Post by stromgradeadjl on Jun 23, 2008 4:52:24 GMT -5
Still waiting anxiously for comments.....
ADJL, the grand legacy ep. 4, riddle of the leaf
previously, jake and his class is invited to be one of the first to ride the new cruise liner the gigantic. but instead of getting a little r & r, he gets pain and agony as he attempts to save more than 2000 passengers while battling time and the ship itself. jake collapsed in tire and is yet to awaken.
just right after closing his eyes, he dreams yet another vision about the man who was talking to him in a different language. in his dream, he again, speaks the same. the dream ends when he feels pain right above his waist. he opes his eyes and sees a cloth ceiling above him. he feels the comfort of a pillow, a mattress and a blanket. he realizes that he is still in his dragon form in a tent wearing bandages above his bullet wound and other parts of his body. a dextrose was needled in on the back of his had transfering fluid to his body.he also feels exhausted. as for the pain, its source was from an empty cup which fell from a tray. a person who was holding the tray was standing beside him.
Person: "ooops, sorry for that, i'm just so clumsy at times. i'm the doctor that patched you up. is it true you can talk?
Jake: "where...am i... urgh...?"
doctor: "ah, so you can talk. you're in a rescue ship containing all the 2000 passengers and crew of the gigantic which you saved. your a hero my friend!."
Jake: "you mean... i.... saved them all? yeah....UURRGGHH!!!"
doctor: "oh, oh oh, oh, calm down. your still exhausted from what you did. just relax, you'll have plenty of time. we won't reach new york until next morning. call me if you need something okay."
as the doctor leaves, sun, rose and nigel came through the tent's window riding suns back in her dragon form.
Nigel: "bloody hell, that was some deed you did there long!"
Rose: "Jake! thank goodness you're okay! i thought i lost you there."
Jake: "it'd take more than.... ack!..... a cruise liner to....nrgh.... take down the american dragon...urgh...!"
Sun: "jake, it might be awkward to ask you this now but... you need to make a doppelganger of yourself! the crew is counting the passengers and they might discover your identity.
Jake: "i'll... try mey best..."
Jake: "NNNRRRAAAAGGGGGHHHH!!!!! BBBUUURRRPPP!!!! hehe, sorry..... ouch..."
Nigel: "allow me..... *berithas crado occulus!!!!!*
nigel wove a spell that extracted some of jake's chi energy makig a human double of jake. the double stands there silently.
Nigel: "no need to thank me, it was quite easy. no need to thank me too for waking you up last night on the water.
Rose: "doppelganger jake, pretend to be your owner for the time being.
Sun: "Rest now, you'll need a lot of energy."
Later on...
as night fell, rose visits jake for the night. she finds the dragon sleeping already. she kisses her boyfriend on the cheek and exits the tent. she goes to the other side of the ship secluded from the crowds of the rescued. as she watches the waves her ninja sharpened senses detect something coming. a man just teleported in a few meters from her. the man to rose's unknowing is the man from jake's dreams. she can't see his eyes because of his hair and hat shadow. she assumes him as a threat and makes a defencive stance.
Rose: "who are you! what do you want!"
Man: "i cannot answer, but i came for you!"
Rose: "if it's a fight you want, you got it, HAIYA!!!"
rose attempts a jump kick whos target is the man. the man pulls a red jewel from under his cloak and throws it at her.
man: "stone curse!!!"
rose land on the grand to brace the spell. as it hits her, she is turned to stone. although petrified, her five senses are still active.
Man: "i did not travel here ot fight you milady, i came here to give you a object of great importance.
the man gets his wizard's rod from his utility belt and pounds rose with it. the stone engulfing her breaks. she recovers but still has her guard up.
Rose: "what is this thing you're talking about."
Man:(hands rose a leaf) "remember that i cannot give you much information relating to this leaf or any other topic.
Rose: "what's this?"
Man: "that, milady, is an yggdrassil leaf. i cannot tell you its use nor purpose but i will tell you a riddle on what it does. remember it well, for this leaf will avert a great tragedy i would not hope to occur.
Man: "soul who travels a tunnel towards the light, turn back. that way lies trouble and confusion. yet if un-averted, pray the tunnel disappears and one ill reach the true light.
Man: "i must leave you, for now. ish nu alla (farewell)"
Rose: "wait! what's your name?
Man: "i cannot answer."
the man teleports away leaving rose alone, clueless on what her encounter meant. she decides to retire to bed, she passes a crew meating with jakes two friends trixie and spud discusing o how to bring jake to his grandfathers shop. they decide to send him in a crate. the next day, a rate arrives on an electric shop containig a familiar old ma and a magical dog pacing back and forth waiting for what looks like a dragon. jakes grandfather signs the papers the delivery boy gave him. once out the delivery boy's sight, he summons his dragon claws and opens the crate. out then comes jake, rose, trixie and spud.
to be continued.....
