Post by evandeson on Sept 29, 2009 20:14:02 GMT -5
20 july 2009
It was a dark night at the Magical World, and you could see the angry mob of Goblins from afar, in wich , only three dragons were fighting…
Lao Shi: Haley ? Where are you?? (While avoids some goblin attacks)
Haley: I’m here grandpa! Any of them seem to have the mark! (Flying over all the goblins and looking down)
Sun Park: Keep searching Haley, this is very important, and you know that!
Lao Shi: Keeping up this fight isn’t something wise, we must retreat! (Looking over Haley and Sun Park, while rounded by Goblins)
Lao Shi thinks : Now we need wish Trixie and Spud good luck…
Sun Park and Haley : OK !
All the three fly away from the goblins, with a sad face, while tears are on Haley’s eyes…
When back to their home, they enter jake’s house underground, built specially a few months ago, and find jake laid in a special pod. Opening it they find him in dragon form, some kind of dark chi is coming from his foot and taking his body slowly, and no one can do anything than stare at him with sad faces.
Lao Shi then, inspects Jake’s body, but nothing seems to stop that dark chi from taking over Jake’s body, they don’t know what or how did that happen, only that Jake passed out 2 weeks ago in dragon from, and haven’t opened his eyes since yet…
Then, with a face of someone who can’t do anything, they close the pod and go rest, but the work isn’t over yet, Lao Shi is wounded, from the many fights he had from one week ago, he goes to search and study more about the dark chi that’s taking over Jakes body while Sun Park cures him with her magical knowledge.
Haley is training, she never trained so hard in her Life, since Jake can’t do his job as American Dragon she’s the one who is substituting him now, plus helping Lao Shi and Sun Park in their mission to save Jake, while that no one speaks a single word, an air of sadness is at the house…
Back at the Magical World and at the same time, Susan Long is at the Dragon Council trying to get their help about Jake, that’s a hard mission, because even her being the daughter of a dragon she can’t shape shift to dragon form, after hours of searching she finally finds the Dragon Council members, and begs for help.
Susan Long :Erm, I Susan Long am here, asking for formal help in the case of Jake Long the American Dragon, asked by Lao Shi, my father and Jake Long’ Grand Father.
Councilor Andam: So, you are the mother of Jake Long... Why have you came here ? Is this really serious to bring a human to the dragon council ?
Susan Long: Sir, please listen to me. My son has succumbed to some sort of disease 2 weeks ago and is asleep since then, Lao Shi, Haley Long and Sun park are trying to help him in some way, but they efforts doesn’t seems to be of much help, my father asked me to come here personally to ask you.
Councilor Andam: This looks pretty important then.. We can’t lose dragons, the magical world is needing as many dragons as we can gather things are serious, we’ll send a group of Magical Doctors and Scientists at your house in some hours, but now we ask you to leave…
Susan Long: Thank you very much ! ( Bows respectfully, her face is apprehensive about her son’s health )
She walks back to home, she couldn’t do much to her son due to her lack of magical power, she is really concerned about him, yet all she can is ask others for help, that’s what is killing her inside the most…
Still at the magical world Trixie and Spud are walking at some sort of ghost city, they can’t find anything interesting, since there aren’t many being around, they are holding packages of magical ingredients, they are now magical warriors, since they had magical classes with Fu, both of them have a sad face, they have been searching for days without many sleep, but yet, they refuse to give up.
And then Trixie looks at Spud’s face and thinks.
Trixie: I have never seen Spud this sad and this determined, he’s studying since Jake’s problem…And still seems to be thinking in a way to help his best friend while we walk… Also it’s the first time I see him using all his intelligence, we all know about his potential but never witnessed it…
It’s silent, both friends don’t speak a single word, but they still have the same goal : Find someone with great knowledge , with him they may find answers of Jake’s disease … And then they hear some cracking noise !
Spud jumps in front of Trixie in a defensive position, while gathering their potions and ingredients from the backpack a group of 5 goblins leaded by 1 ogre appears…
Ogre: What are humans doing heer ? Let get sum meet. ( Running in the direction of Spud )
Spud rapidly throws a potion in the ground, making a blue cloud, and running away from them, the ogres find themselves frozen in the ground, Trixie throws a potion that exploding leaving a bright light that kills the Ogre and leave the goblins very wounded, it seems that after all this problem they don’t care anymore about life or death.
