, “Should I lock you up forever?! You’re so stupid! Wrong move at the wrong time, master! Too bad I’m the strongest here!” Rei noticed Hero’s eyes were partly glazed over. Something was wrong. He felt a strong evil presence surging deep within Hero. It was continually trying to make its way out, but Hero was in control. “You should warn me before you do anything foolish again!” Rei stared at him and asked, “Who are you?!” Hero looked at him and laughed. “Hero? You’re buddy? Don’t you remember?” Rei stared in his eyes. Whatever was in him, ceased its activity and Hero returned to normal. Drake asked Hero, “So… why can’t we kill him?” He looked at Drake seriously and replied, “Humans, dragons or any magical creature has his own spirit. If you remove that spirit, you become a murderer like Zenos. Do you want to live and be like him? I don’t. Each person, good or bad has the choice to live a good life. Even though Zenos is evil, he can still change, right?” Yui walked over to Hero and said, “Wow Hero. You are truly a good friend and person. To think we almost shunned a very obvious fact… I feel horrible. You are no doubt the strongest person here. Thanks for showing us the truth.” Suddenly, Hero’s com-link rang and Yuin said, “Did you free Rei? Good. Hero, this is your golden opportunity to slay your parents’ murderer! Head towards Malinoro. You will find him in a temple. Drake and the rest, come to my base. Hero will complete this mission alone.” Drake walked over to Hero and said, “Good luck.” Hero turned to him and nodded. Everyone left and headed towards Yuin’s base, while Hero walked towards Malinoro.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 2, 2005 11:23:21 GMT -5
plz continue plz it's really good plz continue
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 11:24:03 GMT -5
Ok, I'll write more while my sister's on.
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 11:26:32 GMT -5
Also, what I meant by this ff ending was that this is ending book one. Book two is coming soon. When I'm done with book 1, I'll post from book two in a separate ff.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 2, 2005 11:28:06 GMT -5
ok then speaking of writing i need to update mine *drake runs into me* me:drake what's going on? drake:huntsmaster is useing something stronger than dragon-X so i need to lie low for a bit mind if i stay with you? me: sure go ahead anyway plz continue soon hero
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Post by maromi on Oct 2, 2005 11:37:55 GMT -5
I like Drake in Onisiba. He acts a bit like Inuyasha.
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 12:07:10 GMT -5
Yeah, he kinda does. Good point. ;D
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 12:22:11 GMT -5
Lol df123!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 2, 2005 12:26:18 GMT -5
I like Drake in Onisiba. He acts a bit like Inuyasha. Drake: hey i resent that! me:oh shut up Drake it's a compliment and if you don't shutup i'll givew hero permission to give you a good beating *sees feo with a shot gun* never mind i'll shut up
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 12:31:44 GMT -5
I like Drake in Onisiba. He acts a bit like Inuyasha. Drake: hey i resent that! me:oh shut up Drake it's a compliment and if you don't shutup i'll givew hero permission to give you a good beating *sees feo with a shot gun* never mind i'll shut up Hero: It's ok Drake, she only uses it to hunt. Wait... nevermind. Drake: *gulps*
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Post by mithos on Oct 2, 2005 15:55:56 GMT -5
When he reached Malinoro, he gathered food and supplies from the abandoned houses and stores. He thought to himself, “I don’t think the people will need these items.” Then, he continued walking south and thought of his friends, his parents, his sorrows and the man who caused them. When he arrived at the temple, he realized this was the moment of truth. He entered and saw a man with aqua colored hair standing in front of him. The man turned around and said, “Well, well, so you finally arrive! I’ve been expecting you for some time now!” “You will pay for what you did nine years ago!” Hero shouted. “I highly doubt it… that’s what you said last time and you didn’t prove your word. Besides, you are still very weak. You haven’t even mastered your own ultimate attack. You obviously don’t know your limitations… what a shame. The man who slayed