ADJL, the grand legacy ep. 4, riddle of the leaf
previously, jake and his class is invited to be one of the first to ride the new cruise liner the gigantic. but instead of getting a little r & r, he gets pain and agony as he attempts to save more than 2000 passengers while battling time and the ship itself. jake collapsed in tire and is yet to awaken.
just right after closing his eyes, he dreams yet another vision about the man who was talking to him in a different language. in his dream, he again, speaks the same. the dream ends when he feels pain right above his waist. he opes his eyes and sees a cloth ceiling above him. he feels the comfort of a pillow, a mattress and a blanket. he realizes that he is still in his dragon form in a tent wearing bandages above his bullet wound and other parts of his body. a dextrose was needled in on the back of his had transfering fluid to his body.he also feels exhausted. as for the pain, its source was from an empty cup which fell from a tray. a person who was holding the tray was standing beside him.
Person: "ooops, sorry for that, i'm just so clumsy at times. i'm the doctor that patched you up. is it true you can talk?
Jake: "where...am i... urgh...?"
doctor: "ah, so you can talk. you're in a rescue ship containing all the 2000 passengers and crew of the gigantic which you saved. your a hero my friend!."
Jake: "you mean... i.... saved them all? yeah....UURRGGHH!!!"
doctor: "oh, oh oh, oh, calm down. your still exhausted from what you did. just relax, you'll have plenty of time. we won't reach new york until next morning. call me if you need something okay."
as the doctor leaves, sun, rose and nigel came through the tent's window riding suns back in her dragon form.
Nigel: "bloody hell, that was some deed you did there long!"
Rose: "Jake! thank goodness you're okay! i thought i lost you there."
Jake: "it'd take more than.... ack!..... a cruise liner to....nrgh.... take down the american dragon...urgh...!"
Sun: "jake, it might be awkward to ask you this now but... you need to make a doppelganger of yourself! the crew is counting the passengers and they might discover your identity.
Jake: "i'll... try mey best..."
Jake: "NNNRRRAAAAGGGGGHHHH!!!!! BBBUUURRRPPP!!!! hehe, sorry..... ouch..."
Nigel: "allow me..... *berithas crado occulus!!!!!*
nigel wove a spell that extracted some of jake's chi energy makig a human double of jake. the double stands there silently.
Nigel: "no need to thank me, it was quite easy. no need to thank me too for waking you up last night on the water.
Rose: "doppelganger jake, pretend to be your owner for the time being.
Sun: "Rest now, you'll need a lot of energy."
Later on...
as night fell, rose visits jake for the night. she finds the dragon sleeping already. she kisses her boyfriend on the cheek and exits the tent. she goes to the other side of the ship secluded from the crowds of the rescued. as she watches the waves her ninja sharpened senses detect something coming. a man just teleported in a few meters from her. the man to rose's unknowing is the man from jake's dreams. she can't see his eyes because of his hair and hat shadow. she assumes him as a threat and makes a defencive stance.
Rose: "who are you! what do you want!"
Man: "i cannot answer, but i came for you!"
Rose: "if it's a fight you want, you got it, HAIYA!!!"
rose attempts a jump kick whos target is the man. the man pulls a red jewel from under his cloak and throws it at her.
man: "stone curse!!!"
rose land on the grand to brace the spell. as it hits her, she is turned to stone. although petrified, her five senses are still active.
Man: "i did not travel here ot fight you milady, i came here to give you a object of great importance.
the man gets his wizard's rod from his utility belt and pounds rose with it. the stone engulfing her breaks. she recovers but still has her guard up.
Rose: "what is this thing you're talking about."
Man:(hands rose a leaf) "remember that i cannot give you much information relating to this leaf or any other topic.
Rose: "what's this?"
Man: "that, milady, is an yggdrassil leaf. i cannot tell you its use nor purpose but i will tell you a riddle on what it does. remember it well, for this leaf will avert a great tragedy i would not hope to occur.
Man: "soul who travels a tunnel towards the light, turn back. that way lies trouble and confusion. yet if un-averted, pray the tunnel disappears and one ill reach the true light.
Man: "i must leave you, for now. ish nu alla (farewell)"
Rose: "wait! what's your name?
Man: "i cannot answer."
the man teleports away leaving rose alone, clueless on what her encounter meant. she decides to retire to bed, she passes a crew meating with jakes two friends trixie and spud discusing o how to bring jake to his grandfathers shop. they decide to send him in a crate. the next day, a rate arrives on an electric shop containig a familiar old ma and a magical dog pacing back and forth waiting for what looks like a dragon. jakes grandfather signs the papers the delivery boy gave him. once out the delivery boy's sight, he summons his dragon claws and opens the crate. out then comes jake, rose, trixie and spud.
to be continued.....