They continue their search with the background of a dead ogre, wounded goblins and the light which is still there… They decide to rest..
It is 11:53 pm 20 july 2009
21 july 2009 1 am
Lao Shi isn’t healing with ease, his body can’t heal easy because of his advanced age , sun is having problems in healing him and then asks…
Sun Park: Lao Shi, you should sleep, your wounds will never be healed if you keep awake for this long (She’s mentioning about the last day he slept, which was 1 week ago)your chi is getting weaker and smaller, go rest and you’ll be able to help Jake.
Lao Shi looks back at Sun, he is really tired and didn’t notice he hadn’t sleep for such a long time, all he wanted is to save jake, he decides to go sleep, he knew it was the best thing to do at the moment.
Lao Shi: Sun, get me into Chi Dreaming…
Sun Park: Ok…
Sun Park blasts him with chi, making him sleep in a way that’s deeper than the normal dreaming, and he can still ‘live’ his unconscious mind.
Everyone in the house is sleeping…
Susan Long arrives at the house with the group of Magical doctors and scientists… And they give a look at Jake.
Rogbung is the leader of the group, he’s a elf, his short height gives him the look of someone weak and that doesn’t know many things, yet he is a master.. And he gets closer to Jake.
Rogbung: Surely the dark chi is emanating from his ankle, and took control of 60% of his body, except of his solar plexus, this is where the chi is created, and it seems that Jake’s chi is fighting against the dark chi.
Rogbung grabs a machine to see how jakes chi is flowing.
Rogbung: It seems that Jake is entering the Chi dreaming, maybe with the use of magic I can talk to him and I co ( Jake’s mother interferes)
Susan Long: Wait, why couldn’t I or Lao Shi his dragon master talk to him ?? It would be better, no ? ( With a face of high hopes )
Rogbung : Sorry, but that’s impossible, if someone he already know contacts him by the use of magic while he is chi dreaming that would crash his Chi and unconscious mind.. Every one prepare the magic and this site for the contact !
The whole group starts to make magical signs and rituals preparing Rogbung to the contact, Rogbung lays near Jake...
21 July 2009 1:54 am
21 July 2009 10 am
Spud: Trixie, let’s wake up and keep searching…( grabbing his backpack)
Trixie: Ok… (Itching her face)
They keep walking to the unknown, they don’t know what they’re going to find or if something is going to find them..
Jake wake ups in a place, there’s nothing in sight, everything is white.
Jake: Where am I?
At Jake’s house…
Elf: Doctor Rogbung! He entered Chi dreaming state!
Jake: When did I come here? I feel so weak.. And, why can’t I turn back to human form ?? I guess I’ll fly around and find someone.
Jake flies until he find his home city, yet all buildings are white and blue.
Jake: Gramps? What did you do to the city ? It looks weird.
Lao Shi: What? It looks normal to me… How are you ? Don’t you want to rest ? You did a great job !
Jake thinks: He’s acting weird… What happened ?
Jake: Fu ? Are you there ?Oh sleeping… I guess I’ll search more around here, this’s definitely not New York, and I still feel so weak… I guess I’ll come back to where I appeared…
Jake flies clueless of what’s happening.
Jake: Here this is the place where I woke up, and I feel a bit stronger… Let me fly further..
Jakes finds an elf laid on the ground..
Jake: Are you ok ?
Elf: Hello Jake, I’m Rogbung.. I came to help you..
Jake: Help ? From what ?
Dark energies start to gather behind Jake, they all look at phenomenon scared.. And a familiar voice starts to talk..
Voice: Hello again, American Dragon..
Jake: What ? Are you the..
Dark Dragon: Dark Dragon, yes.
Jake: How can you ?! I already defeated you.
Rogbung: Don’t worry Jake, you are in a state of Chi dreaming, this is nothing but a dream, and he is nothing but your memories, he can’t harm you. Unless…. Oh My ! That can’t be ! ( Rogbung changes, and is now worried)
Dark Dragon: Harmless ? I’ll show you who is harmless, it’s you ! ( Open his mouth to blast fire)
Jake: What ? (Grabs Rogbung and flies.) Oh man this is really hard to fly in this state..
Dark Dragon: Fool, you should never have underestimated me.
