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Post by sizler on Mar 4, 2007 19:43:43 GMT -5
ok this is like brothers in arms only differrent it has ADJK charcters. the dragons use there powers but they also use guns the enemy of course is the huntsclan and im using my own plot. i do not own americam dragon jake long or any of its charcters but i do own the charcters that i make and the plot i make.enjoy and plz review
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Post by sizler on Mar 4, 2007 19:58:12 GMT -5
chapter 1
explosions were everywhere and bullets were flying.private long take out that machine gunner will give you covering fire wait for my order!! sargent said yes sir! jake said covering fire!! sargent said has the men opened fired on the gunner.go now!! sargent said jake transformed and flew behind the building where the gunner was jake kicked open the door and fired upon the gunner killing him.The fire stopped and the sarg and the rest of the men came up good work long sargent said thank you sir jake said ok we need to hold this position till the rest of the companey arrives set up defenses i want a 30cal in that window the sargent said.When the defenses were set jake looked through his bonaculers and saw 300 huntsclan camin twords them with a tiger tank parc jake said.
sargent we have a problem i saw 300 huntsclan comin twords us with a tiger tank jake said.everyone get set up for attack sargent said jake ran and got on the 30cal the others loaded their m1grands when the huntsclan were in sight jake and the men opened fired on the huntsclan troops.the huntsclan returned fire and one man was hit in the arm jake saw this and yelled medic!!! the medic came and helped him to a safe area jake kept firing till the 30cal ran dry parc jake said he then noticed the tiger aiming at him.
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Post by sizler on Mar 4, 2007 20:56:10 GMT -5
chapter 2
Jake saw the tiger aiming at him and said everyone get out of here now!!!.they all ran from the building when a loud explosion was heard hunts troops were firing at them still and jake only had his colt.pistol he took it out and started to fire at the troops when all of them were dead jake said how many men have we lost? 2 the one that was shot and the medic sargent said.suddenly the tiger crashed threw the wall and fired at them they ran for cover but the tank blasted 2 troops that were behind a wall.long we need to take out that tiger! said sargent how we dont have any anit tank weapons jake said i want you to get ontop of the tank open the hatch and throw a grenade in it sargent said ok jake said has he transformed. the tank saw jake comin twords them and fired but jake was quick and dogded it he then got on the tank and oped the hatch then he pulled off the ping of the grenade and threw it in the tank the tank blew and jake detransformed.good job long sargent said hey look its the rest of the company jake said pointing to the troops and tanks that were comin twordes them.
jake noticed one of the troops and ran up to him hey fred jake said hey jake so how was this part of paris fred said well it was hell jake said heh war is hell fred said so true jake said. they catted for awhile till the commander said good job all of you we have retaken paris now we must head into germany so rest up we leave at 0600.they built tents and rested for tommorw.
next morning:any of you have a spare carteirage? jake asked i do a solider said he handed jake a cartirage and jake loaded his m1grand.Alright everyone on the truck sargent said jake,fred and the rest of the soliders loaded onto the truck well now were going into germany fred said yea and face more of those huntsclan troops jake added.the trucks moved and went on to germany they reached germany when night had fallen suddenly an explosion knocked over the truck and all of them fell out jake and got up and helped up fred you ok? jake asked yea im..lookout fred aimed his springfeild in the distence and fired an enemy sniper fell out of a tree.thanks jake said noproblem now lets get to cover fred said yea jake said they helped the soliders to a nearby building and set them there.the sargent walked up to them and said well looks like were going to have to hike to our base its 30 miles up the road from here the only problem is that its covered with huntstroops and a minefelid he said.Well is there anyway around them?jake asked not unless you want to be blow to bits by tanks sargent said.well i guess will have to go through the huntstroops and the minefelid fred said.lets move out men sargent said the walked and kept an eye out for the troops and minefelid there was a huge clearing and a troop walked over a mine and the mine blew off the soliders leg killing him.minefeild jake said ok were going to need to walk carefully here jake said they walked untillthey were clear of the felid ok lets move on sargent said they kept walking till they saw huntstroops in the distance everyone get down fred said the all went prone and fred scouted through his scope in his springfelid.ok theres about 50 troops fred said ok everyone set grenades sargent said they readyed grenades and threw them to the huntstroops the grenades exploed and jake and the rest of the men oped fired on the remaing troops that were still alive.ok lets keep moving sargent said they kept going till they reached their base.The commander there said ok heres the plan tommorw you all will attack the beach and go into berlin and secure it understood the commander said.sir yes sir!! the troops yelled they then rested up for berlin.
