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Post by magenta on Sept 9, 2005 17:35:05 GMT -5
OMG!! This is soooo ggood! Soo dramatic! Please continue!
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Post by stranger on Sept 9, 2005 18:12:14 GMT -5
ya i really like it as well, pls continue!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 9, 2005 20:58:47 GMT -5
Ok, this is the last chapter in Shade's P.O.V.
Chapter 5: Too Surprised "Why?" I sadly asked Florence. "My stepdad... we had Huntsclan blood." Florence told me, showing me her dragon mark. "Can, we still, you know..." I asked her. She just closed her eyes and sighed, tears rolling down her eyes, the rain slightly letting up. "Florence, please..." I pleaded, walking over. She punched me over. "Oh Shade... I'm so sorry..." She said, crying really hard and running off. "Florence!" I tried to yell, but she was gone before she coud hear me. Spud and Trixie ran over. "Shade! Are you alright?" They asked me. I frowned. "I wish..." I replied to them, slowly walking over to the campsite. Jake watched me and he turned dragon. The four of us finally went to sleep. In the morning, we had a big breakfast and some of the adults worried for Florence. "She, went back to her house, she'l' be fine..." I told them sadly. "Guys, I'm truly sorry, I wanted to see Florence so much, that I thought she wasn't Huntslass." I apologized to Jake, Spud and Trixie. "It's alright Shade, it happened to me once too." Jake explained to me. "Yeah, but I guess we just have to live on..." I said. When it was time for us to leave, we all got onto the bus and I took one last look at the lake and closed my eyes sadly as the bus jerked on its way back home...
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Post by stranger on Sept 9, 2005 21:07:17 GMT -5
Not Bad, pls do continue!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 9, 2005 21:20:35 GMT -5
Ok, sure. Florence time! Part 2: [Florence/Huntslass] Chapter 1: Ready To Go! I ran on my way to the school bus and I saw Huntsdad trying to capture a pixie. I groaned and put on my Huntslass outfit and captured the pixie. "AAIIYA!!!!" I yelled. "There, you happy?" I asked my stepdad, putting my normal clothes back on. My stepdad nodded and I continued on my way to the school. I merryly went on the bus and scooted past Rotwood. I saw Shade and gladly sat next to him. "Hey, Florence, I want to tell you-" he started to say, but the bus jerked foward and he flew up and got knocked out while I oddly flew to the seat next to me. It was Rose, and I thought Shade should get some sleep, so I talked to Rose on the rest of the way there. We finally stopped and I laughed a little looking at Shade, still asleep. I left the bus and smelled the fresh air. Too bad my annoying stepdad made me catch an animal in the forest. I ran into the forest and set up some traps. "Good enough." I told myself, sitting down and waiting for a magical creature.
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Post by stranger on Sept 9, 2005 21:30:10 GMT -5
Interesting, i like how you are doing it from different POVs. pls continue soon!
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 9, 2005 21:35:00 GMT -5
yes plz continue it's really good
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Post by Chaos on Sept 9, 2005 21:42:20 GMT -5
Thanks, ok, next chapter.
Chapter 2: Just Going Around I felt bored and decided to leave the forest. I changed into my swimsuit first before I left. I saw some of my friends in the water, so I put my clothes in my backpack and ran to the shore of the beach. I put my bag down and ran into the water. It was a bit cold, but very refreshing. I swam out to where my friends were at and we talked and swam in circles. For a minute I thought I saw someone who looked like Shade in the water, but I ignored it. When I finally felt like going out, I was dragged in and under the water. Oddly, I was able to breath, but I was very confused. It was that person I saw earlier in the water. It looked like he was meditating and his eyes were closed, so I swam over to where he was. When I was near him, he opened his eyes and told me, "You should be careful, a storm and possibly bad luck lurks here at the camp with your friends." I was confused, but when the guy closed his eyes again, I swam to the shore and got out of the water. I dried off and walke dover to the camsite, where I wanted to hang out for a while, but something the person said was stuck in my head, the friend and bad luck with the storm...
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 9, 2005 21:44:21 GMT -5
that's really good plz continue
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Post by stranger on Sept 9, 2005 22:13:35 GMT -5
ya, pls do continue!
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Post by maromi on Sept 9, 2005 22:21:04 GMT -5
It,s great! Don't stop!
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Post by magenta on Sept 10, 2005 9:24:09 GMT -5
Don't leave us hanging, this is getting good!
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Post by Chaos on Sept 10, 2005 11:50:43 GMT -5
Sorry, I had to get off. Next chapter!
Chapter 3: Eating Before the Hunt The girl tents decided to all have dinner earlier than the guys. It was good, because I was hungry and wanted to eat quickly before I went to the forest to hunt some creatures. I wasn't eager, I just wanted to get it over with so I could hang out with Shade more. After dinner, I washed my plate, glass, and silverware. I ran into the woods, but I didn't notice Trxie giving me an odd look, as if she was suspisous. When in the forest, I changed into my Huntslass outfit and loked around, seeing nothing in the nets. I growled and pulled out my staff, kicking a tree. A pheonix fell down off a tree, it was a live, but barely. I put it in one of my nets and put it next to my backpack out near the road area. I heard thunder and looked at the sky, noticing the clouds. "That guy, he was right. It's going to rain, badly. But... where could te bad luck be?" I asked myself. I hoped up a tree and looked around, but it was too dark to see. "Maybe it's that dragon." I thought to myself. I hoped down back into the darkness of the forest, feeling the rain fall down. "I'm ready for you, dragon..." I growled, pointing my staff in front of the entrance to the forest.
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Post by dragonfan123 on Sept 10, 2005 17:27:58 GMT -5
cool plz continue soon
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Post by stranger on Sept 10, 2005 19:57:22 GMT -5
pls do continue
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