Jake: This is between me and you, leave the elf alone.
Dark Dragon: I don’t care about this stupid elf.
The Dark Dragon keeps throwing fire at Jake, he is very accurate, and Jake got hit a few times, jakes decides to use fire against fire.
Both dragons seems to have the same power, yet Jake loses his confidence and starts to lose. Both stops and
Dark Dragon: You’re nothing more than a stupid teen dragon, you have no inner power, you are weak, you are a coward. You are unable of doing sacrifices. That’s what you are, just a puppet to the Dragon Council, THAT’S WHAT YOU ARE !
Jake:… I…
Dark Dragon: You hated being trained, you hated saving others, you hated your family, and you hated YOURSELF! How can someone this weak try to defeat me ? I have the pure power, I am the one who truly deserves power.
While this, the ground starts to crack, and holes starts to appears, the sky is a mix of darkness and light, mountains are created, everything gets instable.
Jake: That’s true, I hated that, but now I know why do I have been trained, I know why I have to protect others, and if I really hated that I could have given up, but I didn’t !
After all, I like being the American dragon, and I like being trained.
Rogbung: Jake, remember this is YOUR chi dreaming, you are the lord and creator of this place, you have full control of everything here, and of the beings that exist here, even tough they are nothing but your memories, they are how you truly see your friends and everyone! This place is fully made of chi, don’t care about me I’m from the outside world, if anything happens to me here, I’ll be alright but if anything happens to you, it’s hard to know what might happen.
Jake: What?
Dark Dragon then hits Rogbung with a tail attack and ends with fire breathing.
Rogbung: You are the only one here who can defeat him, he is ins…
Rogbung vanishes…
Jake then absorbs all the good chi that’s around getting stronger and stronger.
Dark Dragon: That’s too late, you know American Dragon, remember that night ? At the temple ? When I held on your foot, that was my last move, I transferred part of my dark chi to your body, and I’ve been taking over you slowly and now you’re here, no matter how much chi you absorb I already took 65% of your body, that means 65% of your chi, I’m stronger than you and this is your last conscious word.
Jake: What the…
The dark dragon uses all his energy to knock Jake down, with that Jake lost the battle against the dark dragon. All the chi Jake had is being taken by darkness, and Jake’s body is now full taken by the darkness. All building and all memories are now something twisted by the Dark Dragon’s darkness.
In the room where Jake is everyone is apprehensive, plus Lao Shi woke up from his chi dreaming with his wound almost healed by Suns Magic, Haley and Sun are fully rested and waiting for news...And then Rogbung wakes up.
Rogbung : Everyone, listen to me ! The dark chi is actually the Dark Dragon’s chi ( Everyone at the room is surprised and doubtful) when Jake last fought the Dark Dragon, he didn’t know but when the Dark Dragon was holding on his foot, he was actually transferring some chi to him, that’s why the right foot is where the dark chi emanates
, now listen closely it only depends on Jake to fight against the Dark Dragon Chi inside him, if he loses then he’ll lose control of his body !
Lao Shi: Then we must seal Jake’s chi, in order to if he ever lose the battle the Dark dragon won’t be able to use Jake’s full power, at least for some moment.
Sun Park: Sure, let’s get started !
Lao Shi with the help of Sun Park and Rogbung starts to use Acupuncture techniques in so Jake’s chi can be sealed, they are afraid of touching Jake’s dark skin, it remembers them the threat of the Dark dragon, but they still proceed and succeed
Lao Shi then, quickly sends a message to Trixie and Spud, explaining them about the situation, and what really is the mysterious disease is…
At the magical world a few minutes after..
Trixie: Hey Spud we have messages.
Spud: Let’s see it, let us read it fairy..
Spud: What ?! Dark Dragon !? This is worse than I tought. Trixie let’s go.
Trixie: Spud! Let’s see Jake at his home, there’s nothing that we can do now!
Spud: Sure there’s Trixie ( The fairy flies away) let’s go to the Dragon Council and read their documents. ( A devilish smile appears at Spud’s face).
Trixie: They would never let us read their documents, we are nothing to them other than mere human.
Spud: We’ll just sneak in.(With the same Devilish smile)
21 July 3:26 pm
End of Episode 1
I know i know, if my english sounds wierd, please suggest something to make it seems better.