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Post by sizler on Mar 5, 2007 16:34:58 GMT -5
chapter 3
next morning:everyone load up! sargent said jake and the rest of the company loaded on the boats to head to the beach.I hope this works fred said it will..it will jake said not fully beliving that it will work.they went out and it took them hours till they reached the beach and by that time enemy planes were firing at them.enemy plane heads down!! the driver said an enemy plane came and shot the boat next to them destroying it.
ok everyone listen up when we reach that beach move up to the beach wall sargent said. they landed and mg42s were killing the men jake and fred got out and moved up the wall as did the rest of the men that dident get shot or blolwn to bits by mines.ok give the enginers some covering fire till they can blow this wall!! sargent said all the men were firing on the bunnkers to give covering fire.then fred was shot in the arm fred jake said medic!! i need a medic!! jake yelled a medic came and fixed his arm.the charges are set fire in the hole sargent said.a loud explosion came and all the men moved over the wall ok we need to take out these two bunkers we need to set smoke so are ships can destroy them private long,private nerk take that one sargent said pointing to the other bunker.yes sir jake and fred said they went inot the bunker and there were huntstroops firing at them jake and fred returned fire untill fred noticed gas tanks behind them he shot one then shot fire at the tank that he shot.it made a loud explosion and the troops were all dead.nice job jake said they made there way to the top and cleared out any troops they then set the smoke and ran out of the bunker.
There was a loud explosion that rang in their ears the sargent came up to them good work both of you now lets make are way into berlin.They went into berlin and and came under fire jakethrew a grenade and killed some troops the rest of the men kept firing at them they were soon dead and they made their way into the centural area.
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Post by sizler on Mar 6, 2007 20:40:14 GMT -5
chapter 4
they came into the centural area and it was empty.Its queit too queit jake said somethin isen't right fred said.Keep a sharp lookout for snipers sargent said suddenly a bullet wizzed by jake and hit the sargent in the head sargent! jake said he looked to see where the sniper was and aimed his springfeild god give me strength jake wishpered he then fired and the bullet he shot went right through the huntsclan troopers scope and hit him in the head.Jake ran over to the sargent but he was dead before he had hit the ground dam jake said they covered up the body and moved onword.Jake spotted more huntstroops and fired his thompson at them when he was out of ammo he dropped it and transformed and killed them with such fury.When it was over jake was panting and when he detransformed he started hitting the dead bodys untill fred came up to him.jake its done their dead fred said jake said nothing and continued to hit the bodies jake beating them wont bring back the sargent!! fred yelled to him.jake looked at him and said he dident diserve to die..he never wanted this jake said.i know i know fred said come on we need to keep moving.Yea lets go jake said they kept on walkin till they came under fire by more huntsclan troops and tanks.
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Post by sizler on Mar 7, 2007 16:31:44 GMT -5
chapter 5
take cover!! jake yelled they got in a house and started firing back.jake we got a problem mate we ain't got no anit tank weapons fred said damit jake said they kept firing but they all ran out of ammo parc jake said. The huntstroops were comin to the door and jake leaned back next to the door with his combat knife.Suddenly the huntstroops were screaming and jake looked outside then he and the rest of the men went outside and they saw b52s boming the huntstroops and tanks.
Well that could have gotton bad if those b52 bombers haden't shown up fred said in relief yea jake said.Well we have berlin now we just need to take the huntsmasters fortress fred said thats going to be hard jake said not likin the idea well when is war every easy fred said laughing.yea your right jake said laughing along. next morning:Ok lets see here were going with 5 tanks 400 soliders and 100 mortor teams jake said looks like it fred said jake sighed well i guess we have to make the most of what we got right? jake questioned i guess fred said.they and some soliders loaded up onto the truck then they were on their way to the huntsmasters fortress. they arrived at the huntsmasters fortress and an 88 flack gun destroyed one of the tanks.all the men got out of the trucks and started firing at the huntstroops.men were falling left and right jake threw a grenade and killed some huntstroops then in a flash the huntstroops were all dead.what the? jake said he looked up and saw p52 mustangs killing troops with there minguns ok lets move jake and the other men moved up to a wall untill they spotted a tiger tank.set mortars jake said the mortars were set and they fired right at the tank destroying it.They moved twords the fortress and went inside ok you three men go downstairs fred with me jake ordered.Jake and fred went upstairs they found double doors and readyed their m1grands jake kicked open the door and found only the huntsmasters dead body fred walked up to the dead body.Looks like he posined himself fred said well looks like the war is over jake said not yet we still need to take ou the japs fred pointed out.o yea jake said they went outside and saw huntstroops put down their weapons and surrender.what? jake said looks like they all heard us i mean you had your hand on the intercom the whole time we were up there fred said o was all jake could say.They went back to base and the commander said well done now all we need to do is take care of the japs he then looked at them long,fred i have big news for you you guys can go home you have gotton enough points now pack your bags he said with a smile.
Jake and fred went home and jake was reunited with his wife rose and fred was reunited with his girlfriend jane near the end of the war the pesident gave the order to launch the atomic bomb.the bomb put an end to the war and all was well.
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Post by sizler on Mar 7, 2007 16:32:51 GMT -5
srry the story is so short its just i got a new idea for a story and also no1 has reviewed any of my stories an thats sad for me so plz review
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