your parents, the man who stole your best friend and the man who is his father… is me, Raiju!” “Raiju?! You are supposed to be dead!” Hero shouted. “I didn’t die… I faked it. I lay hidden in the darkness of the shadows waiting for you. I killed my best friend, your dad, because he ratted me out to everyone. He told me that I had to stop, but there was no reason. He said I was cruel and that I killed women and children for pleasure, but I didn’t. I killed them because they were the enemies! They deserved it!” Raiju explained. “You’re horrible… to think you would do that just sickens me. You, yourself deserve death!” Hero shouted. “Shut up! What would you know?! Your father used his own sword and attempted to slay me! When I was on your balcony, I tried to apologize to him for what I did… but he turned against me! I killed him, because he disowned our friendship and he was no use for me. Now… you must die. Your line will not continue, IT WAS YOUR FATHER’S MISTAKE!!!!!! Now die!!!” Raiju shouted. “Shut up! You’re an idiot! Do you think it’s right to justify something by murder?! May this fate that you have chosen destroy you!” “What? Are you saying that you want to be just like me? Think about it; what you are doing is exactly the same. You are trying to kill me to justify your ideals and bring judgment on my head. You and I are very alike.” “SHUT UP!!!!! I’m doing the right thing, not you! Perish forever!” Hero shouted. Raiju grabbed Exile from his back and said, “No sheath. I use gravity to attach my sword on my back just like you. All is you do is increase the gravity in one spot and the sword automatically sticks to your back.” “S-Silence! Prepare to be destroyed!” Hero ran forward and used gravity on Exile to make it heavy. It was immune, because the sword also contains the element gravity. Raiju called out, “You should have known that my sword is like your sword; they are both immune to their elements! You should have used it on me! Crimson Slash!” He froze Hero in time and slashed him five times and then kicked him. He flew back and hit a wall. Raiju saw this and laughed. “This happens to you a lot, doesn’t it?” Hero got up and called out, “FINAL DESTRUCTION WAVE!!!” Raiju smiled and said, “As expected… I knew this would happen! Now I have you… Final Destruction Wave!” “WHAT?!” Hero screamed. Two giant waves of gravity spikes collided and shattered like glass. Hero’s legs were frozen in time from Raiju’s and Raiju remained immune to Hero’s attack. The falling fragments fell on Hero and sliced him up. Hero screamed in pain and in horror. He fell to the floor and dropped his sword, while Raiju calmly put Exile on his back. The light beaming into the room from the ceiling turned into darkness as a cloud passed over the sun. Raiju walked over to Hero, picked him up by his neck and asked, “Did you honestly believe you could beat me?” Then, he looked into Hero’s eyes. They were glazed over and were slightly purple. “Huh?! So you are the vessel! How amusing… You will die here because of intense blood loss. I’ll leave you here.” Then, Raiju let him go and walked away. Hero fell to the floor and fell asleep. After resting, he got up and slowly made his way towards Malinoro.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Oct 2, 2005 16:01:52 GMT -5
plz continue plz
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Post by sunburn on Oct 2, 2005 17:08:04 GMT -5
Yes, continue soon. :3
Though, may I recommend something my English teachers used to tell me: start a new paragraph when a new person talks. Like: ** When he arrived at the temple, he realized this was the moment of truth. He entered and saw a man with aqua colored hair standing in front of him. The man turned around and said, “Well, well, so you finally arrive! I’ve been expecting you for some time now!”
“You will pay for what you did nine years ago!” Hero shouted.
“I highly doubt it… that’s what you said last time and you didn’t prove your word. Besides, you are still very weak. You haven’t even mastered your own ultimate attack. You obviously don’t know your limitations… what a shame. The man who slayed your parents, the man who stole your best friend and the man who is his father… is me, Raiju!”
“Raiju?! You are supposed to be dead!” Hero shouted. ** You don't have to, it's just a suggustion; but it makes it easier to read (and the chapters look longer :3)
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