It was a dark night at the Magical World, and you could see the angry mob of Goblins from afar, in wich , only three dragons were fighting…
Lao Shi: Haley ? Where are you?? (While avoids some goblin attacks)
Haley: I’m here grandpa! Any of them seem to have the mark! (Flying over all the goblins and looking down)
Sun Park: Keep searching Haley, this is very important, and you know that!
Lao Shi: Keeping up this fight isn’t something wise, we must retreat! (Looking over Haley and Sun Park, while rounded by Goblins)
Lao Shi thinks : Now we need wish Trixie and Spud good luck…
Sun Park and Haley : OK !
All the three fly away from the goblins, with a sad face, while tears are on Haley’s eyes…
When back to their home, they enter jake’s house underground, built specially a few months ago, and find jake laid in a special pod. Opening it they find him in dragon form, some kind of dark chi is coming from his foot and taking his body slowly, and no one can do anything than stare at him with sad faces.
Lao Shi then, inspects Jake’s body, but nothing seems to stop that dark chi from taking over Jake’s body, they don’t know what or how did that happen, only that Jake passed out 2 weeks ago in dragon from, and haven’t opened his eyes since yet…
Then, with a face of someone who can’t do anything, they close the pod and go rest, but the work isn’t over yet, Lao Shi is wounded, from the many fights he had from one week ago, he goes to search and study more about the dark chi that’s taking over Jakes body while Sun Park cures him with her magical knowledge.
Haley is training, she never trained so hard in her Life, since Jake can’t do his job as American Dragon she’s the one who is substituting him now, plus helping Lao Shi and Sun Park in their mission to save Jake, while that no one speaks a single word, an air of sadness is at the house…
Back at the Magical World and at the same time, Susan Long is at the Dragon Council trying to get their help about Jake, that’s a hard mission, because even her being the daughter of a dragon she can’t shape shift to dragon form, after hours of searching she finally finds the Dragon Council members, and begs for help.
Susan Long :Erm, I Susan Long am here, asking for formal help in the case of Jake Long the American Dragon, asked by Lao Shi, my father and Jake Long’ Grand Father.
Councilor Andam: So, you are the mother of Jake Long... Why have you came here ? Is this really serious to bring a human to the dragon council ?
Susan Long: Sir, please listen to me. My son has succumbed to some sort of disease 2 weeks ago and is asleep since then, Lao Shi, Haley Long and Sun park are trying to help him in some way, but they efforts doesn’t seems to be of much help, my father asked me to come here personally to ask you.
Councilor Andam: This looks pretty important then.. We can’t lose dragons, the magical world is needing as many dragons as we can gather things are serious, we’ll send a group of Magical Doctors and Scientists at your house in some hours, but now we ask you to leave…
Susan Long: Thank you very much ! ( Bows respectfully, her face is apprehensive about her son’s health )
She walks back to home, she couldn’t do much to her son due to her lack of magical power, she is really concerned about him, yet all she can is ask others for help, that’s what is killing her inside the most…
Still at the magical world Trixie and Spud are walking at some sort of ghost city, they can’t find anything interesting, since there aren’t many being around, they are holding packages of magical ingredients, they are now magical warriors, since they had magical classes with Fu, both of them have a sad face, they have been searching for days without many sleep, but yet, they refuse to give up.
And then Trixie looks at Spud’s face and thinks.
Trixie: I have never seen Spud this sad and this determined, he’s studying since Jake’s problem…And still seems to be thinking in a way to help his best friend while we walk… Also it’s the first time I see him using all his intelligence, we all know about his potential but never witnessed it…
It’s silent, both friends don’t speak a single word, but they still have the same goal : Find someone with great knowledge , with him they may find answers of Jake’s disease … And then they hear some cracking noise !
Spud jumps in front of Trixie in a defensive position, while gathering their potions and ingredients from the backpack a group of 5 goblins leaded by 1 ogre appears…
Ogre: What are humans doing heer ? Let get sum meet. ( Running in the direction of Spud )
Spud rapidly throws a potion in the ground, making a blue cloud, and running away from them, the ogres find themselves frozen in the ground, Trixie throws a potion that exploding leaving a bright light that kills the Ogre and leave the goblins very wounded, it seems that after all this problem they don’t care anymore about life or death.
They continue their search with the background of a dead ogre, wounded goblins and the light which is still there… They decide to rest..
It is 11:53 pm 20 july 2009
21 july 2009 1 am
Lao Shi isn’t healing with ease, his body can’t heal easy because of his advanced age , sun is having problems in healing him and then asks…
Sun Park: Lao Shi, you should sleep, your wounds will never be healed if you keep awake for this long (She’s mentioning about the last day he slept, which was 1 week ago)your chi is getting weaker and smaller, go rest and you’ll be able to help Jake.
Lao Shi looks back at Sun, he is really tired and didn’t notice he hadn’t sleep for such a long time, all he wanted is to save jake, he decides to go sleep, he knew it was the best thing to do at the moment.
Lao Shi: Sun, get me into Chi Dreaming…
Sun Park: Ok…
Sun Park blasts him with chi, making him sleep in a way that’s deeper than the normal dreaming, and he can still ‘live’ his unconscious mind.
Everyone in the house is sleeping…
Susan Long arrives at the house with the group of Magical doctors and scientists… And they give a look at Jake.
Rogbung is the leader of the group, he’s a elf, his short height gives him the look of someone weak and that doesn’t know many things, yet he is a master.. And he gets closer to Jake.
Rogbung: Surely the dark chi is emanating from his ankle, and took control of 60% of his body, except of his solar plexus, this is where the chi is created, and it seems that Jake’s chi is fighting against the dark chi.
Rogbung grabs a machine to see how jakes chi is flowing.
Rogbung: It seems that Jake is entering the Chi dreaming, maybe with the use of magic I can talk to him and I co ( Jake’s mother interferes)
Susan Long: Wait, why couldn’t I or Lao Shi his dragon master talk to him ?? It would be better, no ? ( With a face of high hopes )
Rogbung : Sorry, but that’s impossible, if someone he already know contacts him by the use of magic while he is chi dreaming that would crash his Chi and unconscious mind.. Every one prepare the magic and this site for the contact !
The whole group starts to make magical signs and rituals preparing Rogbung to the contact, Rogbung lays near Jake...
21 July 2009 1:54 am
21 July 2009 10 am
Spud: Trixie, let’s wake up and keep searching…( grabbing his backpack)
Trixie: Ok… (Itching her face)
They keep walking to the unknown, they don’t know what they’re going to find or if something is going to find them..
Jake wake ups in a place, there’s nothing in sight, everything is white.
Jake: Where am I?
At Jake’s house…
Elf: Doctor Rogbung! He entered Chi dreaming state!
Jake: When did I come here? I feel so weak.. And, why can’t I turn back to human form ?? I guess I’ll fly around and find someone.
Jake flies until he find his home city, yet all buildings are white and blue.
Jake: Gramps? What did you do to the city ? It looks weird.
Lao Shi: What? It looks normal to me… How are you ? Don’t you want to rest ? You did a great job !
Jake thinks: He’s acting weird… What happened ?
Jake: Fu ? Are you there ?Oh sleeping… I guess I’ll search more around here, this’s definitely not New York, and I still feel so weak… I guess I’ll come back to where I appeared…
Jake flies clueless of what’s happening.
Jake: Here this is the place where I woke up, and I feel a bit stronger… Let me fly further..
Jakes finds an elf laid on the ground..
Jake: Are you ok ?
Elf: Hello Jake, I’m Rogbung.. I came to help you..
Jake: Help ? From what ?
Dark energies start to gather behind Jake, they all look at phenomenon scared.. And a familiar voice starts to talk..
Voice: Hello again, American Dragon..
Jake: What ? Are you the..
Dark Dragon: Dark Dragon, yes.
Jake: How can you ?! I already defeated you.
Rogbung: Don’t worry Jake, you are in a state of Chi dreaming, this is nothing but a dream, and he is nothing but your memories, he can’t harm you. Unless…. Oh My ! That can’t be ! ( Rogbung changes, and is now worried)
Dark Dragon: Harmless ? I’ll show you who is harmless, it’s you ! ( Open his mouth to blast fire)
Jake: What ? (Grabs Rogbung and flies.) Oh man this is really hard to fly in this state..
Dark Dragon: Fool, you should never have underestimated me.
Jake: This is between me and you, leave the elf alone.
Dark Dragon: I don’t care about this stupid elf.
The Dark Dragon keeps throwing fire at Jake, he is very accurate, and Jake got hit a few times, jakes decides to use fire against fire.
Both dragons seems to have the same power, yet Jake loses his confidence and starts to lose. Both stops and
Dark Dragon: You’re nothing more than a stupid teen dragon, you have no inner power, you are weak, you are a coward. You are unable of doing sacrifices. That’s what you are, just a puppet to the Dragon Council, THAT’S WHAT YOU ARE !
Jake:… I…
Dark Dragon: You hated being trained, you hated saving others, you hated your family, and you hated YOURSELF! How can someone this weak try to defeat me ? I have the pure power, I am the one who truly deserves power.
While this, the ground starts to crack, and holes starts to appears, the sky is a mix of darkness and light, mountains are created, everything gets instable.
Jake: That’s true, I hated that, but now I know why do I have been trained, I know why I have to protect others, and if I really hated that I could have given up, but I didn’t !
After all, I like being the American dragon, and I like being trained.
Rogbung: Jake, remember this is YOUR chi dreaming, you are the lord and creator of this place, you have full control of everything here, and of the beings that exist here, even tough they are nothing but your memories, they are how you truly see your friends and everyone! This place is fully made of chi, don’t care about me I’m from the outside world, if anything happens to me here, I’ll be alright but if anything happens to you, it’s hard to know what might happen.
Jake: What?
Dark Dragon then hits Rogbung with a tail attack and ends with fire breathing.
Rogbung: You are the only one here who can defeat him, he is ins…
Rogbung vanishes…
Jake then absorbs all the good chi that’s around getting stronger and stronger.
Dark Dragon: That’s too late, you know American Dragon, remember that night ? At the temple ? When I held on your foot, that was my last move, I transferred part of my dark chi to your body, and I’ve been taking over you slowly and now you’re here, no matter how much chi you absorb I already took 65% of your body, that means 65% of your chi, I’m stronger than you and this is your last conscious word.
Jake: What the…
The dark dragon uses all his energy to knock Jake down, with that Jake lost the battle against the dark dragon. All the chi Jake had is being taken by darkness, and Jake’s body is now full taken by the darkness. All building and all memories are now something twisted by the Dark Dragon’s darkness.
In the room where Jake is everyone is apprehensive, plus Lao Shi woke up from his chi dreaming with his wound almost healed by Suns Magic, Haley and Sun are fully rested and waiting for news...And then Rogbung wakes up.
Rogbung : Everyone, listen to me ! The dark chi is actually the Dark Dragon’s chi ( Everyone at the room is surprised and doubtful) when Jake last fought the Dark Dragon, he didn’t know but when the Dark Dragon was holding on his foot, he was actually transferring some chi to him, that’s why the right foot is where the dark chi emanates
, now listen closely it only depends on Jake to fight against the Dark Dragon Chi inside him, if he loses then he’ll lose control of his body !
Lao Shi: Then we must seal Jake’s chi, in order to if he ever lose the battle the Dark dragon won’t be able to use Jake’s full power, at least for some moment.
Sun Park: Sure, let’s get started !
Lao Shi with the help of Sun Park and Rogbung starts to use Acupuncture techniques in so Jake’s chi can be sealed, they are afraid of touching Jake’s dark skin, it remembers them the threat of the Dark dragon, but they still proceed and succeed
Lao Shi then, quickly sends a message to Trixie and Spud, explaining them about the situation, and what really is the mysterious disease is…
At the magical world a few minutes after..
Trixie: Hey Spud we have messages.
Spud: Let’s see it, let us read it fairy..
Spud: What ?! Dark Dragon !? This is worse than I tought. Trixie let’s go.
Trixie: Spud! Let’s see Jake at his home, there’s nothing that we can do now!
Spud: Sure there’s Trixie ( The fairy flies away) let’s go to the Dragon Council and read their documents. ( A devilish smile appears at Spud’s face).
Trixie: They would never let us read their documents, we are nothing to them other than mere human.
Spud: We’ll just sneak in.(With the same Devilish smile)
21 July 3:26 pm
End of Episode 1
I know i know, if my english sounds wierd, please suggest something to make it seems better.
i'm happy someone liked it. I'm already writting the Episode 2
